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Posted: 17 years ago
jst catched up..........................gave my last xam n came on i-f to read ur FF
n i loved dis dialogue

Robbie in his mind: Gods! She likes mes so muchs! She invites mes for Happy Birthdays! 😃


hahahahahahahahahahahahaha.......cute dialogut.........

both parts were good
keep up da gr8 work

Edited by muneefah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 10:
OH MY GOSH Shivz!! You're on part 10 already!! *emotional moment* It's like watching you grow!! Oh gosh, get me a box of tissues!
And do I have to mention how much I LOVED this part? And how much I HATE that loser butt Puru? 😡 Why Robbie oughtta kick his little sorry butt!!! GRR!
Heheeeeeee, I can never get over Robbie and Armaan's supers cools accents! 😆 He's So sweet yaar! changing his shirt to look sames to sames as his lady love 😆
And Kasturi thinking that he's some freak because he's wearing pink! I love guys who have the courage to wear pink!
And HAHA sleeping beauty Bani 😆 I loved how she refers to that Disgusting Puru as Hitler!! 😆 GO GiRL! And HEHEHEHEHE How's my Handsome 😆😆😆
And awee.. Kasturi thinking of Kaushalya as her mom! Soo cute! I wonder what happened to Devika.. why is she such a rock? 😡
And OYE what kind of ending is that? ROKA's hands met.. and you finished? 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hailaaaaaaaa!! 2 parts!! Oh gosh, I'm SO happy!! No more suspensee! hehehehehehe
Part 11:
Awee SHUCKS! I was hoping RoKa would go into stare session after their hands met
And what is this? ALKA is in here? Oh no no no nono NO! This cant be good... 😭 She is such a... ugh!!! I hate that woman!! And Shivzy, thank you for translating all the hindi in English! I never knew what "Kalmuhi" meant 😆 Im learning so much so soon! 😃
And YAHOOO Super woman Devika saved the day!! Since Kasturi is so rich, why cant she kick out Alka 😡
And awee, my baby was SO happy!! Stupid Devika!! UGH why is she so mean? Only being nice to her to get what she wants! Her and Puru should get married. A match made before heaven- I say 😆
And aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee RoKa scenes were SOOOOOO f'en adorableeeee!!! Bless.
HAHAHA Rubi? LOL my darlin is so cute! He's willing to change his name for Kasturi 😆 So sweet!
"Shakes the Speare" 😆 that got me LOLing
And WOW the rain dialogues were AMAZING!!! I was like shocked @ how much I liked it!! WOW!
RoKa...................... I want MORE!!!
And awee Kasturi got a cold? And nobody cares... except Vicky? 😭 So mean!
But im glad she's feeling something for Robbiee!!
Hello readers! How're u all? Goooooooooooooooooooooood! 😃

Hope u all like this part....
LOVED it!
It took me more than 2 hours to write it.... I wrote all of it then, it all got deleted! so, I re-typed it LOL..
oh WOW!!! Bravo Shivz! Atta girl 👏
so I hope u all liked this part.. it was the loongest part so I hope u all liked it and it had a RoKa scene..lol
I LOVED it!!!! 😃
This part was dedicated to 3 people:
Hummy- She was the one who reminde me of Alka... I had almost forgotten bout Alka... thank u Hummy... Unfortunately, our Hummy has hurt herself very badly... Let's hope she recovers soon and comes back! I miss u Humz!
LOL Hummy reminds you of Alkaa? 😆 HAHA Hummy! You're such a villain 😛 But thanks a lot yaar.. now we've gotta read abt Alka... 😡😆
Annu di-I put SRK's latest dialogues from RNBDJ just for u in this part.(the ones in green) hope u liked it😊
Hehe, Annu! Lucky duck! Shivz.. I like SRK too.. 😳
Mimi di- Unfortunately, my di sprained her finger and ankle...Let's hope she gets well soon
Aweee thank you so much !! You're soo cute! You dont have to dedicate a part to me, you already dedicated this whole FF to me- which I never deserved. Thank you Jaan!





