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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chapter 13A - Aaye ho meri zindagi mein (english)
"Come on Kasturi" Robbie popped his head around the door.

"Robbie sir!" Kasturi squeaked. "You can't come in!"

"Why?"

"That…I…" she gabbled, sounding panicked.

"OK, OK, I won't come in." He closed the door. "But get ready quickly."

"Why?"

"You forgot? Today's my concert."

"Sorry Robbie sir, I won't be able to come."

"What's this, Kasturi? I won't like it without you"

"No Robbie sir, I have some urgent work. But I'll come next time."

"Promise?"

"Promise."

"OK. But I'll miss you."

"Me too."

***

Kasturi switched on the TV. She felt bad for not going. But Robbie would have understood. She smiled as the announcer introduced Robbie.

"This is for the love of my life. I love you Kasturi. You're not her today. But you're always on my mind. So these words are just for you…

Kasturi stared into his passionate eyes, full of love and longing.

"Kabhi mujhko hasaaye

Kabhi mujhko rulaaye

Mujhe kitna sataati hain…

Woh larki bahut yaad aati hain

Woh larki bahut yaad aati hain

Dekha use jab pehli baar,

Ban gaya deewana main yaar

Karke anjaana ikraar,

Le gayi dil ka chain qaraar

Thodi si ghabraayi thi, thodi si sharmaayi thi

Kitna pyaara mukhda hai, woh to chaand ka tukda hai

Jaane kahan chhup jaati hai

Woh ladki bahut yaad aati hai

Woh ladki bahut yaad aati hai

Woh ladki bahut yaad aati hai

Woh ladki bahut yaad aati hai

(Sometimes she makes me laugh

Sometimes she makes me cry

She tortures me so much

I remember that girl a lot

I remember that girl a lot

The first time I saw her

I became crazy

With her unknown love

She took away my peace

She was a little scared, a little shy

Such a pretty face, as pretty as the moon

Just like the moon she hides away

I remember that girl a lot

I remember that girl a lot

I remember that girl a lot

I remember that girl a lot)

***

Robbie opened his eyes.

"Aaye ho meri zindagi me tum bahaar banke Mere dil me yuhi rahena tum pyar pyar banke Aankhon me tum base ho sapne hazar banke Mere dil me yuhi rahena tum pyar pyar banke Mere saathi mere sajaan mere saath yuhi chalna Badle ga rang zamana par tum nahi badalna Meri maang yuhi bharna taare hazar ban ke Aaye ho meri zindagi me tum bahaar banke Mere dil me yuhi rahena tum pyar pyar banke Aaye ho meri zindagi me tum bahaar banke Mere dil me yuhi rahena tum pyar pyar banke (Youve come into my life like SpringStay in my heart forever as loveYou've settled in my eyes as a thousand dreamsStay in my heart forever as loveMy partner, my lover walk by my side foreverEven if the world changes, you never changeColour my forehead with starsYouve come into my life like SpringStay in my heart forever as loveYouve come into my life like SpringStay in my heart forever as love) "Kasturi, you..."

"Yes Robbie sir, how will it do, that only you have to sing all the time. Even I should express my love."

"Thank you, Kasturi. It was really lovely," he thanked her, heartfelt. She blushed a little.

"Happy Birthday, Robbie sir. This is you present. Open it…"

Robbie grinned and eagerly tore off the red tissue paper to reveal an album. Written on the silky cover in embossed italic was the title "By entering my life…"

"Open it and see, Robbie sir," encouraged Kasturi, a touch of coyness in her voice.

Thanks for reading :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

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This is the album Kasturi made for Robbie 😛
Its not perfect but hopefully it'll give you guys an idea of how i imagined it 😳
Chapter 13B will be up soon 😊
Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is the next part Its very short as its mostly a continuation of 13A
Hope you guys enjoy
Chapter 13B-Bahut Pyaar Karte Hain

"Kaisa laga?" she asked timidly. He had no words. He simply put his arms around her and embraced her tightly.

