Chand Sa Roshan Chera - Page 5

hey just caught up with the last two parts!they're really gud!cant wait for the next one!!

Originally posted by: Robin_M

yay! 2 updates in one day!!! im sooo happy you updated! they were great! very cute! so i cant remember, is nisha muktis neighbor, the best friend that sharman flirts with? anyways loved you updates and cant wait for more prem and mukti scenes! plz continue soon!

Thanks robin for the comment.Nisha is just a freind.Siya is Muktis neighbor,and she is the one who Sharman flirts with.I will continue tonight or later.

Originally posted by: mandy07

awwwwwwwww i'll leave u comment well i've given a pretty short 1 😆 but i'll leave another 1 jus 4 u cuz i luv this ff 😛 n i don't want u 2 be sad after all da hard work u did by updatin this ff n nobody replied 😭 i luved it, luved it, luved it 😳 😳 😳 u've got 2 set pm on a whole lot of dates some with their cute newphew/niece their adorable n da way da act with pm is sooooooooo sweet 😳 😆

Mandy you are so nice.Thanks for the lovely comment.

Guys as you can see,I'm trying to update everyday.

It's morning.Mukti as usual wakes up her brother.And does her chores.

(The whole family is at the Breakfast table,except for Sharman)

Sharman walks in to the room-Good morning eerybody.
Everyone-Morning Sharman.
Sharman-Smells good.
Rahul-Hmmmm Hmmmm Maa aaj nastha bohat acha hai
Damini-Tp phir batoo ke kis ne banya hai.
Akhash-aur kis ne hamari Pari ne banaya hoga.
Nishant-woh hi itna acha khanna banati hai.
Sharman-Maa se bhi acha.Pari to app se bhi do kadam aghe hai Cooking mein Maa.
Mukti(Pari)-acha acha ab meri tareef karna band karo.Mom is better then me.Right PAPA!!
Damini-Yes meri Jaan.
Sharman-arre yeh kya hai?
Mukti-Kya hua Sharman?
Sharman-Pari you know i don't like eating ghoobi ke paratheys.To phir yeh kyaa hai?
Mukti-Sorry Sharman.I forgot.
Sharman-baaqi sab ka tume yaad raha,aur mera bhool gaye.Tu kaisi behan hai.😡
Mukti-tum ghussa mat karo,mein ne banye hain na tumhara favorite aloo ka paratha.
Sharman-why didn't you tell me?
Mukti-kyun ke tum ghusse mein aur bhi cute lagte ho.
Sharman-You know Pari tum duniya ki sab se achi behan ho.The best!!!!
Kiran-Bua I am getting late for school.
Mukti-ek minute Kiran.(She goes up to Damini,Gautum and DADI to take their ashirwad.And kisses her four brothers.
Mukti-Maa shayad aaj aane mein tori se der ho jaaye.Aaaj hospital mein kuch zayada hi kaam hai.
Damini-acha beta.(She leaves,drops kiran to school and finally goes to hospital.)

After the day at the hospital,Mukti is waiting for Kiran.She calls Prem.
Mukti-Prem tum abhi tak aaye nahi.
Prem-Sorry Mukti.I won't be able to come today.
Mukti-Okay😕 She hangs up.Prem is standing right behind her,BUT Mukti doesn't know.Suddenly Prem whispers in Mukti's ear "Boo".She freaks out.
Mukti-Prem!!!!!!!!!! (She starts hitting him,Prem fells on the floor and Mukti on top of her.They are so close to eachother.They are staring at each other's eye.Mukti realizes,and she moves away.
Mukti-Sorry Prem.
Prem-It's kay.
Mukti-by the way tum to nahi aaney waley the.
Prem-I was just joking.
One of the aunties are talking about them-Kini soni jodi hai.Prem and Mukti are hearing this.Then one of them walks upto her.
Aunty-Mukti tu ne shaadi kab ki.Waqi mein bohat sona munda hai Mukti.How come you didn't call us on your shaadi? (Before Prem and Mukti can say anything school bell rings.Kiran and Prateek comes out of the building running.

😆 sach mein, kini soni jodi! lol that was really cute, im glad to see you are trying to update daily. keep it up 😊

awesome update 👏 pm r sooooooooo cute 😳 can't wait 2 read some romantic scenes of em 😳 will be lukin 4ward 2 ur update 😉

Originally posted by: mandy07

awesome update 👏 pm r sooooooooo cute 😳 can't wait 2 read some romantic scenes of em 😳 will be lukin 4ward 2 ur update 😉

Thanks Mandy!!!😊

Originally posted by: bhattyhuda

Thanks Mandy!!!😊

no problem i luv leavin comments 😆 so will da update be long hope itz long😛

👏 👏 👏 Its gr8t continue soon!!