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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
bravo......2 brilliant updates
thanks alot

the story is moving fast.....robbie is soo sweet
I luved it when he came 2 propose to her n he was smiling on wht shanta was saying n when they accepted the proposal
that was sweet

alana n ajay can get married😆maybe...

thanks.....it was gr8
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: swan20

part 8........ahhh Shumi you revived the RoKa memories by re-creating that scene on the terrace......😳 😃......beautifully described....👏 thank you so much dear.thanks for comparing my small ff to the great serial.

wow didn't expect robbie to suddenly propose....😲 😲 😲hahaha...i know.


part 9........even more shocked now......😲.....poor kasturi left with no excuse...yepppeeee....btw whose idea was it to say that kasturi loved robbie.....😕...it was alana's😉...because robbie himself seemed surprised na...😕yep.thanks for reading so keenly

so are they really going to get married with kasturi still hating him....😕 yep.that too very soon

shantha aunty is too funny...🤣 i brought that character,because i dn't want my ff to be too serious

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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
o M G!!!
Big omg
Awesome update loved it
hey-can u do me a favour..wenever u write n post a new part..plz pm me..thanku
Update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Lilmizz_Rahela

was superb thank you dear😃.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: missindia26

Fantastic parts Shumi! 👏thanks dear
Loved the terrace scene so romantic 😳thanks.almost every readr liked it.😳
Bechara Robbie will have to try harder 😛so true
Ooh Robbie at the door so dramatic 😲hehehe..unexpected isn't it?
Shantha lol totally hilarious, trying to jump on Robbie and stuffing crackers in his mouth 😆i want to mix some humor in my ff that is why.
Oooh Kasturi is gonna murder Robbie, hahaha....wish not. looking forward to the fireworks 😉soon it is going crack 😃
Update soon 😊will try to

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Posted: 16 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: amitarocks

Fantastic part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks dear

Poor Robbie....i know....he's tooooo cute as usual!!!!!!!! yep😛
Update soon!!!!!!!! i will
Take care!! you too

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Posted: 16 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

oh ma god !!!! oh ma god!!!!! oh ma god!!!!! they are goin to get married....yepppp very soon............... m sooooooooooooo happy, its such a pleasant surprise.....more in store😉...... pls pls pls let them get married and then let kasturi take her revenge, it would be very interesting.....yep that is what going to happen😛.. The terrece scene was just mindblowing........ u make simple scenes look extraordinary by ur beautiful description and amazing writing stlye.....thank uuuuuuuu so much for your appreciation dear.these words are my strength to my ff....... pls pls pls update sooooon inshallah tomorrow and thank for 2 wonderful parts.....mention not dear.it was my pleasure. to reads your beautiful comments i can write non stop......

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Posted: 16 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: mini1roka

omg shumi diiiii ,,,i didnt ever expect that robbie wud propose her so early n after hearing her "no" he'd cum to her house with alana n that too with a marriage proposal.......😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲hahahaaaaa shocking na???? i know .non of my reader expect this turn 😉

well all the scenes were so beautifully sketched....👍🏼thanks
the terrace scene ....kasturi on a swing...all this made me remember the roka scenes shown in the show....😭 thank you for your compliment dear.,me too feeling sorry for missing RoKa's those beautiful moments😭
n shanta aunty is really vry funny specially when she says"srif haath kyun ji ....haath ,pair ,seir dill,dhimaag...sab...pooray ka poora lay lo" n robbie too cant stop himself...🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣hahaha...you are crying and laughing simultaniously.thanks for enjoying
well i fink they r nt going to b married so early..u are going to be wrong .they will get marry very soon..i fink there must b sum story linked with kiran..you are right ..so looking forward to nxt parts...😍inshallah tomorrow😊
btw great work once again....👏thanks for your claps dear.😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Innocent02

bravo....thank you dear ..2 brilliant updates
thanks alot.it is my pleasure to entertain you

the story is moving fast....true .robbie is soo sweet i know😳
I luved it when he came 2 propose to her n he was smiling on wht shanta was saying n when they accepted the proposal
that was sweet thanks again for liking it dear

alana n ajay can get married😆maybe...may be😉

thanks...😡..it was gr8😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
PART-10

robbie and alana came out of chawala house and were walking towards their car.while walking robbie slightly jumped and kicked a small stone with his right leg which flew away beyond their sight.

alana:'kush ho????.😊..'she asked looking at him and the force he kicked the stone.
robbie:'bahuth...😃'he threw the car key up above and caught it with both the hands.he was over whelming with joy.

robbie:'dii...😊'suddenly he turned towards her.

alana:'😊...kya?'

robbie:' thum nay issa kyun kaha...😕? ki kasturi much say pyaar karthee hai..i don't under stand😕' he slow down his steps.

alana:'😊...thum tho ussay payaar kar thay ho na...?'

robbie:'bahuth...😃'he slightly jumped and crossed a small pit.

