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Posted: 15 years ago
hey TJ i read 18 chapters so far... will read the rest tomorrow.. all most mid night...

i like it.... superb stuff... like the way you put it... lekin plz dnt be an Ekta Kapoor plz LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: avggomez

hey TJ i read 18 chapters so far... will read the rest tomorrow.. all most mid night... Wow thats a lot 😲

i like it.... superb stuff... like the way you put it... lekin plz dnt be an Ekta Kapoor plz LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Thanks a lot Amali 😊 and dw I cant stand 2 treat RoKa badly

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Posted: 15 years ago
Oyee update jaldi karne ka nai tho apun tere kaan ke neeche baja dalne ka 😡🤬 🤣🤣 pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease *puppy dog eyes* 😳😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

Oyee update jaldi karne ka nai tho apun tere kaan ke neeche baja dalne ka 😡🤬 🤣🤣 pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease *puppy dog eyes* 😳😆

🤣gangster Hinna ... Im working on it 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
good good!!! 😎 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok TJ.... you have found another reader + a fan for your FF.................
finished it only today.... I had about 5 epis to catch up with your FF and just finished reading it.... and Im in Office.... just had to read it and finished it cz im loving it... so sneakingly i did the reading.... LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I luv it.. i mean great FF!!!! just luv he way you put it... Im not an expert in hindi but im learning while reading yours and hinna's ff... :)
and thanx alot for not breaking them a part..... awaiting for more cute ROKA scenes...
keep up the good work luv!!!!!!!!!!!
waiting for an update.....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: avggomez

ok TJ.... you have found another reader + a fan for your FF................. Yippee! 😃

finished it only today.... I had about 5 epis to catch up with your FF and just finished reading it.... and Im in Office.... just had to read it and finished it cz im loving it... so sneakingly i did the reading.... LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol i can imagine, like when Im readin instead of doing hw and have 2 keep minimising but wow well done for all that reading 😛
I luv it.. i mean great FF!!!! just luv he way you put it... Im not an expert in hindi but im learning while reading yours and hinna's ff... :) Thanks so much! But lol don't learn your Hindi from me, mines very bad 😕
and thanx alot for not breaking them a part..... awaiting for more cute ROKA scenes... I'll try and write lots 😛
keep up the good work luv!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks a lot 🤗
waiting for an update.....

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hiya everyone
Thanks for your lovely comments
Ive finally updated
Slightly longer so hope it's worth the wait
Please comment, good or bad, love reading them
Have a nice day
~TJ~
Chapter 42 ~ Bas Tum

"Robbie, tumne mujhse jhoot kyun kahaan?"

"Kya, Kasturi? Meine tumse jhoot kab kahaan?" answered Robbie, confused. He rapidly got up from his desk and embraced her, shocked at her tear-streaked and breathless appearance.

"Raunak," she murmured into his shoulder, and suddenly he understood.

"Tumhe kaise bata chala," he asked, shocked.

She showed him the police report which she had found earlier. "Tumne mujhse kahaan kyun nahi, ke Raunak jail se baagh gaya hain."

"Kyun ki mein nahi chahta tha ke tum chinta karo."

"Par ab toh mein zyaada parayshaan hogayi hoon. Robbie..agar woh humse badla le-"

"Bas Kasturi. Aisa sochna bhi mat. Inspector saab ne mujhse kahaan hain ke Raunak ko jaldi pakadh lehnge. Bas zara hoshiar rehna hain. Par tum chinta mat karo. Woh ghar aane ki himmat nahi karenga. Mujhe pura yakeen hain, woh jaldi salaakhon ke peechay honge," he reassured her, holing her tight and gently wiping each new tear.

"Robbie, mujhe dhar lagraha hain..agar phir se.."

"Kasturi, jab mein tumhaare saath hoon, tumhe darne ki bilkool zaroorat nahi hain. Mein tumhaari ifaazat hamesha karoonga. I promise." He clutched her in a gentle embrace; she slowly stopped shaking.

***

The phone rung, and Kasturi quickly picked it up.

"Hello?"

"Hello, Kasturi, kaisi ho?"

"Robbie, mein sirf ek ghante pehle hi toh gayi thi. Itna zyaada mujhe miss kar rahe the?"

"Mein tumhe har pal miss karta hoon."

"Robbie, kuch kaam nahi hain, kya?"

"Haan .. do minute mein rehearsal karoonga. Socha ke pehle tumhe phone kardu"

"Kaash mein bhi wahaan thi," mused Kasturi. "Bahut waqt se maine tumhare kisis bhi concert ya rehearsals mein nahi

"Acchha, mere paas idea hain. Tum phone par raho, mera gaana suno. Aur phir kaho, kaisa tha."

