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JyOtI

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

I think u have to do Kajal........ 😉

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anu83

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

well done kajjal..it really good!! 👏

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kajal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

thxxx sam, reeha , rachna , jyoti, natasha, anu and evryonr for ur comments...... 😊

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amrita

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

wow... fab 👏 amazin' 👏
Continue soon' 😳

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Jyoti

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

I love your fanfic!!! PM's cute little fights 😳 .. I just love it and can't wait for you to continue!!

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Robin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

aawwww i love pm fanfics and yours is great! plz update soon!

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kajal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

thxxx so much guys for ur comments...glad u all liked it.....will update soon...

love
~kajal~

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yeeshika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#28

wow.....gr8 kajal!!!!!!!!.....cont soon..... 👏

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kajal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#29

thxx 4 all those lovely comments....

next morning(in the garden)
mukti is looking at sum files ( prem , mukit,sneha and kasak works in same office 😃 )when prem comes there...
prem:are basanti...subha subha...kaam
mukti:me tum jaisa lazy nahi hu....or ya how many times have i told you...my name is mutki not basanti....
prem: jo vhi ho, me to tumhe basanti he bulaungi...
and ya do you need sum help...
mukti:(well guys remember the way mukti spoke when prem ask her for a lift) no prem agar tum mujhe help karoge to mera bani bigar jayega...ajj tum mujhe help karoge to kal kaun karega..(prem tries to interupt and make silly faces at mukti)...me vhi tum jaisa lazy ho jaunge aur sir or choti maa mujshe naraz ho jayenge....aur baba vhi naraz ho jayenge...prem smjho me kya kehe raha hu...isliye tum mujhe help nahi kar sakte.....
by the time mukti opens her eyes...prem is long gone....
mukti:daffar....

Edited by FrEnDs8 - 18 years ago

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kajal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#30

later in office

mutki:(talking to sumone) that was a gr8 job....well done....now you cn go....prem who was passing by saw mukti and came inside...
prem: hello basanti....
mukti:are prem....mujhe tumshe kuch kehena hai....ajj subha tumne mujhe akela kyon choda,,agar mujhe koi dekhleta to kya hota...wo mujhe pagaal samajta..
prem:tum paggal hi ho....kyuon socch na padega
mukti:what???
prem: i was gonna warn u but u neva let me speak...isliye to me tumhe basanti bulati hu...
mukti:(getting more angry)throws the flower vase at prem who was standing at the door...
prem: miss me again...and give an smile and his own bye-bye stlye
mukti:oh whateva....

mukti calls sumone to clean up the mess but no one turns up.so, she decides to clean herslef...she was cleaning the pieces of vase when she cuts herself...it starts bledding....prem sees this as he was going to his cabin...he suddenly enters and says:
mutki tum vhi naa..kisne kaha tha saaf karne ko..koi kar leta na....tum bohot careless ho...(getting the first aid box)....see now u hurt urself.....he tries to put the bandage but mukti takes away as it hurted her a lot...so, prem gently puts the bandage while mukti closes her eyes being scared.....prem finishes wrappign the bandage and sees her...she looked so innocent and smiled himslef seeing mukti like that...
prem: hogaya....(he gets a call and then goes away mukti doesn't even get to say thxxx.....)

Edited by FrEnDs8 - 18 years ago