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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: LAHORIKURI

wooww ....me 2nd
congrats!😃

ll come back after reading..
ok...will wait😊
but thanks for the update.....
np

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: swan20

Shivi it was soooo nice to see ur update when i logged on.......😃
awwee.... thank u soo much anu di.. so sweet of u 🤗

Awesome part........loved to read so many ROKA scenes......😳
shukriyaa... shukriyaa 😳

Alka called kasturi ''kalmuhi''........😡 .......meri taraf se usko ek thappad de do.......😛
hehe...she will be getting a zor ka jhatka in nxt part
,,,,,,,,devika is also so mean.......
yeah =(

kasturi calls robbie rubii.......🤣.......
hehe
robbie is willing to change his name for her......so sweet.........😳

yep.... he's very sweet!

As Shake the Speare says: Whats is in thes names?...........this is too funny.....never heard Shakespeare being quoted like this......😆 😆 😆.
I'm very happy I made u laugh😆...mission accomplished!*....yay!
..........Me likes Robbies and his englishes very muchs.......😛 😆

hehe... me toos!😆

Aww ROKA hugged........😳...chooooo chweet....waiting for kasturi's b'day party now.
will have to wait for 2 more parts for that

You know when i was reading the baarish wale dialogues i had this huge smile on my face.......they are just so beautiful.......
hehe... credit goes to RNBDJ's dialogue writer *whoever he is...
.i especially liked this....
..Apni aankhen bandh karke iss baarish ki har ek boondh koh apne dil takh pohchne doh. Phir dekhna tumhare saare ghum door hojayenge.
credit goes to Rab ne again😛.... even I love the dialogue!
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......and then i read that these are SRKs dialogues from RNBDJ........i'm so happy & touched that u put them here for me ........
awwee...anything for u di!
thankyou sooooooooooo much sweety.....🤗........
anything for u di! 🤗
you have very beautifully put these dialogues in ur ff.......well done........👏
thank u.... ure beautiful comments make me do that... thank uu😳
I'm loving ur ff.........keep it up dear.......😊
awwee... so sweet of u... thanks😳
Aww u had to re-type the entire part.............thanks so much for taking all this effort for us.....😊
anything to keep u all happy! all of ure comments light up my day!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: annu08

wow part 10 & 11 were soooooooooooooo good loved them
thank uu...u still read my FF? i thought u stopped reading... anyways...thanks😊

i likes robbie the way he falls for kastuir and get excitedd to see her just like a little boy saw the sweet candy
lol....thanks... m happy u like it😊
rain scne was the USP of 11th part
well done
thank you!
and great going thanks for long part it helps more get in to the part
no problem... as long as it keeps my readers happy!😃
uppdate soon
will try

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: muneefah

jst catched up..........................
awwee... really di? did u like it?
gave my last xam n came on i-f to read ur FF
chooo chweet of u! u came on IF just to read my FF? thank u soo muchh!! 😃
n i loved dis dialogue

Robbie in his mind: Gods! She likes mes so muchs! She invites mes for Happy Birthdays! 😃


hahahahahahahahahahahahaha.......cute dialogut.........
hehe...thanks😃

both parts were good
awwee.... thanks for ure lovely comments! 😳
keep up da gr8 work
shmanxx! 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Part 10:
OH MY GOSH Shivz!! You're on part 10 already!! *emotional moment* It's like watching you grow!! Oh gosh, get me a box of tissues!
awwee Di! 🤗.... u're making me cry,too!
And do I have to mention how much I LOVED this part?
umm... if u would like to
And how much I HATE that loser butt Puru? 😡
hehe... everyone is calling him a loser😆
Why Robbie oughtta kick his little sorry butt!!! GRR!
lmao! 🤣
Heheeeeeee, I can never get over Robbie and Armaan's supers cools accents! 😆
m glad u love them!😆
He's So sweet yaar! changing his shirt to look sames to sames as his lady love 😆
yep... my Rubi is too sweet!
And Kasturi thinking that he's some freak because he's wearing pink!
lol.... she rly needs to getta life😆
I love guys who have the courage to wear pink!
lol... even me 😛
And HAHA sleeping beauty Bani 😆 I loved how she refers to that Disgusting Puru as Hitler!! 😆 GO GiRL!
hehe.. glad u like her... I love her guts! I wish I was like tht😆
And HEHEHEHEHE How's my Handsome 😆😆😆
LOL.... she's over-mad about him😆
And awee.. Kasturi thinking of Kaushalya as her mom! Soo cute!
yea.. I'll be having more Kaushi-Kassy scenes in the future..
I wonder what happened to Devika.. why is she such a rock? 😡
oh... she has some mental disorder(well, if it is one); once she saw money, she wanted more😆
And OYE what kind of ending is that? ROKA's hands met.. and you finished? 😭
omg! Sorry di! *holding ears*