"Theek hain." Robbie smiled, jogged to the recording studio and gave his phone to Shaina to hold. He picked up the mic, tested it, then began to sing. Kasturi, listening through the phone, smiled as his mellow voice filled her ears.

"Jo khwaabon khayalon mein socha nahin tha
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya

Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri khwaabon mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irraadon mein tu hai
Irraadon mein tu hai

Yehhh'we could fall in love
I say' I could fall in love
Yehhh'we could fall in love
And i say' I could fall in love with you

Koi bhi aisa lamha nahin hai
Jisme mere tu hota nahin hai
Mein so bhi jaao raathon mein lakin
Tu hai ki mujhmein sotha nahin hai
Tu hai ki mujhmein sotha nahin hai

Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri khwaabon mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irraadon mein tu hai
Irraadon mein tu hai

Hai teri innayat tujhse mili hai
Hoonto pe mere hasi jo khili hai
Usse mera chehra chupa bhi na paye
Tujhe paake hasil huye jo khushi hai
Tujhe paake hasil huye jo khushi

Jo khwaabon khayalon mein socha nahin tha
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya

Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irraadon mein tu hai

Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irraadon mein tu hai
Irraadon mein tu hai"

"Toh kaisa tha?"

"Bahut hi acchha."

"Na, na theek se kaho."

"Arre, baba, theek hain. Aisa laga jaise tum sirf mere liye gaarahe the. Tumhaara har shabd me itni sachaai aur pyar tha. Bas'kehdiya mere dil ki baat..hogayi tasali?"

"Jee", he chuckled. "Acchha, ab mujhe jaana hain. Shaina bula rahi hain. Par suno, saat baje tak tayaar rehna. Mein aaraha hoon tumhe lehne."

"Hum kahaan jaarahe hain?

"Surprise! Bye, Kasturi"

***

"Waise tum aaj bahut hi gorgeous lagrahi ho. Priyanka Chopra se bhi zyaada."

Kasturi, dressed in a lemon yellow sari, with a baby pink beaded pallu and a simple diamond set, blushed and smiled.

"Robbie, tum toh John Abraham se bhi zyaada sexy lagrahe ho," she retorted, enjoying teasing him for once, but also slightly embarrassed.

"Oy hoy, meri biwi se itni tareef! Yakeen hi nahi hota."

He glanced out the window and called out to the driver: "Acchha, bhaisaab, yahaan ruko. Chalo, Kasturi."

They got out and Robbie paid the driver.

"Mujhe yahaan kuch nahi nazar aaraha hain. Hum kahaan jaarahe hain?"

He gently placed his hand over her eyes.

"Robbie, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? Mein kaise chalungi?"

"Mera haath pakad kar." They walked a little way along the pavement, Robbie clutching Kasturi's hand in his right hand, and shielding her eyes with the other.

"Mein aankhen kolsakti hoon? Ajeeb lagraha hain."

"Kasturi, tumhe mujh par bharosa hain?"

"Jee, bilkool."

"Toh phir chinta mat karo .. aur chalo. Tumhe yeh surprise bahut achhaa lagenga. Aankhen mat kolna .. acchha yahaan ruko. Ab tum aankhen kolsakti ho."

Kasturi beamed as she recognised the small "dhaba" wher they had first ate together.

"Tumhe yaad hain, Kasturi, hum pehli baar yahaan khaane aaye the?" inquired Robbie.

"Mujhe sabkuch yaad hain, Robbie. Aur tumhaare aise waise sawaal bhi yaad hain. Uska jawab de de kar mein toh takhgayi thi," replied Kasturi.

"Dil tumpe aagaya tha, isliye mein tumhaare baare mein sab jaana chahte tha. Tumhari saare pasand, naapasand..sabkuch..par sach kahon, tumhe thoda toh acchha laga hota. Tumhaara mann mein mujhe lehkar thoda sa curiosity toh hua hoga, na?"

"Haan .. hua tha. Aakhir tum mere saath itne acchhe the. Aur mere dil ko bhi kuch hua tha. Par.."

"Nahi, Kasturi. Hum koi bhi bhuri baat ka zikar nahi karenge. Aaj raat mein sirf tum aur mein hain, sirf hum dono, aur koi nahi."

"Sir, madam, would you like to order?"

They glanced at each other for a second.

"Gobi ke parathe, bhel puri, chole bature, masala chaat, ek aloo bhajia'aur do lassi!" they chimed simultaneously.

"Theek hain," answered the waiter with a smile.

***

"Lagta hain sab sogaye," observed Robbie as they crept upstairs.

"Haan, baaton hi baaton mein, chaar genthe kaise guzargaye, bata hi nahi chala," agreed Kasturi.

