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Posted: 16 years ago
PART-11

in the evening :

maasi and alana were sitting in the hall with their family pandit to discuss the shub muharth for robbie's marriage with kasturi.

pandith:'..aaj say panthrah dthin bath ek shub dhin hai.uss kay alawa dho mahee nay kay baath hee hai...'

alana:'two months later is fine.we will have ample of time for preparation..'she prefered the later date.

maasi:'wa hee teek rahay ga...😊'she too agreed.

next day alana went to chawala house with maasi:

JP and ajay greeted them while shaatha served them with hot tea and biscuits.
alana:'kasturi dhekhaa yee nahee thay rahee hai...'her eyes searched for her.

ajay:'she is on the terrace,i think studying.shall i call her...'he was about to call her.

alana:'no it is ok.not now later.before that we want to say that our pandith has said shub date two months later.....in the month of march...'

JP:'march mai!😲😔....thab tho kasturi kay semester exams hongay...'

alana:'oh !...i see ...that doesn't strike to our mind....'

ajay:😕

alana:'we have one after 15 days...'

JP:'shaayath wo teek ho ga...'

maasi:'ithnee jalthee😲....'

alana:'we have less time..😕'

JP:...hamaray pariwaar kay ek sathasya ko hum abhee abhee kho yeah hain. iss leyeah hum chaha thay hai shaathee bahuth simple say ho.waisay bhee hamaray family mai shaadi mandir mai hee karthay hai...'

ajay:'papa...issa kaisay?....'

alana:'it is fine with us.later we will have a grand reception...'

maasi:'robbie ko jalth say jalth wapas aajana chahee yeah na😕...'she started worrying

alana:'maasi robbie ek hafthay mai aajayeah ga.shaadi tho dtho hafthay kay baath hai...'

when they were discussing kasturi came down jumping two two steps from the stairs.

kasturi:'shaantha aunty...mainay kabsay...'paused her sentence looking at alana and another elderly lady sitting beside her.

maasi:'yeah koon bachee hai...?'she scanned kasturi from top to bottom.she was wearing black designed dark pink synthetic short skirt until her knee and tight short sleeve black cotton blouse just touching her shoulder and two short ponnies waving on her shoulder.

alana:'ushhh...maasi yeahee hai kasturi...'she whispered.

maasi:'😲...kya...yeah tho bahuth choti hai...😕'

ajay:'kasturi...thum kapaday bathal kar awo...'he tried to send her in.she was waiting for that chance ,immediately turned to go in.

alana:'kasturi ether wao....'she did not allow her to go in.

kasturi halted for a second and walked towards them with note book in one hand and pencil in other hand.

'lollipop will suit her better...'alana imagine lollipop in her hand instead of pencil and try to control her smile.

alana:'in say milo yeah hamari maasi hai😊...srif maasi nahee maa hai...'she hold her hand , made her sit between her and maasi.

maasi:'thum kosi katsha mai pad thee ho?...wa hee saathwee ,aatween...'

alana:'maasi...yeah school mai nahee university mai padthee hai...chemical engineering...'

maasi:'bagwaan ! yeah thay ko 😲! lad ki banee engineer.....'

alana:'maasi thum kis zamaanay mai ho.aaj kal ladki yaan sab kuch kar thay hai.engineering tho maamooli ki baath hai...'

maasi:'padaaye teek say kar thee ho...?'she asked patting on her back.

ajay:'ji...ek number mai aathe hai...😛'he said behalf of her.

maasi:'ithna chota number?😲...'

alana:'maasi ek number mathlab sabsay avwal...😊'

maasi:'tho...pakaanay wakaanay nahee aatha ho ga😕...'

alana:'uss ki kya zaroori hai maasi...?😊'she supported her.

before they leave maasi took a blue velvet rectangular jewel box from her hand bag .
maasi:'yeah robbie kay maa ka zaywar hai. hamaaray tharaf say shagun hai.'she opened that blue velvet box and showed to kasturi.in side there was a traditional dark pink ruby simple set for neck,ear and finger.

shaantha:'bahuth sundar hi ji...😃'she peeped in and took it from them.

next day alana called robbie and discussed about his work progress.during their conversation she did not speak about his marriage date,she want to keep it as a surprise for him.'he will be back with in a week.for sure he is going to be a surprised to know about his marriage date.'her thought brought a broad smile on her face.

