Chand Sa Roshan Chera - Page 6

Prateek-Hi Mammo and Hi Mammi
Mukti-Hi Prateek
Kiran-Bua You know I got a 100 out of 100
Mukti-Oh really! 😊
Kiran-I can't wait to tell dad.
Mukti-Nishant bhaiya will be proud of you 👏 .After all you are my niece.
Prem-What do you got Prateek? 😉
Prateek 😔 -Bad grade 😡,mom will kill me

Mukti-don't say that 😕
Prateek-But mammi mujhe bohat bhura grade milla hai.
Mukti bends down to Prateek-kOI baat nahi next time acha grade lekey aanna.
Prateek-I can't,I am dumb 🤔
Mukti-don't worry.Tumhari Mammi hai na,I'll help you!😛
Prateek-Promise!
Mukti-Promise.Now Smile.(She gives him a kiss 😛)
(Prem who was standing right beside them,was staring Mukti the whole time.He knew Mukti loved kids,but this much.Prem continues to stare at her)
Mukti-Kya dek rahe ho Prem 😕
Prem-Yeh hi ke tum bachon se kitna pyaar karti ho.😊
Mukti-bache hote hi itney cute bilkul tumhari taran.😉
Prem-😃
Kiran-Bua I want to eat Kulfi.
Mukti-anything for you jaan!Prem chalo Kulfi kaney chaltey hain.😉
Prem-Okay😊 (They leave for Kulfi)
Mukti-4 kulfi's Please.
Man-Jee.(The man hands each of them Kulfi's.Everybody is enjoying their Kulf's,especially Mukti)
Mukti-hmmmmmm hmmmm this is yummy.
Prem-tum to aisey ka rahi ho jaise phele khabi nahi kayee.
Kiran-Bua hamesha Kulfi aise hi khatin hain.😛
Mukti-I am done!!! (Some of the Kulfi is left on her cheek)
Prem-Mukti tumharay gaal(face) pe tori si kulf lagi hui hai.
(Mukti tries to take it off,but she couldn't)
Mukti-Is it gone?
Prem-No it's still there.
(She tries again but still couldn't make it😳 )
Kids-😆
Prem-Let me try.As he started taking it off,he felt her cold cheeks.Prem didn't wanted to take it off,but he had to)
Mukti-Thank you Prem.
Prem-Your welcome.
Mukti-ab mujhe chalna chaiyey Prem.
Prem-Mukti tumay hamesha janey ki hoti hai Kya❓
Mukti-nahi toh.
Prem-as far as i know yes.
Mukti-aaj nahi Prem,kissi aur din.Not today.Please Prem can i go?
Prem [:x-okay as you wish (He can't refuse her,You know since he is starting to have feelings for her)

Prem is in his room looking through the window.

Prem-Kyun mujhe acha laga when that women thought we were married,our jodi is nice.Why did i liked it?And espically when i was so close to her?Why?Why?

Mukti in her room thinking the same thing?
Mukti-what is happening to me?

The next day has arrive.
Mukti-Bhabi aap meray saath shopping chalein ghi.
Neha-mujhe bohat kaam hai.
Mukti-kya aaj hi sab ko kaam karne hai.
Neha-what do you mean Pari?
Mukti-phele mein ne Nisha ko phone kiya,she said no,then i called Siya,and she also said nooooooooooooo.Aur ab mein ne aap se poocha to app ne bhi naa khe diya.😕
Neha-to ek kaam kar.😆Why don't you ask Prem?
Mukti-woh bhi na kahe gha.
Neha-just call him.
(Mukti calls him)
Prem-Hello?
Mukti-It's me Mukti.
Prem overjoyed-oh hi Mukti.Kaisi ho?
Mukti-mein achi hun?What about you?
Prem-I am cool.😎
Mukti-Kya tum meray saath shopping pe chalo ge? (She crosses her fingers,hoping that he would say yes)
Prem-Okay.
Mukti-Oh Prem you are the best.
Prem-woh to mein hun.
Mukti-then I'll meet you outside the mall.
Neha-He said yes.Right!!!
Mukti hugs her Bhabhi-Yes Bhabi😃

