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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
dont worryy....i have somthing up my sleeve 😉 i'll have to update on friday, i only get one hour of tv OR computer time...and tommorows the primer of smallville...sorry i cant miss that...soo ill update friday...sorry guyyss....

thankss
love....
Reeha 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Thanks guyss I rally appreciate it 😊 ....heres the next bit.....

RECAP: prem mets muktis look alike 'piya'

THE CAR:

Prem was driving the black mercades to the hotle...with piya beside him...he just kept on talking and her listening.....

prem: mukit i have soo many plans...i changed my mind...i dont want a big wedding...i want a small one...just famliy.....

piya looked into his eyes...she could see how much he loved mukti...it was compleatly immesruable love.....it wasnt ment for her..it was ment for mukti.....she felt a strange giult even though she was trying to help him...but she knew it was wrong playing with his emotions.....

they walked up to the hotle room.....prem opend the door...and lead her to a suit case....he opened it ...piya couldnt beleive her eyes......it was as if he had collected every photograph of mukti and brought it with him......he carefully took out the dupatta....piya didnt understand what it was......

prem: i promised myself that one day i would give your duppata too you myself...and i was right....a tear rolled down his eye...he hugged piya....

prem didnt understand...why was mukti sooquite...was she not happy to see him?.....

prem: eyy basanti are you not happy to see me....?
piya: oh...! umm ofcourse i am (she realsied her acting wasnt good....) she hugged him...he smiled.....

Prem: sooo choti ma's choti beti...would you like to go back home and give maa a suprise...everyone thinks you goe...but i was right.....

They took the first flight back...in the plain while prem was asleep..piyas dad e-mailed her all of mukti and prems info to herlaptop....famliy...hobbies...style ect....everyone but prem knew that this was not mukti...thye all lied to keep him alive....

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A WEEK LATER: WEDDING DAY.....

Everyone was bussy with the wedding....piya was in mukti room getting ready prerna came in.....

prerna: beta you dont have to do this.....
piya:no aun...choti maa...i'm doning this becasue prems a nice boy he deserves to be happy...i really like him...mukti was a lucky girl...

prerna: but how long...how long can we lie to him....?
piya:from now on im mukti...i lost someone i loved...prem dosent need to lose mukti....plus my dad was going to arrange my wedding...might aswell be with prem....

prerna kissed her forhead: your just like my mukti...so selfless.....from now on you are my mukti.....

The wedding was a small but sweet event....prem was never happier...piya was extatic too....

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TO BE CONTINUED....

PRE-CAP:

prem: soo mukti do you want a boy or girl....?

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okeay guys thats it for now...tell me your thoughts...ill update soon.....

thanks
reeha 😊


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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
thats really gud plz continue 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
THANKS for all the great comments guyss....here's the next part.....

RECAP: prem and piya are married.....

THE BEDROOM:

Prem was downstairs showing away his loser 'ex-friends' that came un invited...while in the beutiflly decorated bedroom piya was talking to her dad on the phone...

piya: hello daddy?
dad: yess sweetheart..you know what to do right...give hime the milk..and remember to mix the aniesthesia in it...and nothing will happen..he'll go fast asleep...
piya: dad...it's okeay...i decided i'll let whatever happen...happen....
dad: WHAT!!!! have you lost it...why are you getting ATTACHED hes OUR PATIATNT!!!!
piya: dad...he's began to grow on me...i really like him...he really loves me....
dad: HE DOSENT LOVE YOU!!!!! HE LOVES MUKTI!!! piya you'll never be happy in this 'fake' realation ship.....it's always going to pi 'prem and mukti' NEVER 'prem and piya'.....
piya: it's alrihgt....im willing to make that sacrafice....i will be mukti...just for prem.....dad i've started to love him....
dad: he dosent love you...your getting crazy....look at it from a medical point of view....
piya: dad its my life...and i've made up my mind...i'll do anything to keep prem ahppy...and if mukti is the one thing that keeps prem happy....then i will be mukti.....
dad: bu....
piya: end of disscusion
she cuts the phone..and shuts it off and places it in the drawer of the vanity...she looks in the mirror...she looks at her face....then at a phot of prem and mukti at snehas sangeeth party....prem looked so annoyed..and mukti was laughing at him.....piya smiled....just then prem came in..... he went and eld her from the back...and kissed her neck...he saw she was looking at the photo..

