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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
wow!!i really love ur fanfic!continue sn!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
Thanks guys sooo much I appreciate all the positive feedback….but its true….the way I brought mukti back…I do consider it corrnyyy….but I really like muktis character and I know a lot of other people do too…so who cares at least she's back!....sooo hears the next part…….
RECAP: Piya and sneha find out how mukti Is still alive….piya promises mukti that she can have prem…and that after giving birth to her triplets she'll let mukti and prem have the kids…and shell leave there lives forever…..
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BAJAJ HOUSE…. Prem and Piya's Room:

It was early morning around 6:00 am…..piya was getting restless….the triplets wanted out…she got out of bed and saw prem peacefully sleeping beside her…even though she didn't want to she woke him up…

Piya: prem…WAKE UP!!!!
Prem who was quite shocked and surprised: WHAT! Did something happen…mukti whats wrong!????
Piya: whats wrong is that your kids want to come out NOWWW!!!
Prem laughed and kissed piya forehead then her stomach…three times one for each baby……
Prem: I wonder…there are three…but what are they…..what do you want….? I want three girls……
Piya: this isn't the time you idiot…. i'm in SEVER PAIN!!!!
Prem: Okay My jaan lets go….

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THE HOSPITAL:

Piya was inside the operation theater…she was getting a c-section….mukti walked down the stairs in the nurses outfit with a mask behind the doctor...just then and there she saw prem…….he looked so worried….yet excited at the same time…prerna was sitting beside him…he saw the doctor and went up to him…mukti turned around and lisined…….

Prem: doctor…everything will be alright….right?
Doctor: she has been very weak through out her entire pregnancy…but I think she'll be fine…..
Prem: but nothing will happen to mukti and the babies' right?
Doctor: Mr.Prem you really love your wife…don't worry they'll be fine…..your just nervous….

Hearing how much prem loved being a dad and how much concern he had for piya…a tear rolled down her face……then she went in the operation theater with the doctor…….

Outside the operation theater prem kept on restlessly walking back and forth…..prerna laughed….
Prem: whats so funny maa?
Prerna: you…..
Prem: huh? How's that?
Prerna: you look like how Mr. Bajaj looked when kasak was going to be born…..a tear rolled down her face….
Prem went up to his mom: maa dad will come back don't worry…..
Just then Anurag and Sam came in with Sneha and Mohini…..anurag came and gave prem a hug….
Anurag: So am I a grandpa yet?
Prem: not yet…..
Mohini: I bet you anything my great grand kids will look just like me….
Sam: Prem do you know if there boys or girls…

Sam was interrupted when the doctor came out……

Doctor: CONGRADULATIONS! Mr. Prem you are the proud father of TWO Identical Twin boys…..and one GIRL!
Prem was soo happy he hugged the doctor…a tear rolled down his face…..
Prem: DOCTOR!!!! Can I see them…..how's mukti…she's fine right????
Doctor: yes…. There all fine. You can see them later…your wife's very week she needs her rest…..the triplets are small…usually all triplets are……..

Just then piya was getting wheeled out by mukti (she still had a mask on her face) prem went up to piya and kissed her forehead…..looked at her face carefully and said …..

Prem: Thanks jaan……thanks….
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Two weeks had past every day prem came and brought new toys for his kids…..he hadn't named them….today before he came……piya and mukti switched places…..

Piya: mukti….I know you love prem a lot…he loves you too…all I can ask is that you love my children just as they were yours……
Mukti crying: piya….you don't have too do this…why such a huge sacrifice…..
Piya: I would take the triplets with me…but I know then prem wouldn't be able to live…the last thing he needs is another shock….that's why NEVER tell him that there was a 'PIYA' …..I know he won't be able to handle it……
Mukti and piya hugged….crying there eyes out………piya walked out….she looked back at her kids….she walked out of the hospital…and left forever………..mukti got dressed into the hospital gown and sat in Piya's hospital bed…she looked at the triplets beside her…she went over and kissed each one on the forehead…just then prem walked in….

He looked at mukti and smiled…….he felt something strange…..but he ignored it…he went up and kissed muktis forehead…mukti wanted to hug him soo tightly and cry her eyes out…it had been soo long since she had held him…talked to him…touched him…but she controlled herself…….
Prem: Soo Sweetheart…how are you feeling…?
Mukti: good…..prem can I have a hug….
Prem laughed: Is that something to ask……?
He hugged her tightly….he felt something strange…something undiscribable…something he hadn't felt in soo long……..