as because he was unable to complete his work, unfortunately that week robbie could not return india.he was compelled to stay in UK for yet another week.
maasi:'ab kya karayn?😕...yeah lad ka bhee na ?kuch bhee kaam chalsay chalth kartha nahee hai...😔'

alana:'maasi yeah gharka kaam thodi hai?.hamaari marzee say karnay...mehndi kay subha wo aajayeah ga...'she tried to convinced her.

maasi:'shaadi kay kapaday tho silwana hai...😔''

alana:'maasi...desiner rajan ko robbie ka measurement patha hi.wahee tho uss kay concerts kay kapaday banatha hai...'

on the mehndi day from the morning alana was constantly checking on the net and continuously contacting the airlines to know the where about of robbie's flight and its landing time.she started worring when she came to know, because of bad weather the flight was diverted and halted in between.
the flight was suppose to arrive delhi early morning 8am , but landed delhi airport safely at 6pm.she took a peaceful breath after knowing robbie's flight landed delhi airport safely .

when robbie reached home it was around 8pm.in and out of the sabarwal house was decorated with tube lights,serial pulps , artificial flower strings and other decorating stuffs.he wondered looking at the decoration.the parking area was as bright as day.there was no place for him to park his car.

robbie:'kya baath hai ramsighn?😛.aaj diwali tho nahee hai...😉'he raised his doubt to his driver while getting down from the car.

as soon as his car entered the sabarwal house ,

'robbie aagayeah...robbie aagayeah...'his cousins came running, shouting with joy.

cousin:'thank god..finally you arrived..'she took the baggage from his hand.

divya:'bhaiya...'she ran and came from other side and hold his hands.

robbie:'thum..!'it took some time for him to speak.

robbie:'divya...thum kab aayee bording say?.school ki chutti ho ga yee kya?'he pulled her towards him.divya is robbie's cousin sister,maasi's only daughter doing grade twelve in ooty boarding school.

cousin:'bhaiya thumai nahee patha?.kal thumaari shaadi hai.aaj mehndi..'

robbie:'come on mazaak bandth karo😡.i am tired of my journey...' he walked ahead.his cousins followed him.

alana:'yeah log sahee kaha ra hay hai...😊'she too came out to receive him.

robbie:'dii.. 😡thum bhee milga yee in log kay saath saath...'

alana:'wo such kahay rahay hai...😊'

robbie:'wofo..come on dii.don't trouble me.i am tired.' he entered the hall with dis belief and stood still.

in the middle of the sabarwal hall there was a stage decorated with flowers.kasturi in a simple light green salwar with less accessories was sitting in the center of the stage with her fair palms stretched elegantly ,surrounded by girls of her age and some ladies of middle age.they were designing her hand with fresh green mehndi.beside kasturi the girl who was sitting was non other than her friend shivani.only after seeing shivani robbie realized that they are not mocking him.

alana:'i think you need to sleep for a while...😃' she said patting his shoulder.
robbie:'😡...dii..'he looked with a false anger.

alana:'achcha laga na surprise...😃'

robbie:'ummm...😛😳'

alana:'tho ab chalow.jalthee say fresh ho jawo...😊'she said holding his hand.he walked in holding alana's hand and looking at kasturi as if walking under black magic.
shivani:'robbie came...'she whispered to kasturi.
without shaking her hands kasturi raised her head.her sight traveled through the crowd ,catched robbie's and stood still on him.robbie looked at her admiringly with a sparkling eyes.he was focused on kasturi.the surrounding people were out of his sight.
alana:'robbie...chlo..😛'he came out of his black magic when alana pulled him forward.he followed alana, claimed the stares continue staring at kasturi. kasturi followed him with her sight till he reached the top stare.

