FF-Thoda Sa Pyaar(RoKa)NEW-part-47 to 50 pg107 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Innocent02

I am soo happy to know that u are actually happy to see me 😃naturally i will be happy if i see my old friend back
my exams went well....alhumdulilah! all prises goes to Allah
confusing in a way that Kasturi behaves like wo robbie ko pehlay say janti hai.Her friend Shivani said that she is doing wrong and she is purposely hurting Shivani and Kasturi should not do it....what was kasturi exactly doing??😕good.kasturi's sister kiran and robbie had a past .kasturi thinks because of him her sister is nomore now.so she want to take revenge on him by attracting him and then neglecting him.other think you will come to know if you read my up comming parts.
lolx.....confusinn confusion confusion😆hahaha...i hope now it is little bit clear.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART-8

university campus:it was around 4pm.

shivani:'how was the test?' she was walking with kasturi while asking.

kasturi:'not bad...😔'

shivani:'not bad!...you mean you don't do well...'

kasturi:' not that well...'shivani was heading towards the main gate.

kasturi:'shiv...'she stopped her.

kasturi:'we will take the other gate to exit...'

shivani:why?😕...that is a long way.don't you know that...'

kasturi:'but i think will be a right way...'
shivani:'fine with me...'she understood that kasturi want to keep away from robbie.

from then onwards every day they exit with different gates so that they did not come across robbie

a week later:

in chawala house around 6pm.

kasturi took her chemistry book and went to the terrace.in the middle of the open terrace a white painted two seater iorn swing was placed.there were creepers both the side of the swing .red funnel shaped small flowers bloomed in between the green creeper made the swing to look more beautiful.it was kasturi's favorite place of study.kasturi went and sat in the swing, touched the flowers and enjoyed the softness and its sweet fragarence.
after some time she opened the book and started studying about the geometric structure and chemical bonding of acetylene . she was deeply thinking about how it formed.suddenly her concentration was broke by the fragrance of giorgio armani perfume .she immediately raised her head and looked up....it was robbie!!!!! standing beside the swing holding the stand as support.

kasturi:'thum😲...'her tongue and throat became dry.without saying any thing he left his hold from the support,step forward and sat beside her on the swing.she became numb and dumb...motionless.
he looked direct in to her eyes with loads of love and longing ,tried to read her mind .suddenly countless number of tiny water droplets appeared on her face which made her more beautiful and sexy.he slowly raised his head and looked at the sky.it was drizzling.fine spray of water started spraying on them.chill rain spray along with cool breeze refresh them. he raised his hands and gently moved her front hair back on to her shoulder and gazed her.she could not with stand him and his magnetic eyes.he was looking hot with droplets of water on his face,wet hair and wet thick lips.he gently leaned forward. the distance between their faces became less...less..to negligible.. a feeling of shiver passed in to her nerves.she was almost freezed.she gathered her strength and got up from the swing.

it started raining.she could not speak..don't want to.she tried to walk out from there.with out taking much time he too got up from the swing ,kept his wide step forward and grabbed her wrist.

robbie:'..kas...turi...'he whispered in a husky voice.

kasturi looked at him irritatingly.

robbie:'..mai thum say bahuth pyaar kartha huon...kasturrri...'he was emotioned.

kasturi:'cho do...'she twisted her hand and try to get rid off his hold.

robbie:'much say shaadi kar lo ...'

kasturi:'leave my hand...'she did not care to listen to him.

robbie:'jawaab dtho...'

kasturi:😡

robbie:'much say shaadi karo ki...?'he did not leave his hold.

kasturi:'haath cho do...'

robbie:'jawaab dtho...'

kasturi:'nahee...noooo...'

robbie:'😲...ground slipped under his feet.felt as if he is going down ...down..and down... endlessly ,drowning under the deep ocean....first time in his life some one said NO to him.so far he thought teens die for him.but she proved the contrary.it was a slap on his face.he was completely shattered.

kasturi:'mai nay jawaab thay thee hai...cho do muchay😡...' she realized that her hand slipping out from his hold.she turned and looked at him.he was standing still with no expression, without caring the heavy rain pouring on his face and pricking his eyes.she neglected him and ran down.

next day it was sunday:

evening around 5pm .shaantha who was the house maid in chawala house for the past 10years was making tea in the kitchen.in the main hall kasturi's father JP was sitting on the sofa and reading a old news paper.kasturi was sitting beside JP leaning on his shoulder and watching mickymouse cartoon.

kasturi:'shaantha aunty...chai...'she said with out taking her eyes from the TV screen.

ajay:'..uff...ithnee badi ho ga yee hai.cartoon thayk thee raha thee hai...'he came out of the bath room wiping his head.

kasturi:'bhaiya...😡...'

'DING ....D..O..N..GGG...'the calling bell rang.

ajay:'kasturi...thay kho..koon hai...'

kasturi:'bhaiya...thum bhee na...'she don't want to leave the cartoon and go.

she got up with no interest .while walking she fixed her long skirt and short blouse.combed her open hair with her fingers,went and opened the double door.behind the door....she was shocked to see R..O..BB..II standing with his wide legs.... anger flaming from his eyes.

kasturi:'thum..😲!!!! fir say?????😲..'immediately she tried to close the doors.

robbie:'ruko😡...'he roared.hold the doors with force and stopped her closing it.

