updated pg.177: FINALLY FINISHED :D! - Page 5

hey riya, great story it's really good i really liked the comedy part in this one. and the whole piya/ mukti and prem/aditiya thing is funny 😆

hey!!.. i just caught up on ur fanfic.. and i must say i am addicted to it!!! .. it is absolutely wonderful and unpredictable unlike ekta's show's where u know either the main characters will die or they wont ever get together because of lame controversies.. (as u can tell im upset because of mukti's death).. but do continuee soon.. i absolutely love ur fanfic.. 👏

cool!the bit about surnames made me laugh!lol!continue sn!!

thats really gud pzl continue soon 👏

Okealyyy dorkerss!!! im back and all readdyyy to updateee!!! I hope youve beeen enjoying everythin soo far....

RECAP: Prem re-gains his memory....piya comes in the room.....

HOSPITAL:

piya walked up to prem....prem knew she 'looked' like mukti but there was somthing different about her...his mukti would never be wearing jeans and a shirt....she did before they got marred...but after getting married she always had a saree on..with sindoor and a mangalsutra...this wasnt his mukti...and he knew it.....

piya: how are....? she was seeing if he remembered everything or not....
prem: who are you......?
piya: oh no...did you forget everything again...it's me piyaa....(she didnt realise he had his memory back)
prem: piya...? then wheres mukti?......
Piya's eyes grew in disbilef...he still remembered mukti.....

Prem got up, worried looked into piya's eyes...he was cofused.....

Prem: wheres my wife...wheres mukti...were are my kids...were are they..WHO THE HELL ARE YOU!!!......?????

Prem was about to beak down when a little girl came in running to the room and jummped onto prems bed.....it was riya.....prem felt he knew her....but couldnt re-call.....piya had no clue who she was.....

Riya went and hugged prem and gave him a kiss....

Riya: PAPPAAA!! your AWAKE!!!
prem: pappa....but your not piya...you look nothing like her......
riya: Oh fooh!!! pappa...you always confus jai and aru bhai but me and piya di look soo diffrent.....
prem: sweet heart...but i dont know you.....

riya started to cry...she ran to the door yelling mamma....that was when prem saw her...mukti.....she looked beutiful as ever in alight blue sarree her hairs long and flowing down her back...her mangalstra diffining her love...and her sindoor as red as ever....that was her...his mukti..his love...his life...his wife.....

prem couldnt help himself he got out of bed...walked to the door....and embraced her..started to cry......he felt a sense and relife........

Prem: mu..kti....what happend...whats wrong with me.....

mukti didnt get a chance to say anything..riya was distracting her....

Riya: mammmaa..puppa dosent know me.....whats wrong....

prem looked at riya carfully...he couldnt re-call this chiled...he didnt understand why she was calling muki 'ma' and him 'paappa'....
prem: mukit...who is this.....
mukti started crying and picked up riya and kissed her cheecks....: prem...after the accident i found out i was pregnant...look....this is your little girl...riya....

Prem started to sob...he felt soo giulty not...not being able to be there for mukti through everythin..he wanted to turn back time....he went and put out his arms for riya...riya gladly climbed in....he held her soo tightly...he didnt want to let her goo...

prem: jaan im soo sorryy...papa's really sorry.....
riya wiped away prems tears: its okeay papa...your back now...so will you give me a pritty necklace like jai and aru bhia and piya di?......
prem kissed his daughter: sure sweetheart....sure....

just then jai and aryan came in running...they were going to takle prem down..but they slowed down when they saw riya in his arms....

Jai: PAAPPPAA!!!

he ran up to prem and jumped on him...prem loked carfully at his son...it was his jai so...excited..and energetic...he looked and saw that his son had kept the necklace that was giving to him...prem smiled has jai hugged him....he loked in the other direction..and he saw...a boy looked exactly like jai..aryan..he was shyly holding on to mukti's sarees paloo...it looked as though he didnt know if he could approch prem or not....so prem let out his arms....aryan came running in.....

Aryan: papa...you back...jai biaha..didnt beleive me..but i was right...you did come....
prem: you missed me...?
aryan: uh ha....
prem: but your a mammas boy right....
mukti gave prem a dirty look...
aryan: noo i love you too pappa...
prem: i know kiddo i was just jokeing....
prem: hey wheres my princess piya...?
jai: she's coming with dadi....

and that she did...prem saw his ltlle girl ...piya she was standing beside prerna (mukti had called prerna yesterday..she caught the first flight ...she had just arrived...) piya ran up to prem and hugged the life out of him....

prem: how are you princess?
piya: now that your back...im perfect...she kissed her dad....

prem went up to prena adn touched her feet and huggted her..he began to cry......prerna did to..she couldnt beleive...that it was her prem, it was her prem....right infront of her.....

prerna:i...thoug you wer...gone....
prem smiled and looked at his mother: maa...im your son...i dont give up soo easily.....

prerna smiled and touched prems face....
prerna: i know your as stubborn as they come....

Looking at the whole family all happy and together...it made piya feell sick...she had had it...she went up and dragged riya out of muki's arms.....riya was screaming her heart out....

riya: MUMMMAAA!!! PAPPPAA...HELPPP PLEASEE HELP!!!!
prem ouldnt beleive that this was happening infront of his own eyes.....

Prem: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!!!! PUT MY DAUGHTER DOWNN!!!!!

Piya had a crazzyy loko in her eyes....
Piya: you spent the past two years with me....you married me....you cant leave me....
Prem: I NEVER MARRIED YOU!!! i only MARRIED MUKTI
Piya: HA! WHEN YOU WERE ALL DEPREST OF YOUR PRESIOUS MUKTI DIEING....I BECAME MUKTI...I NEVER KNEW THIS BI**CH WOULD COME BACK....BECAUSE OF YOUR STUPIED MUKTI I HAD TO LEAVE YOU AND OUR KIDS.....

Prem was confused.....
prem: WHAT KIDS WHAT ARE YOu TALKING ABOUT....I ONLY HAVE FOUR!!!
piya: THE FIRST THREE ARE MINE!!!!!!!!
prem didnt get it...he looked at piyas eyes carfully aside from seeing how crazzy and obsessed they were....he noticed they were greeen.....and soo were the triplets.....
prem: w...h..at.....
piya: I'LL LET YOUR OTHER DAUGHTER LIVE...ONLY IF I GET MY FAMILY BACK...THAT INCLUDES YOU!!!!!........

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TO BE CONTINUED!!!

I hope you guys are enjoying everything soo fare....i know some of you may think its weired but oh welll...i'll continue soon...sorry about the late update...and do post your comments 😃

Reeha 😉

its really good.. so finally piya turned all freaky.. lolll.. good job!! 👏 please continue soon 😃

goood......but plzzz dont separate mukti ....hey u know wht just kill piya(muktis look-alike) thn everything will be fine 😉 😉 😛

oh,keep on writing, its nice. 👏

thats cool
but could u plz send her to mental hospital or sumthing
cos i dont want prem to leave mukti
we dont need another komo

thanks for continuing!i knew piya would be evil 😉 lol!continue sn!!