prem: remember basanti...you pissed the hell out of me.....
piya laughed....
prem: but for the past month i missed you doing that...he hugged her.....
piya just held him tight.....she was going to shut the window..it was getting chili....put prem grabs her wrist..and pulls her toward him....
prem: eyy basanti..dont ever leave me agian..not even for a second.....
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NEXT MORNING:

piya woke up....the light was shining through the window...she looked at prem...he looked soo peacefull in his sleep......and less mischevious too.....she kissed his forhead and went to take a shower.....she came out 15 mins later ina towel...and opend the coupord to see what close were there.....she saw muktis favorite out fits...salwar kameez's...but piya didnt like those...she wore a saree instead...and light blue on to be exact.....she carefull put on her mangalsutra..and sindoor....she was having trouble tyng the sarees blouse...when soft hands touched her back she screamed.....

piya: AHHHHH!
prem: hahahahah! omg its just me....your dear husband....
piya in a realeved voice: You scared the hell out of me prem!
prem turned her around and tied her blouse then kissed er back....
prem: thats my job.....
piya: scaring me.....?
prem: no...loving you......

Prem went into the wash room....piya looked at the huge portraite of mukti....she felt a sudden feeling of guilt...as if shee had taken somthing that didnt belong to her.....

piya thinking: mukti...im sorry....i know prem loves you...and only you....but your not hear anymore.....i promise...i'll take good of the family you left behind.......
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THREE MONTHS LATER.....
BAJAJ HOUSE:

Piya was in the kitchen she felt tierd.....prem was comeing down the staris....he noticed that piya...wasnt loking so well...he went up to her and looked in her eyes....he was in shock....

prem: eyy...jaan...how come your eyes are green?....
piya realsied...she had forgotten to put on her contacts.....she had been to distracted from being tired....

piya: uh.....ummm... welll....i didnt notice....baba said that my mothers eyes coloured changed.....maybe its genetic.....
prem kissed he forhead...: well i dont care what colour your eyes are...i love all the same....
piya: ok enough romancing go the the table..and i'll give you a parantha.....
prem: paranthas! aganin! why cant we have somthing else!
piya: oh yeah...today you dont like my paranthas tommorow you wont like me... (she was joking)
prem: dont ever joke like that again.....you have no idea how much i love you.....
piya went and kissed his cheek: ok baba! im sorry...i wont ever joke again alright...now sit hear let me get you breakfast....

It wasnt a long walk from the kitchen from the dining room..but she still felt woozy.....then she fell........
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Prem called the doctor...he kept on pacing the hallway..he was getting restless...prerna could see the tension growing in his eyes.....just then th edoctor came out.....

prem : what...wrong?
doctor: nothing she's just a little tired sue to her pregnacy.....
prem smiled and pushed the doctor aside and went into the bedroom...he saw her sleeping soundly on the bed..he went andn kissed her forhead....and held her hand...piya woke up (she had no clue what was going on..)

piya: what happend?
prem: mukti do you want a girl or a boy?....
piya: huh?.....

