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ok ill get that to happen in m next part, he'll call hem that next! hopefully after eid ill update so keep waiting
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Part 5

The next day.

Everyone is getting ready for the party
Mukti: Prem! Come downstairs!
Prem sneaks up to Mukti and scares her from behind,
Prem: Boo!
Mukti: Ahh! Preeeem….
Prem: Ummah! He kisses her.
Muukti: Prem! Bache dekhen ge.
Prem slides his finger down the side of her face: Toh Kya, dekh ne do.
Mukti: Chotti Ma… She see Prerna.
Prem: Mujhe koi farak nahi partha ke kaun aye ga, chahe voh bache ho, ya mother India, ya daddy cool.
Mukti: Voh Chotti Maa…
Prem: Mein Ne Kaha naa… mujhe… he turns around cause he feels a tap on his shoulder.
Prem: Mother…
Prerna makes a expression like shes mad.
Prem: What did I do?
Prerna: Tu ne kya kiya, yeh pooch rahe ho mujhe?
Mukti starts laughing,
Prem: Mukti!!!! 😡 😡
He starts chasing her.
Prerna: Prem tu yeh kya ar raha hai, apne … nahi sudre ga yeh!
Mukti: Prem! Ruko Prem!
Shes about to trip when Prem catches her, they stare at each other.
Mr. Bajaj comes there.
Mr. Bajaj: Sorry to burst your romancing bubble but, kya tum log ko kuch aur bhi karma hai?
Prem: No…
Mr. Bajaj: 😡 😡
Prem: Yes…
Mr. Bajaj: Prem, tu kitna pagal ho ge ya hai.
Prem: Voh to hoon, Mukti ke pyaar mein.
Prem: Did I just say that out loud?
Mukti nods.
Prem: Shit!
Mukti starts walking towards the living room where they first were.

Living room.

Pranay: Mumma Mujhe help chahiye.
Mukti: Papa she pooch, mujhe kaam karma hai.
Pranay: Ok, He sees Prem coming towards him.
Pranay: Pops! I need…
Prem: Wait, Wait, Wait! What did u just say?
Pranay: Pops, I need…
Prem: pops?
Pranay: pops…
Prem: pops kya hai?
Pranay: A way of saying papa,
Prem: Oh really, tell me more so I can pick one.
Pranay: ok, ummm, pops,
Prem: Nah too poppy!
Pranay: Daddy?
Prem: Nope,
Pranay: dad?
Prem: nope same as daddy,
Pranay: Aboo
Prem: Nah,
Pranay: baba?
Prem: Too old.
Pranay: I don't got anymore,
Prem: I like Papa,
Pranay: Ok,

Prem goes up to Mukti.
Prem: Meri moti si patni, kaha thi tum?
Mukti: you so mean!
Prem: What? Kuch mahino mein toh tum moti hi toh hogi nah,
Mukti: Premmmmmm that's mean.
Prem: bh Dekho kitne English bol rahi ho tum!
Mukti: O K Fine we all can speak English but only sometimes, happy?
Kiran: ME, ME, you know why?
Mukti: Why?
Kiran: Kyun Ki Tanner ah raha hai tomorrow party keh liye.
Mukti: Good ke tumari boy friend ah raha hai.
Kiran: Hes not my boyfriend.
Mukti: Haan Hai!
Prerna and Mr. Bajaj come,
Prem: Meri beti ka koyi boyfriend nahi ho sakta, sirf Pranay ke ho saktein hain!
Pranay: Why I don't want and girl friend, shirl friend,
Prerna: Kyun nahi, agar Prem ke ho saktein hain to tumare nahi?
Pranay and Kiran: KYA! Papa ke girl friends they?
Prem: haan Of course, a lot!
Mukti: Premm! She throws a pillow at him!
Prem: aih! Tum neh mujhe mara, Prem Prerna Sharma, Yah Prem Bajaj, yah Prem Basu ko mara!
Everyone starts laughing at him.

End of Part 5

Part 6

Party!

Everyone is coming in…

Mukti wears this,
Kiran wears this,
Prem wears this,
Pranay wears this,
Prerna wears this,
Mr. Bajaj wears this,

Tanner: This music is so weird!
Kiran: It's because it's Hindi!
Prerna: Goes on stage,
Kiran: that's my dadi, I mean my grand mom,
Tanner: Even she looks so young!
Prerna: Hello everybody, I hope you guys are having a fun time! We're going to play a game. Everyone's name is in a jar, except for kids, sorry kids, and one at a time some ones name will be pulled out and you will have to do a dance, which the song will be in a different jar that you have to choose from! Ok so let's start!
Mr. Bajaj: Ok the first name… names, there is 2 people's names on here, Prem and Mukti.
The light goes on Prem and Mukti.
Prerna: Come and pick a song,
Prem: Go Mukti go pick a song.
Mukti picks " Chup Gaye Badlii mein"
Prerna: Chup Gaye Badlii Mein, ok so start!