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART-12

soon after the quick shave and short hot shower he took the new dress kept on the bed and started wearing it.he was humming his favorite song while putting up the buttons,fixing its collar etc .his mind and body was filled with unknown pleasure, the feeling never experienced before, which he cannot describe in words.he was ecsatic.while he was looking at the mirror and combing his hair
'are you ready?' his cousins entered his room and stood stunning looking at him.
cousins:'omg😃...robbie...uff...no words to admire you...'they said looking at him.
robbie:'thanks 😊.i am ready.just a minute...😛'he placed the comb on the table and moved with them.

the guests gathered in sabarwal hall were out of control dancing and singing,the mehndi ceremony was in full swing.

shaantha:'oh😲...robbss ji...😳' she wondered looking at robbie coming down the staris..

robbie was stepping down the stairs with his little cousins both the side holding his arms.he was wearing jade green fabric sherwani highlighted with stones and beads .single rashm thread work on collar and shoulder back sleeves with a dark matching zari.a long turban around the neck hanging both side of his left shoulder ,matching beads and stones work foot wear.his silky hair waving back in the air,clean shaved face glowing with happiness.. he was looking absolutely hot and handsome...looking amazing under the beam of focusing light.for a moment the whole sabarwal hall stood still staring at him with their mouths open,stopped their breathing and blinking.

kasturi's cousins got up , jumped down from the stage and ran towards robbie.this is the first time they are seeing the rock star face to face.

shaantha:'such mai😛...kasturi bahuth kush kissmathi hai...😳'she said loudly.
kasturi's cousins pulled robbie and brought him near the stage...near kasturi.

cousin:'jiju...now it is a challenge for you...'

robbie:'challenge..?😕...'he looked at them confused.

cusin:'phahay lay tho aap baito...'they tried to made him sit on the stage beside kasturi.but there was no place for him.some how they managed to get little place by asking others to make space for him and pushed him beside kasturi.there was no gap between them.he sat beside her hitting her shoulder.kasturi was like check maid.
cousine:'now...look at kasturi's mehndi and find the first alphabet of your name R...'

robbie:'for what...😕'

kasturi was feeling uneasy to sit sticking to him.his exclusive perfume and shaving lotion intoxicated her.she tried to leave gap between them but could not,other side she was stuck by shivani.

cousin:'yeah ek rasam hai...if you find the alphabet R in this mehndi design kasturi will do what ever you say , if you can not you have to do what kasturi says...'

robbie:'omg😲...it is weird...'he hesitated.

cousin:'come on ...it is the best opportunity for you ...you can tell her to do what ever you want..'robbie's cousins encouraged him.

cousin:'don't miss it.you will not get this chance again...'robbie's cousins gathered robbie's side and supported robbie.kasturi's cousin's stood beside kasturi teasing robbie.

robbie gently placed his right plam beneath kasturi's stretched hands and supported it .raised close to his face and looked in to the mehndi design .....searching for his own name.she can feel his breath on her palm.she turned her face other side showing her palms to him.

robbie's cousins:'robbie...robbie...'they cheered.

robbie raised his face and looked at kasturi.she avoid looking at him by taking her eyes away from his face.

after few minutes of his search both left and right palm he found R in one corner of her right palm just below the thumb.a broad smile spread on his face.

robbie's cousin:' wooo😛...i think he found it... am i right..?????'

robbie:...😉winked at kasturi.
kasturi:😡

kasturi's cousins:'..not that easy...'they don't want to belive him.

robbie:'ummm...😛yep i found it😉'

robbie's cousin:'yaa hooo👏...kasturi ab thum tho gayee...'she jumped and turn around.

kasturi's cousin:'kithar hai ? show us...show us..'
when robbie pointed out the hidden R with out disturbing the mehndi kasturi's cousins did not agree with him.

kasturi's cousins:'no ...not that one... not that one...' they shouted

finally they called the person who put the mehndi for confirmation.
mehndi lady:'dulha sahee payhachaana hai...😳' as soon as she said 'woooo....'robbie's cousins jumped with joy.

kasturi's cousin:'chlo...you own it.maang lo kuch bhee hamaari kasturi say...'

robbie:'wo NA kaha thee tho...'he raised his doubt

kasturi's cousin:'hamaari kasturi issi nahee hai.thum maan kar tho thay kho..'they assured.

robbie cleared his throat .there was a sudden silent among them.eagerly awaiting to know his wish.

cousins:'surprise is killing us...fast...' they were impatience.

robbie:'she should say i love you to me...😳'

kasturi:😲.😡..
robbie's cousins:'wow...that was fantastic.go robbie go...'they cheered.

