Pyar Hum Ko Bhi Hai-FF- P. 12 PG. 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 11

Prem: Wait a min.. he chases Omi.
Sneha: aree Prem!

That Evening Pranay and Roshan came home, Roshan got the job.

Mukti: Yeh toh bari kushi ki baath hai, hume ek party rakhni chahiye. dont you think.
Prem: Of course! This weekend aih?
Mukti: Good choice.
Roshan: Hey Pranay come with me for a second.
Pranay: ok lets chat in my room.

Pranays Room

Roshan: I just cant get her out of my head!
Pranay: Who? that JC girl?
Roshan: yeah, You know just by looking at her, you can tell shes got lots, Shes so pretty, beautiful... knowle...
Pranay: I GET IT! but i don't like her.
Roshan: but why my brother?
Pranay: first of all im not your brother and second f all, i just don't like her i don't know why, but i don't.
Roshan: well, i think i shouldn't have told u in the first place then... i gotta go now, ill see you tomorrow, bye, he leaves.
Pranay: Roshan! i didn't mean... Whats the point hes gone now, it darkens.

The next morning.

Sharads house.

JC: Uncle ive gotta go, my friend is calling me then were going to go to a party.
Sharad: Yeh ok, bye.
Sharad: Ek minute.
JC turns: Haan?
Sharad: Voh do larke, tum ne un ko job diya kya?
JC; Haan why?
Sharad thinks: Thank god! Abh shuru hoga Prem ka parivaar ke barbadi ke dino.
Sharad: Ok just asking.
JC: How is this shirt looking on me?
It was a shirt with Ritesh's picture on it.
Sharad: tum isse kyun pasand karti ho?
JC: i dont know, i just do, but u know what.
Sharad: What?
JC: i always have this one very cute guy in my mind, looking very strong, brown eyes, brown hair, pierces, rings, but i feel like ive met this cute hunk. but what ever.
Sharad thinks again: Shes making out Prem by her description Oh my god.
JC: Uncle...
Sharad just mumbles something
JC shrugs then leaves.

Bajaj House.

Dinner Table
Sneha: Aree OMI, Sadhna ki Shaadi ke liye mujhe aur Mukti ko shopping karni hai
Omi: Toh Jao.
Sneha: Tum bhi chalo.
Mukti: Prem Tum bhi chalo too.
Prem: Please Yeh larki ki cheezien mein mujhe mat dalo please!
Mukti: Tumhe chalna hoga!
Prem: Fine for that Omi youll have to go too.
Omi: Just for you man.

Shopping.

Mukti and is talking to the shop keeper when something drops at Muktis feet, which she doesnt seem to notice.
A girl goes to pick it up, Mukti thinking shes taking her Aashirwad says
Mukti: Jeeti Raho, yeh kya kar rahi...
Girl: Ekcuse me mein apki ashirwad nahi le rahi thi.
Mukti: Kitni batameez larki hai.
Girl: Larki nahi mera naam bhi hai, aur voh hai JC.
Mukti notices the picture on her t-shirt.
She remembers that Kiran used to like Ritesh.
Mukti turns to Prem: Prem, yeh dekho.
When she looks back JC is gone.
Prem: Kya Mukti.
Mukti: Kuch nahi.
Prem: Toh chalo, lets go.

Mukti buys very beautiful saris an macthing jewelery and every other accesories.

They soon are done getting everything and are on their way home.

Mukti: Aj mujhe laga ke Kiran hamare saath hai.
Prem: Voh kaise?
Mukti: Aj jab mein jewelry dekhne gayi thi toh ek larki ayi thi, voh Ritesh Deshmukh ki T-shirt pehn rahi thi, mujhe laga ke Kiran humare saath kahi na kaheen hai.
Prem: Toh tum ne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?
Mukti: Mein bataney wali thi par voh chali gayi thi.
Prem: Koi baath nahi, voh Kiran nahi ho sakti
Both Prem and Mukti look forward.

Pranays Party.

there was blasting music. (song: Arabian Adventure 3-Good Morning St. Tropez)

We see Pranay, Roshan, and his friends dancing...

We see someone entering... It goes up his body, by his lips, like they do in movies, then we see its Tanner, his in India from Canada.

Tanner: Mr. Pram! Mr. Pram!
Prem: yeah, who are you and how do you know me?
Tanner: Its me, don't you remember? Tanner.
Prem: Tanner! Oh my god! youve changed so much! How are you how is your sister and my house?
Tanner: everythings fine except...
Prem: Except What?
Tanner: Your house. It caught on fire.
Prem: is dead shocked.

Thats where im ending it today, im sorry for not updating in a long time but here you go!
Edited by Manoj&Tina#1fan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great update kiran,i liked ie please contiue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 12

Tanner: Your house. It caught on fire.
Prem is dead shocked.
Prem: What are you saying!?
Tanner: I don't know, someone had lit it on fire. By the time i got there the person ran away. I called the fire department right away, trying to laugh, but don't worry your house is still standing.
Prem: My house! it had some many things there, so many memories of...
Tanner: Kiran... sadly, as he looked down.
Tanner: I'm so sorry Mr. P. You know how much i liked Kiran, too, but i couldn't catch him. Only if i could have gotten there a little earlier... i could have caught him... Why! Why am i so stupid!
Prem: Please don't scream in here please, lets go out side and talk.
Prem lead Tanner outside and they talked about the house. They decided not to tell anyone about it, until the right time.
Prem: Okay, so this is our plan don't tell anyone, are you going back to Canada, or are you going to live here a little
Tanner: I haven't really decided weather im still going to live here for a little while or go back.
Prem: You should stay here, Pranay and the others will be happy to see you.
Tanner: Hey wait a minute where is Ishaan, i didn't seem him in the party!
Prem: Thats because you don't recognize him, he was just a baby when we left.
Tanner: Really can i see him?
Prem: Not only him everyone and from now on till ou get back home you'll live with us.
Tanner: Sweet, lets see him.
Prem: Ishaan! Mukti! Pranay!
All three of them came there.
Mukti: Kya hua Prem, ye kaun hai?
Prem: Tumhe echano ye kaun hai.
Mukti: Koi jana pechana nahi... Tanner?
Tanner: Yes Mrs. P
Mukti: Oh my god! Its you! How'd you come here?
Tanner: I came... Prem gives him a stern look, i came to meet you guys.
Pranay: Seriously man, is that you!...
Ishaan: Who is this you guys are talking about!?
P+P+M: Tanner!
Ishaan: Who is Tanner!? 😡
Prem: Dekho Ishaan, this is Tanner, pointing to Tanner, and this is Ishaan, Tanner, pointing to Ishaan, Tanner... Ishaan, know you know.
Ishaan: Weel Mein isse nahi jaan tha.
Prem: Ishaan, yeh to Kiran se...
Everyone looks at him.
Roshan: COME ON PRANnayy... Yeh larka kaun hai?
Prem: Ugh! mein sab ko abhi bata tha hoon, ek minute.
Prem grabs Tanners arm and takes him to the stage.

On the other hand, Some guy is taking Kirans hand and taking her to the stage.

Hope you liked it, ill update soon! please comment!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Does noone like my fan fic??? should i stop?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i like ur ff ..nice update..continue soon 😳

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