FF: Kya.....yehi pyaar hai? part 14 updtd p20 - Page 15

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LAHORIKURI thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
yayyyy!!!!
sab se pehle mein.....
ll cum back after i am done reading....
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow what an amazing turn of events & brilliantly written.......๐Ÿ‘.........my heart goes out to Devika.......๐Ÿ˜ญ.......i can totally understand her anguish & helplessness and her journey from a young bride to now is so heartbreaking............. she's now looking at kasturi as the kind of daughter she always hoped for........ kasturi hugging her was just so heartwarming........๐Ÿ˜ณ........i hope her wish of seeing her family united comes true soon......๐Ÿ˜Š

amazing twist........waiting to see what follows.....๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 16 years ago

First of all thank you for the double update!

That was beautifully written, well done ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

So Amar hadn't seen RoKa together, that was a good twist i was not expecting that! ๐Ÿ˜†
Wow so Shivani is not Devika's daughter, she should at least have the common decency to appreciate that Devika raised her even though she was not her flesh and blood.
I really feel for Devika, it seems she wants the best for her kids but get's the blame if anything goes wrong and Puru doesn't help much
Aww Robbie and Kasturi are so sweet, and Devika is lucky she's got them
Can't wait wait for the next part!
Update soon please! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Aaliyah
Edited by AH01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: LAHORIKURI

yayyyy!!!!

sab se pehle mein.....
yay you got here first ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
ll cum back after i am done reading....
ok enjoy the double update ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: swan20

wow what an amazing turn of events & brilliantly written.......๐Ÿ‘.........

Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜ณ as i was writing i realised Devikas story started to get really long, i had to write in detail other wise alot would have been left unsaid i was worried i might leave my readers bored as there was not much of RoKa, but i am so happy you liked it
my heart goes out to Devika.......๐Ÿ˜ญ.......i can totally understand her anguish & helplessness and her journey from a young bride to now is so heartbreaking.............
yep Devika has had a really tough time which is why she is what she is today
she's now looking at kasturi as the kind of daughter she always hoped for........
yep, if you remember when Kasturi went for the interview at SI devika saw a glimpse of herself in Kasturi, so now finding out she will be her daughter in law has really made devika happy and proud ๐Ÿ˜ณ
kasturi hugging her was just so heartwarming........๐Ÿ˜ณ........
i wanted to add this touch to it, im so happy it came across right, both kasturi and Devika have hit it off really well
i hope her wish of seeing her family united comes true soon......๐Ÿ˜Š
Happy endings are a must! ๐Ÿ˜† the family will come together soon
amazing twist........waiting to see what follows.....๐Ÿ˜Š
Thank you so much...i hope you like the rest of my ff and what i have in mind ๐Ÿ˜ณ
your comments are always so nice to read...thanks a lot ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: AH01

First of all thank you for the double update!

you are most welcome ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
That was beautifully written, well done ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Thank you so much
So Amar hadn't seen RoKa together, that was a good twist i was not expecting that! ๐Ÿ˜†
lol ye i thought of giving you a pleasant surprise ๐Ÿ˜†
Wow so Shivani is not Devika's daughter, she should at least have the common decency to appreciate that Devika raised her even though she was not her flesh and blood.
your right and Shivani will realise soon, it was all too much for Shivani to take in and she had no one to explain to her, sometimes you need a third party to get involved and help you see things from all angles
I really feel for Devika, it seems she wants the best for her kids but get's the blame if anything goes wrong and Puru doesn't help much
yep Devika is stuck in the middle of everything, puru will soon realise his mistakes
Aww Robbie and Kasturi are so sweet, and Devika is lucky she's got them
RoKa are the best.......they will help bring everything together ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Can't wait wait for the next part!
Update soon please! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
i will update soon
your great with your comments, glad your enjoying my ff especially amars charactor ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†
Aaliyah

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Posted: 16 years ago

thanks for the doubl;e update...

first of all it was gr8t
wowwowowo
dev went through so much
and the happy thing is that she accepts kas as her bahu...
that's gr8t....
can't wait till the nxt update'
luv
emu
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Posted: 16 years ago
i read all parts kay
lovely
best [part was that when ka goes to meet robbie in house omg thats so romantic lovely
oh devika story is sad
ab amar ka kia hoga hahaaha
good going
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awww lovely!!
S0 sad about what Devika had gone through!
Thanks for the amazing updates Kay!
Cont. soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: LAHORIKURI

thanks for the doubl;e update...

Its my pleasure...glad you enjoyed the double dose ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
first of all it was gr8t
wowwowowo
Thank you so much
dev went through so much
yep Devika has had a very sad past
and the happy thing is that she accepts kas as her bahu...
that's gr8t....
she has always liked Kasturi
can't wait till the nxt update'
i will update as soon as i can
luv
emu

Originally posted by: cutykoo20

i read all parts kay
lovely

Thank you so much
best [part was that when ka goes to meet robbie in house omg thats so romantic lovely
thank you i am happy you liked that scene ๐Ÿ˜ณ
oh devika story is sad
yes Devika has had a tough time
ab amar ka kia hoga hahaaha
lol dont worry i will find someone else for Amar ๐Ÿ˜‰
good going
Thanks once again....i am glad you like my ff ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: *Twinkle_Shine*

Awww lovely!!

Thank you
S0 sad about what Devika had gone through!
for once everyone is sympatising towards Devika...usually its the other way around for the devika in the serial ๐Ÿ˜†
Thanks for the amazing updates Kay!
Its my pleasure....glad you enjoyed it
Cont. soon!
i will as soon as i can

Edited by Kay - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow fantastic part so past has been revaled now
i never thought such tragedy must have happened ot devika she is great lady in you ff she accpeted kasturi with open arms
a very nice knid hearted person who faced lot of problems
the main thing you presneted the whole flash back so well just like it was rolling in my mind like picture right maount of emotions tears evryhtingf was written so well
i really loved the past becuse it had a damdaar story and logic
othewise some time in the serial when suspense is revealed are not so effetive
lovely part robbie atlast burst out in kasturi 's arms she is so understanding i feel she is going to help robbie's family to unite in the ff
great part loved evry bit
update very very soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Kay, Sorry for the late relpy was busy with uni work,
Yipee you updated two parts ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Amar didnt find out about Roka ๐Ÿ˜ฒ I so thought he was going to catch them together ๐Ÿ˜† was waiting for his reaction never mind,
Finally devikas truth is revealled I feel sorry for her poor lady she suffered so much ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Yipee Devika is happy with ROKA relationship and has accepted them.๐Ÿ˜ƒAtleast she has in your FF ๐Ÿ˜†
I didnt really expect shivani not to be Devikas daughter that was a good twist
Great Parts ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Cant wait to find out what happens next
Love Mariam xxx

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