Just then Sneha came in. and saw them….
Sneha: If you two love birds are done May I come in…?
Mukti was just blushing…perm answered….
Prem: but of course big sister……
Sneha came and stood by the triplets…..
Sneha: sooo have you to decide on naming my niece and nephews?
Prem was about to answer but mukti interrupted…
Mukti: prem you can name…my sons but I get to name my daughter…..
Prem: hay there mine too…and I want to name her……
Mukti: if you're thinking of naming her basanti…FORGET ABOUT IT!!!
Prem: awwwwww that's mean……that's the only girls name I like…..
Mukti laughed….: okay what do you want to name the older twin ….?
Prem: uhhhh?......JAI
Mukti raised her eyebrows: fine…but you cant name the other one Veeru….
Prem laughed: okeay I wont……Sneha you chose the name for you other newphew…
Sneha: I always liked the name ARYAN…how bout it?
Mukti : I like it….its better that Veeru….
Prem: okeay soo my little buddies Jai and Aryan…now what are we going to name my princess?
Mukti:…..PIYA
Sneha looked up at mukti and smiled…..Prem felt some sense of dejavoo when he heard the name…
Mukti: what happened prem..you don't like my daughters name?
Prem: no…..i love it……but I think I've known someone with that name…………
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TO BE CONTINUED….


PRECAP:
Two years later………..

Alrighty guys I hope you've been enjoying my fanfic soo far….i know its not the best…but I hope your liking it…don't worry its not over yet..theres pleanty more…….REMEBER to post your comments and thoughts…If your confused…don't worry I am too!! Just kidding…but do tell me if you don't understand anything……if you have a title in mind doo tel mee! Thanks!

REEHA!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!! plz continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it's excellent!!!!!!!!! plzzzz continue soooooon, like u did this time! and plzzzzzzz make mukti and prem end up together, no matter what! i do feel sorry for piya though, but PM ROCKKKK!!! nothing can be compared to that!



LUV THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!


Soha

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Posted: 18 years ago
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....im feeling board...soo i might as well update 😊....i hope your enjoying everything soo far.....

RECAP: Mukti and Piya switched places…piya gave birth to triplets- two identical twin boys and one girl….JAI, ARYAN, PIYA………


2 YEARS LATER…….

BAJAJ HOUSE…..
It has been two years since piya left the house…leaving prem and her triplets behind for mukti…..today is the triplets 2nd birthday…..We enter the bajaj house its beautifully decorated…muktis in the kitchen in a hot pink sarree with making launch….all of a sudden two cute green eyed brown haired identical boys came running down the stairs…..on in a blue 'Hollister' hoddie and one in the exact same one but in red……

Jai (blue hoddie): MAMMA!!!! Aryan keeps on saying he was born first!!!!!! Tell him I WAS!!!!
Aryan (red one): Na uH!!!! I was born first…….
Mukti laughed and interrupted them both: No Aryan sweetie Jai is older……
Jai stuck his tung out…..
Aryan: Well I m better looking….

Just then a little green eyed black haired girl came gown the stairs wearing a pink skirt and t-shirt with a French braid…laughing her heart out…..

Girl: you are both stupid….Aryan Bhaia you and Jai Bhaia look the SAMEE!!!
Mukti went up to the girl and kissed her cheek…..
Mukti: See boys my Piya is verry intelligent……..
They were about to open there mouths to argue…but the door opend and they ran there……..it was prem wearing a pair of jeans a cream blazer with a hot pink t-shirt……

Boys: PAPPPA!!!!
they ran up jumped on him causing him to fall on the ground.....prem kissed each on the cheeks even though he was in sever pain...mukti just laughed.....piya came up and kissed prem on the forehead....

piya: Poor papa....he just walked in the door and hegets jumped by these two morons.....
prem just laughs and kisses piya....jai and aryan are giving her dirty looks.....

prem: okeay princess enough of bugging your brothers....soo whats special about today........
Jai answered: ITS MY BIRTHDAY!!!!
Aryan: HEYYY!!! ITS MY BIRTHDAY TOOO!!!
Piya smacked her forehead: OH GOD!! when will you tow figure out WE'RE ALL BORN ON THE SAME DAY!!!
Mukti laughed...prem smiled just looking at her...he went up and held mukti from the back and kissed her neck......

