FF-Thoda Sa Pyaar(RoKa)NEW-part-47 to 50 pg107 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
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There is no word in the dictionary for u. i loved both the parts.there was continuously a big smile on my face while i was reading it.u r doing a really nice job. keep on
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
awesome parts..... u write beautifully.......... loved the scene outside the ice cream parlour....... pls update sooooon................
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: hmughal1

hey shumi DIIIIIIIII!!!!!! 😉hi hinnuu..😉😉

yayy me first again!!!! 😃 welcome shalcome😃
as usual F-A-N-T-A-S-H-T-I-C!! 👏T..H..A..N..K..SSSSSSSS😳
hmmm game?!! interesting!! thanks 😊 *scratches chin in thought* heeeee...
uh-oh kasturi left her books in robbie's car!!! (dhum dhum dhuuuuuuuum)..HAHAHA...tham...tham...thadammm

liked the way yu described robbie's cabin!! 👍🏼i know.i wish we all sit in his cabin and work together with him😳

hehehe any girl wud feel embarrassed 2 see robbie shirtless!! ☺️yep...me too😳😳 fab description!! me drooling over here!! all my uni notes are drenched now lol!! 😉hahahaaaa....hope you take care of your notes.

ooo awkwardness in the lift...cud sense that?!! 😛yep..very cute...just imagine kasturi in half skirt...😳

😲 kasturi's notes aren't in his car!!! i wonder where they cud be then?!! keep wondering till you read next part...wonder if robbie's got anyfin 2 do with it!! 😉no dear😊

all in all amazing part dii!!! thanks hinnuu

gna go read next part now 😛i am following you
Hinna

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Posted: 16 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: hmughal1

😲 that's me is it😲!!!! omg....looking shocked because this part was..................even more F-A-N-T-A-S-H-T-I-C!!!!! THANKSSSSS...again

oh ryt robbie had nufin 2 do with kasturi's missing notes.he did not notice those note books..i thought maybe he hid them under his pillow or sumin and admires her handwriting or hugs her notes before he goes 2 bed or sumin 2 that effect may be he might have done so if he would have noticed the note books before hand 😉 lol how silly!! 🤪hahaha...love your self appreciation😳
ram singh:'saab thum fir say school join karlee????😕...' he gave the note books to him with confussion
hahahahaha this line jus cracked me up 😆 thanks for enjoying and when he said it again
ramsing:'shaayad saab evening school join karlee😕...'he said to him self,still he was under confussion.
lol lol lol too funny!! 🤣i know... 🤣 and aw bechara robbie spilling coffee on himself!! poor robbie..😳
how rude kasturi and shivani left without saying goodbye!! 😲 😉that is because kasturi want to avoid robbie and reach home early.waisay bhee note books tho milgayeah...
woahhh robbie's sudden anger!! scary!! n the way he grabbed kasturi and blasted at her woahh very well written di!! 👍🏼 could feel the impact!! thanks dear
oooo wonder what's gna happen next!! robbie's getting restless!!! dum...dum.,.dthdumm...wait for next part.😉
fab part shumi di!! 👏thanks hinnu
waiting 4 next update!! 🤗will try to up date soon.but not today
Hinna

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Posted: 16 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: missindia26

Hi Shumi 😊hi dear..if you don't mind may i know your sweet name?😃
Great parts 👏thanks
Hmm Robbie's cabin sounded nice 😊yep
Loved when he took off his shirt lol h😉heeee...me too😳
And the the lift scene poor shiv and kasturi were so embarassed 😛robbie too was embarassed😳
Lol Ram Singh was so funny 😆lol he was confused to robbie with note books.

But whoa Robbie got well angry 😕then what? ...😡,left him with out telling ...paid the bill too😡
But was so sweet when seeing her fear he released her 😳kasturi was feared because she knows that she was wrong.
Reminded me of the lovely RoKa memories 😍me too ...😍sweet memories
Waiting to read more continue soon 👏
will try.thanks for your beautiful comments dear.😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: mini1roka

hmmm m gettin sooo curious....😛will try to keep your curiousness till the end

this part was jus fab....👏thanks dear.thank you so much for your appreciation.
loved it seriously...😛thanks again
you hav portrayed it soo well that i can imagine the whole roka video being played in front of my eyes.....😍that was the best compliment to my.thanks for the same
the way you described robbie's cabin....his shirtless scene n his anger....all emotions r so realistic...👍🏼thanks dear..🤗
it's like a return of kasturi.....one more compliment..😲...
amazing work shumi diii..😳..so nxt part tom?? may be day after tommorow inshallah
it seems like a daily soap being telecasted everyday ...lovin it seriously.....🥳i love your comments too.thanks for encouraging me with your lovely comments.
great job...👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: mini1roka

n ya fanx fr welcumin me here....🤗mention not dear😊.it was my pleasure.i love you 🤗 and your comments

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Posted: 16 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Harlowdqueen

There is no word in the dictionary for u...omg😲...i have no words to say ,the word thank you is very very small for you. i loved both the parts.thanks .there was continuously a big smile on my face while i was reading it.i wish this big smile should remain on your face for ever.u r doing a really nice job. keep on.thanks dear.😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
Shumi yaar you are too good.........your style of storytelling is fantastic.......i should be used to how good you are after your 2 FFs but each time you surprise me........you are one talented girl......👍🏼

so kasturi is repenting the game she was playing with robbie.............but now robbie is already intrigued by her so no use of running away from him......😆 😆

hmmm robbie is really angry at her behavior......wonder what he's going to do next......😕

ufff yeh anita......yahan bhi robbie ka peecha nahi chod rahi......😡 😆

waiting for next part.......😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#70

diiiiiiii

first of all i'm extremely sorry for not replying since 4 pts....its bcoz i've unit test n i dont cum online frequently.....2moro i've sciene but still i came just to check ur ff....

diiiii.....wat is wrong wid kasturi??????y is she behaving like dis???????actually i hate kasturi 4 doing dis.....really till now i didnt like her dii...to be frank....i dint like her yet in ur ff!!!!

her behaviour is sooooooo dump which makes ppl fooool!!!!!!
ohhhhhh poor robbie......always get lost in her.....shit if i was in place of robbie during dat coffee scene i wud have sed sumthing more....i wudnt have melted in her inncoent face even though if i like her!!!!!
ohhhhhhh its sure dat robbie n kiran had a past....but i just have a request to u dii ki robbie n kiran's past shud not be a love story btween dem which i hate to see.......but make it sumthing like kasturi's misunderstanding!!!!!
i dnt want to see robbie wid dat antavishwaasi kiran.....lol hahhaa....
dii 2moro i've scinece unit test!!!plzzzzzzzzz przy 4 me dii!!!
continue fast dii!!!!
love u
Nechu

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