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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww really sweet!cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
aww. so good! keep it up kajal.. waiting! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww.... 😳 😳
thankzz for updatin Kajal! 😳
an waitin for d next part! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
That was a sweet scene 😳 update soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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u know wat i will critisize u not ur fanfic small update yaar luv it though
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
cant waitt.. plzz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww thats so cute! thats really gud plz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwww tht was cute update sn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👍🏼thxx evryone 4 ur comment 👍🏼 ...will update soon..... 😳 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thxxxx 4 evryone's comment..here's the nxt part...hope u lyk it..

next morning sam and anu goes to bajaj house to visit prem...
bajaj: are mr.basu...morning(they shake hands and does namaste to sam)are prena!!! dekho to kuon aaya hai....
prena enters...
prena: are sam or anurag...mr.bajaj app vhi naa...wahi darwaje par rakhenge ya aandar vhi bulainge....
bajaj: oh..sorry...aandar aaeye....
they all sit down....prena goes to kitchen to get sum coffee and sam goes wid her....
sam: prena tum bohot khush lagrahe ho...
prena:ha !! barso baad mera parivaar pura hogaya hai...prem vhi wapass aagaya....
sam: aur prem kaha hai....
prena: yo appne kamre pe hoga....chalo pehele coffee pete hai aur use baat karlena....subha subha use koi diaturb nahi hona chaheye....

they all talk ....after sumtime prem cumes downstairs in jeans...hoddy jacket......
prem:dad basu!!! app yaha...h r u??
anu: me to thik hu..tum kaise ho..
prem: cool as usual...or aunty sam..namaste...

they all have a chat....prena is so happy to see her family happy .....

hope u lyked this part...plzz comment and feel free to critisize if u don't lyk it...

-kajal-

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