Chand Sa Roshan Chera - Page 8

great update!! i lovedd it!!! plz cont soon!! 😃

Its great continue soon!!! 👏 👏

awesome update 👏 hope prem chooses mukti as his valentine 😳 update soon 😉

Good news for you guys,I have a one week off from school.

Anyways this update was suppose to be post on Wednesday,but i couldn't make it.I was enjoying the weather,since it snowed here in New York,and i love snow!

Valentine DAY!

The day when by fast.The two families Bajaj and Virini has gathered to spend their valentine together.They are all sitting down enjoying their selves except for face!

Mukti-Prem what happen to you?
Prem-hona kya hai.Isn't this boring?
Mukti-no it's fun.
Prem-Kya yaar.I cancelled my date for this
Mukti-tumay kis ne kaha tha cancel karne ko
Prem-Mom ne.You know aghar na karta na to phir mujhe jootay parne tey
Mukti laughs-That's funny
Prem-Mukti hum kya burya logon(Old people) ke saath betay hain
Mukti-Prem ye hamarey parents hainPrem-phir bhi.Waisey Mukti aaj tum bhuri nahi lag rahi
Rahul-I know right.Aaj to hamari Pari bilkul

Sharman(He didn't let Rahul finish his sentence)-Witch lag rahi hai.Hai na Rahul
Akhash-Bad Joke!
Rahul-meri behan ke barey mein yeh sab kahan na to phir tu gaya Sharman merey hathon.
Sharman-Okay Okay I'm sorry.The truth is my sister looks like an angel.
Mukti-Now that's like my brother.(She gives him a kiss)
Nishant,Rahul,and Akhash-what about us Mukti?Don't you love us!
Mukti-okay.(She gets up from her chair and kisses each one of her brother)
Sneha-Oh how cute!Kaash meray bhai bhi(by that she meant Prem)
Prem-aur meri behan bhi aisey hoti

Sneha-Hey Prem that's mean
PREM-aur jo tum ne kahan woh mean nahi tha Kya?
Sneha-mein to mazzak kar rahi to.You are the best brother!
Mukti-that's not true.Meray bhai duniya ke sab se acha bhai hain
Sharman-Guys lets not fight over this
Prem-Mukti wanna dance?

Mukti-Sure.

They go on to a dance floor.
Mukti-you know PREM tum bhi aaj kuch buray nahi lag rahe
Prem-mein to rozana sexy lagta hun.


On the background the Song Phela Nasha is playing!

Prem-Mukti tum khoobsurat ho.Tumara cute sa nose(Tracing her nose),tumharey baal,aur jab tum ghusa hoti ho to aur bhi khoobsurat.
Mukti doesn't know what to say,she finally decided to say Thanks.
Mukti-thanks Prem

Pehla Nasha
Pehla Khumaar
Naya Pyaar Hai Naya Intezaar
Kar Loon Main Kya Apna Haal
Aye Dil-e-bekaraar
Mere Dil-e-bekaraar
Tu Hi Bata
Pehla Nasha
Pehla Khumaar


Udta Hi Firoon In Hawaon Mein Kahin
Ya Main Jhool Jaoon In Ghataon Mein Kahin
Udta Hi Firoon In Hawaon Mein Kahin
Ya Main Jhool Jaoon In Ghataon Mein Kahin
Ek Kar Doon Aasmaan Zameen
Kaho Yaaron Kya Karoon Kya Nahin

Pehla Nasha
Pehla Khumaar
Naya Pyaar Hai Naya Intezaar
Kar Loon Main Kya Apna Haal
Aye Dil-e-bekaraar
Mere Dil-e-bekaraar
Tu Hi Bata

Pehla Nasha
Pehla Khumaar



Both of them are lost in each other,meanwhile Neha and Sneha are watching them.
Neha-Kitney achey lagtey hain na dono saath

Sneha-yes they make a great couple

Rahul interrupts them-Bhabi Really Bad.Aap Pari pe spy kar rahi ho

Nishant-Yes really bad.Kisi ki ko chori chori nahi dektey
Neha-Nishant we are not spying them.
Sneha-hum to sirf uney dekh rahe they
Rahul-phir bhi really bad
Nishant-Neha tum merey saath chalo.Khabi meray sey bhi baatein kar liya karon.Baatein nahi to phir Romance
Neha-Nishant!!!!

