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Posted: 16 years ago
it was just mindblowinnnnnnnng...... does raunak still love kasturi and what made kasturi marry raunak,??? pls pls pls update sooooon........
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

it was just mindblowinnnnnnnng...... does raunak still love kasturi and what made kasturi marry raunak,??? pls pls pls update sooooon........

thank you, 😛 i would say Raunak still wants Kasturi but wouldnt call it love 😡, but more will be explained, about your 2nd q, will be revealed soon😉. ill update as soon as i can 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
when wl update???? pls update soon.... pls make a promise that u will not leave your fanfic halfway pls pls pls....... m really scared, u will not discontinue it na?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Aw Neha its very sweet that you like it so much
Im sorry Ive been so busy with exams and homework and other stuff I've had no time to update but Im working on it when possible
Hopefully I'll be able to finish ch16 today
I just dont want to rush updates and not be happy with them
Dont worry I promise not to discontinue
And there should be an update at least every week
I can PM you if you like
:)
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Posted: 16 years ago

m really sorry for being so mean but i really like ur fanfic..... pls take ur time and update when u r free...... thank u for assuring me that u will not discontinue ur fanfic, m really happy.... well i really dont knw how this pm works....

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

m really sorry for being so mean but i really like ur fanfic..... pls take ur time and update when u r free...... thank u for assuring me that u will not discontinue ur fanfic, m really happy.... well i really dont knw how this pm works....

dont worry u werent being mean 😊
as its now in the FanFic section i can send u a PM each time i update if u like
btw same 4 evry1else, if you want me 2 PM u when i update
😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heres the next part
Sorry i took so long
Its a bit slow but hope you enjoy it
Please comment and tell me what you thought
thanks for reading
Love TJ

Chapter 16

Dragged along the street, Kasturi's feelings finally began to stir. How dare Raunak bring her away? He had no right over her. She had sworn that day she had left, that he would never hurt her again.

"Rukhjao Raunak."

"Kasturi, tum meri patni ho. Samaj bhi yehi maanti hain. Toh chup chap mere saath chalo. Yahaan tamasha mat karo?"

"Kaisi patni? Jise tum maarte te, jiski zindagi tumne barbaad kiya. Mein saaf kehrahi hoon, mein tumhare saath ek minute bhi nahi rehsakti. Seedhe se, mujhe jaane do, verna mein court bhi jaa sakti hoon."

"Ja. Khushi khush ja court mein. Mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hain. Par ek baat sochlijye. Tumne mujhse shaadi ki, koi zabardasti nahi thi. Aur tumne mujhe bottle ke saath maara. Jaanti ho, tumhe jail bhi hosakta hain iske liye. Mere paas sabke liye gawah hain. Aur court ka fesla jo bhi hoga, badnaami toh teri hogi."

"Mujhe koi parwa nahi hain. Mujhe akele rehna mansoor hain, par tum jaise rakshak se saath kabhi nahi."

"Tum mein itni himmat hain, akele duniya ka saamna karne ki. Kyun ki, ab toh tumhare paas woh Robbie bhi nahi."

Her eyes brimmed with tears as she remembered. She had broken Robbie's trust. Their love had been irrevocably punctured. And Raunak was right. When her own hands were stained with guilt and doubt, how could she hope to punish Raunak for his misdeeds? Who would believe her?

Raunak smiled. His revenge had begun. And to be sure, he would make her pay. For insulting him. For hitting him. For trying to leave him.

"Mein tumhe teen din doonga. Apne saaman bandhlo, notice dehdo. Phir tum mere saath chalengi. Mein Hotel Saahil mein rehraha hoon. Tuesday, theek paanch baje. Bhoolna nahin."

He strode away, leaving her alone in the dark street with her mind in a whirlwind.

***

The next morning, she rose early after a troubled sleep, and phoned his number.

She phoned his number. Someone picked up on the second dial.

"Hello. Kya mein Robbie sir se baat karsakti?"

Devika recognised her immediately. "Tumhari himmat kaise hui yahaan phone karne ki? Dobara koshish kiya to mein police se kehdoongi. Mera yakken kar, mein tumhe aise fasaddongi ke tum Robbie ko kya, ujale ko bhi nahi dekh paaoongi. Kabadaar."

She tried Robbie's mobile.

***
"Preet, mein kya karoon? Mujhe har waqt uski aankhen dimak me goomthi rehti hain. Har waqt uski yaadein mujhe sataati hain. Uska bolna, muskuraana… Par woh kisi ki patni hain, meri patni banana ko sochna bhi galt hain. Paap hain. Aur phir…ab mein us par kaise aetbaar karoon?"

His mobile beeped.

"Hello. Robbie sir?"

