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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: robbii
wooooo....me first.

lol.. ur always first😛

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: robbii
weirdo guy (Robbie)*....😡😡lol u r too mean.
hehe.. I m😆

When she opened her eyes, it was him... when she closed her eyes., it was him!...yep it should be. heeee
It took me time to write such emotional dialogues..lol... I better get used to it😆

another super-duper late update..🤣omg!!!!
yep...will try to update soon..

it is my pleasure to read u r ff lol.
aweee... thank uu😳
thank you for the same.
arey! maine kya kaha tha? no sorry no thank u!😡..aap meri baath kabhi nahi sunthi😭

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swan20

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Posted: 17 years ago

#173

Aww Kasturi is thinking abt Robbie......😍 😍 😳..........woh hai he aisa.......cutie......😛........but she called him a wierdo......😲 😆 😆

Vicky is so cute.........ladka hoke sharma gaya.........😆 😆

Shivi..........it wasn't boring at all......tum bhi na.......

Now that ur holidays have started i'm looking forward to regular updates..........great going dear.......keep it up........😊

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: swan20
Aww Kasturi is thinking abt Robbie......😍 😍 😳..
........woh hai he aisa.......cutie......😛.......
lol... akhir robbie ka jadoo chalgayyaa😛
.but she called him a wierdo......😲 😆 😆
lol...thats coz she didnt know his name😆

Vicky is so cute.........ladka hoke sharma gaya.........😆 😆
yea...I just love him😃

Shivi..........it wasn't boring at all......tum bhi na.......
sorryy.... but I felt it was boring..lol

Now that ur holidays have started i'm looking forward to regular updates.........
will try😳
.great going dear.......keep it up........😊
thank u😳

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robina

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Posted: 17 years ago

#175

hey shanuuu finally able to get to your fanfic and its very sweet...and i luved bani and kasturi's writing letters and sending it by making it a paper plane..very creative...i'll be reading more giving you my feedback, just wanted you to know that i think your doing an amazing job..i feel bad that kasturi's mom and sis dont luv her, but i liked how JP knew kasturi was crying...such a sweet luving relationship they have... take care keep up the great work ...di

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mimi0295

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Posted: 17 years ago

#176

Shivzy!!

What're you saying yaar? This part wasn't boring, infact- it's one of my favourites 'till date! Kasturi is THINKING about ROBBIE- first step too LOVE! haha! I am SOO excited, I'm jumping up and down! hehehehehehe

And aweee, Vicky- soo sweet! lol He was so shy he ran away? lmfao. And Kasturi saying "Bye Handsome" to him just made me LOL haha

I loved it! But agreed- too short! But I know what you mean, school is tough yaar! Take your time, but Holidays are here- so you better update ASAP!

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: nrasheed
hey shanuuu
Hi dii,😊
finally able to get to your fanfic
aweee...thank u for taking out time and reading it😳
and its very sweet..
awwee...I'm glad that u liked it😳
.and i luved bani and kasturi's writing letters and sending it by making it a paper plane.
I'm glad u liked it..lol..I thought nobody would like it since it's a stupid idea....but it's so good to see that everyone likes it😛
..very creative.
thank u so much😳
..i'll be reading more giving you my feedback,
ok...will wait😊
just wanted you to know that i think your doing an amazing job.
awwee...thank u so much di, ure comments made my day!😳
.i feel bad that kasturi's mom and sis dont luv her, but i liked how JP knew kasturi was crying...such a sweet luving relationship they have...
I'm very happy that u liked it..
take care keep up the great work ...di
thank u😳

thank so much for your lovely commentd di... it feels so great that u commented on my FF.... I've always been a big fan of whispers... sometimes, I'm left speechless after reading the parts.. it's such an honour that u have commented on my FF! it means a lot to me! u made my day di... thank u😳

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: mimi0295
Shivzy!!
Diiii!!

