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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: siya..

awww wat a cute sa update! this is really very sweet! aww thank you!! 😛

poor robbie they ddn get a chance to go into kasturi's goad barhai! aww! aaah becharay 😭
and milind...dd he really try to throw himself to beg?! can picture it pretty well! lol me 2 and of course he did, if meher hadnt pulled Kasturi away he would have stayed there forever 😉
heheh...btw wats the song? i ddn quite gues which song it was...but the meaning sounds very niceee! hehe sorry bout my english translation its a bit rubbish 😆, anyways its the song badi mushkil from lajja 😃
very apt for the occation.. oh good haha there are like no godh badhai songs 😕
cant wait for the next cont soon🤗thank you, will try 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
Part-1,2 n 3
Hey TJ!!🤗 Here i m wih my comments!!😉
Wow!! i love the beginnin! Bechari Kasturi seems to b so sad in the first part..😔
ooh Robbie got attracted towars her at the first sight..😳
hmm..so she finally got the job..😊
awww on the first day they fell on each otha n their chains got entangled..hw cutee!!😳
wow! she too gettin attracted towards Robbie..bt her majboori
wil read n comment on the nxt parts soon😛
love ya🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
i am back dear....😊
chapter-40
i can imagine kasturi in shot silk, a deep cherry red combined with tumeric yellow sari...very well narrated.👏
"Kam se kam hum toh ander aasakte, na," protested Robbie..."Aakhir mere bacchhe ke liye to yeh rasam hain."...exactly...😛
diveka gifted silver bangles on her gooth bharaayee rasam...kanjoos😡.....she should have given diamond bangles.
kesari dood, malai laddoo and kheer.....yummm...yummm....yummm...😛.beechara robbie...ussko bhee kuch milna chahee yeah na....😃
super and suitable song...i liked it...
thanks for giving such a nice update.enjoy reading it.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mini1roka

Part-1,2 n 3
Hey TJ!!🤗 Here i m wih my comments!!😉Yippee! 🤗
Wow!! i love the beginnin! Bechari Kasturi seems to b so sad in the first part..😔Thank you and aww I know she is in shock 😕
ooh Robbie got attracted towars her at the first sight..😳Hehe..of course pehli nazar mein.. 😍
hmm..so she finally got the job..😊yep! Devika thinks shes perfect
awww on the first day they fell on each otha n their chains got entangled..hw cutee!!😳lol glad you liked 😛
wow! she too gettin attracted towards Robbie..bt her majbooriwho can help but be attracted 2 robbie 😉
wil read n comment on the nxt parts soon😛cant wait 😊
love ya🤗love u 2 😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: robbii

i am back dear....😊 Yay! Hi Shumi 😃

chapter-40
i can imagine kasturi in shot silk, a deep cherry red combined with tumeric yellow sari...very well narrated.👏Thanks, glad you liked the colours 😛
"Kam se kam hum toh ander aasakte, na," protested Robbie..."Aakhir mere bacchhe ke liye to yeh rasam hain."...exactly...😛Lol but its a girly rasam 😉
diveka gifted silver bangles on her gooth bharaayee rasam...kanjoos😡.....she should have given diamond bangles. Hehe that made me laugh...you are right..though silver bangles are auspicious..hmmm she shuld have given silver and diamond bangles 😛
kesari dood, malai laddoo and kheer.....yummm...yummm....yummm... true..mmm I love kheer😛.beechara robbie...ussko bhee kuch milna chahee yeah na....😃lol maybe Kasturi will save some 4 him
super and suitable song...i liked it... thank you, glad it worked 😊
thanks for giving such a nice update.enjoy reading it. thank you for giving such nice comments! 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
Chapter 4, 4B n 5.
Hey TJ!!!🤗 i love the chapters yaar!!😛
wow..Robbie n Kasturi both went to that dhaba..n aww Robbie ordered all those fings that Kasturi likes..shoo shweet!!😛😉
aww they confessed their love too..😳
Oo i love the song 'Kuch Khaas hai'..it was soo refreshin..😃
n then Kasturi dressin herself in front of mirror..i love the description of her clothes..👍🏼
awww that bike scene..love it!!!!😍
OMG!! Deviks wants to seperate em...😲😡
will read the nxt parts asap n comment!!😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter 6,7A,7B

