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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 9

Soon they buy everything and they head home, the person follows.

Prem and Mukti's house,

Prerna: Kira ki birthday kaab hai?
Prem: Pandira March
Prerna: Aur party kaab rakh rahe ho?
Prem: Aj March 12 hai toh phir weekend par kyun ki Kiran ka birthday Friday peh hai.
Mukti: Paar usko nahi batao kyun ki it's a surprise?
Prem: Mukti, what time is it?
Mukti: 3: 35, why?
Prem and Mukti: Kids!
Prem: Mein Jata hoon and he leaves.
Mukti: Mein Khana banathi hoon.
Prerna: Nahi, tu bet mein banathi hoon, kya banana hai?
Mukti: Aj hum Pranay Ka favorite khayen ge, Halwa puri.
Prerna: Acha mein ja rahi hoon.
Mr. Bajaj: Mein bed room mein jar aha hoon, ill be right back.
He also leaves.
Mukti also leaves for her room.
Mukti: Aaaa, finally time to rest! She lies on the bed.
The person comes in and turns off the lights, Mukti gets up.
Mukti: Kaun hai?
We see a shadow coming towards her,
Mukti: Kaun hai wahan?
All of a sudden the person touches her, she recognizes the touch.
Mukti: Sharad! The light flashes and we see Sharad.
Mukti starts screaming but Sharad puts his hand on her mouth.
Sharad: Hey Mukti,
Mukti looks at him scared.
Prerna and Mr. Bajaj couldn't hear cause of the noises around them.
Sharad: Kya hua Mukti, scared? Ke mein yahan kaise? Mein toh jail mein tha right… he starts telling her what happened.
Prem comes home with the kids, along with Agar kids, that their last name,
Prem: Mother India? Where is Mukti?
Prerna: Kya pata, mein toh kitchen mein thi jab voh yahan seh chaili gayi
Prem: Shayad upar Hhi, mein abhi atha hoon,
Pranay: Hey, Sabrina, what grade are you in?
Sabrina: grade 3 what about you?
Pranay: Me too, that so cool and they start chatting.
Prem is walking upstairs, while he had this ajab si feeling that something bad is happening.
Sharad: That's my story of how I got out of jail and followed you all the way here, for how many year?
Mukti sees some light enter the room, she looks to see Prem.
Sharad: Kya hua Mukti? Idar, udar kya dekh rahi ho?
Prem: Sharad?
Sharad turns around to see Prem.
Sharad: Abh ajey Mukti ke pati, Prem ya UD?
Mukti runs to Prem, Prem holds her.
Prem: Tum Yahan kya kar rahe ho? Tumhe toh jail mein hona chahiye.
Sharad walks up to him. Mukti moves behind Prem. Sharad walks behind and closes the door then walks back.
Prem: Jao yahan sesh!
Sharad: I don't think ill do that just yet!
Prem makes a confused face
Mukti gets an idea, hopefully it would work, she tried to leave to tell Prerna or Mr. Bajaj about this…
Sharad: Oh tum kahan ja rahi ho Mukti?
He quickly grabs her hand
Prem: Choro uska haath.
Sharad: Nahi.
Mukti: Choro!
Sharad: Nahi and he pulls Mukti towards him.
Prem: Mukti! He walks a little forward when Sharad pulls out a gun
Sharad: Mein Maro ga agar ek bhi per agey raka.
Prem stopped in his spot.

Downstairs

Kiran: Ill be right back, im gona check on my mom and dad,
Tanner: can I come?
Kiran: Sure, come quickly!
So they head upstairs.