What're you saying yaar?
maine kya kiya?😕
This part wasn't boring,
omg! really?
infact- it's one of my favourites 'till date!
omg! really?😲 I thot it was the most boring till date!
Kasturi is THINKING about ROBBIE- first step too LOVE!
lol...yea... see what happens next😆
haha! I am SOO excited, I'm jumping up and down! hehehehehehe
lol.... I can imagine u jumping up and down😆

And aweee, Vicky- soo sweet!
yea...he is😳
lol He was so shy he ran away?
yea... he was VERY shy😆
lmfao. And Kasturi saying "Bye Handsome" to him just made me LOL haha
lol...glad that I could make u laugh

I loved it!
thank uu😃
But agreed- too short!
Sorry 😳
But I know what you mean, school is tough yaar!
yea...
Take your time, but Holidays are here- so you better update ASAP!
will surely...and u too!

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#179

^ OMG! I didnt notice! awweee... thank uu soo much Mimi di 🤗 this means a lot to me

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#180

Recap: Kasturi dreams about Robbie and teases Vicky for being shy.

Part 10- Tum! Yaha?

Next morning Kasturi goes to Bani's house to tell her about her dream.

She rings the bell and Puru opens the door.

Puru: Arey Kasturi? Tum itni subah subah yaha? (Kasturi? You here so early in the morning?)

Kasturi: Haan, Bani se milne aayi thi. (Yeah, I came to meet Bani.)

Puru: Woh sorahi hain. (She's sleeping)

Kasturi: Acha, theek hain, main baadh main aati hoon. (Ok, I'll come later.)

Puru: Nahin, rukoh... mujhe tumse kuch baath karni hai (No, wait... I need to talk to you.)

Kasturi: Ji kahiye. (Ok.. tell me.)

Puru: Main chahtah hoon ki tum Bani se kuch kaho...

Puru: Main apni beti se bahut pyaar kartah hoon.. Main usse aisi baath karta hoon kyunki woh Robbie ke saath hoti hai.. (I love my daughter a lot... But, I talk to her like that because, she's always with Robbie.)

Kasturi cuts in: Robbie kaun? (Who Robbie?)

Puru: Yeh main bataanaa zaroori nahi samajhtah... Bas maine jitna kaha hai usse bataadena! (I don't think it's necessary to tell you that... just tell her what I said!)

Kasturi: Theek hai.. (Ok..)

She goes towards Bani's room.

Robbie sees her coming.

Kasturi was wearing a very light pink simple churidaar-kurta (the tight pants one... not the one she wears in the show) She had no make-up on still she was looking so beautiful.

Robbie: Shits! Kasturi comes my homes aur maine itne puraane kapde pehne hai... chee chee chee (Shit! Kasturi is in my house and I'm wearing such old clothes! eww!)

He quickly goes and changes his clothes he changes into the only pink shirt he has to impress Kasturi.

Kasturi sees him.

Kasturi: Tum! (You!)

Robbie: Haan, main! Main apne ghar mein nahin hoonga toh aur kaha hoonga? Waise mujhe yeh sawwal tumse se karna chahiye! (Yes me! If I'm not in my house, where will I be? And, I should be asking you this question!)

Kasturi: Woh main Bani se milne aayi thi.. (I came to meet Bani..)

Robbie: Bani abh sohrahi hai... tum yaha beht ke waits kar sakthi ho.. (Bani is sleeping now... you can wait here..)

They sit on a 3-seater sofa.. Kasturi sits in one corner while Robbie sits on the other corner..

There was silence for a few minutes... Finally Robbie decides to the silence and says: Oh my gods! Humne same colour pehna hai..😃

Kasturi thinks: HAILA! Yeh toh ladka ho ke Pink pehentah hai! 😕 (Oh my god! He wears pink when he's a boy! 😕)

She just puts up a fake smile 😊

Kasturi: Tumharaa naam kya hai? (What's your name?)

Robbie: Robbie..

Kasturi thinks: Yeh wohi Robbie hai jiske ke baare mein Puru uncle bolrahe the? (He's the Robbie who Puru uncle was talking about?)

She is about to ask about what Puru said but doesn't because she thinks it would be rude... She changes the question and asks: Tumhe film pasand aayi? (Did u like the film?)

Robbie: Haan haan.. bahot achi thi.. (Yeah.. it was very nice)

Kasturi: Thank you!

Robbie: Mention nots!

