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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guys just before you read this,in this fanfic.I gave Mukti a nickname Pari,so everyone in her family calls her Pari. This fanfic doesn't have any leap,I am making my own,so Prem and Mukti,they don't know eachother.

Chand Sa Roshan Chera
Khete hain ke jahaan pe risthey zayada hotey hain wahan pe har waqt ladi jagharay hotey hain,Par nahi har jaga same thing nahi hoti.Meray parivaar mein aisa nahi hai,hum apni har khushi gham ek dushray se share karte hai.

Girl-To bohat lucky hai Pari ke yeh sab teri aur meri family mein nahi hota.
Pari-Mein janti hun Nisha,but why can't everyone be the same?
Nisha-To chor innn batoon ko.Lets do something cool.
Pari-Par kyaa Nisha.
Nisha-Tu bi na yaar. Hey Idea!!!
Pari-What is it?
Nisha-Why don't you show me show your family pictures?
Pari-Great,mein abhi laati hun.Here it is
Nisha-wohh it's heavy.

The two girls start to open the album,which was full of with memories.
Pari-Just before you say anything,I just want to tell you Nisha.I have organized all of these pictures.It starts from my grandma.
Nisha-okay,just open it.


Pari-this is my dadi.
Nisha-She looks young here.
Pari-Its because we were going to a wedding.
Nisha-No wonder why.
Pari-Now lets move on.It's my mother turn.

Nisha-aunty kitni khush lag rahi hain.
Pari-woh to hai.Ab meray karoos Papa ki barhi.

Pari-Papa kitne young lag rahe.Aur ab to inn ke paas white hair hain.
Nisha-so sad,don't worry my dads hair is white also. They both laugh😆
Pari-Hey Nisha yeh wali Picture dekh,meray Papa kitney ghuse mein hain.

Nisha-Hey who is that with your mom?
Pari-Oh that's my mammo,that's when they were at a party.

Pari-Okay ab meray sab se barey bhai Nishant ki bari.

Nisha-He looks strict.
Pari-He is not,he is my favorite bhaiya.
Pari-aur yeh hain meri babhi.My sweet Neha bhabi.

Nisha-Wow👏She luks awesome.

Nisha-Pari who is this hot guy?
Pari-yeh mera dosra bhai Rahul hai.
Pari-Nisha,you should see my third brother Akhash.He never smiles.But unforuntanetly he smiled.

Nisha-He is a real dude.
Pari-Now meet my 4th brother Sharman.He is a big flirt.Here is a picture of flirting with my freind Siya.

Nisha-they make a good couple.
Pari-Yeh hamarey neighbors ki beti hai.I just luv being with Siya,she is a great freind just like you.
Nisha-tumhari picture kahan hai.
Pari-Right over here.

Nisha-Nice.

Pari-Yeh wali picture Rahul bhaiya ne li thi,Oh god I was so tired that day.
Nisha-You luk good here.
Pari-arre Nisha mein tu tujhe ek picture dikhana hi bhool ghi.
Nisha-Kon si wali.
Pari-this one.

Nisha-Cute,Yeh kon hai.
Pari-mein iss ki bua hon.Yeh Nishant aur Neha bhabi ki beti hai Kiran.
Nisha-she is so cute yaar.Your family is cute.
Pari-I know.
Nisha-where are they?
Pari-well abhi to woh log bahar gaye hain.

Someone shouts-We are here Mukti.
Pari-Mar gayee.
Nisha-Kyun kya hua.
Pari-I was suppost to call them.
She runs downstairs.
Pari-Namaste.Aap log aa gaye.
Kiran-Bua we missed you.Why didn't you come?
Pari-Sorry beta,meri dost Nisha aayi hui hai iss liye.
Kiran-Bua You know,we had so much fun.
Sharman-you should have come Mukti.
Neha-Yea Pari.Jaanti hu aaj kya hua?

Tell me if i should continue.Leave comments.Please to make me encourage.




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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey yaar thts great...continue plzzzzzzzzzzz 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow very good hun! the pics are great too! keep goin!
Edited by Robin_M - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guys just to tell you,i changed mukti's brothers name and her bhabis name.So next time when i post u noe their names.Hope u don't get confused.I'll try to update by tonight.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 stuff!!! cont soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice ff 😉 wow mukti seems 2 hav a lot of brothers 😆 shez probably every1s favorite rite 😊 u should seriously continue da family seems so sweet 😳 r u da sam person whoz writting another ff think itz called Kaise Main Kahu anywayz u shuld totally continue update soon😛
Edited by mandy07 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yes Mandy I m the same person,I know i am suppost to write in Kaisae Main Kahu fan fic,but what can i do,there is so much.