"Shukriya, Kasturi. Tumne yeh sab karke mujhe yakeen dila diya ke tum bhi humse itna mohabbat karti hoon. Tumne itna pyaara tofa dehke, mujhe bahut khush bana diya." His voice was a little choked with emotion. Her gift had reminded him how important she was to him. He couldn't bear to lose her.

"Ab kahiye, sir, aaj aapko kya karna hain?" inquired Kasturi cheerily.

"Sab meri marzi?"

"Jee, ha, janam din ko aapka hain, isliye…."

"Theek hain, pehle goomne chalenge. Aur phir…baat me dekhenge…"

"Theek hain."

***

"Dekh Kasturi, merry-go-round. Chalo, chalo." Robbie enthused, tugging on her hand excitedly.

"Aap ke hukoom tho maan na parega," Kasturi replied. Secretly, she too had a strange desire to ride the carousel. The hopped aboard, side by side, Robbie on a fiery, black stallion, and Kasturi on a beautiful brown mare with her painted eyes lowered. They clasped hands as they whizzed around, enjoying the sheer contentment of feeling like children again, of being in love.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chapter 13B-Bahut Pyaar Karte Hain

"How did you find it?" she asked timidly. He had no words. He simply put his arms around her and embraced her tightly.

"Thank you, Kasturi. By doing so much you've convinced me that you too love me just as much. By giving me such a lovely present, you've made me very happy." His voice was a little choked with emotion. Her gift had reminded him how important she was to him. He couldn't bear to lose her.

"Now tell me sir, what do you want to do today?" inquired Kasturi cheerily.

"Whatever I want?"

"Oh yes, it's your birthday, so…."

"OK, lets go roam around. And the...we'll see…"

"OK."

***

"Look Kasturi, merry-go-round. Let's go, let's go." Robbie enthused, tugging on her hand excitedly.

"Whatever you wish," Kasturi replied. Secretly, she too had a strange desire to ride the carousel. The hopped aboard, side by side, Robbie on a fiery, black stallion, and Kasturi on a beautiful brown mare with her painted eyes lowered. They clasped hands as they whizzed around, enjoying the sheer contentment of feeling like children again, of being in love.

Thanks for reading :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
Both parts were very sweet
Thanx for taking time out to write this
Good luck with your exams
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Both parts were very sweet

Thanx for taking time out to write this
Good luck with your exams

Thanks a lot Aaliyah thats really sweet
Glad you enjoyed it :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87

awesome part but m waiting for raunak and kasturi scenes..... kasturi is really sweet... please update soon....

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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
da album was reeli good
U mus hav worked hard on it

Parts were good too
Well-done
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

awesome part thanks😊
but m waiting for raunak and kasturi scenes..... oh but I dont want Raunak to be there...😲
kasturi is really sweet... aw I know😛
please update soon.... will try 😊

Originally posted by: muneefah

da album was reeli good
U mus hav worked hard on it

Im glad you liked it 😊
I got the idea from my friend who made an album for her boyfriend 😛
Parts were good too
Well-done
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi everyone
Heres the next part
Hope you enjoy
Please comment
Thanks for reading
Love TJ
Chapter 14 - Yeh deewangee

Kasturi knotted the strings of her pale yellow, calf-length churidaar top, then arranged the cream chiffon dupatta around her neck. She was wearing just her Ganesh pendant and simple drop earrings. She added the final touches top her make-up, painting a dot of kaajal onto each corner of her eyelid, and went to meet Robbie.

"Tum bahut khoobsurat lagrahi ho, Kasturi…"

"Shukriya, Robbie sir."

"Aur mein..."

"Kyun, tareef dhoond rahe ho?"

"Tumse to mera haq banta hain."

"Toh soon lijye. Aap bahut 'handsome' lag rahe ho."

"Sirf handsome? Lo, tareef toh kiya. Aur mera shirt kaise laga?"

"Woh bhi bahut acchha hain, Robbie sir. Yeh rang tumpe bahut acchha lagta hain."