His mouth wouldn't obey him. It stayed resolutely shut. His hand quivered at the sound of her voice. He sucked in his breath and ended the call. This was how it would have to be. He wouldn't be able to forget her. But he could never meet or speak with her again.

Preet shook his head at his friend's distress, racking his brains to think of how he could help.

Preet shook his head at his friend's distress, racking his brains to think of how he could help. He made a decision. He would meet Kasturi, find out what was going on. Robbie was too perplexed right now. It was up to him.

***
Kasturi, devastated, looked down at her phone. He didn't even want to talk to her. How could she explain to him? How could she explain to him? Her heart fluttered in hope as her mobile shrilled again and Robbie's name apperared onscreen.

"Hello, sir," she began breathlessly, then launched into an explanation: "Muje maaf kardijye, mere matalab aapka dil dukhaane ki nahi…"

"Rukho, Kasturi. Mein preet bolraha hoon."

"Aap? Kyun?"

"Aapke baatein soon kar, Robbie ka chahra dekh kar, mujhe yakeen hogaya ke tum use bahut chahti ho, aur use dhokha nahi diya. Par who tumse nahi milenge. Isliye, mere paas ek idea hain. Soono."

***

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Posted: 16 years ago

Chapter 16 (english)

Dragged along the street, Kasturi's feelings finally began to stir. How dare Raunak bring her away? He had no right over her. She had sworn that day she had left, that he would never hurt her again.

"Stop Raunak."

"Kasturi, you're my wife. Even society believes this. So come quietly with me. Don't make a scene!"

"What wife? The one who you beat, the one who's life you destroyed? I'm telling you clearly, mein tumhare saath ek minute bhi nahi rehsakti. Seedhe se, mujhe jaane do, verna mein court bhi jaa sakti hoon."

"Go. Happily go to court. I have no objections. But think about one thing. You married me, I didn't force you. And you hit me with a bottle. You know, you could even be sent to jail. I have witnesses to everything. And whatever the court decides, it will be you who's slandered."

"I don't care. I can live alone, but with a devil like you: never."

" Do you have enough courage, to face the world alone? Because, noe not even Robbie's with you."

Her eyes brimmed with tears as she remembered. She had broken Robbie's trust. Their love had been irrevocably penetrated. And Raunak was right. When her own hands were stained with guilt and doubt, how could she hope to punish Raunak for his misdeeds? Who would believe her?

Raunak smiled. His revenge had begun. And to be sure, he would make her pay. For insulting him. For hitting him. For trying to leave him.

"I give you 3 days. Get your belongings, give in your notice. Then you will come with me. I'm staying in Hotel Saahil. Tuesday, exactly 5.00. Don't forget."

He strode away, leaving her alone in the dark street with her mind in a whirlwind.

***

The next morning, she rose early after a troubled sleep, and phoned his number. Someone picked up on the second dial.

"Hello. Can I speak to Robbie sir?"

Devika recognised her immediately. "How dare you phone here? If you try again I'll call the police. Believe me, I'll trap you in sucah a way that, forget Robbie, you'll never see daylight again. Don't dare."

She tried Robbie's mobile.

***

Preet was still at Robbie's. He hadn't been able to sleep that night, anxiety crowding his thoughts.

"Preet, what do I do? Every minute I see her eyes in my thoughts. Every minute her memories torment me. Her speaking, her smiling… But she's someone else's wife, it's wrong to think about making her my wife. It's a sin. And also…how can I trust her again?"

His mobile beeped.

"Hello. Robbie sir?"

His mouth wouldn't obey him. It stayed resolutely shut. His hand quivered at the sound of her voice. He sucked in his breath and ended the call. This was how it would have to be. He wouldn't be able to forget her. But he could never meet or speak with her again.

Preet shook his head at his friend's distress, racking his brains to think of how he could help. He made a decision. He would meet Kasturi, find out what was going on. Robbie was too perplexed right now. It was up to him.

***

Kasturi, devastated, looked down at her phone. He didn't even want to talk to her. How could she explain to him? Her heart fluttered in hope as her mobile shrilled again and Robbie's name apperared onscreen.

"Hello, sir," she began breathlessly, then launched into an explanation: "Forgive me, I didn't mean to hurt you…"

"Wait, Kasturi. It's Preet speaking."

"You? Why?"

"Listening to your talks, seeing Robbie's face, I'm sure that you love him a lot, and you didn't betray him. But he won't meet you. That's why, I have an idea. Listen."

***

Thanks for reading

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Posted: 16 years ago
Great update
Poor Kasturi being stuck with Raunak
So glad Preet is there to help try and mend things between RoKa
Cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow wow wow!!!! great part..... waiting for the next part......

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