Nishant-Neha abhi nahi.
Mukti-Bhabi please baton na.
Neha-abhi nahi Mukti kal ko.
Nisha-acha Mukti ab mein chalti hun.
Mukti-okay,don't forget to call me.
Neha-mein change kar ke aati hun.
Mukti-Maa mujhe book lagi hai.
Damini(Mukti's mom)-tu bet mein teray liye kuch kaney ke liye kuch lati hun.
Mukti-thanks Maa.
Rahul-Hey moti.
Mukti-don't call me moti.
Rahul-to aur kya kahon,har waqt to kati rehti hai.
Mukti-Rahul bhaiya mein papa ko bulaon ki if u call me moti again.
Rahul-Go Go,I am not scared of dad.
Mukti-Really,then watch this.Papa Papa Rahul wants to talk to you.
Rahul-Chupp kar ke bet ja moti.
Gautum(Mukti's dad) comes downstairs.
Gautum-Kaho Rahul kuch Kaam tha.
Mukti-haan bhaiya bholo na.
Rahul-nahi Dad.
Mukti-Rahul bhaiya dar gaye.She runs away to kitchen,Rahul runs after her.Mukti hides behind Damini.
Mukti-Maa dekho na Rahul bhaiya mujhe taang kar rahen hai.
Damini-Rahul tu kyun isse taang kar raha hai.
Akhash-Because it's fun.
Sharman-Hamari ek ti behan hai aur hum usay bhi na taang kare,then who else we should disturb.
Mukti-Siya.
Sharman-She is my freind.
Mukti-Yea Yea.Aur waise bhi Sharman tu mujh se chota hai,so be young.
Sharman-It doesn't matter,sirf ek year ka different hai.
Mukti-Shutup or i will tell ur girlfreind that u are a.
Rahul-Bolo na Pari,tum sharman ki girlfreind ko kya batoon ghi.
Mukti-Ke yeh Siya pe line marta hai,meri sab se achi dost par.
Akash-Pari she won't believe you.
Damini-Tum phir sab shuru ho gaye.
Mukti-Dekho na Maa,yeh sab har waqt hi aisa karte hai.Tum se ache to Nishant bhaiya hain.Jao mein tum logo se baat nahi karti,She leaves the Kitchen leaving a mad face.
Damini-Happy guys.
Rahul,Akhash and Sharman-But Maa we were just joking.
Damini-Ab kya karo ke?
Guys-Maa hamay Pari ko minan aata hai.Pari here we come.

Few minutes,there is a knock on Mukti's door.
Mukti-Come in.
Rahul,Akhash and Sharman comes into Mukti room.They hand Mukti a huge card.
Mukti-ab iss ke andar kya hai.
Brothers-Khudi par lo.
She opens the envelp and takes out a hude card saying
with a poem written inside it.
Now listen Sister
You're simply the best.
The special Sister, you are
More so endless family love
That's stretched so far.

Thank you for always
Being there, for your care
For the special and true
Understanding, we share.

I often thank Heaven
For our own sweet Mother
She gave us you Mukti(Pari)
One we'd swap for no other.

Over years as we've grown
You've stood by us
Guiding and leading
Clearing our path to see.

Now Mukti,Can you please forgive us now?
We are truly sorry.We know we've make so many mistakes.
But what can we do you we can't keep you mad for so long
Cause you are the best sister in the whole wide world.
WE ARE SORRY MUKTI(PARI)
Please forgive us.Please Please Please Please.😊

Mukti-This is so sweet.I can't believe you guys wrote this.
Rahul-So tum ne humay maaf kiya.
Mukti-Yes.I luv you.
Rahul,Akhash,and Sharman-WE LUV YOU TOO.
Sharman-Please Pari tu meri girlfreind ko Siya ke barey mein na batain.
Mukti(Pari)-Nahi batoon ghi.They all hug eachother.Nishant comes in.
Nishant-Hey tum sab mujhe kaise bhool gaye.A hug without me.
Mukti-Bhaiya how can we forget you.
Akhash-You can join us too.
Sister and brother hug.
😊

So guys how is it,should i continue?
Edited by bhattyhuda - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Tell me if i should continue!!! 😕
I need replies from u guys.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was sooo good! i love the brother sister relationship! very sweet! and YES you should definetly continue! ill be waiting for the next part 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Robin_M

that was sooo good! i love the brother sister relationship! very sweet! and YES you should definetly continue! ill be waiting for the next part 😃



Thanks Robin,but i need more replies more then that.

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