They quickly changed into their nightclothes. Robbie was still hanging up his clothes when Kasturi got into the bed.

"Aaaaagh!" screamed Kasturi, leaping out of the bed and into Robbie's arms.

"Kya hua," asked Robbie in consternation.

"Woh .. cockroach.." explained Kasturi.

"Kasturi, tumne mujhe dara hi diya," complained Robbie, surprised but relieved.

"Gaya hain?"

"Nahi, abhi tak vahaan hain," lied Robbie, enjoying their tight embrace.

She nestled closer into his arms. "Robbie, mujhe cockroaches se bahut darr lagta hain. Mujhe chor ke mat jaana."

"Theek hain. Hum puri raat aise hi rahenge."

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Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter 42 ~ Bas Tum (english)

"Robbie, why did you lie to me?"

"What, Kasturi? When did I lie to you?" responded Robbie, confused. He rapidly got up from his desk and embraced her, shocked at her tear-streaked and breathless appearance.

"Raunak," she murmured into his shoulder, and suddenly he understood.

"How did you find out?" he asked, shocked.

She showed him the police report which she had found earlier. "Why didn't you tell me that Raunak had escaped from jail."

"Because I din't want you to worry."

"But now I'm even more worried. Robbie..what if he wants revenge fr-"

"Enough, Kasturi. Don't even think like that. The inspector has promised me that Raunak will soon be cuagh. We just have to remain alert. But you don't need to fret. He won't dare to come near you. I am completely certain that he will be behind bars again very soon," he reassured her, holding her tight and gently wiping each new tear.

"Robbie, I'm scared..if again he.."

"Kasturi, when I'm with you, you have no need to fear at all. I will always protect you. I promise." He clutched her in a gentle embrace; she slowly stopped shaking.

***

The phone rung, and Kasturi quickly picked it up.

"Hello?"

"Hello, Kasturi, how are you?"

"Robbie, I left only an hour ago. Were you missing me that much?"

"I miss you every moment," he replied.

"Robbie, don't you have any work?" she inquired, concerned.

"Yes .. I have a rehearsl in 2 minutes. I thought I'd phone you before it."

"I wish I was there too," mused Kasturi. "I haven't come to any of your rehearsals for such a long time."

"Ok, I have an idea. You stay on the phone and listen to my song that way. Then you can tell me how it was."

"OK." Robbie smiled, jogged to the recording studio and gave his phone to Shaina to hold. He picked up the mic, tested it, then began to sing. Kasturi, listening through the phone, smiled as his mellow voice filled her ears.

That I could never imagine in my thoughts or dreams
You gave me so much love
Whenever, wherever, I was in burning sun
I was shaded by the curtain of your hair

Yes you're there, yes you're there
You're there in my talks
You're in my dreams and memories
You're in my intentions

You're in my intentions

Yehhh'we could fall in love
I say' I could fall in love
Yehhh'we could fall in love
And i say' I could fall in love with you

There's no such moment of mine

Which you're not in
Even if I fall asleep during the night
You're never sleeping in my heart

Yes you're there, yes you're there
You're there in my talks
You're in my dreams and memories
You're in my intentions

You're in my intentions

Yeehh'
Ohh'

I've gained importance from you
You're the reason for the smile that plays on my lips
My face cannot even hide
The happiness I've gained from gaining you

Yes you're there, yes you're there
You're there in my talks
You're in my dreams and memories
You're in my intentions

That I could never imagine in my thoughts or dreams
You gave me so much love
Whenever, wherever, I was in burning sun
I was shaded by the curtain of your hair

Yes you're there, yes you're there
You're there in my talks
You're in my dreams and memories
You're in my intentions

You're in my intentions

"So how was it?"

"Extremely nice."

"No, no, tell me properly."

"Arre, baba, fine. It felat as if you were sining only for me. In your every word there was so much love and truthfulness. There .. I've told you my inner feelingd .. satisfied?"

"Yes", he chuckled. "OK, I have to go now. Shaina's calling me. But listen, be ready by seven o'clock. I'm coming to pick you up."

"Where are we going?"

"Surprise! Bye, Kasturi."

***

"By the way you're looking very nice today. Even more than Priyanka Chopra."

Kasturi, dressed in a lemon yellow chiffon sari with a bay pink beaded pallu and a simple diamond set, blushed and smiled.

"Robbie, you're looking even sexier than John Abraham," she retorted, enjoying teasing him for once, but also slightly embarrassed.

"Oy hoy, such high praise from my wife! I can't believe it."

He glanced out the window and called out to the driver: "OK, bhaisaab, tahnk you, stop here. Come, Kasturi."

They got out and Robbie paid the driver.

