PreRish One Shot: The touch of fleeting desires - Page 3

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Write an OS and inspire me.

Oh my god that is perfect Wist! Your maiden OS? No way. This is beautifully penned and laid out. I loved Rishab's pov, especially the myriad of emotions he experienced, from frustration to anger and jealousy and uncertainty. The Rishab Bajaj fumbling. AAH what a sight to behold.😆

And the final scene between them was perfect. Still aloof but slowly melting. And hard. Gah <3 Write more please.

PreRish haven't even met yet and I'm dying to see a jealous Bajaj alreadyall thanks to you!

This was...sad, cute, romantic, angsty all in one, complete package

Loved how their unsaid feelings solved their problems they both had broken hearts but they both healed each other even through their silence❤️

Special mention to the scene where Mrs Bajaj stares and registers the handsomeness of her patidev

Loved it! Next OS kab aane wala hai????

Originally posted by: .amigos.

Oh my god that is perfect Wist! Your maiden OS? No way. This is beautifully penned and laid out. I loved Rishab's pov, especially the myriad of emotions he experienced, from frustration to anger and jealousy and uncertainty. The Rishab Bajaj fumbling. AAH what a sight to behold.😆

And the final scene between them was perfect. Still aloof but slowly melting. And hard. Gah <3 Write more please.

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

PreRish haven't even met yet and I'm dying to see a jealous Bajaj alreadyall thanks to you!

This was...sad, cute, romantic, angsty all in one, complete package

Loved how their unsaid feelings solved their problems they both had broken hearts but they both healed each other even through their silence❤️

Special mention to the scene where Mrs Bajaj stares and registers the handsomeness of her patidev

Loved it! Next OS kab aane wala hai????

It's good to hear positive things from an experienced writer.

Next OS ka pata tab chalega jab aapka next update aayega. 😈

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Thank you so much Sanya! ❤️

It's good to hear positive things from an experienced writer.

Next OS ka pata tab chalega jab aapka next update aayega. 😈

Arey kyaa aap bhi😆

Jaldi aayega update, tab Tak you can start new OS😃

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

I was waiting for your feedback. Thank you so much! ❤️

Aww !it's beautiful.do write more.

Originally posted by: Moushumi

Aww !it's beautiful.do write more.

Wist yaar

I was very excited to read this OS because it was you finally writing for us and as I read the first line I was double excited because it's from RB's point of view and like I always say none can explain RB better than you my girl you know every inch of RB .

Introduction mein hi I could imagine RB 1 + RB 2 ( RB 2 is occupying our hearts like one )

I loved the idea of present and flash backs .Very well put

Bajaj in Sharma house though am scared to send him there but I enjoyed it here .Things which we wanted to see you have put it very beautiful with small small tadka of PreRish moments

Guest eying on him am sure some zombies like us pucca .sab Ko Bajaj chahiye

Flirty office employee and Rishabh hidding his actual expression and feel . That's is humara Bajaj typical #proud #kush bit shy

Veena was sure that this man was one for her daughter loved this feel coming form her side and thank god kuch toh feel hua isse and not waste body

Faint blush of Prerna hope to see such scene .Her admiring him totally and blushing and him caching her

Thier relationship that of pain though it hurts but I have to agree .unka Dard ka rishtha hai which tied them and made made strong and together .

Prerna feeding him me faints haye ..i want this scene.kitna kush hoga chori chori apna banda

Small moment indicating a major development and the ice melted .Forever!

Mad bull i love this mad bull mode of Bajaj .he just gets more cute theremad bull when gets possessive or angry when it comes to Prerna and Prerna knows it and she gives that look like...abh toh main gayi .iss ex Ko Abhi aana tha@ wist loved the description you gave there .

RB then cast a Midler version of that terrifying gaze at his wifelove the ranges of emotions ,expressions RB gives here .only RB can do this .how he molds himself there and turns to Prerna and Prerna ka reaction I always love it .bit scared .no words she knows her mad bull very well typical Prerna .

Am waiting in car his body language and eyes our angry bird . #bajajish

My favourite again that temporary intimacy remembered many things and someone else also and I just want this scene to happen yaar .very badly I want this confrontation and she can't escape from his clucthes. I loved how he questioned her. and her problem whenever RB questions ,ignore her ,shouts at her she just goes on Dhoom tana or strike mode

Next morning Bajaj on his thinking cap onmaine galat Kiya ya sahi ye piglu kahika will never change

I loved that flash back mein flash back park scene . Simple and left to viewers .

Finally they meet passing traces of sadness and guilt , fear . I loved that unsaid things,stare they give .nothing much needed for PRB . Dono samajh Gaye yes, nothing was needed there they knew it there relationship is something beyond words .one cannot describe it .

" Let's go " saying so,he turned around to move with slow steps

Ek pyaar ka nagma hai ..zindagi aur kuch nahi teri meri kahani hai #RB #PRB forever.

Wist hugs .Thank you for this it just made my Dil go Mmmm......❤️