Hey TJ!! 🤗 wonderful parts sweety!!👍🏼
Oo i love the dance scene..i cud imagine RoKa dancing..😍
n then the paratha making scene was hilarious..🤣awww Kasturi tried to teach him to make parathe bt they poured flour n water on each otha..🤣
Ohhh Devika is soo bad..she doesn't understand their love..😡
ohh..Kasturi ran away out of the cinemas like that..
can't wait to knw the reason..😕
will read nxt parts asap n comment😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mini1roka

Chapter 4, 4B n 5.
Hey TJ!!!🤗 i love the chapters yaar!!😛Awww thank u Priyu 🤗
wow..Robbie n Kasturi both went to that dhaba..n aww Robbie ordered all those fings that Kasturi likes..shoo shweet!!😛😉Hehe hain, na? 😊
aww they confessed their love too..😳Yep! 😛
Oo i love the song 'Kuch Khaas hai'..it was soo refreshin..😃Omg I love that song 2! So romantic 😍
n then Kasturi dressin herself in front of mirror..i love the description of her clothes..👍🏼Yay glad u enjoyed it, I always look at peoples clothes 😛
awww that bike scene..love it!!!!😍awww yay! 😃
OMG!! Deviks wants to seperate em...😲😡i know stupid woman
will read the nxt parts asap n comment!!😛yay Im excited 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mini1roka

Chapter 6,7A,7B

Hey TJ!! 🤗 wonderful parts sweety!!👍🏼Thanks again🤗
Oo i love the dance scene..i cud imagine RoKa dancing..😍Aww yay me 2, I love when RoKa dance together 😛
n then the paratha making scene was hilarious..🤣awww Kasturi tried to teach him to make parathe bt they poured flour n water on each otha..🤣haha yeah it didnt really work lol 😆..ah well it was cute 😳
Ohhh Devika is soo bad..she doesn't understand their love..😡i know..why is she so blind? 😕
ohh..Kasturi ran away out of the cinemas like that..yeah she was shocked after remebering soimehting
can't wait to knw the reason..😕read on soon, cant wait to read the rest of your comments 😊
will read nxt parts asap n comment😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello everyone
Sorry its been so long
Thanks for all your wonderful commesnt
Heres the next part
Hope you enjoy it
Chapter 41 ~ Zindagi kehlati hain..tum se hi

Devika gently patted Kasturi's head, her eyes slightly teary and sung to her:

"Sola singaar karke godh bharaayi le.."

Prachi added with a mischevious nudge:

"Saiyaan se kheli bahut ab chotu ko khilaayi le

Sola singaar karke godh bharaayi le.."

"Chhotu jo aave ghar mein, naani behlaave

Paayal pehenke naani naach dikhaave

Haan, chhotu jo aave ghar mein maasi ko bulaave

Naadi badalke unki lori sunaave

Oh, teri hasi bhar bharke

Ghar mein chhidkaave

Oh, sola singaar karke godi bharaayi le

Sola singaar karke godi bharaayi le

Saiyyaan se kheli bahut ab

Chhotu ko khilaayi le

Sola singaar karke godi bharaayi le

Sola singaar karke"

***

Kasturi entered the bedroom and began to take off her jewellry. Robbie walked in from the adjoining bathroom.

"Toh godh badhai kaisi thi?" he asked, gently helping her remove her ornaments.

"Bahut acchha tha. Sab ne itne saare tofe aur badhaaiyiya dhi thi. Aur bahut naach-gaana bhi tha."

"Lagta hain bahut mazaa aaya. Saajan ki yaad bhi nahi aayi," complained Robbie.

"Kisne kahaan ke tum mere saajan ho? Tumne mujhko "I love you" kab kahaan?"

"Kasturi! Jhoot mat bolo. Maine kitni baar kahaan hain," reminded Robbie. "Tum mujhse kaho."

"Pehle tum kaho."

"Nahi pehle tum kaho!"

"Nahi kahoongi," announced Kasturi petulantly.