Back to Prem and Mukti.They are frozen like statues,still where they were before.

Usne Baat Ki Kuchh Aise Dhang Se
Sapne De Gaya Vo Hazaaron Range Ke
Usne Baat Ki Kuchh Aise Dhang Se
Sapne De Gaya Vo Hazaaron Range Ke
Reh Jaoon Jaise Main Haar Ke
Aur Choome Vo Mujhe Pyaar Se

Pehla Nasha
Pehla Khumaar
Naya Pyaar Hai Naya Intezaar
Kar Loon Main Kya Apna Haal
Aye Dil-e-bekaraar
Mere Dil-e-bekaraar

Eventually Mukti's cellphone rang,Prem who didn't wanted to let her go,had to.
Mukti-Excuse me!
Prem-Sure

Mukti takes the phone outside.
Man-Pari Pari Pari Pari !!!!
Mukti-Oh god you don't how much I miss you
Man-Me too
Mukti-tum abhi tak aaye kyun nahi.Ek hafte ka kaha to aur itney din ho gaye hain and I haven't seen you
Man-Kya karu.NewYork mein Snow parney ki wajah se saari Flight delay ho gaye hain.
Mukti-mujhe nahi pata tumay har haal mein kal yahan pe aana hain
Man-Anything special
Mukti-Yes.Ghar mein pooja hai.And you have to come
Man-Pari it's not possible
Mukti-I don't care.Tumay kal ko aana hai to bus aana hai
Man-God yaar you are so stubborn
Mukti-woh to mein hoon
Man-Koshish karun gha.I might be able to come tomorrow
Mukti-mujhe kuch nahi sun hai.Bye!(She disconnects the phone)

Mukti goes back inside.Everyone is now sitting at the table!
Mukti-Oh bhaiya I'm so happy(Everyone looks at her,wondering what is she so happy about,especially Prem)
Nishant and Neha at the same time-kyun kya hua?
Mukti-He is coming.
Prem thinking-Who is she talking about?
Rahul-kaun Pari?
Mukti-woh hi jis ka mujh kab se intezar tha
Akhash-Pari don't ask riddles
Sharman-jaldi se bhol de na
Mukti-guys at least take a guess
Neha-we all don't know
Damini-Mukti beta ab key bhi do na
Mukti-yes Mom.
(She takes a long gasp and bursts it out)
Mukti-Maa Shoruya aa raha hai.
Neha-Kya Shoruya
Rahul-did he tell he is going to come
Mukti-he said he might be able to come.Depends on the weather.
Sharman-He is not sure.Then why are you so excited about!
Prem in his head-Excatly!!
Mukti-arrey Sharman.Mujhe pata hai Shoruya zaroor aaya gha,no matter what happens.He will come.
Prem-Yeh Shoruya kaun hai Mukti.(He is sort of jealus,since Mukti is so happy about him coming to India)
Mukti-Shoruya mera,Sharman aur siya ka bachpan ka dost.Mera best friend.
Prem-Oh😕(He is a little sad)
Mukti-oh god I can't wait to tell Siya.Woh to khushi ke marey pagal ho jaaye ghi.
Sharman-Hey how come Shoruya ne mujhe call kyun nahi kiya.
Mukti-Stupid tera mobile off hai.Zaara dekh to batana Kitni miss calls hain.
Sharman turns his mobile on.
Sharman-25 miss calls
Mukti-aur yeh sab SHORUYA ki hain
Sharman-I am dead!
Mukti-Maa mein ab ghar chalti hun.
Damini-Kyun Mukti?
Mukti-Maa abhi Siya ko bhi to batana hai.Aur subha ki pooja ki bhi to tayariyan karni hain.
Damini-oh haan.Mein to bhool hi gayi.
Mukti-don't worry MAA,Mein hoon na.I'll do them for you!!
Damini-thank you Mukti beta
Mukti-no problem Maa.Prerna aunty aur Bajaj uncle app ap sab log aayi gha Kal Pooja mein.
Prerna and Bajaj-Zaroor beta.
Mukti-aur haan Prem tum bhi.
Prem-Okay 😊
Mukti-Bye everybody!!(She takes their asharwad)
Mukti-Bye Prem!Bye Sneha.(And she finally leaves)

Don't forget to leave comments!😊

owwww shoruya! hmmm this sounds very interesting! hehe i loves seeing prem jealous! it was a great update maria, and now that you have a week off, try to post more soooon! i also have a week off, so ill be checking for more!

awesome update 👏 was really nice n romantic luved pmz dance pics 😳 can't wait 2 c wat Shoruyaz gonna bring 2 da story hope he is n stays only a friend 2 mukti 😳 update soon 😉

great job!! i loved it!! hmm prem jealous.. 😆 😆
plz cont soon!! 😃

maria its been so long, update soon!

