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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
ya its wonderful plz conti soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I am updating after a long time,but i was busy with school and other stuff.

Mukti wakes up after a while,she looks around and realizes that she is at not her home.She looks around trying to figure out where is she?Then Prem comes out of nowhere.

Prem-Mukti tum utt gayee.Mukti-Prem where are we?
Prem-yeh meray ghar hai.
Mukti-Ohh.But wait mein yahan kya kar rahi hun.
Prem-you slept in my car,so i brought you here.
Mukti-thanks.
Prem-no need to thanks.
Mukti-Prem yeh kis ka room hai.
Prem-Kyun?It's mr room.
Mukti-itna gana,don't you keep it clean.
Prem-Ya i do,but i was looking for my shirt,thats when i create this mess.
Mukti-Prem tum bilkul bacho ki taran act karte ho.
Prem-no i don't.
Mukti who has started to clean his room-Prem why are you laughing at me.
Prem 😆-Let me just ask you something.
Mukti-what?
Prem-are you my maid?
Mukti 😡-nooooooooooooo.
Prem-then why are you cleaning my room.
Mukti-ohh i was just being nice.You idiot.
Prem-so you were trying to impress me
Mukti-why would i impress you?(She makes a face)

Prem-because you have a crush on me.(He looks directly at her)

Mukti-Yea right!You wish Prem.
Prem-ha ha ha really funny.
Mukti-prem you know tum ghuse mein aur bhi cute lagtey ho.
Prem-mujhe pata hai.
Mukti-woh kaisey.
Prem-meri last girlfreind ne bataya tha.
Mukti-your girlfreind.
Prem-koi problem?
Mukti-tumhari girlfreind.
Prem-haan ek nahi millions.
Mukti-get a grip Prem.Mujhe pata hai ke tum jhoot bhol rahe ho.
Prem-hey mein jhoot nahi bolta.
Mukti-mein bhi nahi bolti.
Prem-By the way Mukti,I am the hottest man on earth.
Mukti-acha joke hai.
Prem-Par yeh joke nahi sach hai.
Mukti-oh reallly Prem.
Prem-yes Mukti.
Mukti-i should go now.
Prem-arrrey Mukti tumey checkup karana chaiye.
Mukti-woh kyun?
Prem-tumhari sab se bari problem pata kya hai.
Mukti-nahi to.
Prem-tumay har waqt janey ki pari rehti hai.Lets go out somewhere.
Mukti-But.
Prem-hey mein kuch nahi suna chaata.Please don't say no(He is eagerly waiting for an answer)
After a momment Mukti says yes.


Mukti and Prem are walking down the road,when a car hits Mukti.(Guys i know this is similar)
Prem shouts out😡 -eeeeeeeeee aanda hai kya?Can't you look?
Mukti who is in pain-Prem koi baat nahi.
Prem-Mukti yeh koi choti baat nahi hai.
Mukti-forget it Prem.
Prem-how can i forget it.
Mukti-OOwwwwwwww Prem.
Prem-bohat dard ho raha hai na.
Mukti nods
Prem-you know what lets go to the doctor.
Mukti-oh hello Prem.I am a doctor myself.
Prem-no we need to go to the doctor.
Mukti-Prem calm down.Choti si chot hai.
Prem-tum issey choti si chot kheti ho.
Mukti-Kuch nahi hota.Mein sirf ghar jana chaati hun.
Prem-okay.
Mukti tries to walk further but she couldn't.She screams in a pain.Prem who can't bear to see her like this,lifts her in his arms.They both get lost into eachother,the world has stopped for them.



Do leave comments,i know it was a short one!
Edited by bhattyhuda - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
Nice...please read saru's...it has a rlly cute scene of PM
Edited by iloveroses95 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: iloveroses95

Nice...please read saru's...it has a rlly cute scene of PM



Ya i just did!!😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
thanks soooo much for updating maria! it was very cute, but short! lol plz try to update soon! cant wait for more pm scenes!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
plzz update soo nit was great!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
awwwwww i luved da last 2 pics 😳 da update was really sweet 😳 i luved da way he was all lik r u tryin 2 impress me 😆 n da way he was all carin n worried bout her when she got hurt was really sweeeettt i could totally imagine him bein worried n scared 4 her 😳 update soon n make it longer plz 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
i just caught up on ur ff...omg i love it!!!
plz cont soon! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Prem takes Mukti to her house.

At Mukti's house.

Sharman-Mukti kya hua?
Mukti-Kuch nahi sharman (She's till in Prem's arm)
Rahul-Prem what happen to her?