Mukti is waiting outside the mall,few minutes later Prem arrives.
Mukti-Hi Prem.🤗(She hugs him.Prem felt so good hugging her.)
Prem-So where do you want to first?
Mukti-I don't know.She looks around and comes more enthusiastic.
Prem-what happen Mukti?Why are you smiling?
Mukti-Prem woh dekho Pani Puri.Lets go.
Prem-But i have never tasted them.
Mukti-toh ab kar lena?
Prem-Par Par.
Mukti-Par var kuch nahi.Chalo.She drags him.Come on Prem.
Prem-aaannnn Mukti!!!!
Mukti-Bhaiya zara der sari Pani Puri dena.
Prem-I don't want any.
Mukti-no tum meray saath aaye ho to khana hi parey gha.
Prem-Mukti tum bohat ziddi ho.
Mukti-woh to mein hun.
Man-thika dalna hai bitya.
Mukti-sirf tora sa. (The man hands her the Pani Puri's)
Prem-mein ni kah raha.He whispers into her ear-Mukti i don't even know how to eat them?
Mukti-don't worry main hoon na.It's so simple.
Prem-It doesn't look easy.
Mukti-Just dip and eat.She even demonstrates for him.
Prem didn't get any of it.So finally Mukti had to feed him.
Mukti-Kaisin lagi?
Prem-Yum Yum Yum,.Tasty.
Mukti-see once you know it.It's not complicated.
Prem-Mukti tum bohat spicy things kati ho,Just like me.
Mukti and Prem both enjoyed their Pani Puri.

Prem-ab kahan chaley Mukti?
Mukti-Bookstore.
Prem-How boring?
Mukti-chalo na.
Prem-Reading is boring.
Mukti-not when you read love stories and scary books.
Prem-oh i like scary movies.
Mukti-now let me look.

Mukti-Prem you read that book Romeo and Juliet.
Prem-Yah when i was in eight grade.
Mukti-tumay kaisi lagi thi.
Prem-Yaar kya batoon.Gatiya story thi.
Mukti-I know right.So what happens at then end?
Prem-Kya hona tha.Aakhir mein un dono ki shaadi ho jaati hai.
Mukti-Prem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
Prem-what?
Mukti-Kitna jhoot bholtey ho.They both die at the end.(She starts hitting him.)
Prem-Okay okay I was joking.
Mukti continues on hitting him.
Prem-itni zoor se marti ho Mukti.Zara araam se maroo na.
Mukti-Prem.I'm going to kill you.😡

Tell me if you guys liked it.Don't forget to leave comments.

😆 awwwww they are to cute! i love how she fed him pani puri and he said romeo and juliet get married at the end! lol great update hun. plz continue soon!

Originally posted by: Robin_M

😆 awwwww they are to cute! i love how she fed him pani puri and he said romeo and juliet get married at the end! lol great update hun. plz continue soon!

Thanks Robin.I might update tonight.Might,not sure!!!😊

awwwwwwww mukti is so sweet and i luv da way shez always tryin 2 make da kids happy 😳 da last bit was hilarious 😆 i could totally imagine prem tellin mukti a lie n then mukti playfully hittin him 😳 😆 update soon 😉

It's night.Mukti is in her room.
Prem calls Mukti-Can you please come to the hospital?

Mukti-why?Is everything okay?
Prem-Just come as fast as you can? (He hangs up the phone)
Mukti-Maa mujhe jaana hai.
Damini-Kahan?
Mukti-Prem is in the hospital.
Damini-what happen?
Mukti-Woh to us ne mujhe nahi bataya.
Damini-Prerna aur Bajaj bhi yahan nahin hain.Woh log to kuch dino ke liye calculta gaye hain.
Mukti-Maa mein shayad raat ko ghar naa aoon.Aap meri fikr mat karna.I'll be fine.I'll call you and let you now.Bye!!! (She runs out of the house and rushes toward the hospital)

At hospital.Prem is walking in the corridors,Mukti comes running in.
Prem-Thank god Mukti tum aa gayi.
Mukti-Kya hua Prem?
Prem-it's about Sneha.She was serving us dinner,when all of the sudden she fainted.
Mukti-Come Prem lets sit.
Prem is tense-Sneha kuch ho ga to nahi.