PM room

Prem: Sharad! Let go of Mukti!
Sharad: Nahi! Mein nahi choruga, mein toh isse le ke jaunga!
Prem is MAD, super, super mad!
Kiran and tanner enter the room.
They see this and get shocked.
Kiran: Papa, ye kaun hai?
Prem: Kiran, come here! Both of you come here!
Tanner and Kiran run to Prem,
Sharad: Toh yeh hai, Kiran,
Prem: Don't you dare touch her!
Sharad: Oh, don't worry, I wont touch her at all!
Sharad: She's your daughter right?
Prem just looks at him.
Sharad: and the boy?
Prem: None of your business Sharad, just leave!
Sharad: Lets go, Mukti.
Prem: Leave her!
Mukti gives Sharad a stern look.
Mukti: Mujhe choro, mein ne tumare saath nahi jana, just leave me!
She trys to leave but he grabs her again, he soon thinks of a plan,
Sharad: Fine ill leave. He lets go of Mukti, well pushes her har on the bed.
Mukti: Ouh!
He starts leaving when h grabs Kiran and starts running.
Prem: SHARAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He starts running behind him..
Kiran: Papa!!!!!!!!! Papa!!!!!!!!!!
Sharad even gets in the car, like how Komolika got Prem, when she kidnapped Prem, Prem ran after Sharad like Anurag ran after Komolika, but just like Anurag couldn't get to him Prem couldn't even either!
Prem: KIRAN!!!!!!!!!!! He ran as far as he could, Sharad im gonna get you back!
Prem: Kiran… im sorry jaan, I couldn't get you back, he slowly walks back.
Prem's eyes are red and full of tears, he goes in the house.
Mukti came down when he was out running after Sharad.
Tanner: Mr. B, where is Kiran?
Mukti looks up to see Prem there but Kiran wasn't with him.
Mukti: Prem, where's Kiran?
Prem didn't reply.
Mukti: Prem! Answer me!
Pranay: Papa, Kiran kahan hai?
Sabrina just watched as they all were talking.
Prerna: Prem beta kuch toh bol!
Prem didn't have to courage to speak, he felt like e didn't even have a voice. Prem was out of his senses.
Mr. Bajaj: Prem, Kiran Kidar Hai?
Mukti slaps prem, which brings him back o senses.
Mukti: Kiran Kidar hai?! She said that in a angry voice.
Prem is looking sideways with his hand on his cheek. Prem slowly puts his hand down.
Prem: Kiran…
Mukti: Kiran, kya, Prem, bolo!
Prem: Kiran… kidnap…
Mukti and everyone are shocked.
Prem looks down, tears pouring out of his eyes, he whispers,
Prem: I ran after him so much he was too fast. I just couldn't run anymore… im sorry Mukti im really sorry… he looks up.
Mukti slaps him again… then falls and hugs him.
They both hug for a while, thinking of a ways to get Kiran back.

Hope you guys liked this part!

Please comment, i love comments! atleast 5 till the next one .
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
why did u do that for?
u can't have her kidnap.
hope she ain't gonna cum back
after 20 years and become
another version of UD.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 update....plzzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Character Sketch

15 year leap

Prem Bajaj (Manoj Bohra) - 53 years old, Mukti's husband, could do anything for her, he finally cut his hair. He still looks as cute as before! (Well way more cuter then before!!! lol) Still looks young as well, he owns a company, KB industries, on behalf of Kiran. She acts more stylish then before.

Mukti Bajaj (Tina Hazra/Parekh) - 50 years old, married to Prem, her hair grew more, she looks way prettier!(not like she didn't look pretty before) She doesn't like talking to many people anymore , she just tries to stay quiet. She has no glasses, and she is very intelligent and tries her level best on everything she does!

Pranay Bajaj (Gaurav Khanna) - 23 years old, He has very good looks, like his dad, he goes to the office once in a while, he usually tries not to go, but Prem or Mukti or the other Family members come and tell him to go! He has a best friend named Roshan, he always fights with Ishaan. He likes going to the pub and hang with his other friends! HE DOES NOT DRINK THOUGH!

Kiran (Nupur Joshi) – 20 years old, Also known as Jaycee or JC, for a while, daughter of Prem and Mukti, kidnapped from them by Sharad, and now living with him, away from her family, forgot about her parents, Second UD (thanks for giving me the idea Patel 1993)

Ishaan Bajaj (Deepak Bajaj) - 15 years old, younger brother of Pranay and Kiran. Never seen Kiran before, only has seen in pictures, loves to keep relations with everyone, is very kind from the heart and he's very loving, like Mukti.