Robbie: Tumhe konsaa gana pasand hai? (Which song do you like?)

Kasturi: umm... mujhe toh bohat saare gaane pasand hai.. mujhe sabh se zyaadaa... 'Tu tu hai wohi' pasand hai (I like many songs... Most of all, I like 'Tu tu hai wohi')

Robbie: Same to sames! 😃 (Although he didnt like it at all, from that moment, it became his favourite)

Kasturi: God! Yeh phir se shuroo ho gaya?🤢 (God! He's started again?🤢)

She wanted to run away from there.. LITERALLY RUN! She hated being with Robbie! She found him SO annoying! But, deep inside her heart... she doesn't know where she got this feeling from... she liked him... she wanted to cut out and throw that part of hers which made her like him!

Suddenly, from nowhere, Raunak pops up and says: Mujhe bhi! Mujhe bhi woh gaana bahut pasand hai (Me too! Even I like that song)

Kasturi was super happy! She was so happy that someone came to save her from Mr. Annoying! She wanted to jump up and down and thank Raunak.

Robbie thinks in his mind: Lo agaya kebab mein bones! 🤢 (Sorry, I don't know how to translate that... It's Robbie's version of: 'Kebab mein haddi')

Raunak and Kasturi hug eachother (Just as FRIENDS)

Robbie:

Just then, Bani wakes up. She sees Robbie, Raunak and Kasturi.

Bani: Arrey Kassy tum! (Kassy, you here?)

Kasturi: Main tumse hee milne aayi thi. (I came here to meet you.)

Kasturi pulls Bani into Bani's room.

Kasturi: Sleeping Beauty! Itna koi sotah hai?😡 she yelled. (Sleeping Beauty! Does someone sleep this much?😡)

Bani: Haan! Main sothi hoon! Any problem? 😡 she yelled back. (Yeah! I sleep this much! any problem?😡)

Kasturi: Mujhe tumhe kuch bataana tha... (I wanted to tell you something..)

Bani: Haan, bol. (Tell me)

Kasturi is about to tell her about the dream. But stops thinking that it would be the talk of the town by the next day. Instead, she tells her what Puru told her to tell.

Bani: Acha, toh tu uss hitler ke liye yaha aayi thi!? (So you came here for that hitler?!)

Kasturi: ....

Bani: Chal chod! Yeh bataa ki tu ne mere handsome se baath ki ya nahi? 😳 (Leave it! Now tell me... did u talk to my handsome? 😳)

Kasturi: Haan, bahut sharmaaraha tha...(Yeah... he was very shy)

Kaushalya comes in the room to tell Bani that breakfast is ready. But, she sees Kasturi.

Kaushalya: Arey! Kasturi beta tum? (Kasturi you here?)

Kasturi thinking in her mind: There we go again! Aaj kitne logon ne mujhse yeh sawwal poocha? (There we go again! How many people have asked me this question since morning?)

Kasturi: Haan maaji (she called her maaji as Kaushalya was the mother to her Devika had never been) , main Sleeping Beauty se milne aayi thi.. (Yeah aunty, I came to meet Sleeping Beauty.)

Bani: 😡

Kaushalya: Bilkul sahi waqt par aayi hoh, maine breakfast tayaar kiya hai.. (You've come at the right time... I've made breakfast.)

Bani: Acha, hum aate hai..(Ok, we'll come)

They go down and see aloo parathas on her table.

They all sit and eat happily.

Kasturi remembers the time when her family was like that. Devika would make parathas and they all would sit and eat happily.

Kasturi thinks: Naa jaane kiski buri nazar lag gayi humare parivaar koh. (I don't know who cast an evil eye on our family)

Bani shouts out loud: Kassy dahi paas karna! (Kassy pass me the yogurt!)

Kasturi comes out of her thoughts and puts her hand forward to the bowl. At the same time, even Robbie puts his hand forward.

Their hands touch. A current passes through Kasturi's hand when she touches him.

Hello all my di's and bhaiya's and bachu's (LOL... I'm the youngest here so there would be no bachu's😆)

Hope u all liked this part! RoKa Officially meet in this part LOL..😆

Plz do leave your comments..thanks

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