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Hailaaaaaaaa!!
OMG! stop scaring me! what happened?
2 parts!! Oh gosh, I'm SO happy!! No more suspensee! hehehehehehe
oh... phew!
Part 11:
Awee SHUCKS! I was hoping RoKa would go into stare session after their hands met
sorry....LOL.... I didnt wanna embarrass them in front of everyone😆
And what is this? ALKA is in here? Oh no no no nono NO! This cant be good... 😭 She is such a... ugh!!! I hate that woman!!
hehe... but she is "kaam ki cheez" u'll get what I mean later...
And Shivzy,
yes, di?
thank you for translating all the hindi in English!
awwee... no probz!
I never knew what "Kalmuhi" meant 😆 Im learning so much so soon! 😃
hehe... I see myself turning into a hindi teacher from chinese😆
And YAHOOO Super woman Devika saved the day!!
LOL.... Once again, the day is saved! Thanks to the: Power Puff Devika😆
Since Kasturi is so rich, why cant she kick out Alka 😡
Oh no! She can't! JP won't let her...
And awee, my baby was SO happy!! Stupid Devika!! UGH why is she so mean? Only being nice to her to get what she wants! Her and Puru should get married. A match made before heaven- I say 😆
LOL... Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi😆
And aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee RoKa scenes were SOOOOOO f'en adorableeeee!!! Bless.
awweee Di! I never knew that u would like it so much! Thank uu! 🤗
HAHAHA Rubi? LOL my darlin is so cute! He's willing to change his name for Kasturi 😆 So sweet!
yeah.... after all, whose Rubi is he?
"Shakes the Speare" 😆 that got me LOLing
LOL... mission accomplished! I made u laugh!
And WOW the rain dialogues were AMAZING!!! I was like shocked @ how much I liked it!! WOW!
credit goes to RNBDJ's dialogue writer *whoever he is*...lol
RoKa...................... I want MORE!!!
don't worry! There'll be scenes but, in installments😆
And awee Kasturi got a cold? And nobody cares... except Vicky? 😭 So mean!
Uff! yeh berahem duniya
But im glad she's feeling something for Robbiee!!
yea... she is😳
Hello readers! How're u all? Goooooooooooooooooooooood! 😃

Hope u all like this part....
LOVED it!
thankss!
It took me more than 2 hours to write it.... I wrote all of it then, it all got deleted! so, I re-typed it LOL..
oh WOW!!! Bravo Shivz! Atta girl 👏
thanks again!😃
so I hope u all liked this part.. it was the loongest part so I hope u all liked it and it had a RoKa scene..lol
I LOVED it!!!! 😃
thanks again again😃
This part was dedicated to 3 people:
Hummy- She was the one who reminde me of Alka... I had almost forgotten bout Alka... thank u Hummy... Unfortunately, our Hummy has hurt herself very badly... Let's hope she recovers soon and comes back! I miss u Humz!
LOL Hummy reminds you of Alkaa? 😆 HAHA Hummy! You're such a villain😛
But thanks a lot yaar.. now we've gotta read abt Alka... 😡😆
arey no! She wrote bout Alka in one of her comments! and I was like "shewwt! I almost forgot bout Alka!" My Hummy is not evil! Don't blame her!
Annu di-I put SRK's latest dialogues from RNBDJ just for u in this part.(the ones in green) hope u liked it😊
Hehe, Annu! Lucky duck!
LOL.... My Annu di is not a duck!...lol... just joking😆
Shivz.. I like SRK too.. 😳
hehe.... U'll get the same when I use Imran Khan dialogues😛
Mimi di- Unfortunately, my di sprained her finger and ankle...Let's hope she gets well soon
Aweee thank you so much !!
my pleasure!
You're soo cute! You dont have to dedicate a part to me, you already dedicated this whole FF to me- which I never deserved.
of course u deserved it Di!
Thank you Jaan!
Mention naats! (in Rubi's language)😛






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