kasturi's cousin:'uff...ithne choti maang.chalo kasturi ab jal thee say kaha tho...'

every one were concentrating on kasturi while kasturi was with anger fuming inside.

robbie's cousin:'come on kasturi...you have to .it is part of the mehndi rasam...'

kasturi:😲😡

robbie's cousins:'kasturi ...kasturi...kasturi...'they cheered

kasturi under stood that she cannot escape from this.she swallowed the saliva and gathered her strength.

kasturi:'...i...l..o..v..e...you..'she whispered.thinking in her mind 'i hate you...😡'
robbie's cousin:'kya!...suna thum nay? kasturi kuch kahay raha hee hai aap say..'she called some one of his relative and said.

robbie's cousin:'i love you' robbie say kahana hai...robbie kay naam say.not in general '

kasturi's cousin:'she is right.tell with his name...' she changed the party and joined with robbie's group.

kasturi:' ...i love you robbie sir...'she said in a feeble voice looking at the ground.

robbie's cousin:'no sir... delete that word...'
kasturi:'i love you robbie...' she kept her gaze lowered.

robbie:'looking at me...' this time the demand was from robbie itself.

kasturi:'..i love you robbie...' she tried to look at him.

robbie's cousins:'...loudly...we have hearing problem...'

kasturi:'..I ...LOVE...U..😃😡'she plaster a angry smile on her face and said looking in to his eyes directly little bit loudly.

robbie:'...I LOVE U 2😃😳 'he said with the same volume together with a smile from his heart.

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ooh Im first 😛
Fantastic parts Shumi 👏
Wow three all in one go what a surprise 😉
Poor Kasturi had to go along with it but no worries shes closer to RoKa 😛
Kiran committed suicide? How sad! Lol you make us work so hard just slipping in little clues 😕
Hm liked how Alana supported Kasturi 😊
And loved the mehndi rasam loved the matching clothes choces for rRoKa very attractive 😛
And him finding her name 😃
She said I love you! She said it! She said it! So cute 😳
Aw so sweet how Robbie was all excited but he better watch out cos Kasturi is not happy...😉
Wonderful parts update soon
😊
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Posted: 16 years ago


this time I am not gonna read the 2nd one first n then the 1st one

hehehe I'll read all the three in order!
Edited by Innocent02 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Innocent02



this time I am not gonna read the 2nd one first n then the 1st one .hahaha...i remember....during my last ff always you mix up .i hope you don't do this time.😃

hehehe I'll read all the three in order! great thinking.let us see.


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Posted: 16 years ago
Roka's marriage soo soon ......I am soo Happy
yipeeee

in 11th part the last paragraph was soo sweet when robbie entered the house n kept staring at Kasturi......sho shweet

Mehndi ceremony was very nice
ofcourse the I LOVE U part was awesome !

all the 3 parts were amazing !!!

great job dii. . . . . .

I am getting soo excited for ROKA's marriage😃

thanks !
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Posted: 16 years ago
u've done a splendid and remarkable job.the whole scene was just so breathtaking.today is my 10th board result within one hour and i was shivering badly. but this made me quite overwhelmed.......................
i m getting curious to watch the next part and i hope this time i wont bring tears in ur eyes
Edited by Harlowdqueen - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow

SHOOO SWEET
Robbie is sooo JANU-ABLE

LOl
THanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks for the pm...... wow wow wow three parts together......... all the 3 parts were just mindblooooooooooooowing........... u are an excellent writer, u make us feel the scenes by ur description, seriously the way u expressed kasturi's anger, robbie's happiness, his love for kasturi was just superb...... robbie made the best use of the opportunity of making kasturi do whatever he wants and finally kasturi had to tell that she loves him..... m just waiting for the parts after their wedding........ pls pls pls update sooooooon, and thank u sooooooo much for updating 3 parts together..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg shumi di,,this was awesome....👏
love this robbie....❤️
n the suspense u created abt robbie's arrival ,robbie finding his name in kasturi's palm n kasturi sayin i love u made me bite my nails...😕
n ye the last scene in part 11 was soooooooo cute...robbie cud nt get his eys off kasturi.....😛
also the whole scene of mehndi ceremony is so well described...😊
n vry happy to knw that RoKa r going to get married soon....
love u diiiii🤗

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