|*LSFF*| |updatd pg21| ' valentine dance' - Page 4

even though i read it in school......reading it again was nicer......gr8 fanfic 👏 ........cont soon!!!!

aww that was really good!continue sn!

👏 GR8 PART 👏
PLZZ CONT SOON 😊

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too gud Kajal! 👏

waiting for d next part 😳

wow kajal..! its awesome! plz.. continue...

love ishu

thxx rachna and ishu...will try to update soon...

That was great continue soon 👏

great hun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!continue soon!!!!!!!! 😉

thxx 4 all ur comments...

here's nxt part...
recap:mukti cut her hand..prem bandaged her 😳 he got a call and went ,mukti didn't get a chance to say thxxx...

prem was driving his car...when he stopped near the beach...he went there...he felt rly happy to be there.....when he saw mukti....he went near her....she was standing on the top of a cliff....
prem: hello mukti !!! tum aaha...
mukti: kya ye beach tumhara he kya....
prem: nahi to...me to yuhi puch raha tha...
mukti: well..me yeha hamesha aaya karte hu....
prem:ok
mukti turns around to go but suddenly she trips cos of the small stone....when prem hold her....the place is silent...there is no noise other then the sound os sea shoring....mukti and prem stares at each other....evrything is invisible when mukti breaks the silent....
mukti:thank u
prem:what 4(still staring 😳 )
mukti is total silent when...
mukti: for putting a bandage at my hand....smiles and runs away...while prem just stares at her and smiles...

guys plzzz comment.....and feel free to critisize if u don't lyk it.....hope u enjoyed this part...

~kajal~