At Mukti's house!

Mukti is pacing up and down in her room,when Neha comes in.

Neha-Mukti kya hua?

Mukti-oh bhabi mujhe need nahi aa rahi (lekin mujhe to bohat a rahi hai🥱)

Neha-Kyun

Mukti-Bhabi Pata nahi😕

Meanwhile at Prem's house.Prem is standing in his window.

Sneha-Prem kya soch rahe ho


Prem-kuch nahi(Prem kis ke barey mein soch rahein ho😉)


Sneha-come on Prem.Tell me what is bothering you

Prem-Its Mukti (Kya baat hai Prem😛 )

Sneha-what about her?

Prem-Yehi ke,It's been quite few days,and she has become a great friend of mind(freinds ya kuch aur😉 )

Back to Mukti
Mukti-Jab bhi mein Prem kai kareeb hoti hun to,I feel different.(that's a good news😃 )

Neha-How do you feel?

Mukti-Bhabi I don't know,ek aisa ehsaas jo lafzon mein describe nahi kar sakte,tumhari aankhen sab kuch keh deti hain.Bhabi i don't know what's happening to me.But it feels magnificent.(Hum sab ko pata hai kya ho raha.Prem se poochon.Uss ka bhi kuch aisa hi haal hai.Kuch To Hua Hai.Kuch Ho Gaya Hai)

Back to Prem!
Sneha-so

Prem-Sneha uss ke andar ek aisi kashish hai ke jo mujhe us ke aur kareeb le jaana chati hai.Dil chata hai ke mein sara din us ke saath bithaon.Sneha mujhe nahi pata ke mujhe kya ho raha hai.I am lost.(Koi baat nahi Prem hum sab samajhte hain.Do Chaar Din Se Lagta Hai Jaise
Sab Kuch Alag Hai.Sab Kuch Naya Hai.Kuch To Hua Hai)

Sneha-Don't worry Prem,I understand everything

Prem-to phir tell me what is it?

Sneha-woh to mein tumey waqt aane pe bata doon ghi(Kahi Sneha Prem ko pyaar to nahi ho gaya)

Prem-can't you tell me now?(😊😊😊Sneha abhi bata do na.Prem intezar nahi kar sakta.Kya karein dil ka mamala hai😊)

Sneha-no abhi bohat der ho chuki hai,subha Mukti ke ghar bhi to jaana hai

Prem-oh yes i forgot.Pooja ke liye

Sneha-that's right.Good night!

Prem-Sleep well!

And back to Mukti:
Mukti-Bhabi Prem is a sweet guy.He is very loving!(We all know.He is a sweetheart😛)

Neha-i know,he is a nice guy!

Mukti-yes Bhabi.Oh shoot bhabi batoon hi batoon mein bhool hi gaye.Subha pooja hai,aur i don't want to be late.(I hate getting up early in the morning for school😡 )

Neha-yes it's getting late.Mein jah rahi hun.Good night!(mein bhi tori hi der mein jaa rahi hun😊)

Mukti-Good night Bhabi.I love you!

Neha-I love you too!

Afternoon at Virani house(Mukti's house).Everyone has gathered for a special pooja.The house is decorated with many flowers everywhere,looking beautiful as ever)

Mukti is talking to Prem on the cellphone-Prem where are you?

Prem-I am on my way

Mukti-Prem you better not be late. (I am always late.😉 even on the first day of school.God what can i do?I am too lazy)

Prem-mein time par aa jaoon gha.

Mukti-You better.Baaki sab log aa chuke hain,sirf ek tum hi gaaybi(disappared) ho.