"I can't see anything here. Where are we going?"

He gently placed his hand over her eyes.

"Robbie, what are you doing? How ill I walk?"

"Holding my hand." He supported her, on hand clutching hers, one still shutting her eyes, as they walked along the pavement.

"Can I open my eyes? It's feeling strange."

"Kasturi, do you trust me?"

"Yes, completely."

"Then stop worrying .. and come on. You're going to really like the surprise. Don't open your eyes .. alright stop here. Now you can open your eyes."

Kasturi beamed as she recognised the small "dhaba" wher they had first ate together.

"Do you remember, Kasturi, we came to eat here the very first time?" inquired Robbie.

"I remember everything, Robbie. And your topsy-turvy questions too. I got tired answering question after question." replied Kasturi.

"My heart was smitten by you, so I wanted to know everything. All your likes, dislikes .. everything .. but tell me the truth .. it must have felt at least a little bit flattering .. in your heart there must have been at least a little bit of curiosity about me, no?"

"Yes .. there was. After all you were so nice to me. And even my hear felt something. But.."

"No, Kasturi. We won't mention any bad things. Tonight is just about me and you, just us two, and no-one else."

"Sir, madam, would you like to order?"

They glanced at each other for a second.

"Gobi ke parathe, bhel puri, chole bature, masala chaat, ek aloo bhajia'aur do lassi!" they chimed simultaneously.

"OK," answered the waiter with a smile.

***

"Seems like everyone's gone to sleep," observed Robbie as they crept upstairs.

"Yes, chatting away, we didn't even notice how 4 hours flew by," agreed Kasturi.

They quickly changed into their nightclothes. Robbie was still hanging up his clothes when Kasturi got into the bed.

"Aaaaagh!" screamed Kasturi, leaping out of the bed and into Robbie's arms.

"What happened?" asked Robbie in consternation.

"That .. cockroach.." explained Kasturi.

"Kasturi, you scared the life out of me," complained Robbie, surprised but relieved.

"Has it gone?"

"No, it's still there," lied Robbie, enjoying their tight embrace.

She nestled closer into his arms. "Robbie, I'm really scared of cockroaches. Don't leave me and go."

"OK. We'll stay like this all night."

Thanks for reading and commenting 😊

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Me first!!
Reserved for my gangster comments!! 😎 😆
*edited*
Eh chikni! 🤗
Apun ko yeh part bohat acha laga kya?! bolo tho ek dum jhakhaas!! 👏 👏 👏
Haila tu tho bohat achi writer nikli boss! ⭐️
Dhat tere ki yeh saala raunak jail se bhaag gaya?! 😡 Bolo tho apun ke type ka lagtha hai..gunda!! 😎
Lekin agar yeh raunak robbie kasturi ko tang karne ka tho apun ko bolne ka kya? Apun uski waat laga de ga bolo tho kaan ke neeche baja daal ne ka kya?!
Acha ab apun cut tu cut baat karne ka time khoti nahi karne ka
Kya dhamaal part likha hai yaar!! Mind-blowing!! 😃
Bolo tho robbie aur kasturi bilkul romeo juliet ki maafik kitna cweet hai na?! 😳 apun ko tho blushing blushing hotha hai!! 😳 😳 😳
Kya gaana tha maa kasam!! Robbie ki awaaz tho aslam bhai se bhi mast hai biru!! 👍🏼
Upar se item (kasturi) ka jawaab oye hoye hoye!!! 😍
Robbie John aur Kasturi Priyanka se bhi mind-blowing lag rahe the?! Matlab kya mast item lag rahe hoge!!! Raapchik!!! ☺️ Apun ko tera yeh John Priyanka ka baat so taka lagi!! ⭐️
Oye hoye romantic date in the dhaaba shaaba!! 😳 Bolo tho rapchik idea boss!! 👏 👏 👏
Kya mast khaana order kiya!! maza aa gaya!!! 😛 😉
End scene mey tho tune phaar diya!! ⭐️ Kya cockraoch ki setting ki hai biru!! 😉
Bolo tho kasturi seedha robbie ki baahon mey!!! ☺️
Aur yeh robbie bhi shaana nikla ha?! Puri raat aise hi!! 😃 😛 😳 Maana parega boss!!! 😉 Apun ko ise training lena ka!
Bolo tho apun ko tera ye update fultoo bindaas laga!!! 😃 😛 😳 👏 ⭐️
Aye chamiyaa ab next update jaldi jaldi karne ka varna apun tujhe karcha pani de de ga kya?!!
Mast rehne ka, tension nahi lene ka! 😉
Love Hinna Hatelli 🤗
xx
Edited by ..-..RoKa.._.. - 15 years ago

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