"Kaho, na woh teen shabd.."

"Pehle aap."

"Theek hain. Jab tak tum nahi kahoongi mein rootha rahoonga," decided Robbie.

"Toh maine bhi tehr kardiya ke mei nahi kahoongi," decided Kasturi, equally obstinate for once.

"Mein tumhe kahaan ke chodoonga," challenged Robbie.

"Toh lagi shart.."

***

Kasturi and Robbie sat down together at the table for breakfast. Devika smiled at them and began to pour some tea.

Robbie slid his left hand under the table and clutched Kasturi's right hand tightly. As Devika turned away, he whispered. "Kaho gi?"

"Nahi!"

"Toh phir mein haath nahi chodoonga."

"Robbie!"

"Tum dono kya kehrahe ho?" inqured Devika, noticing their mutterings.

"Kuch nahi, mom. Bas mujhe toh bahut bhukh lagi hain."

"Par Kasturi, tum kuch kyun nahi khaa rahi ho?" Kasturi began to eat, hoping Devika wouldn't notice she was using the wrong hand.

"Kasturi beti, yeh kya kar rahi ho? Daai haath se khao."

Kasturi struggled to keep a smile on her face and think up an excuse whilst attempting to free her hand.

"Woh..main.." she flailed, blushing. Robbie's smile was smug.

Devika figured it out and quickly looked under the table.

"Haiyye Kasturi, shaadi hogayi hain aur phir bhi tum nahi naweli dulhan jaise hi sharmaati ho. Woh badmaash Robbie ne haath pakda hain toh tum humhe kehsakti ho. Haath choddo, Robbie," she said sternly but with a hint of a smile.

"Jee, mom," said Robbie, looking a little embarrassed.

After breakfast, Devika left for the office and Kasturi went to wash up in the kitchen.

Robbie sneaked up behind her at the sink and hugged her tight.

"Ab tumhe kaun bachaayenge," he threatened with a chuckle.

"Uff Robbie, choddo na," protested Kasturi.

"Kaho na.." he implored.

"Nahi," she giggled, playfully splashing him from the tap, then sprinting away. He chased after her, laughing as well. Finally, they ran out of breath and collapsed upstairs on the bed.

Their eyes met and they stared into each others'; Robbie gently cupped her face in his hands.

"Robbie, mein tumse ek baat kehna chahti hoon. Sach kya hain hun dono jaante hain, phir bhi.." whispered Kasturi.

Robbie smiled, impatient to hear the words he'd been waiting all day to hear.

"I..love..you," she whispered, blushing a little.

"I love you too, Kasturi," he declared passionately.

***

Kasturi was sitting on the bed hemming her sari; out of the corner of her eye she could see Robbie pacing up and down the corridor.

"Nahi secretary chooti par gayi hain, aur mom ne yeh list mujhe dehdiya. Kahaan ke concert ki profit calculate karni hain. Arre mujhe yeh sab kahaan bata? Aur upar se calculato bhi nahi milrahe. Arre, kya karoon?" muttered Robbie in distress.

Chuckling, Kasturi tiptoed up behind him and commented: "Yeh kya? Mashoor rockstar Robbie Sabharwal ko profit calculate karna nahi aata?"

"Kya karoon, Kasturi? Hisaab mein thoda kacchhaa hoon. Maths fail kiya tha na, isliye."

She smiled. "Koi baat nahi, mein toh hoon na. Aakhir actuary biwi toh kaam aagayi."

"Thank you, Kasturi, tumne mera kitna bhoj halka kiya hain," gushed Robbie, overjoyed to see the last of all those figures.

"Uff Robbie, shaadi mein no sorry, no thank you. Ab tum jao. Office nahi jaana hain?"

He gave her a quick hug. "Par zyaada kaam mat karna. Aur baithe raho."

"Uff tum bhi naa, Robbie. Ab jao. Late hojaaonge."

He gave her a quick hug and rushed outside.

As she picked up the pile of papers, a single sheet fell out. She picked it up with a smile, which turned to shock and fear.

***

"Robbie, tumne mujhse jhoot kyun kahaan?"

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