Prem-I think she sprained her ankle
Nishnat-Did you went to the doctor Pari?
Mukti-No Nishant bhaiya I'm okay.
Akhash-Humay doctor ko bulana chaiye.
Mukti-no need for that.Mein teek hun,ek moch hi to aayi hai.
Sharman-let me see your feet.(Prem places her on the couch)
Mukti-why are you guys so curious about me?
Nishant-You know how much we love you.
Mukti-I know bhaiya.
(Sharman touches her feet,she screams in pain)
Mukti-Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Sharman
Sharman-mein ne kya kiya
Mukti-duffer terey se koi kaam nahi hota
Sharman-tujey kis ne ne kaha tha chot lagene ko.
Mukti-I didn't to it on purpose.
Sharman-haan haan,mujhe pata hai ke tu acting kar rahi hai.
Mukti-Maaa ye dekho na Sharman phir se shuru ho gaya.
Damini-Sharman tu kyun Mukti ke peeche para rehta hai
Sharman-Maa mein kya karun Pari ne tu shuru kiya tha aur mein ne sirf continue.

Mukti-dekhin Sharman when my feet gets better,mein tujhey itna maroon ghi ke tu saari umar yaad rakhe gha
Sharman-woh to hum baad mein dekhein ghein,fil haal you can't walk.Isn't that funny!
Mukti-Nishant bhaiya!
Nishant-Isse to sirf Neha teek kareigi.So Neha tum kya kheti ho
Neha-Jab tak Mukti ka pher(feet)recover nahi hota,tab tak Sharman Mukti ki har baat maney gha.
Sharman-You mean a servant Bhabi
Neha-Yes!
Sharman-aap meri Bhabi ho ya dushman
Neha-Dushmun bhi aur bhabi bhi
Sharman-I'm not going to be a servant
Neha-ek din ki toh baat hai
Sharman-No way Bhabi!!!
Neha-soch lo Sharman,Varna.
Sharman-Varna Kya Bhabi?
Neha-Maya(Sharman's girlfreind) ko hum tumhari aur Siya ki love story ke bare mein batan de ghen.
Sharman-Hey that's not even true.Siya is just a freind.
Neha-don't worry Sharman,Maya will believe us.
Mukti-We will make Siya say that"she loves you and you love her and you have have promise her to marry you"aur kuch pochna hai Sharman

Sharman-Eyy Moti chup kar ke bet.Kitna bolti hai,suba se le ke shaam tak.
(Mukti throws cushions at him,Prem laughs at them)
Mukti-Hey Prem tum meray dost ho ya is idiot ke.
Prem-Sorry
Neha-So what do you say Sharman?
Sharman-Okay Bhabi,only for you or otherwise I would never do it.
Mukti-Oh Bhabi I love you!
(Damini puts haldi on Mukti's feet,and wraps it with a cloth)
Mukti-Thanks Maa
Damini-your welcome beta
Mukti-Maa don't tell papa he'll get worried for nothing.
Damini-aghar woh mujh se poochen to
Mukti-Simple app jhoot bhol de naa
Damini-Prem beta Prerna aur Mr.Bajaj kab laut rahe hain
Prem-hopefully tonight aunty
Damini-Sneha kaisi hai
Prem-woh achi hai
Mukti-Prem us ka khayal rakhna,don't let her do any work.
Prem-tum bhi.Aunty ab mein chalta hun,Sneha mera intezaar kar rahi hogi
Mukti-Bye Prem!
Prem-take care.Mein kal ko phir aaon gha.
Mukti-Okay
(He takes Damini's asharwid and leaves)
Mukti-ab hum bhi chalein Sharman.
Sharman-Chal Moti.
Mukti-eyy Moti kis ko bhola
Sharman-terey ko aur kis ko
Mukti-dekh Sharman meray se paanga na li.
(They start to fight as usual,Sharman carries Mukti to her room)


The next day Prem is at Mukti's house.
Prem-How do you feel?
Mukti-much better.
Prem-where is everybody?
Mukti-sarey Siya ke ghar gaye hain
Prem-yeh Siya kaun hai
Mukti-Siya is our neighbor,aur meray bachpan ki dost hai
Prem-ohh
Mukti-aaye ghi to mein tum se zaroor milaon ghi
Prem-okay
Mukti-Prem kuch kao ghe.
Prem-i don't mind
Mukti-What would you like to have?
Prem-anything.Aur waise bhi mein ne suna hai ke tum bohat acha khana banati ho
Mukti-who told you?
Prem-I just know.I'm supersmart.
Mukti-really
Prem-yes
Mukti-Prateek kyun nahi aaya
Prem-I'm coming straight from office
Mukti-ohh
Prem-Kiran what's up?
Kiran-nothing uncle.Uncle app meray liye candy laye ho
Prem-oh woh to mein bhool gaya
Kiran-uff uncle app bhi na,do you know meri bua khabi nahi bhool tin.Jao mein ap se baat nahi karti
Prem-arey itna ghusa,bilkul apni bua pe gayi ho
Mukti-hey Prem how mean.
Prem-I was joking yaar.Kiran look what i got
Kiran-Candies.I love you Uncle!!
Prem-you love me because i got you candies,right?
Kiran-Yess.(She gives him a kiss)

