FF: Kya.....yehi pyaar hai? part 14 updtd p20 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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You started already? lol and I just finished motivating you on your other post! D'oh! lol
I'll read it after I finish studying, so be prepared for a LOONG comment! [After all, I have to take Hummy's place for a bit lol]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimi0295

You started already? lol and I just finished motivating you on your other post! D'oh! lol

I'll read it after I finish studying, so be prepared for a LOONG comment! [After all, I have to take Hummy's place for a bit lol]

lol ye and i just finished replying to your other post 😆
ok read it when you have time.....remember studies come first
Looking forward to your long comment 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Kay! I got a chance to read your character sketch! 😃 I must say, I am impressed! The characters are so well sorted out- with a stong,colourful variety too!! 😳
My Thoughts:
JP and Kaushalya.... so glad to see them in your FF, I can't believe they killed themoff in the show
LOL I'm glad Kasturi is the same as the one we loved before! And she's a dreamer no? Totally opposite from our Robbie! I wonder why he doesn't find interest in girls... haha, that'll change once he meets Kasturi 😃😃 Can't wait to read their love story!
And I really like how you explained Puru and Devika, each with an interesting yet suspensful past! Only time will tell what situations made them who they are today!
All in all, I'm excited to read the first part (which I will in a bit! Took a break from studying-which btw is NOT fun! 🤢😆)
Heehee, edited to say:
SOO glad you fulfilled Raunak's long lost dream of becoming a rockstar 😆
Edited by mimi0295 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good start!!! Keep it up and update soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimi0295

Kay! I got a chance to read your character sketch! 😃 I must say, I am impressed! The characters are so well sorted out- with a stong,colourful variety too!! 😳
Thank you sooooo much Mimi! I wanted to keep the characters interesting but simple at the same time.....it avoids confusion later on 😆
My Thoughts:
JP and Kaushalya.... so glad to see them in your FF, I can't believe they killed themoff in the show
lol i know what you mean......i had to have them here
LOL I'm glad Kasturi is the same as the one we loved before! Dont we all wish she remained lieke that in the serial And she's a dreamer no? Totally opposite from our Robbie! yep they are different,in the sense of how they see life and what they want from it I wonder why he doesn't find interest in girls... haha, that'll change once he meets Kasturi 😃😃 lol yep he dsnt believe in wasting time with girls.....thats his thought so far 😉 Can't wait to read their love story! I hope i can do justice to it!
And I really like how you explained Puru and Devika, each with an interesting yet suspensful past! Only time will tell what situations made them who they are today! Yep for some reason i just cant see Puru and Devika get on like normal 😕 😆 were just not used to thier 'love' story i guess 😆
All in all, I'm excited to read the first part (which I will in a bit! Took a break from studying-which btw is NOT fun! 🤢😆)
Thanks for taking the time out......but get the studies done and then read on ( i know its easier said then done ) 😆
Heehee, edited to say:
SOO glad you fulfilled Raunak's long lost dream of becoming a rockstar 😆 I was laughing so much while writing it.......i just kept remembering how pathetic that was......his only reason for revenge on Robbie 🤪 so i thought since creatives never gave him a chance to sing il do it 😆

Thanks again Mimi..........your great! 🤗 looking forward to see what you think of the opening part 😳
Kay

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Good start!!! Keep it up and update soon!!!!!!

Hey
Thanks alot.....glad you liked the start 😳
I will update soon

Originally posted by: muneefah

I LIKE IT
DO CONTINUE

Hey muneefah
Thanks for liking the first part
I will continue soon.........im in the process of writing the next part
Kay
Edited by Kay - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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kau u started ff
great one more creative banda luv it

charactersketch is superb buh thanks kasturi is not like bashan queen
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Posted: 16 years ago
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good start of ff but start for kasturi' interviwe
taanu and nvaneet reminded me my sister and my fight but but not for sandils but sometimes for dresses
now wqant to know kasturi get selected in the interviwe afterall it is her dream company
intoduce robbie soon
good going
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great 1st part..........loved how u described a normal morning in the Chawla household........seemed very real........😊

Kasturi bumped into someone at the reception...........methinks its Mr Gorgeous....am i right.....😉 😆

Aww Kasturi dropped her glass..........if ur Devika is anything like the one in the show she's not going to be impressed.....

Looking forward to see how the story unfolds......😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I LOVE THE NAME OF YR FF....
I LOVE IT...
PLZZZZ DO CONTINUE....HOPE TO SEE YR NEXT PART SOOON....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh YAY!
You updated Kay!
AWESOME,FANTABULOUS AND AMAZING!
I loved your first part!
I'm so worried for Kasturi...wonder what will happen...
please update soon!
can't wait for your input!
-->Samiya:-)

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