Mukti: Chhup Gaye Sari Tare Badlo Mein Chhup Gaye. Chhup Gaye Voh Nazare Badlo Mein Chup Gaye, Aaaaaaaa, Aaaaaaaaa, Aaaaaaaaaaa, Aaaaaaaa, Aaaaaaaaa, Aaaaaaaaaaa,

Prem: Chhup Gaya Badli Mein Jaake, Chand Bhi Sharma Gaya, Chhup Gaya Badli Mein Jaake, Chand Bhi Sharma Gaya
He points at Mukti then they clap together, like how Kajol and Anil do in the song.
Aap Ko Dekha To Phoolon Ko Pasina Aa Gaya

Arey Maaheen Re, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho

Mukti: Aap Ne Yoon Chhed Ke To, Dil Mera Dhadka Diya,
Mukti now points at prem and then puts her hand on her heart.
Aap Ne Yoon Chhed Ke To, Dil Mera Dhadka Diya, Hum Mile To Pyar Karne Ka Mahina Aa Gaya
She hugs him, they clap again.
Arey Maaheen Re, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho
Mukti walks away, and Prem follows, he then grabs her pallo and stops her,
Mukti: Aaaaaaaa, Aaaaaaaaa, Aaaaaaaaaaa,

Prem: Aap Ki Yeh Choodiyan, Humko Jagayen Raat Bhar
He gingles her chorriyan,
Mukti: Aap Ki Yeh Boliyan, Humko Satayen Raat Bhar
Prem: Aap Ki Yeh Choodiyan, Humko Jagayen Raat Bhar
Mukti: Aap Ki Yeh Boliyan, Humko Satayen Raat Bhar
Prem: Aap Ka Aanchal Udha, Amber Pe Baadal Chha Gaya
Mukti: Hum Mile To Pyar Karne Ka Mahina Aa Gaya
Mukti: Arey Maaheen haai, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho

Prem does close dancing with her then twirls her around, fake snow falls on them,

Mukti: Aankhon Se Neenden Churaana, Koi Seekhe Aap Se
Prem: Pyar Mein Paagal Banana, Koi Seekhe Aap Se
Mukti:Aankhon Se Neenden Churaana, Koi Seekhe Aap Se
Prem: Pyar Mein Paagal Banana, Koi Seekhe Aap Se
Mukti: Aap Ki Chaahat Ka Ye Andaz Humko Bha Gaya
Prem: Aap Ko Dekha To Phoolon Ko Pasina Aa Gaya
Mukti: Arey Maaheen Haai, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho, Ho
They clap together again!
Prem: Chhup Gaya Badli Mein Jaake...
Prem grabs her hand
Mukti: Mmmmmmhmmmmmmmhmmmmm
Mukti turns around
Prem: Chhup Gaya Badli Mein Jaake...
Prem starts close dancing with her again,
Mukti: Mmmmmmhmmmmmmmhmmmmm
Mukti rests her head on his chest.

Everyone claps.
Tanner: Your parents look sooooooooo good together. The song suited them so much, even though I didn't understand a thing!
Kiran: Hah, Yeah, the song was a lot about love!
Prerna: Ok, now in the jar again, weird prem and mukti again!?
Prem: yeh Kya? Hum neh toh abhi dance toh kya tha, aur ap ne kaha ke humara naam sirf ek baar hi aye ga!
Prerna couldn't stop her laughter
Mr. Bajaj: Sorry Prem… Mukti, we made another jar with only your names in it,
Mukti: That's cheating! Now you and Chotti Maa have to dance to, and this time u wont pick the song I will!
Prem and mukti pull Prerna and Mr. Bajaj to the middle of the floor,
Mukti: and I pick the song, Yeh Dil to Mila Hai!

Prerna: Yeh dil to mila hai, sirf tujhe pyar karne ke liye, yeh aankhen mili hain, bas tera deedar karne ke liye, tauba meri tauba, socha bhi nahi tha, aisa haal hoga ishq mein.