Mukti: prem.....stop the kids are hear......
Prem: sooooo.......?
Mukti was just blushing......when jai came and pulled on prems pants....
Jai: Papa today you were going to tell us why you call mummma 'basanti' and give us our birthday gifts....remember.....
Prem smiled....he put piya on his shoulders and one boy in each armmm....and started walking up the stairs...

mukti: prem!!!!!!! i told you not to DO THAT!!! they'lll falll!!!! if anything happens I SWEAR I WONT LEAVE You AlIVE!!!!
prem: dont worry jaan...nothing will happen...right guys????
Triplets: YESSS!!! MUMMMA YOU WORRY TOOO MUCH....
mukti just gave them a dirty look......

She came in an hour later into the bedroom..were they were watching the movie 'SHOLAY" (thats how prem was going to explain his explination for calling mukti basanti) she saw prem laying on the bed fast asleep...piya sleeping on his cheast and one boy on each leg...they looked soo cute all cudled together.....

She went downstairs and noticed the mail had arrived.....she went and looke...there it was...the leter of the year....she took it and went into the washroom...made sure the door was looked and opend it.......


Dear mukti,
how are you doing? i know its been long since i wrote to you...i just wanted to know how the triplets and prem were doing....what am i saying...there with you there perfectluy alright......i know you feel guillty everyday
(no seriously...mukti did feel really guilty....everytime she kissed the kids or held prem...all she felt was guilt....) but im telling you that now...as i have said before...stop feeling guilty..whats yours is yours.....and always will be...how do they look???...i mean JAI ARYAN and PIYA....thanks for naming her piya.....they look like prem right????..... (she was wrong piya only had prems hair...every other feture of all the triplets....they looked exactly like their mom...piya)....anyways dont worry about me...im doing fine......

Love your friend....
PIYA


mukti read the letter and started to sobb....she felt soo terrible...she didnt think it was right...but she knew...only a great woman like piya would be able to sacrife soo much...if it was someone else...they probly wouldnt evern tell anyone she was alive......

Muktis thoughts were intruppted by i knock on the washrooms door.....

Prem: hey basanti what are you doing in there.....
Mukti quickly turned on the shower.....
Mukti: i was about i take a shower.....
she opend the door...prem was standing there wiht his devilish smile....
prem: the kids are asleepp.....
mukti: i know...and your point is.... (she knew what he was getting at...)
prem: there in there room...they probly wont get up for about another hour till the party......
mukti: soooo.....
prem: soooo....
he picked her up and took her into the shower....they were soaked....mukti still couldnt bealive he did that.....or maybe it was the fact that she had turned on the cold water......

mukti: prem.....for gods sakes....im never going to be able to get ready for the party...you always get me sidtracked.....
prem: you dont need to get readyy...you look beutifull the way you are.....


They came out half an hour later...prem couldnt get the grin off his face...he won again......mukti juts blushed....she got into a yellow saree she looked amazing prem wore a black suite with a yellow shirt.....they woke up the triplets they got readdy...the twins in black suits jai with a blue shirt and Aryan with red... it was always like that...they wore the exact same thing..but jai had blue and aryan had red....thats the only way prem could tell them apart....even though the twins didnt like it.....piya wore a purple dress....the whole family looked amazing......

prem: okeay little buddies i have you girfts....
from his pockt he pulled out three little silver boxes....on each box one letter engraved .."j"...'A' and "p" ....prem went up to jai and opend the first box...inside there was a "j" pendent incrested with dimonds.....he put it on jais neck...on the back of the 'J" there was somthing engraved.....'the first child the first twin...son of Prem B....' (there wasnt any room for the full last name....)
Then he moved onto Aryan and gave him the exact same thing from the second box....except it was a "A" and on the back it said "mammas boy....but dad loves me more..." (it was true...Aryan was a mammas boy..he always held onto mukti....)

prem: okeay guys from now on...no more coulor coowardination...you can dress the way you like.....
mukti laughed: prem for two years you couldnt even tell them apart with the coulrs...i dont think the necklaces with help......
prem: i know my boys....JAI is the one thats really stuborn and brags alot.....
mukti inturuppted: father like son......
prem giving her a look: and Aryan is always fallowing you like a lost puppy....
mukti: heyyy.....he just likes me better.....
piya: okeay ookeay we all know there not perfect...now my gift please!!!!
prem laughed and went to piya he opend up the last case and pulled out the necklace with the letter "P" on it and on the back it said "daddy's little princess"
piya just looked at prem funny: pappa i understand that you cant tell Jai and Aryan bhiai apart....but im a girl.......