Mukti is cutting Salad,she cuts her finger.Prem runs upto her.
Mukti-ouch ouch
Prem gently kisses her finger,Mukti stays still looking at him.She feels butterflies in her stomach.Prem realizes it and leaves her finger.
Prem-are you okay.
Mukti-Yah I am fine.
Prem-you know what forgetting about the cooking.I don't want you to get hurt again
Mukti-No Prem,it's okay.I am almost finished.
Prem-Mukti rehne do,koi baat nahi.Mein ghar jaa je kcuh kah lun ga
Mukti-Prem kuch nahi hota,tum living room mein jaa ke bateo,mein tori hi der mein aayi.
Prem-are you sure?
Mukti-yes!!
Prem-as you wish.(He leaves taking Kiran with him)

In the living room.
Kiran-uncle lets watch some of movies
Prem-Great Idea!
(Kiran puts in the dvd,but it turned out to be something else)
Prem-what is this?
Kiran-uh-oh this is not the movie.It's one of Bua's videos
Prem-Lets watch it
(The video comes up.It was Mukti dancing on the song Pap ki Pari)
Mukti-Ladies And Gentlemen A Son Is A Son Till He Gets
Himself A Wife But A Daughter Is A Daughter
All Her Life
Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main
Aayi Main Aayi Neele Gagan Se
Laayi Main Laayi Taaron Ke Chun Ke
Mere Liye Jo Bana Hai
Sun Le Jahan Tu Chupa Hai
Paana Mujhe Mushkil Hai
Phoolon Jaisa Mera Dil Hai
Aakar Dekhle
Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main.

Prem is really into the movie,his eyes following the rhythm.
Kiran-Uncle do you like it?
Prem-it's entertaining Kido
Kiran-my bua is the best
Prem goes back into the video

Mukti-
Its Our World
Its Our Life
Sab Ki Sunungi Dil Ki Karoongi
Aise Waise Ko Main Na Chunungi
Maine Yeh Kab Se Soch Liya Hai
Parkhungi Usko Phir Haan Karungi
Warna Kahungi Use
Ja Ja Ja Ja

Mere Liye Jo Bana Hai
Sun Le Jahan Tu Chupa Hai
Paana Mujhe Mushkil Hai
Phoolon Jaisa Mera Dil Hai
Aakar Dekhle
Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main
Haan Haan Haan Haan
Mere Liye Jo Bana Hai
Sun Le Jahan Tu Chupa Hai
Paana Mujhe Mushkil Hai
Phoolon Jaisa Mera Dil Hai
Aakar Dekhle
Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main
Come On All Girls Here On Stage Please
Papas Darling Daughters Join In

Mukti shouts out from the kitchen-I hope you guys are not watching one of my videos.
Prem-no we are watching GolMal
Kiran-uncle you are a lier lier
Prem-shhhhhhhhhhhhhh your bua will kill me if i tell her that we are watching her videos
Kiran-Meri Bua kheti hain ke khabi jhoot nahi boltay
Prem-oh really
Kiran-Yes uncle

Prem gets a call from his office,it's urgent so he leaves without telling Mukti

At night (Prem's house)
Prem and Mukti are talking on the cellphones
Mukti-why did you leave without telling me?
Prem-ek zaroori kaam aa gaya tha.Sorry Sorry
Mukti-It's okay.Waisey Prem kal ko kya hai
Prem-mujhe kya pata
Mukti-To socho
Prem-I don't know
Mukti-arre bhudu kal ko Valentine day hai
Prem-oh yaad aaya
Mukti-Prem tumhari valentine kaun hai
Prem-abhi pata nahi.Woh kya hai na abhi final nahi hai.Itni saari meri paass girlfreind hain You Know so i'll choose one of them.
Mukti-Ohhhh.Yeh batoo Sneha Kaisi hai
Prem-she is fine
Mukti-Hey Prem I gotta go.Bhabi is calling me
Prem-as you wish
Mukti-Good Night
Prem-Sleep well!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks sooo much for updating maria! its been awhile, but it was worth the wait! fantastic update, i really loved it! lol prem and mukti are toooo cute! and the way mukti and sharman fight is really funny! please try to update soon hun!

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