"Par thoda khulla hain? Mein button close karoonga."

"Nahi, nahi sir, waise acchhhe hain."

"Oh, acchhe hain?"

"Aap bhi na, sir…mein bas…" she protested, her face reddening.

"Its OK, Kasturi. Mein bas mazaak kar rahe tha. Chalo. Abhi toh teen ghante lagenge, Mumbai pochne."

***

"Kasturi…"

"Hmmm…"

"Waise bhi, mujhe bahut hi acchha laga, tumhari button-wali baat…"

"Sir…" she groaned. "Aap phir se…"

"Acchha, acchha, nahi kahoonga. Lo, hum pochgaye hain. Chalo."

***

"Robbie! Kitni dehr lagadi. Mehmaan aanewale hain. Chalo, chalo, jaldi, Kiran ke paas jao, tayari…" Devika ordered, bustling Robbie into the hall.

Kasturi was left standing alone in the hallway, feeling wretchedly out of place. And without Robbie's dazzling smile and sweet conversation, her mind wandered back to Raunak. She hadn't meant to hurt him. But nor could she have given up her chance to escape. And in honesty, she wasn't brave enough to have stayed behind. But what were the consequences of her hasty decision…would her past always overshadow her future?

Someone grabbed her hand, pulling her into a doorway. A hand covered her eyes.

"Pehchaana mujhe?"

"Robbie sir! Aapne mujhko daradiya…"

"Sorry Kasturi. Par tum kis khayaalon me khoyi thi?"

"Mein…woh…"

"Anyways, I'm sorry. Itna waqt hogaya, mein tumhe akela chorgaya…"

"Its OK, Robbie sir…aapko kaam tha…"

"Aur shayad…party mein bhi mein tumhare saath waqt nahi goosar paaonnga…"

"Yeh kaise baat kar rahe ho, sir. Mein samaj sakti hoon. Aur aapko bhi doston ke saath rehna chahiye. Fikar mat kijye"

"Ah ha, doston. Aao mein tumhe apne doston se milaata hoon. Chalo."

"Yeh hai Preet Juneja. Ek number ka shararat hain woh. Yeh hai Milind Mishra. Kyun Milind, Prachi kahi nazar nahi aa rahi?"

"Neev aur Ayesha ke saath hogi. Hi, Kasturi."

"Namaste."

"Aur waaki sab – Shabd, Amar, Ranvir, Shaurya…"

"Chal Robbie, maan na parega, tumhari Kasturi hain bahut hi pyaari."

"Tum uske liye gaana nahi gaaonge?"

"Nahi Robbie sir, iski kya...." Robbie grinned at her and bounced onstage.

"Excuse me, everyone, I'd like to say a few words. Aaj mera janam din hain. Par yeh saal ki sabse acchhe sin tha, jab mein Kasturi se mila tha. Usne mujhe to badal diya, aur saath meri puri zindagi bhi." Devika bristled as he praised Kasturi. Her outrage intensified when he finished his speech without a single mention of her own name.

"Mujhe bata hain, mein jab uski tareef karta hoon, usse sharam aati hain. Par mein har waqt kehna chahta hoon, ke woh meri liye kitni pyaari hain. I love you, Kasturi." A smile lit Kasturi's face.

"Chaand sitare, phool aur khushboo

Yeh to saare purane hain

Taaza taaza kali khili hai Hum uske deewane hain Kaali ghatayein, barkha saawan O kaali ghatayein, barkha saawan Yeh toh sab afsane hainTaaza taaza kali khili hai Hum uske deewane hain Andaaz hai uske naye nayeHai naya naya deewanapanPehnane taj jawani ka Hanske laut gaya bachpan Geet ghazal sab kal ki baateinO geet ghazal sab kal ki baateinUske naye taraane hainTaaza taaza kali khili hai Hum uske deewane hain Hai roop mein itna saadapanTo kitna soondar hoga mannBin gehnein aur singaar bina Woh to lagti hai dulhann Kaajal bindiya, kangan jhumkeO kaajal bindiya, kangan jhumkeYeh toh guzare zamane hainTaaza taaza kali khili hai Hum uske deewane hain

Chaand sitare, phool aur khushboo

Yeh to saare purane hain

Taaza taaza kali khili hai Hum uske deewane hain" Kasturi lowered her eyes bashfully as Robbie walked over to her. The spotlight ended on them both and applause broke out.