It took her too minutes buts she finally got it...and began to cry....
piya: what ever you want......
prem: i want a girl...a sweet but annoying one just like you.....

prem left the room to go to basu house and tell anu th egreat news...prerna came in and kissed piya's forhead....and smiled....

prerna: are you going to tell your father.....
piya: he's still upset about my desision.....
prerna: but you should tell him......
piya: i know what he's goingt to say...i dont want to hear it......
prerna: it's up to you...... i'll explain to prem.....piya....how can you spend your whole life living as mukti?......
piya: because i love him.........
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LATER THAT DAY:

Piya was callling her dad.......

piya: hello daddy....?
dad: oh hi ........you want out of this realation ship right!?!!! i knew it,.....you should have lisned to me!!!!
piya: no dad...your wrong i just phoned to let you know....your gonna be a nana........
he was silent....and he finally spoke....
dad: abort it.....
piya: WHAT!!!
dad: I SAID ABORT IT!
piya: how can you say that..arnt you suppssed to be happy for me!
dad: its either me...or prem...make up your mind piya.....prem never loved you he loves mukti.....

the phone was dissconected piya began to cry...prem came in.....she quickly wipped her tears.......

prem: whats wrong....
piya: oh...um just feeling tired......
prem: are you sure.....or is my little girl bothering you.....?
piya: prem she's not htat old yet.....
prem laughed and hugged piya...piya held him tight........

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THREE MONTHS LATER:

Piya was four months pregnat...she was going to her doctor for her regualar cheack up...she accedentailly took the elevator the wrong floo...she was supposed to go on the 3rd she wnt on the eighth...the private area.....the elevator closed..so she went in the hall...and saw through a door...what she saw she couldnt beleve...it was mukti.............

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TO BE CONTINUED....

i hope you guys enjoyed my update...do post your thoughts.......thanks alot....

Reeha 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
another update plzzz contiune soon
180506 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#16
Well guys since i have nothing better to do ...im going to update 😊 i hope you liked it soo far...i know it may be confusing...plus i make alot of SPELLLING ERRORS! 😳 sorry about that.....now hears the next part.....
RECAP: Prem and piya, are having a child....piya went to get a check up all done...insted she see's MUKTI!!!!!!

Piya was amazed...through the glass door she could see mukti on the bed.....laying there like a dead body......all of a sudden she jolted up and started yelling.....

mukti: PREM!! PREMMM!!.... pr...e...m
she stopped as soon as the nurse sitting beside her gave her a shoot....

piya was shocked.....mukti was ALIVE!!! she wondered how...the nurse came out.....piya looked at her badge...she had been only working for a month....

nurse with a confused look on her face..: ummm..you..huh????

piya: umm....im her sister....whats wrong with her....i work at the next hospital over...i tarnsfered her hear...i just came to cheack upp on her....umm your her new nurse?......

nurse: ummm yes i started with her today.....
piya: did you studdy her file carfully (the nurse seemed nervouse and easy to take advatage of)
nurse: ummm yess...
piya: okeay then pop quize...your job depends on it.....
nurse: huh!? uh okeay i know everything.....

piya: what's her name?
nurse: umm her name wasnt giving on the file we know her as patiant 'PREM'
piya: WHY?
nurse: ummm cauuse she yells out' PREM'
piya: when did she come hear?
nurse: her file says' for the past six months...
piya: what is her injury?
nurse:ummm some brain damage..but she is better now...
piya: what medicaain do you give her...?
nurse: ummm cheamical No.5824 (sorry i just made that upp)
piya thought: thats a type of anasthseai.....a poisiones one....
piya: how much?
nurse: 0.000001gms a week....
piya: ok whose her doctor?
nurse: ummm ummm Doctor Sammer Sidanth.....
piya: okeay you can goo..........

Piya wen thome...not attending her appointment...she was still in shock...both at the fact that mukti was alive...and that the doctor was sammer.....

(okeay now im gonna fill you in on who this 'sameer' guy is....)

Sameer was Sneha's fieancee....they had gotte4n engaged last month .......sneha really liked him....they were getting married next month....

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Piya went home and told sneha everything...she was shocked....

Sneha: piya....are you sure?
piya: i amm.....
Sneha: but how can....i dont get it....
piya: ask sameer.....
Sneha got her phone and called sameer.....
Sneha: hello?! Sammerr?
Sameer: Eyy jaan! whats up!
Sneha: You have mukti dont you!?
Sameer: Why would i have you bahbi...?
Sneha: i mena patiant 'PREM'
Smaeer: how....do u know about her......?
Sneha: Meet me and piya in Cafe Remiel in half and hour.....
Sameer: okeay.....