Mr. Bajaj: Yeh dil to mila hai, sirf tujhe pyar karne ke liye, yeh aankhen mili hain, bas tera deedar karne ke liye, tauba meri tauba
socha bhi nahi tha, aisa haal hoga ishq mein.

Prerna: Yeh dil to mila hai, sirf tujhe pyar karne ke liye

Mr. Bajaj: Yeh aankhen mili hain, bas tera deedar karne ke liye.
Prerna: Kyun jaane kyun, kyun lagi lagan, badla mizaaj bekhabar hai mann, ishq ka hai yeh, kaun sa makaam, na mile jahan ek pal araam, bechain karne laga hai yeh deewanapan, yeh dhadkan mili hai, sirf tujhe pyar karne ke liye, yeh aankhen mili hain, bas tera deedar karne ke liye.

Mr.Bajaj: Pyar ki gali, khwaab ka shehar, har jagaa tujhe, dekhe hai nazar, zor na chale, jazbaat par, de diye tujhe jaan-o-jigar
tere bina ab to mushkil hai, mera guzar, yeh saansein mili hain, sirf tujhe pyar karne ke liye, yeh aankhein mili hain, bas tera deedar karne ke liye, tauba meri tauba, socha bhi nahi tha, aisa haal hoga ishq mein, yeh dil to mila hai, sirf tujhe pyar karne ke liye.

Prerna: Sirf tujhe pyar karne ke liye.

Mr.Bajaj: Sirf tujhe pyar karne ke liye.

Everyone had a blast at the party!

Precap:
5 months later!!!

You can see a woman knitting something in a room, then a man walks in the room!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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does no one like this fan fic???
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hey nice update plzz continue soon 😊
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Part 7


You can see a woman knitting something in a room and then a man walks in the room with toys in his hand…

He goes and sits next to her on the bed.

Guy bends down,

Guy: I can hear his heart beat.
Girl smiles and blushes, guy gets up and it's none other then Prem and Mukti in the room.
Prem: seriously! So fast and intense!
Mukti: Stop it, Prem!
Prem: So have you thought of a name?
Mukti: Not really… have you?
Prem: Yup! I thought of Mohit or Ishaan.
Prem's about to give Mukti a hug, when she's like,
Mukti: Ouch, Ouch, Ouch!
Prem: Sorry, sorry, sorry, here one minute.
He does exactly what he does when they have to imaginary scene, when they're married.
He helps Mukti up, but while walking she trips a little and Prem, the hero saves her and they hug.
Prerna: abh choro bhi!
They're still hugging,
Prerna snaps in front of them,
Prem and Mukti: Oh, Mukti turns red and blushes.
Prem: Voh,
Prerna: Pranay, Kiran, Tanner aur uski behin koh chor nah hai.
Prem: Exactly, he points towards her, you stole my words.

Downstairs

Kiran: You know what?!
Tanner: Yeah, what?
Kiran starts talking about things that happened over the weekend.
Tanner just stares at her while she's talking. Prem sees this and goes up to them.
Kiran notices that tanner wasn't paying any attention so she tried to snap,
Prem: What's happening here?
Tanner gets out of his small world,
Prem: Huh?
Tanner: nothing Mr. B.
Prem: Ok then, let's go, were getting late.
Sabrina, Tanners sister: Ok let's go.
Soon Prem drops the kids off and goes back home.

