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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: _Mariam_

Hey TJ

first of all I am really sorry for not keeping up with your FF no problem..so have u read some..? have u changed ur name?
but Finally i have some free time as uni dosnt start till next month ok you have to give me some time to catch up and read my annoying comments hehe dw id love 2 read them
Part 1
Fantastic start to your FF Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š
I really like Kasturi character she seems to be a really Mysterious sort of Person yeah lots of suspense, Devika seems to be nice here and not evil i found it ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† the way she selected kasturi as her secretary. Lol got idea from Ugly Betty
great part ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Thanks again
Part 2
hmm i liked the way kasturi banged into robbie and both fell down I can imagine Kasturi ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณHehe lol ๐Ÿ˜›
robbie attracted towards Kasturi the first time he met her Yep! love at first sight, pehli mazar mein pyar hogaya
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† this dilouge is funny
(for it seemed that the previous girl had filed her nails more often than picking up a pen) Lol glad you liked it
How come At the end Kasturi said she can never be with him๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• she must have some sort of past then yep...
ok i am not going to waste anymore time and go to read the next part as i cant wait to find out ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒyay! ๐Ÿ˜›

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hiya everyone ๐Ÿ˜Š
Thanks for all the fantastic comments ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Hope you enjoy this part ๐Ÿ˜›
Please do comment ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
And also, baby names in this part ๐Ÿ˜›
Do tell me if there's any you guys especially like hehe ๐Ÿ˜‰
Love TJ
Chapter 39 ~ Aayi hain bahaarein aayi hain

3 months later

"Hi, Mr and Mrs Sabharwal. Aaj ki test sirf check karenga ke tumhari pregnancy main koi complications nahi hain. Pehle hum ultrasound dekhenge."

She lay down on the bed, Robbie clutching her hand for comfort.

"Mubarak ho, Kasturi. Tumhe larki hogi. Dekho, unki haath dekhsakti ho?"

"Aaah kitne pyaare hain," gushed Kasturi.

"Ab hum thoda sa khoon lehnge'bas, aur phir tum dono jaasakte ho. Results kal tak aajayenge."

"Shukriya, doctor."

"Jee, shukriya."

***

"Bye Kasturi, mein tumhe bahut miss karoongi," complained Shaina tearily.

"Aisa kyun bolrahi ho, Shaina? Mein hamesha ke liye thodi jaa rahi hoon. Par promise, tum mujhe ghar ya hospital aake miloongi

"Baka promise, Kasturi, bakaa. Acchha, Kasturi, yeh tumhare liye present hain."

"Waah Shaina, kitna pyaara hain!" exclaimed Kasturi, opening the wrapping to find a petite yellow-and-blue striped sleepsuit. Her boss, Mr Gupta walked over and handed her a box of chocolates.

"Aur jaldi waapas aana. Tumhari kami sabko mehsoos hogi. Best of luck," he declared.

"Good luck, Kasturi. I hope tum khush aur thandroos rahegi," smiled Minesh.

"Acchha, ab cake!" cheered Shaina.

"Cake bhi? Iski kya zaroo-" began Kasturi.

"Zaroorat thi. Ab chalo cake kaat. Tumhaara favourite hain. Fruitcake," ordered Shaina. Amidst cheers, Kasturi cut the cake and fed a piece to each colleague, as they took truns laoding her with gifts and hearty wishes.

***

"Robbie, tumne hamari beti ke liye koi naam socha hain?

"Mujhe toh Chandni, Sangeeta, Saamiya ya Ishika bahut pasand hain."

"Mujhe yeh naam bhi bahut acchha laga, khaas kar Saamiya. Mujhe Roshni naam bhi bahut pasand hain."

"OK, Kasturi, aaj ke baat tum koi kaam nahi karoongi.

"Thoda sa toh kar-

"Kasturi, kaam se chooti lehne ka matlab yeh nahi hain ke tum ghar aake saare kaam karna shuru kardo.

"Par Robbie, mein saara din baithe baithe bored hojaaoongi

"Bored kaise? Mom ya mein ghar par hoge. Humhe agar koi kaam hoga toh tum kisi ko phone karlo. Prachi yah Meher, yah Shaina..bahut saare log hain. Aur agar tumhe phir bhi tassali nahin mili toh mujhe phone kardo. Mein tumhare saath phone par pura din baat karsakta hoon.

"Theek hain, Robbie. Waise bhi tum maanewaale nahi ho.

"Kasturi, tum maa bannewaali ho. Aise haalat mein tumhaara dyaan rakhna mera farz bhi hain, aur mera pasand bhi."

***

"Hi, Meher, prachi, tum dono itni jaldi kyun aagayi hain? Godh barhai shaam ko hain, na?"

"Haan, auntyji, magar Kasturi ko tayaar karna hain, hain na?"