Prem-Relax Mukti.Woh kya khetein hain "take a chill pill yaar"

Mukti-dekho Prem mein mazaak ke mood mein hai hun. (lagta hai barey ghusse mein hain 😡)

Prem-Hey Mukti apney peeche tu mur ke dekho.Dekho kaun aaya.
She turns around and finds Prem.(lagta hai Mukti khush ho gayi 😊)

Damini shouts out-Mukti beta pooja ka waqt ho gaya hai.

Mukti-coming Mom.

Prem goes and stands next to the others.Sharman is beside him.

Sharman-Hey dude.

Prem-Hi(They both shake hands)

Sharman-so what's up?

Prem-nothing.Yeh pooja kis liye.Anything special!

Sharman-Hamesha ki taran aaj hamarey ghar mein Pooja zaroor hoti hai.Yeh ham sab ke liye khass din hota hai.

Prem-Really?

Sharman-Yes

Prem-that's nice.

Mukti-Maa aaj ki pooja mein karoon

Damini-haan haan kyun nahi

Mukti starts to sing!
Mukti-Aa aa aa aa aa aa, kabhi khushi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Aa aa aa, aa aa aa, aa aa aa aa.

Meri saanson mein tu hai samaaya
Mera jeevan to hai tera saaya
Teri pooja karoon main to har dam
Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Meri saanson mein tu hai samaaya
Mera jeevan to hai tera saaya
Teri pooja karoon main to har dam
Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham

(Prem in his mind-Wow she has a beautiful voice)😉

Mukti-Subh-o-shyaam charno mein diye hum jalaaye

Damini joins her-Dekhe jahan bhi dekhe, tujhko hi paaye

Mukti-Oh, subh-o-shyaam charno mein diye hum jalaaye

Damini-Dekhe jahan bhi dekhe, tujhko hi paaye
In labon pe tera bas tera naam ho

Mukti-Pyaar dil se kabhi bhi na ho kam
Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham

Damini-Yeh ghar nahin hai, mandir hai tera
Is mein sadaa rahe tera baseraa
Khushbuon se teri yeh mahekta rahe
Aaye jaaye bhale koi mausam

(looks like a contest between mother and daughter)

Mukti-Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Mera jeevan to hai tera saaya)
Teri pooja karoon main to har dam
Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham.

Mukti hears footsteps coming towards her.Her heartbeat is increasing every minute.She hands the pooja thali to Damini and runs as fast as she can.

Prem-Mukti ko kya hua?

Sharman-woh aa raha hai

Prem-kaun

Sharman-dekhtey hi jao(who is coming)

Mukti stops in between to dance,she dances just like how Rani Mukrije danced when Sharukh was coming.When the rythym changes,she starts to run again.Everyones eyes is on her,watching her.

Mukti stops excatly on the door,with everyones eye on her.You know just like Jaya Bachan in Khabi Khusi Khabi Gham.She is waiting impatienlty,when the wind strokes in bringing in a young men.The music is still playing on the background,he comes and stops on front of her,but Mukti doesn't even take a minute,she just grabs him in anembrace.Everyone is watching them.They hug for few minutes,with everyone staring at them.Few minutes later they break apart.

Mukti-I knew you would come!

Prem is feeling sort of jealous.

Prem-Yeh kaun hai

Sharman-Jis ka Mukti ko kab se intezar tha

Prem-matlab(he is concerned about her)

Sharman-Woh Shoruya hai.Mukti ka best friend.

Back to Mukti and Shoruya



Shoruya-Tum bhulati aur mein na aata.

Mukti-chalo.

She drags him over to Damini,and damini finishes her pooja.

Damini-Aa aa aa aa aa aa, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham

She hasn't realized that Shourya is here,since she was bus with the Pooja.When she turns around,she is taken surprised.

Damini-Shoruya beta tum!


Shoruya-Badi Mom ghar mein pooja ho aur mein na aoon,aur waisey bhi aata kaisey nahi,Mukti ne jo bulaya tha. 😊

Prem-😡

I have to sleep now!Bye.Tell me if you liked it,tell me the truth.
😊

omg maria that was an awsome update! seriously yaar, i loved it! shourya is such a cutie, looks like he is going to bring a twist to the fanfic, maybe make prem realize he loves mukti 😉 (while getting jealous seeing them together of course!) anyways you gotta update soon, i really wanna know whats going to happen next! and HAPPY HOLI!