Prerna Bajaj ( Shweta Tiwari) – 80 years old, Mother of Prem and Sneha, married to Rishab Bajaj, keeps relations with Anurag but not a strong one, she doesn't want Mr. Bajaj to suspect anything, cause that's not good…

Mr. Bajaj (Ronit Roy) - 83 years old, Prerna's husband, drinks SOMETIMES, he lets Prem and Sneha do what ever they want, but he makes sure that what ever day something needs to happen it happens! Tries to keep good relations with people.

Anurag Basu (Cezanne Khan) – 82 years old, he goes to office everyday, goes to all the parties, festivals, Prerna keep only if he's invited. He keeps a good going relation with Prem and Sneha.

Roshan Ahuja (Roshan/Shiney Ahuja) – 23 years old, best friend of Pranay, they hang out all the time together, he always has breakfast there and then leaves for school from there. Once Kiran enters, he starts loving her. He has a big role in this fan fic.

Sneha and Omi Kapoor (Jeniffer Winget & Shabbir Ahluwalia) – 60 & 61 years old, are married to each other an have a daughter Sadhna.

Sadhna Kapoor (Sara Khan) – 24 years old, Sneha and Omi's daughter, played by Sadhna from Bidaai, she is getting married to Akshat

Akshat Chopra (Chaitanya Choudhury) – 26 years old, He is getting Married to Sadhna, he is very excited and cant wait to get married to her, they both love each other a lot! His dad is a friend of Mr. Bajaj.

Sonam (Sonam Kapoor) – 22 years old, she and Pranay are getting engaged to each other soon, she is very smart and had done a business subject in University, met Pranay there, and then they fell in love!

Sharad Gupta (Karan Singh) – 61 years old, He is the EVIL VILLIAN of this Fan Fic, he is living with Kiran and mad her EVIL too, he never told her about her real parents, she never even asked, she thought he was her everything. He brings her back to payback her family or what they did to him.

Hope you liked it...
So that's how the Character sketch will be like

at least 5 comments for the next part!!!
Edited by Manoj&Tina#1fan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
hey sis!!! great characters!!!!!! i like Pranay(Gaurav Khanna)'s role!!!! he is tooo cute!!!! but not as cute as Manoj...plzzz type the next part soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nyce characters...plzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey kiran i read the whole update and i have to say it is rockin
sharad is back 🤢 😆
keep it up bab 😳
where is tanner and sabrina gone 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 10

Prerna does the morning prayers and soon everyone joins in as well.

After the prayers
Pranay: Dadi! Mein aj job interview ke liye jar aha hoon, mujhe ap ka ashirwaad chahiye take mujhe yeh job mile. He bends to taker her blessings.
Prerna: jeete raho,
Prem: Tum mere office mein kyun nahi kaam kartey?
Pranay: Mujhe nahi pata, but I feel like working out of family business.
Prem: Fine!
Pranay: Mujhe jana hai, late ho raha hoon.
Prem: best of luck.
Pranay: Thanks bye! He leaves.
Mukti (from Upstairs): PREM!!! Meri madat karo, idar aao!
Prem: Ek Minute!
Prem: Finally, voh kuch toh bli, Kiran ke jane ke baad, ilkul chup chap si rahi, kissi she baat bhi nahi karti.
Prerna: Voh sirf us Sharad ke vaja seh.
Mr. Bajaj: Nah voh Kiran ko le ke jata nah Mukti aisi bet thi rehti. He looks towards the door. Mr. Basu ap?
Anu: Voh mein yaha poochne aya tha ke Sadhna ki shaadi kaab hai?
Sadhna: a week and a half later, im so ecited, even Akshat is too! We both cant wait, chote dadu!
Anu: that good!
Sadhna: Bade Dadu, ap ko kya lagtha hai, me pink sharara pehno yah purple pehno?
Mr. Bajaj: Purple!
Mukti: PREM!!!! AAO!
Prem: Coming! He leaves.
Sadhna: Ap ko kya lagtha hai, chote dadu?
Anu: Purple, kyunki sari larkiyan pink ya red pehnti hain, toh purple!
Sadhna: Ok good choice, I was going to go with purple too!