"Haan, haan, tum theek kehrahi ho. Rukho, mein zevar laati hoon. Sari kamre mein hain. Maine kareedha tha. Waise, tum dono bhi bahut acchhi lagrahi ho. Aur matching colours bhi pehna hain. Dance ki wajah se?"

"Jee, mummyji. Humne socha ke hum sab saali aur saheli matching saris pehnlehnge."

"Bahut pyaari lagrahi ho. Theek hain, tum dono jaldi se Kasturi ke paas jaao."

***

Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago
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Chapter 39 ~ Aayi hain bahaarein aayi hain (english)

3 months later

"Hi, Mr and Mrs Sabharwal. Today's test is just to check there are no complications in your pregnancy. First we'll see the ultrasound."

She lay down on the bed, Robbie clutching her hand for comfort. The doctor passed the sensor over her stomach and a monochrome, moving image appeared on the screen.

"Congratulations, Kasturi. You'll have a girl. Look, can you see her little hands?"

"Aaah how sweet," gushed Kasturi.

"Now we'll take a little blood..enough, and now you two can go. The results will come by tomorrow."

"Thank you, doctor."

"Yes, thank you."

***

"Bye Kasturi, I'll miss you a lot," complained Shaina tearily.

"Why are you talking like that, Shaina? I'm hardly going forever. But promise, you'll come and visit me at home or the hospital."

"Definite promise, Kasturi, promise. OK, Kasturi, this is a present for you."

"Waah Shaina, it's so cute!" exclaimed Kasturi, opening the wrapping to find a petite yellow-and-blue striped sleepsuit. Her boss, Mr Gupta walked over and handed her a box of chocolates.

"And come back quickly. We'll all feel your absence. Best of luck," he declared.

"Good luck, Kasturi. I hope you'll stay happy and healthy," smiled Minesh.

"OK, now cake!" cheered Shaina.

"Cake too? What was the need fo-" began Kasturi.

"There was a need. Now come and cut the cake. It's your favourite. Fruitcake," ordered Shaina. Amidst cheers, Kasturi cut the cake and fed a piece to each colleague, as they took turns loading her with gifts and hearty wishes.

***

"Robbie, what names have you thought of for our daughter?

"I like Chandni, Sangeeta, Saamiya or Ishika a lot."

"I think all those names are nice, especially Saamiya. I also really like Roshni."

***

"OK, Kasturi, from today you'll do no work."

"I can atleast do a lit-"

"Kasturi, you didn't take leave from your work so that you can start doing all the housework instead."

"But Robbie, I'll get bored sitting at home all day," she protested.

"Bored how? Mom or me will be at home. If we have some work then you can phone someone. Prachi or Meher, or Shaina..there's lots of people. And if you're still not content then you can phone me. I can talk to you all day."

"Fine, Robbie. As it is you're not going to give in."

"Kasturi, you're expecting. Taking care of you in this situation is both my duty, and my wish too."

***

"Hi, Meher, Prachi, how come you two have come so soon? Godh barhai is in the evning, right?"

"Yes, auntyji, but we have to get Kasturi ready, right?"

"Yes, yes, you're right.. Wait, I'll bring the jewellery. The saris in the bedroom , I had bought it. By the way, you are both looking very nice today. And you've also worn matching colours. For the dance?"

"Yes, mummyji. We thought that all us friends should wear matching saris."

"You're looking very sweet. OK, you two quickly go to Kasturi."

Thanks for reading
Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Me first!
That was a very nice part
Ah so Preet was right they are having a baby girl
Update soon please
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lol up date u r heading with ch39 and pg 61.still it is showing ch38 pg 56 .that is y people are not aware of u r up date.. ..
back to u r ff....
ummm after 3 months leap...kasturi maa ban nay waali hai that too for a girl baby...so sweeet...๐Ÿ˜›
all her colleague are so sweet...especially shaina...i liked her.
i like tha name chandi the most.let us see...
"Kasturi, tum maa bannewaali ho. Aise haalat mein tumhaara dyaan rakhna mera farz bhi hain,...' kay pati hai!!!! pati ho tho issay...๐Ÿ˜ณ
godth barahee rasam!...i love that rasam ...
Meher, prachi are in matching sari....lol we do this in our college days...๐Ÿ˜Š
super update dear๐Ÿ‘.keep it up๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ.
awaiting for u r next up date....๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by robbii - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Tejuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ๐Ÿค—
Fab part dude!!!! ๐Ÿ‘
Awww how cweet ๐Ÿ˜†.....roka are going tu have a girl!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Yayyyy!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Pefect prediction from Preet aye?!! ๐Ÿ˜‰
The office scene was a delight tu read ๐Ÿ˜›...how lovely are her collegues!! ๐Ÿ˜Š Aww wow a yellow n blue stripey sleepsuit!! how cute!! ๐Ÿ˜›
Oooo lovely names!!! ๐Ÿ˜› i like saamiya the most tuu!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Hahaha robbie won't listen tu kasturi...she's gona have tu rest!! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Aur agar tumhe phir bhi tassali nahin mili toh mujhe phone kardo. Mein tumhare saath phone par pura din baat karsakta hoon.
hahaha woh tho hai...no doubt about that!! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Oooo yayy meher and prachi are here for the gaud barhai!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and they're weraing matching clothes....sounds like there's gonna be lots of hungama!! ๐Ÿ˜›
Can't wait tu read the next part!!!
Awesome update!! ๐Ÿ‘
Hinna xx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Me first! Yay! ๐Ÿ˜›