Mukti-no she'll be fine.Aghar tum chaho to mein andar jaa ke check kar ke aaon.
Prem-no,tum yahann meray pass hi rako.
Mukti-Relax Prem.Sab kuch teek ho jaaye gha.
Prem is breaking down in Mukti's arm,he lays on her lap-Sneha iss duniya ki sab se achi behan hai,aur mein usay kona nahi chata.
Mukti-Prem tum itna mat socho.She runs her hand through his hair.Soon Prem was fast asleep in Muktis lap.
The doctors comes out.
Mukti-How is she?
Doctor-Fike karne ki koi baat nahi hai Doctor Mukti.
Mukti-But what happened to her?
Doctor-Sneha phir se maa banae wali hai.
Mukti is happy to hear that.She calls her mom.
Mukti-Maa ek good news hai.
Damini-woh kya?
Mukti-Sneha is pregent.
Damini-yeh to bohat achi kabhar hai.
Mukti-I am staying at the hospital tonight.So don't worry!!
Damini-Okay Mukti.Mein abhi Prerna aur Mr.Bajaj ko yeh achi kabhar sunati hun. 😊

It's morning,the birds are chirping.Mukti is sleeping on the chair with Prem in his lap.Prem wakes up.He wanted to yawn,since Mukti was asleep,he couln't move.So he stayed still after a little while Mukti was up.

Mukti-I am Sorry.
Prem-actually Mukti I'm sorry.Kal raat ko mein tumhari god mein hi so gaya.Pata hi nahi chala,kab aankh lag gaye.
Mukti-Koi baat nahi.Waise ab to tum utt sakte ho na.
Prem😳-Yeah.
Mukti-Prem tum phir se mammo baney waley ho.
Prem-Really.😛
Mukti-ahaan😊
Prem-Lets go upto Sneha.(They enter her room)
Mukti-So Sneha kaisa lag raha hai.
Sneha-Great!!!
Prem-I was so worried about you.
Sneha-hamesha kin taran.You know Mukti last time Prateek ki bari Prem ki aise hi halat thi.
Prem-nahi Sneha.
(Doctor comes in)
Doctor-How do you feel now?
Sneha-much better.
Doctor-You know Sneha tumay checkup ke liye nahi aana parey gha.
Prem-Kyun?
Doctor-Doctor Mukti hain na.She is a great doctor.
Prem-so Mukti ab to tum ruzana hamarey ghar ayaa karo ghi.Right?
Mukti-Yes.
Doctor-Mukti you can take a day off today.
Mukti-Thank You!!
Doctor-SO Mukti you are now in charge of Sneha.Ab mein chalti hun.(Doctor leaves)
Prem-to doctor Mukti kya hum jaa saktey hain.
Mukti-Yea Sure.

In the car.
Prem-Phele mein Sneha ko ghar drop kar dun and after that I'll drop you Mukti to your home.
Mukti-jaisey tum kaho.
By the time Prem reached his home,Mukti was asleep.Sneha comes out of the car,now there was only Prem and Mukti left.
Prem-ab kya karoon?

He carefully takes Mukti in his arms and takes her to his room.He placed her on his bed,put the blanket on her.Mukti didn't even where she was.Prem who was sitting beside her,was staring at her beauty.

Prem talking to himself-Mukti you look adorable.(He touches her cheek)
Prem-You are so cute!!😊
Sneha-Prem can you come down here?
Prem-aaya Sneha.(He leaves Mukti and goes upto Sneha)
Prem-kya hua?
Sneha-breakfast time.Mukti kahan gaayi.
Prem-she is sleeping.
Prateek-oh mammi is here.Aur kissi ne mujhe bataya bhi nahi.
Prem-shhh tumhari mammi so rahi hai.Mukti ko disturb mat karna.
Prateek-Okay.Mom,Kal raat ko na Mammi aur mein ne naa sari raat telephone pe bhaat karte rahe.
Prem-But wasn't she sleeping?
Prateek-no she was talking to me.
Prem-Sneha kal raat ko mujhe bohat achi neend aayi.Waise neend mujhe khabi nahi aaye.
Sneha-woh Kyun?
Prem-Pata nahi. (Prem in his mind-Kyun ke Mukti ki bahon mein jo soya tha)

Is it good?Tell me the truth.

Don't forget to leave comments.I'll be waiting!!! 😊

😳 awwww maria that was such a cute update! yay sneha is having another baby! i loved how prem fell asleep in her lap! and what he said at the end, toooo sweet! well he obviously likes mukti now, hope she feels the same way about him! continue soon hun 😊

awwwwwwwww dat was really sweet 😳 pm r da best couple ever 😉 luved da way both pm were behavin with each other sometimes i think there already married 😆 wonder wat will happen afta they get married 😉 update soon 😛

I guess you guys don't like my fanfic.Should i stop? 😭

NOOOO maria, i love your fanfic! pleeeeeease dont stop! you should definately continue...soon plz 😊