Pyar Hum Ko Bhi Hai-FF- P. 12 PG. 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey, I'm writing a fan fic on Prem and Mukti, its gonna be a part 2 to my other fan fic, Tera Mera Milna, i hope you will like it... so here is the....

Character Sketch


Prem- he is married to Mukti, obviously, he loves her more than his life. Prem likes bugging Mukti allot, and he also like bugging Kiran and Pranay (kids). Prem goes to office only of Mondays, Tuesdays and Wednesdays, but once in a while he doesn't go, just to spend time with Mukti and their kids


Mukti- Married to Prem, loves him allot, shes caring, loving and very intelligent. She gave birth to 2 very loving children, Pranay and Kiran, who she and Prem love so much!


Pranay- he is going to be played by Gaurav Khanna, but right now he is way younger, like 8 years old right now, but im just letting u know how hes going to look like after. He likes actually loves bugging his sister, Kiran. He acts allot like Prem, but he loves Mukti so much, he follows Mukti everywhere and does everything with her. Even though he bugs Kiran allot he still loves her so much!

Kiran- 5 years old right now, she is MADLY IN LOVE with Ritesh Deshmukh, she is his biggest fan! She has a crush on this guy at school,(who's picture i will post soon but not now), his name is Tanner, she really likes this guy!!! She is the total opposite of Pranay, she acts allot like Mukti, but shes follows Prem everywhere he goes! well not everywhere, but he wants to go... i don't know but she will follow him.

Starts like this...

Mukti is goes to someones room, his room is all blue, he loves that color! She goes to the bed and pulls the covers off, and sees a inosent little kid sleeping on the bed, its Pranay.
Mukti: Pranay, beta, utho!, shes going to open the curtains when pranay jumps out of bed and scares her.
Pranay: BOO! hah! he starts laughing.
Mukti: Pranay, tum neh mujhe toh dara diya tha!
Pranay: Voh toh mein har waqt kar tha hoon! she laughs and runs to the washroom to get brush his teeth, once he gets out,
Pranay: Mumma ap chali nahi? mein neh change kar na hai!
Mukti: Toh mein tumari mamma hoon, tum mere samne change nahi kar sakthe?
Pranay: Nahi! abh jaye...
Mukti: Ok beta ja rahi hoon.
Pranay: By, Bye mumma!
Mukti leaves to a little girls room, her room is all Light blue! She loves that color, plus this room if filled with pictures of none other than Rithesh Deshmukhs.
couple pics i got of him.


Mukti: Kiran! Utho!
Kiran: Mamma, mein utho hui hoon already!
Mukti: Oh, ut gai?
Kiran: Haan Mamma.
Mukti: Abh Challo, pappa ko utao, Pranay ke sath.
Kiran: Ok, mein jah rahi hoon,

So both Pranay and Kiran walk slowly in to Prem and Mukti's room... slowly walk on to of him, grab pillows and start hitting him with it!
Prem: AHHH!

Hope you will like my fan fic when it starts... please post comments!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmmmmm.......nice start 😊
u should continue this ff 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg i love it whats ur name bab u have 2 carry on wiv it i like the way u have all the pcs 2 😳
bless ya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww thts sooo cute....actually i would like some PM scenes 😳 lol...love it! continue ur ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok so here is part 2

Prem: AHHH! he gets up.
Kiran: Abh Ap ut jaye toh abh ap ko hummein kiss karna parega!
Pranay: Haan!
Mukti comes in.
Prem kisses Pranay and Kiran, Mukti comes and sits beside Prem.
Prem: Abh Tumari bari? revering to Mukti.
Mukti: ok, she grabs a pillow without Prem knowing.
and when hes about to kiss Mukti she puts the pillow in the way.
Prem: OMG,
Pranay: Hahahhahhah
Kiran: Good one mamma!
Prem: Good one Mamma ki bachi! He starts tickling her!
Kiran: Papa! hahha, stop papa! hahhahahaha
Pranay: Abh chalein, Kiran? Mumma aur Papa ko akele rehne dein aur kaillein.
Kiran: Haan Chalein?
Pranay: Chalo.
They Leave.
Prem: Mukti, im going to pay you back on that one.
Mukti: really how?
Prem: i cant tell you!
Mukti: Oh really?
Prem: Yes
Mukti: R u sure?
Prem: definite!
Mukti: Ok then! Mein jah rahi hoon!
Prem: Ab.ba..ba, kidar?
Mukti: Kana Bananey!
Prem: Ok good Mujhe bhook lagh rahi thi!
Mukti: Mein tumare liya nahi bana rahi!
Prem: WHAT!
Mukti: Haan and she leaves
Prem goes and gets ready, he wears black hoody with a red t-shirt underneath, like what hes wearing here...

Mukti is wearing a beautiful sari...

Kiran is wearing a cute green dress...

