PreRish One Shot: The touch of fleeting desires - Page 4

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Thanks. I rummaged through a whole set of potential titles. 😆

bring the next one soon 👍🏼

Double post

Originally posted by: Jodha_Rani

Wist yaar

I was very excited to read this OS because it was you finally writing for us and as I read the first line I was double excited because it's from RB's point of view and like I always say none can explain RB better than you my girl you know every inch of RB .

Introduction mejn hi I could imagine RB 1 + RB 2 ( RB 2 is occupying our hearts like one )

I loved the idea of present and flash backs .Very well put

Bajaj in Sharma house though am scared to send him there but I enjoyed it here .Things which we wanted to see you have put it very beautiful with small small tadka of PreRish moments

Guest eying on him am sure some zombies like us pucca .sab Ko Bajaj chahiye

Flirty office employee and Rishabh hidding his actual expression and feel . That's is humara Bajaj typical #proud #kush bit shy

Veena was sure that this man was one for her daughter loved this feel coming form her side and thank god kuch toh frel hua isse and not waste body

Fiant blush of Prerna hope to see such scene .Her admiring him totally and blushing and him caching her

Thier relationship that of pain though it hurts but I have to agree .unka Dard ka rishtha which tied them and made made strong and together .

Prerna feeding him me faints haye ..i want this scene.kitna kush hoga chori chori apna banda

Small moment indicating a major development and the ice melted .Forever!

Mad bull i love this mad bull mode of Bajaj .he just gets more cute theremad bull when gets possessive or angry when it comes to Prerna and Prerna knows it and she gives that look like...abh toh main gayi .iss ex Ko Abhi aana tha@ wist loved the description you gave there .

RB then cast a Midler version of that terrifying gaze at his wifelove range is emotions ,expressions RB gives here .only RB can do this .how he molds himself there and turns to Prerna and Prerna ka reaction I always love it .bit scared .no words she knows her mad bull very well typical Prerna .

Am waiting in car his body language and eyes our angry bird . #bajajish

My favourite again that temporary intimacy remembered many things and someone else also and I just want this scene to happen yaar .very badly I want this confrontation and she can't escape from his clucthes. I loved how he questioned her. and her problem whenever RB questions ,ignore her ,shouts at her she just goes on Dhoom tana or strike mode

Next morning Bajaj on his thinking cap onmaine galat Kiya ya sahi ye piglu kahika will never change

I loved that flash back mein flash back park scene . Simple and left to viewers .

Finally they meet passing traces of sadness and guilt , fear . I loved that unsaid things,stare they give .nothing much needed for PRB . Dono samajh Gaye yes, nothing was needed there they knew it there relationship is something beyond words .one cannot describe it .

" Let's go " saying so,he turned around to move with slow steps

Ek pyaar ka nagma hai ..zindagi aur kuch nahi teri meri kahani hai #RB #PRB forever.

Wist hugs .Thank you for this it just made me my Dil go Mmmm......❤️

I'm really glad that it's being liked. ❤️

Originally posted by: Kabiraa

woh to pata hi hai mujhe 😆

bring the next one soon 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Thanks a ton for such an analysis! 🤗

I'm really glad that it's being liked. ❤️

This should be just a start .We zombies are waiting for more write ups 🤗

Bring it on ...

@jodha_rani,

u just said everything that I wanted to say. Bang on! word to word.

Even I could visualize PRB as well as PreRish on this.

@Shruti:

I am not much of a SS/OS reader, but how could I miss your post!

It has all the small nuances that one needs to transition word to an act. Very fluent visualization and that's the best quality of a good writer. You brought out the essence of PRB/PreRish bcoz of the range of emotions you covered up in limited words.

and yeah, the first thing that hit me was PRB came up very easily. And next was I hope this is the kind of act we get to see soon on PreRish in the next coming days.

Originally posted by: saps.156

@jodha_rani,

u just said everything that I wanted to say. Bang on! word to word.

Even I could visualize PRB as well as PreRish on this.

@Shruti:

I am not much of a SS/OS reader, but how could I miss your post!

It has all the small nuances that one needs to transition word to an act. Very fluent visualization and that's the best quality of a good writer. You brought out the essence of PRB/PreRish bcoz of the range of emotions you covered up in limited words.

and yeah, the first thing that hit me was PRB came up very easily. And next was I hope this is the kind of act we get to see soon on PreRish in the next coming days.

Thank you so much, Saps! 🤗

Originally posted by: saps.156

@jodha_rani,

u just said everything that I wanted to say. Bang on! word to word.

Even I could visualize PRB as well as PreRish on this.

Our mutual love 🤗❤️

Brilliant🤗

This story can only be written by a true PRB fan. 🤗 what a story!!

I liked the way you’ve written.. You have portrayed both of their emotions so well.. You deserve to be praised more for you awesome writing 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