That was a very nice part Thanks very much ๐Ÿ˜Š
Ah so Preet was right they are having a baby girl Yep Preet was correct ๐Ÿ˜‰
Update soon please Okey dokey ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: robbii

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lol up date u r heading with ch39 and pg 61.still it is showing ch38 pg 56 .that is y people are not aware of u r up date.. ..thanks 4 reminding, changed it now ๐Ÿ˜Š
back to u r ff....
ummm after 3 months leap...kasturi maa ban nay waali hai that too for a girl baby...so sweeet...๐Ÿ˜›hehe i know ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
all her colleague are so sweet...especially shaina...i liked her. yeah me too shes so cute ๐Ÿ˜Š
i like tha name chandni the most.let us see... cool yeah this name is very pretty ๐Ÿ˜›
"Kasturi, tum maa bannewaali ho. Aise haalat mein tumhaara dyaan rakhna mera farz bhi hain,...' kay pati hai!!!! pati ho tho issay...๐Ÿ˜ณRobbie is an ideal pati ๐Ÿ˜Š
godth barahee rasam!...i love that rasam ... good you'll enjoy next part ๐Ÿ˜‰
Meher, prachi are in matching sari....lol we do this in our college days...๐Ÿ˜Šawww wow thats so cool ๐Ÿ˜›
super update dear๐Ÿ‘.keep it up๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ. thank you very much ๐Ÿค—
awaiting for u r next up date....๐Ÿ˜Šyay! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

Tejuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ๐Ÿค— Hinnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!๐Ÿค—

Fab part dude!!!! ๐Ÿ‘Thank you darling ๐Ÿ˜›
Awww how cweet ๐Ÿ˜†.....roka are going tu have a girl!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Yayyyy!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Pefect prediction from Preet aye?!! ๐Ÿ˜‰Yep exactly ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
The office scene was a delight tu read ๐Ÿ˜›...how lovely are her collegues!! ๐Ÿ˜Š oooh glad you enjoyed and yes they are so sweet! Aww wow a yellow n blue stripey sleepsuit!! how cute!! ๐Ÿ˜›Hehe ๐Ÿ˜Š
Oooo lovely names!!! ๐Ÿ˜› i like saamiya the most tuu!! ๐Ÿ˜ณCool and yeah Ive always liked that name ๐Ÿ˜›
Hahaha robbie won't listen tu kasturi...she's gona have tu rest!! ๐Ÿ˜‰Yep ๐Ÿ˜›
Aur agar tumhe phir bhi tassali nahin mili toh mujhe phone kardo. Mein tumhare saath phone par pura din baat karsakta hoon.
hahaha woh tho hai...no doubt about that!! ๐Ÿ˜‰Lol they love their sweet phone convos ๐Ÿ˜›
Oooo yayy meher and prachi are here for the gaud barhai!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and they're weraing matching clothes....sounds like there's gonna be lots of hungama!! ๐Ÿ˜›Hehe yep ๐Ÿ˜‰
Can't wait tu read the next part!!! Yay! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Awesome update!! ๐Ÿ‘Thanks again ๐Ÿค—
Hinna xx xx
Ooo btw ๐Ÿคฃ at ur siggy! Stubborn and fight for your rights! Hehe๐Ÿ˜›Aw oh so romantic thats the cutest one ๐Ÿ˜†

Edited by missindia26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
@tj
hahaha it's my first siggy under my fing!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ i'm sooo happy!!!! hehehehe
stubborn?!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ i soo dnt agree with that ๐Ÿ˜†..i'm the most understanding person ever!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
but ye fight for my rights...oo ye baby...got my boxing gloves for that...amir khan is my inspiration oops i meant i'm amir khan's inspiration ๐Ÿคฃ
and ye romantic.....the guy hu ends up wiv me is sur gna be a lucky dog ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
but i most perfectly fit number 4....i eat anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and everything ๐Ÿคฃ lmao
hahaha my siggy explanation is almost longer than my comment tu yur ff part ๐Ÿคฃ

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