They went to the cafe...Sneha started and told how mukti died and how prem got tramatised...and that piya isnt mukti......that patiant 'prem' is mukti....Smaeer was shocked....

Sneha: how did you get mukti?
Sameer: Sneha you know that my dad is a doctor too right?
sneha: yess but what does that have to do with any of this?
Sameer: well when my dad dies last month...he gave all his "PRIVAT SCTION CASES" to me.....i have only been working on mukti for a month...and i havent even seen her yet......i just know how she survived....
Sneha: how.....

THIS IS HOW IT HAPPEND!

SAMEER: After the police officers took her body to the hospital.....the bodys were swithched.....woth a look alike......not a piya look alike...this woman had died a month earlier...she just had muktis bone structure.....it had taken multiple freezing and defreezings to get her face even close to muktis.....Then we had to do many surgerys to fix muktis brain structure...she hasnt fully recuperated either all i noe is that some... 'DEBONITA' is paying the bills.......mukti is alive...but 10% brain dead...but she's healing....

Piya: your lying.....
Sameer: huh?
Piya: chemical No.5284 is leathel....
Sameer: I know youve done basic medicain....but chemical NO>5284 can help fix sertain parts of the brain...if givin the perfict dosage...thats why shes only givin 0.000001gms a day...its actuaalyy helps her...
Sneha: but why would debonita want to save mukit?
Smamer: I dont know...she probubly has a plan....
Piya: at this rate how fast will she heal?......
Sameer: 2 months....shes only goning to have some permanent hearing loss about 15% and she oulnt bee able to remember the first 15 years of her life..no matter what ever she ddoes....
Sneha: that seems reasinable.....but she will be curred right....?
Sameer: yupp....
Sneha: Prems going to bee soo happy!!!
Piya began to sobb....sneha realsed what she said....
Sneha: im sorry...i didnt mean it that way piya....
piya: no your right....i'll fix this....

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THREE MONTHS LATER... (i love forwarding things.... 😆 if only i could forward my mom lecturing me..)

Prerna, Sneha and Piy awent everday to go meet mukti.....they had told her what had happend in her absances...at first she cryed...but then thanked piya for taking such good care of her ffamily...and congradualted her...... one day mukti was suprised to see piya come by herself....

Piya: Mukti i've decided somthing....i know you wont be able to ask for your right...thats why im giving it to you....
mukti: huh?
piya: after my dilvery....i'll leave...and prem will think that yoou gave birth to the triplets... (oh i forgot to metion Piya is having TRIPLETS!!!)...i just have one request...dont ever tell prem that there was a 'piya'....
mukti: no...i cant let you do that......your his wife...the mother of his kids....i cant take that away from you........
piya: mukti you know....prem dosent know me as 'piya' he calls me... 'mukti...or basanti' he thinks im you.....mukti it always has, is adn will forever be 'prem and mukti' it was never ment to be 'prem and piya' and it never will bee...

they both cryed and agreed to the plan.......

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TO BE CONTINUED.....

I hope you guys are liking this soo far..i know that mukti being alive seems impossible and that the way i brought her back is cornnyy..but thats all i could tyhink off SORRY!

Remember to post your thoughts and comments good or bad...i love readding them......and if you have a title in mind tell me.....

Reeha 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow mukti's back i don't care how corny u think it mite seem but it's great dat u brought her back hope prem never finds out bout piya b/c dun't want him feelin guilty dat he was with sum1 else other than his basanti but do feel bad 4 piya i mean she actually took care of him n she also fell in luv with him hope piya also gets a happy endin but not with prem 😆 prem is only mukti's continue soon
Edited by mandy07 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
i'm happy now!!! mukti is back!!!!!!! i hope things go like this in kzk! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
yeey mukti's alive... i wish dis is wat appens in kzk in da cumin weekz!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
😃 👏 OMG tht was gr8...plz cntinu

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