alana:'😊tho kya fark padtha? pyaar mai ithna tho chal tha hai😃...'she giggled.

robbie:'dii...😕 what do you mean?'

alana:'uss nay thumai NA kahana? ...'

robbie:'ummmm...😔 'for a second a sad shadow covered his face.

alana:'patha hai kyun ? yeah middle class kay log bahuth ghuth dhaar ho thay hain.chotay gharon mai , chotay galiyon mai raha thay hai.par baathayn bahuth baday baday kar thay hain.we cannot cover them with money....inhay issa he handle karna hai... sentimentally.😉'

robbie:'dii...😲...you are great😛 ' suddenly he bend down,hold her below the knees , lifted up and turned round and round.

alana:'omg😲...leave me..'she hold his shirt collar tightly and screamed.she was afraid of falling.

robbie:'...🤣...' he did not stop whirling.

alana:'yeah kay hai? koi thayk layga... leave me...'

robbie:'i don't care😊...i love my dii..'with a great difficulty she pushed him and jumped down.

alana:'ufff....😡'she was taking quick and short breaths.she trembled while trying to walk.

robbie:'🤣...

alana:'look !...how happy you are.iss kay leyeah tho mai kuch bhee bol sakthee huon...😊'she justified herself.

chawala house:

ajay:'proposal from rock star robbie sabarwal?😲...i cannot believe this...'he was wondering to his father.

kasturi:'papa...i don't want to marry now...'she slowly refused.

ajay:'do you want to say no to them!.are you crazy???😡'

JP:'jab thum chaho ge , thab thumai issa rishta nahee melay ga kasturi...'he spoke as a responsible father.

JP:'papa i am too young to marry...'again she tried.

ajay:'thum ithnee bhee choti nahee ho kasturi.going to be twenty soon'

JP:'kasturi...thum ajay ka bhee soocho.thees saal ka ho ga ya hai.ajay nay kiran kay shaathee kay inthzaar mai usski shaadi nahee ki.par kiran thumaari hee jai say shaadi kay leyah mana karthee gayee...'

ajay:'kiran was postponing her marriage saying that she want to complete her studies.papa allowed her.then she said she want to work.again papa listen to her.finally what happened? she end up her life.we don't want the same things to be repeated with you.'

JP:'mai chaha tha huon.ajay bhee jalhsay jalth settle ho jayeah....'he got up and went in as if he don't want to discuss further in this regard.

kasturi was left with no choice.

next day:

university break time:

shivani and kasturi was sitting on a long cement bench.

shivani:'why are you looking confused?...dull too ?' she asked looking at her long face.

kasturi:'wo..yesterday robbie came to my house...'

shivani:'what...😲'

kasturi narrated from robbie proposed her on the terrace ,in spite of her NO he came to his house with his sister to propose her.

shivani:'....she did not speak

kasturi:'kyun chup ho...?'

shivani:'it is unexpected.but any way... i think he proposed you in a very decent way.better marry him...'

kasturi:😡

shivani:' duniyaa saari kay ladki yaan uss par marthay hai...'

kasturi:'but i am not...😡'

shivani:'not necessary...'

kasturi:'why do you speak like that...😔'

shivani:'kasturi...be practical.in fact you are the luckiest among the crowd....think that way...'

'luckiest!😡 you never know shiv...i hate him...'she could not speak out her thoughts.she boiled in.

shivani:'advance wishes kasturi😊...i hope you will not forget me after marring the rock star...'

kasturi:😡

shivani:'😊'

in sabarwal music company:

it was around 3:30 pm.robbie was in his rehearsal floor with his troop.anitha came in with an formal 'excuse'

anitha:'sir...'she drew his attention.

robbie:'yes...'he turned towards her.

anitha:'sir the board members have called for a immediate meeting at 4pm.alana mam told to inform you...'

robbie:'teek hai...' he wind up the rehearsal before 4pm.

conference room:
at 4pm:

few of the members were already present.alana and few more were yet to come.as soon as all gathered they started the meeting.

the purpose of the meeting was , six months before the music company which they started with the collaboration of a growing UK music company was facing sudden fall in their share.some one from this company should immediately go to UK to look in to it.at the end of the meeting the senior members suggested robbie to go personally to UK.
when he came out of the conference room it was 5:15pm.

insabarwal house:

at the dinning table robbie ,alana and their maasi were having their dinner .
maasi:'robbie...kuch parayshaan lag rahay ho?...kya baath hai...?'she asked him looking at the way he was keeping the food plate with out eating.

robbie:'kuch nahee...😕😔'he said formally.but actually he was.he was thinking to meet kasturi after he visited chawala house with alana, but today he could not because of the meeting.tomorrow morning the company has made all arrangements to go to UK by morning flight.he is going to held up there for a week.first time he was messing up his personal feelings with his profession.

alana:'i think you are brooding about the chawalas.don't do.i will look in to them.better you concentrate only on your work...'she assured him.

next day morning before going to office alana went to air port with robbie to send him off.

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago

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