Prem and Mukti's room

Prem comes in singing a song,
Prem: Yeh dil to mila hai, sirf tujhe pyaar karne ke liye, yeh ankeen mili hain, bas tera dedar karne keh liye…
Mukti: Aww that was sweet, mere liye gaya tha?
Prem: No, mein toh sirf gar aha tha.
Mukti: How mean! She turns around facing the other way.
Prem walks over to her, goes near her ear and says,
Prem: Because your way more, aapko dekha toh Phoolo koh pasina ageya,
Mukti: Let me guess, gana tha?
Prem: Hah, how'd you know? But it was also for you!
Mukti: Aw…… so sweet…
Prem: Voh toh mein hoon hi!
Prerna: Mukti, Mukti!
Mukti: haan, choti maa?
Prerna: are kuch nahi, mein neh toh dekh nah tha ke tu kaisi hai,
Mukti: Aap har din yehi pooch thi hain aur mera jawab kya hota hai?
Prerna: theek hoon Choti Maa, imitates her,
Mukti: Abh mein Jaun?
Prerna: haan jao.
Prem: Toh Mukti… as he sat on the bed.
Mukti: Premmm…
Prem: Mein soch raha tha keh tum neh select kiya ek naam?
Mukti: haan, mein neh chun liya hai,
Prem: Kaun sah? You know I like Ishaan better then Mohit,
Mukti: Me too. I was going to choose Ishaan. She sits on the bed beside him.
Prem: But I really like Prem, but too bad, I'm already named that, other wise he could have had it.
Mukti smiles, then fades away: Ouch!
Prem: Kya Hua?? Worried…
Mukti: Ouch, yeh mujhe maar raha hai!
Prem: really!? Cool, I want to hear!Mukti: Hes giving me pain and you want to hear?
Prem: Of course! He bends down and listens.
Mr.Bajaj is watching this and smiles.
Mr. Bajaj: Yeh Kya ho raha hai aree, Yeh kya ho raha hai? He sings it.
Prem quickly got up as soon as he heard the first part of "yeh"
Mr. Bajaj: I watched the whole thing, don't worry!
Prem: ah, daddy coo… you know what, that's why I call you daddy cool, because you're so cool!
Mr. Bajaj laughs: That was a very good off track topic you thought of, Prem.
Mukti: I'll be right back, she runs out of the room blushing.
Prem thinks of a way to get out.
Prem: MUKTI…MUKTI!!! COME BACK HERE!
He also gets up and is 'about' to leave when…
Mr. Bajaj: Na, Na, Na, you wont go anywhere.
Prem: What? Paar main ne kuch nahi kya, Mukti… sorry the baby made me do that!
Mr. Bajaj: Chalo mein ne chor diya! Jao, bhago!
Prem ran out of the room like he was being chased by a lion going for its precious steak!

Living Room

Prerna: Mukti, Thora sa bet bhi jao.
Mukti: Mein toh bet ne ke liye…
Prem: MUKTI! I'M COMING!
Mukti: Mein ne shopping karne jana hai, phir bacho ko utha ke wapas aoun gi, bye
So Mukti leaves right away!
Prem comes
Prem: Mukti kidar gayi?
Prerna: Shopping karne, bacho ko utha ke wapas aye gi.
Prem: makes a sad face,

End of part 7, hope you enjoyed it, please comment! Atleast five comments till the next one!
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really nice update.....continue s00n 😛
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hey i loved it...plz cont. soon!
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Part 8

Mukti was finding gifts for Kiran's upcoming birthday. Also she was looking for a gift for the others.

Mukti: Yeh red dress mujh paar… nahi mein sari hi choose karu gi
She sees a store with lots of teddy bears and so she buys a teddy bear for Kiran. She also sees a Indian store with lots of Ritesh Deshmukh posters so she buys her 2 of his posters. She bought Prem a new chain along with a hoddy and pants. She bought Pranay new skater shoes and a watch also a chain to make it look nice. She bought Prerna a new necklace along with a sari and Mr. Bajaj a new watch and a suit. She bought herself 2 new sari's 1 Prem's favorite color, red and one purple. She was shopping when she saw Prerna and Mr. Bajaj. Little did she know Prem was right behind her!

Prem taps her because he thought it would be her. Mukti turned around to see Prem.
Mukti: TUM!? Prem, tum yaha kya kare rahe ho, yahan?
Prem: Kiran ke birthday keh liye shopping kar raha tha.
Mukti: oh,
Prerna and Mr.Bajaj are watching this from up on the second level.
Prem: Come on, lets shop together.
Mukti: only if you promise you won't bug me!
Prem: Promise, now lets go.
Mukti: OK mere Pyaare se pati!
Prem: What did you call me? Can u say that again? Please??? I beg of you!
Mukti: Nahi abh chalo!
Prem and Mukti are shopping when Prem starts flirting with her, he puts his arm around her, then he hugs her then starts kissing her. People start watching…
Mukti: Prem baas logh dekh rahe hain!
Someone: Hum Bhi dekh rahe hain.
Prem and Mukti turn around to see who it was and it was Prerna and Mr. Bajaj.
Prem sort of giggles and Mukti blushes
Prem: Hah, what you guys saw was different, we were…
Mr. Bajaj: Were?
Prem turns side ways (whispers): hugging, kissing, fighting, he turns back,
Prem: Got nothing,
Prerna, Mr. Bajaj and Mukti laugh at his silliness, but they didn't know that something or someone was watching them, keeping an eye on them.

End of part 8 hope you liked it, please comment!

Luv, Kiran
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice update.....plzzz continue soon 😊
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#30
hey really nice!!!
cute n sweet fanfic!!
Keep up da work!

Plz cont. soon!
Love,
PoocHii.

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