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
PART-9
JP:'koon hai...?'he came to the door with folded news paper in his hand.ajay came behind JP fixing his shirt collor.

ajay:'aap😲....kahee thum rock star robbie sabarwal tho nahee😕...'

robbie:'namas thay😊...mai wahee huon😃....'he folded his hands kept his palms and fingers together and wished them.

ajay:'aap😲 ...yahaan????😲...any way come in...papa...yeah delhi kay mashoor rock star hai.TV pay har waqth shaantha aunty inhee ka concerts thayk thee raha thee hai...'he helped him in recognizing.

JP:'oh😊...ab yaad aaraha hai...aayeah anthar...'

robbie:'dii...😊'he moved aside and called.a young and charming girl cute enough to attract a senior citizen came forwards and said 'namasthay'to them.she was wearing a sandal yellow plain shiffon sari ,with a matching short sleeve mirror work blouse.with very less accessories and least make up she was stunning.even though she was much more elder than robbie looking very much younger than him.

robbie:'yeah...mari dii alana sabarwal...😊'

ajay:'come ...in...😃' he said immediately with out any hesitation.

robbie smirked at kasturi.still she was blocking his way and standing.she slowly moved aside and let him in.JP made them sit comfortably.kasturi don't want to stand in front of them,but at the same time she don't want to go in too,thinking....'why the hell he is here now😡...kahee kuch wolta seetha mairay baaray may papa say kahathee yatho...' she swallowed her saliva.

shaantha came out of the kitchen to see who has come..she was wearing turmeric yellow cotton sari, tomato red long blouse.chilli red big kumkum in the middle of her fore head looking like danger light,tied up her long hair as a big top naught over that a wide yellow plastic flower near her left ear.she was surpised to see rock star robbie sabarwal

shaantha:'haila😲...robbss ji...mai marjaawan😳....kahee mai sapnay mai tho nahee huon😲😳...'she slapped on her face.

shaantha:'bilkul...nahee ji😳...'she realized it is not her dream and tried to jump on him.

robbie:'😲...GOD...'he moved back.

JP:'shaantha😡...thum jaakar pani lawo...'he diverted her.

shaantha:'srif paani kyun ji😳...chai , paani dthono laathee huon...'45 year old lady ran in as a kindergarten girl.
alaana:'thum hee ho na kasturi😊...ether awo...😊'she said looking at kasturi with a pleasing smile.ajay singed kasturi to go to alana.but kasturi did not move from her place.alana got up from the couch,moved forward and hold kasturi.

alana:'baito...😊'she moved a bit and made her sit beside her.

in front of others kasturi don't have the guts to look at robbie other wise she might have burnt him with her single sight.

shaantha came running with hot streaming tea in one tray and with britannia cheese crackers biscuits in another tray.

shaantha:'lo robbss ji😳...garma garam chai...'she took the tea cup and showed near his face.to get rid of shaantha he took the tea cup from her.she handed in the cups to all including kasturi.

shaantha:'kya baath hai robbss ji?😳...aap yahaan!😲...aap kay show ka ticket sale karni hai kya? 😕...mairay paas thaytho. ek hee dthin may fata fat poora mohallah sale kar thoon kee...😉...'she started blabbering.
JP:'shaantha...😡'he signed her to keep silent.

ajay:'aap log yahaan...😕'he hesitated to ask them why they were there.
alana took kasturi's hand in her hand and caressed her lovingly.

alana:'bahuth sunder ho😛.bhagwaan nay thumai bahuth dthyaan say banaa ya hai...'kasturi plaster a smile on her face voluntarily.

alana:'mai nay suna thum robbie say pyaar kar thee ho😃...' her statement shocked and surprised every one.suddenly a dreadful silent occurred among them.
kasturi's body went up in flames.she turned and looked at robbie.even robbie was under shock.he looked at kasturi and alana simultaneously with shock.

kasturi:'issa kuch nahee hai...'without delay she refused.

alana:'aap log say dar thee hai .iss leyeah...daro math kasturi.hamai yeah rish tha mazoor hai.hum yahaan thumaara haath maang nay hee aayeah hai...😊'

shaantha interfered,

shaantha:'yeah tho achee baath huyee na ji😃.srif haath kyun ji ....haath ,pair ,seir dill,dhimaag...sab...pooray ka poora lay lo..'with her humorous talk she tried to reduce the tension among them.
robbie:🤣...'he tried to control it.

alana:'JP saab aap ko ithraas hai...' she asked looking at JP.