Mukti and prem just laughed themselves silly.........

THE PARTY:

The triplets birthday party was going to be held at Basu house this year.....they decided each year they would rotate...bajaj...basu and go on and on....this year it was basu house's turn.....

The whole family came in mohini was bussy fawning over her great-grand kids...anurag and sampatha were inthere room getting there girt...and prerna was lighting the candles on the three cakes (she had been there all day setting things upp) Prems phone rang.....
Prem: hello....
preson: hello...prem sir you forgot your kiuds gifts.....i would drop them off but Savita is in labour i have to goo....
(it was prem seretary Saft)
prem: ohh saft...its okeay i'll come and pick them upppp.....phone cut....
mukti: prem who was it....?
prem: oh nothing...i left the kids gifts at the office....
mukti: but you gave the gifts....
prem: no i brought more.....
mukti: your spoiling them....
prem: come on...they only have one birthday a year.....and plus its only there second.....
mutki: fine....but im coming with you.....

So they left..it was only a five minute drive to the office from basu house.....it was a slippery night the road wasnt clear....even though prem was driving carfully......BOOM!!! the car crashed.......mukti went flying out of the car....everything went black..........

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HOSPITAL:

Mukti woke up...she saw prena sitting by her.....

prena: doctor !!! shes awake!!!!
the doctor came looked at mukti.....mukti realised the accident..she joilted up...
mukti: CHOTI MAA!!! WHERES PREM!!!...what happend...where is he....

prerna started crying.....
mukti: choti maa whats WRONG!!!!
the doctor: Mrs. Bajaj you shouldnt take soo much stress...its not good for you or your soon to bee child......
muktis face light up...buit them went back down.....
Mukti: oh choti maa...prem will be soo happy....where is he??......
Prerna: m...ukti.......she started to cry...mukti got scared she feard the worst.....
Doctor: im sorry Mrs.Bajaj....but your husband is no more....its been over a month...you've been in a coma..........

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TO BE CONTINUED.....

ok i hope your enjoying it soo far...do leave you comments.....im sorryy if you dont like how its going.....ill update sooon

Reeha 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dat was great but i hope prem isn't really dead 😭
Edited by mandy07 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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what!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzz don't kill of prem....plzzz don't....i BEG of u!!!! but the story is GREAT!!!! i luv ur writing....keep it up!!!!!




Soha



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Posted: 18 years ago
#29

thanks for updating so sooon! plzzzz keep doing that...eager fans like me are always waiting for the next part!



Soha


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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
AWWWWWWW you guysss are sooo sweettt.....soo i guess i'll update.....
RECAP: 2years later....prem mukti car accident...mukti pregnat....prem 'dead'.....

2 YEARS LATER:

It had been two years since that terrible accident....were everyone though prem was dead...mukti was still in denieal...she still had sindoor and wore a mangalsutra...she didnt beleive prem could die...she just didnt...6 months after the accident she gave birth to her and prems daughter...she named her Riya.....( i named the kid riya...cause i always wanted a charecter in kzk to have my name 'reeha'...but the sad part it i think my mom spelt my name wrong on my birth certificate.....but its still pronunced the same 😆 😆 )

Mukti had always told the triplets and Riya that prem was live and that he would come back one day......the triplets were four and riya 2...jai resentad mukti....he wanted prem back...he was becomeing rebelious..mukti could tell...

Meanwhile......

the scean changes from the bajaj house were mukti is standing infront of her and prems portraite witht he triplets...to a high end apartment back drop....in Vancouver, B.C. Canada.... (heheh thats were i live 😆 )....there we see mukti...or the woman that looks like mukti.....PIYA.....a man comes up and grabs he from the waist.....

the man kisss's her neck....

man: eyy piya how come you didnt call me....i was supposed to go for memory theropy...you didnt take me.......
piya: aditya im sorry....i forgot.....

the man turns around......it's none other then PREM............

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TO BE CONTINUED....

sorry i have to helpo my dad with his catering order...i have to goo im sooo sorry ...you know mee i update FAST!!! and i promise i will SOONN!!! but remember posting your thoughts......

Reeha 😛

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