"Ab Robbie aur Kasturi ko ek saath ek romantic dance karna hoga," decided Preet.

"Yeh, mein…"

"Nahi, nahi Kasturi ma'am, not allowed."

"Chalo, Kasturi, mere liye," Robbie pleaded. She shook her head in acceptance and allowed him to lead her into the floor. An upbeat, romantic track began to play.

"Sholon si, sholon si

Tere aankhon ki yeh roshni

Kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

Chandni chandni

Tere chehre ki yeh chandni

Kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

Tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana

Mere liye hai bas mere liye hai"

The others clapped as he spun and twirled her around the dancefloor, then swept her into his hold as they slowed down and improvised a waltz.

"Yeh meri adayein, yeh meri wafayein

Tujhko pata hai sabh tere liye hai

Sholon si, sholon si

Meri aankhon ki yeh roshni

Tere liye hai tere liye hai"

"OK, now everyone on the dancefloor. Swap partners…"

Kasturi raised her eyebrows as a flock of girls streamed over to Robbie.

"Uff kisi ko jalan ho rahi hain?" someone whispered in her ear.

She whirled round to find Preet with a quizzical look on his face. "Nahi toh," she assured him.

"Toh aap meri saath ek dance karengi?"

"Bilkool."

Haske dikha do deewane ko

Jo ho raha hai ho jaane do

Dil ke uljhan zubaan pe

Aati hai to aa bhi jaane do"

The lights dimmed. "Ab sab anjaan log ke saath nachenge. Pehchaane ki koshish karjo."

"Yeh hoton ki narmi yeh sanson ki garmi

Mere liye hai bas mere liye hai"

Kasturi gasped as an arm snaked around her and pulled her towards someone. Her heartbeat began to race and she instantly began to struggle.

"Mere liye hai bas mere liye hai"

"Raunak…" she breathed. "Choddo mujhe…"

"Mere liye hai bas mere liye hai"

"Mein aagaya hoon. Sab ko tumhari sach batane…Kasturi Singhania…"

He released her suddenly as the lights snapped on. She looked around in consternation, but she could see him nowhere. He had melted away as quickly as he had come. But he had achieved his aim – she was terrified. Her heart continued to gallop inside her, her breaths were short and sharp.

"Kasturi! Tum theek ho?" Robbie's face was creased in concern.

"Jee…woh…mein…"

"Tum itni gabrayi si kyun ho? Andhere se darti ho?"

"Nahi, bas, kuch nahi." She searched wildly for another subject. "Aap ko mazaa aaye, sab titliyon ke saath naach kar?"

"Kyun? Meri Kasturi ko jalan ho rahi hain? Good. Thoda jalan karna acchhi baat hain."

"Robbie sir, aap meri hi shabd ka istamaal kar rahe ho..."

"OK, OK, sorry. Ab chalo na. Mom stage par bola rahi hain." She followed him to where Devika was beckoning.

"Aaj ek aur wajah hain, jashn manane ki. Aaj mein sabko batane wali hoon, ke mere bete Robbie ki sagaai honewali hain, Kasturi Singhania ke saath."

Kasturi held her breath. Had anyone noticed? Devika returned her look of panic with a malicious smirk.

Robbie quickly stepped in. "Mom, Kasturi Singhania nahi, Kasturi Chawla." Kasturi choked out her breath as Devika made no further claims.

"Oh sorry, Kasturi, galati hogayi." Kasturi choked out her breath as Devika made no further claims. "Robbie Sabharwal aur Kasturi Chawla ki…"

"Ek minute!"

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