Office

Pranay: Excuse me, im here for a job interview.
Res: Ok one minute. Just have a seat.
Pranay: Ok,
Res: Ma'am, someone is here for an interview,
"Call him in"
Res: Ok ma'am, you may go.
On his way in he bumps into the boss.
Pranay: Sorry! I didn't mean to.
"Its ok, ill just wash it off."
Pranay: ok, he leaves.
The man looks up to be "Sharad."
Pranay knocks on the door.
"Come in"
Pranay enters. As soon as he enters he feels he got something he had lost a long time ago.
Pranay: Ma'am im here for an interview.
"Have a seat"
Pranay takes a seat.
Girl: You're not that bad of a guy, what's your name?
Pranay: Kyun?
Girl: My names JC or J.A.Y.C.E.E. call me any ways, I don't care at least there the same, and she starts laughing.
Pranay: Mein ayahn sirf apne interview ke liye aya hoon.
JC: toh you're an Indian type of boy, Typically Indian.
Pranay: At least I've been taught my sanskar unlike you, its seems like you haven't been taught.
JC: No I haven't, do you have a problem? Are you here for an interview or a fight?
Pranay: An interview but I don't think I want to work in this H***, Ill be leaving.
He's walking out when she grabs his hand, he feels like Kiran is holding his hand, like how she used to do when they were little. He looks back at her.
Pranay (thinks): Why do I feel as if Kiran is holding my hand, confused.
Pranay: I've got better places to work then here. Im going to leave.
JC: we don't let people leave that easy.
Pranay: Ok, I will only work here if you don't make it H*** for me here.
JC: Is it already H*** for you?
Pranay: Do u think I would ask if it wasn't?
JC: Don't worry. I'll make sure it's a fairy land just for you.
Pranay makes a disgusted face, and then sits down.
JC: wow our first meeting and we start off fighting, why don't we become friends? Extending her arm,
Pranay: No thanks, can we start?
JC: ok, I like you I really do! Your like a older brother always fighting with the chote bache, can I know your name now?!
Pranay: Pranay Bajaj.
JC: Oh so your Mr. Rishab Bajaj's son?
Pranay: NO, im not.
JC: Oh then Mr. Prem Bajaj's son right?
Pranay: yes I am, do u have a problem?
JC: No wonder you look a lot like him. You know what, Pranay doesn't suite you, more like sexy would suite you.
Pranay: If you just said that im like a older brother then don't you think your older brother would feel like an idiot having his sister call him that?
JC: Who ever said I have a brother? I don't! That's why I get all the companies, money, clothes, everything!
Pranay: I feel… never mind, can we go on with the interview?
So she goes on with it and Pranay get the job.



Pranay goes home.
Mukti: kaisa tha interview?
Pranay: Great I got the job, not talking about the incident that had happened there.
Mukti: Good for you. Pehla din kaab hai?
Pranay: Kaal.
Mukti: Oh good.
Pranay: Mein nah…
"Roshan keh ghar ja raha hoon?"
Pranay turns to see Roshan.
Pranay: Roshan! Dude how are you?
Roshan: Ok, mein baas na, job dundh raha hoon. Ma neh kaha gar mein ghar job ke saaah nahi geya toh…
Pranay: why don't you work where im woking.
Roshan: Where do you work?
Pranay: Um, the company is called, Gupta Publications.
Roshan: Sure, but I need it quick, before I go home.
Pranay: Don't worry ill get u the job today, (in his mind: Hopefully)
Roshan: lets go man.
Pranay: Ok, their about to leave when all of a sudden out of no where,
Prem: Mukti! Mein tumhe kaab she dundh raha hoon, he gives her a hug and a kiss.
Mukti (whispers): Kya baat hai?
"Ek minute, Ek minute!"
They look in the direction where the voices were coming from and see Omi and Sneha,
Sneha: Tum logh kya kar rahe the?
Omi: Kahin… voh toh nahi kar rahe they?
Prem: Ummm….
Pranay: Aur hamare samne?
Roshan: Chi.
Mukti blushed and ran upstairs.
Prem smiles…
Prem: Tum logh ek minute keh liye nahi chor sakte, nah?
Sneha: Nope after all you're my little brother, I have to keep an eye on you!
Omi: Sorry, man,
hope you liked it so far...
please comment
other half will be updateed soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great update....please continiue sooon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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GR8 update. So Pranay has met Kiran. Kewl, wonder if he is gonna find out that she is his sister. Continue soon please

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