Pranay wears a black hoody


At The Table,

Kiran: Papa keh liye Khanna kyun nahi hai?
Mukti: Kyun Ki, Mamma, papa seh naraz hai.
Pranay: What! Why?
Prem coming down the stairs...
Prem: Kyun Ki, papa neh mamma ki feeling hurt ki, am i right?
Mukti just glances at Prem then back at her food.
Prem comes to the table and sits next to Pranay.
Prem: Can my sweet heart darling get me some water?
Kiran: Sure Papa... par ek mint, ap sure hain ke ap ko pani hi chahiye, ya jucie?
Prem: mujhe pani hi chahiye
she brings him water.
Prem: mujhe haar waqt juice hi toh chahiye kiran, abh mujhe khud hi jana hoga
Kiran: What, par mein neh aps seh poocha tha aur ap neh...
Prem: dont worry, mein toh sirf mazak kar raha tha
Kiran: voh bohut acha nahi tha!
Mukti: tumari kindergarten ki keh liya janne ka waqt ho gaya hai, aur Pranay, school bhi jana hai,jaldi school bag tiyar karo.
Prem: Haan, mein ne toh tiyaar kar diya tha, yesturday.
Mukit: Kiran, baal banao.
Kiran: ek mint mamma, mujhe ponie leke ane do
Mukti: Ok jaldi.
Kiran: ok, mein abhi ayee.
Pranay: Mein abhi ayaa.
He goes upstair with Kiran, Mukti and Prem suspect something so they go up too.
Pranay: Finaly we get to speak english, i got tired speaking our language.
Kiran: me too!
Mukti+Prem: Ahem Ahem...
Mukti: Now that were here, i guess you guys could speak a little english, but not alot, then we will forget our lanuage right, prem?
Prem was thinking of a song...:ah, what?... oh Right!
Mukti: abh dekho apne papa koh, voh bhi nah!
Kiran: Haan, voh bhi nah!
Prem: Kiran Ki Bachi! he picks her up.
Prem: Abh chalein, hum jaye ge car mein aur... he whispers in her ear, chocolate doun ga.
Mukti: Kya do ge?
Prem: Kuch nahi and he runs with Kiran.
Mukti: Abh chalo, der ho jaye gi.
Pranay: lets go mommy.
Mukti looks at him.
Pranay: Ap neh toh hi kaka that keh hum english bhi bol sakthe hain right? Now that were in canada?
Mukti: Fine chalo.
they all get in the car.
Kiran all of a sudden remember the guy at her school, hes new, his name was Tanner, (he will be playing an important role in this fan fic too. but i dont have a pic of him yet so i cant get his pic yet. its at school on the computer there.)he looked so cute! she thought.
Kiran: Jaldi chalein. mujhe jaldi jana hai!
Prem: Kyun? koi "boy" friend?
Kiran: NOOO! Paar Jaldi!
Prem: OK! Ok!
Finaly they get to school,

Kidergaten.

Prem takes her inside.
Tanner sees him...
Tanner: Umm, is this your daddy?
Kiran was shocked he was talking to him.
Kiran: Y..Y..Ya he is my daddy.
Tanner: Oh, he looks so young, my daddy looks so old!
Kiran: hah.
Prem kneals down.
Prem: Hey little kiddo.
Tanner: Hi mr...
Prem: Call me Prem...
Tanner: Pram?
Prem: no Prem, he starts getting busy in helping him pronounce his name.
Mukti Comes.
Mukti: abh is Prem koh Kya hua?
Prem: No Preeeem.
Tanner: Praeeem.
Prem: noo noo noo.
Mukti and Kiran laugh.
Tanner looks back at Kiran,
Tanner: Um, sorry mr.P i cant prononc you name so i think i should stop. dont you fink?
Prem: I guess you could.
tanner is about to leave...
Tanner: Hey, whats your name? i never asked.
Kiran: My name?
Tanner: Yes.
Mukti: Her name is Kiran.
Tanner: Oh Hi, Keyran,i hope i prononced it right.
Kiran: You didnt but its ok, just spell it K.I.R.A.N ok?
Tanner: Ok. They both smile. well Kiran actually blushes.
Mukti: Ha... Kiran? yeh kya?
Prem: Haan kya hua?
Kiran: Kya?
Mukti: Tumare gaal toh laal ho rahe hain.
kiran: KYA?
Prem: Kahien tumhe usse Prem toh nahi hua?
Kiran: Kya batein kar rahe hain ap log bhi nah, jaye, abh mujhe kinderaten keh liye jana hai.
Prem: Hah,ok then lets go Mukti, we also have something to do at home right?
Mukti: Hah, so funny, no... any ways, Kiran hum rice kah rahe hain at dinner... tumari favorite rice ok?
Kiran: Really!? Yeah!
Mukti: Abh lets go, ok by kiran.

Prem and Mukti go home.

Hope you liked Part 2, please commment!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gr8 update........plzzz continue soo00n 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow bab u have to carry on i thought prem is going to be the OH MY DAUGHTER KIND OF FATHER lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hah, im gonna continue tonight but im only home for lunch so after school i will update! 😊 ttyl! bye!

Luv ya, kiran
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Posted: 17 years ago
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The kids are so cute...
Please continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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continue soon! 😃
great one! 👍🏼

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