JP:'...wo...ithraas tho nahee hai...par..kasturi...😕' he was confused with their unexpected proposal

kasturi:'nahee.... muchay degree poori kar nee yeah..' she found a strong reason to avoid them.

alana:' shaadi kay baath bhee thum pad sakthee ho.hamai koi ithraas nahee.mai uss ka poora inthazaam karthungee...'

kasturi:'mai kaam karna chaha thee huon...'she tried with yet another reason.

alana:'fantastic😊 .yeahi tho hum bhee chaha thay hain.you can work with us.if you want you can work out side for other company too.we don't have any objection.more over it is too early to talk about that.still you have two long years to complete your degree isn't it?...'she was left with no option.

alana:'JP saab,bolo...aap ko koi ithraas hai...?'

JP:'ajay...thum kya bol thay ho...' he looked at ajay for his opinion.

ajay:'papa...muchay lag tha hai hamai haan kar thay na chahee yeah.waisay bhee kasturi pyaar kar thee hai tho.....😕'

shaantha:'oh...ji😳.hamaari kasturi tho robbss say pyaar kar thee hai pyaar😳. par...bolnay sharmaara hee hai😳... ithraas kis baath ka ? moo meeta karo ji 😛'she took one britannia cheese cracker and tried to stuff it in robbie's mouth.

JP:'shaantha...😡..'

shantha:'sorry ji.sorry.kuch samaj mai nahee aaraha ji....'she scrached her head

alana:'tho hum chal thay hai.we will discuss with our pandit and send words to you at the earliest...😃' they got up.

JP:'aap log kay ghar mai baday busrok...'still he had doubt about their proposal.

alana:'hain....hamaari maasi hai.😊par hamaari kushee mai hee unn ki kushee hai...aap chin tha math keejeyeah.'she cleard his doubt.

shaantha:'ek minute ji....'she put her hand in her blouse and took a four folded 50 rupees note.

shaantha:'autograph thay tho ji ...'she carefully unfold the wet note and showed to him.

robbie:'sorry mai currencies pay nahee sign kar tha...'

shaantha:'haila.....issa kyun ji😳...tho fir iss mai kar tho 'she grabbed a note book from the side table and gave it to him.

kasturi:'😲😡...shaantha aunty,that is my note book...'shaantha did not understand what she said.

he pulled out his pen from his pocket pressed it's top to eject the refill.he opened the first page.it was written

kasturi chawala
second year chemical engineering


he looked at kasturi with a smile.with out looking at the note book, continue staring at kasturi...he scribbled below her name.

with love
robbie

shaantha:'thank you ji😳...'she snatched the note book from his hand.

robbie:'dii😊...it is getting late.better we move..'they moved towards the door.JP,ajay and shaantha followed them till the door to send off but kasturi stood rooted in her place.

while exiting robbie turned and looked beyond JP at kasturi.a smile of victory spread on his face.

she bit her lower lip till it hurts her and murmured with pain 'i hate you...'
Edited by robbii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
part 8........ahhh Shumi you revived the RoKa memories by re-creating that scene on the terrace......😳 😃......beautifully described....👏

wow didn't expect robbie to suddenly propose....😲 😲 😲


part 9........even more shocked now......😲.....poor kasturi left with no excuse.......btw whose idea was it to say that kasturi loved robbie.....😕......because robbie himself seemed surprised na...😕

so are they really going to get married with kasturi still hating him....😕

shantha aunty is too funny...🤣

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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
great going di but yeh sab achanak kaise hua!all over it was amazing interesting di!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
Fantastic parts Shumi! 👏
Loved the terrace scene so romantic 😳
Bechara Robbie will have to try harder 😛
Ooh Robbie at the door so dramatic 😲
Shantha lol totally hilarious, trying to jump on Robbie and stuffing crackers in his mouth 😆
Oooh Kasturi is gonna murder Robbie, looking forward to the fireworks 😉
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
Fantastic part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Poor Robbie........he's tooooo cute as usual!!!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!!!
Take care!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
oh ma god !!!! oh ma god!!!!! oh ma god!!!!! they are goin to get married................... m sooooooooooooo happy, its such a pleasant surprise........... pls pls pls let them get married and then let kasturi take her revenge, it would be very interesting....... The terrece scene was just mindblowing........ u make simple scenes look extraordinary by ur beautiful description and amazing writing stlye............ pls pls pls update sooooon and thank for 2 wonderful parts..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Its so nice of u that u gave us the thing that we expected from ekta kapoor.the whole scene was so cute. i loved it.especially robbie coming to kasturi's home that too with his dii for the marriage proposal stunned me.
great work.looking forward to the next part.............................

Edited by Harlowdqueen - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
omg shumi diiiii ,,,i didnt ever expect that robbie wud propose her so early n after hearing her "no" he'd cum to her house with alana n that too with a marriage proposal.......😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲
well all the scenes were so beautifully sketched....👍🏼
the terrace scene ....kasturi on a swing...all this made me remember the roka scenes shown in the show....😭
n shanta aunty is really vry funny specially when she says"srif haath kyun ji ....haath ,pair ,seir dill,dhimaag...sab...pooray ka poora lay lo" n robbie too cant stop himself...🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
well i fink they r nt going to b married so early...i fink there must b sum story linked with kiran....so looking forward to nxt parts...😍
btw great work once again....👏

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