humhe tum $e pyaar kitna..(prem mukti)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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my fanfic part one ..hpe u guyzz lykee itt if u dont luke so do tell me dont tell lie...!!! okeyzzzzzz...!!!!! 😭 hey guyz i need one person to be wid mukti so em taking (muthan)frm (kyun ki saas bhi kabhi bhau thi)hpe u guyz lyke it n in thiz story his name will be karan metha..!!! iz dat clear guyz...!!! and mine story wil b start from tommrow episode alryte..!!! as u all have seen it..!!!

!!!..HUMHE TUM SE PYAAR KITNA..!!!

part:-1

DEBO:-PREM ACHA HOWA TUM NE PRENA KO GHAR SE NIKAL DIYA WARNA YAHAN BHI HUMHARI PARTY KHARAB KAR DAY TI..!!!   ; ;

PREM:-HEY DEBO DNT CALL ME PREM CALL ME UD DATZ LOOK GUD....AND I THINK UR RYTE..!!!WELL LETZ ENJOY DE PARTY..!!!

PRENA:-(CRYING AND SAYING TO HERSELF Q PADA KIYA MAIN TUJHE)

AFTER A WHILE ANURAG COMEZ AND PRENA IZ ASKING TO ANURAG DAT WHR IZ MY FAMILY WHR IZ MR BAJAJ AND WHR IZ MY CHILDRENZ TEMME ME ANURAG..??

ANURAG:-PRENA...

PRENA:-WHT??

ANURAG:-PRENA..THEY ALL ARE IN DEHLI FOR POOJA...

PRENA:-WHT..??

IN OFFICE:-

PREM:-(CELL RINGZ)(IN DA PHONE WAS MR-MEHTA)HELLO MR MEHTA..HOWZ U??

MR MEHTA:-HI.. EM F9..!!! AND EM NOT CUMING DERE MY BUSINESS PARTNER IZ CUMMING TOMMROW AT 7 PM CUZ I HAVE LOTZ OF WORK HERE OK....!!!

PREM:-ALRYTE....!!!(UD CALLZ DEBO)HE YELLZ DEBO..!!

DEDO:-HAAN BOLA Q CHILLA RAHAY HO..

PREM:-KAL MR MEHTA NHI UN KI BUSINESS PARTNER ARAHI HAI 7 BAJE TELL ANY ONE TO PICK HER ALRYTE CUZ EM BUZY..!!!

DEBO:-OK UD...!!!

IN LONDON...!!!

KARAN:-MUKTI APP KO KAL MUMBAI JANA HAI WOH PROJECT K SILSALY MAIN...

MUKTI:-PER WAHAN TO TUM JARAHAY THAY NAH WAISE BHI MERAY PASS YAHAN BHT KAAM HAI MAIN NHI JA SAKTI TUM CHALE JUO..PLZZZ

KARAN:-HAAN MUKTI MAIN JA RAHA THA PER CANADA MAIN MERI EK URGENT MEETING HAI KAL OUR WAHAN JANA BHT ZAROORI HAI SO PLLZ TUM CHALI JANA OUR KHUSI KO BHI LE JANA WAISE BHI US KE CHUTYAN HONE WALI HAIN OUR WOH BORE HO JAYE GE YAHA OK

MUKTI:-OK BABA OK MAIN CHALI JUO GE OUR APNI BETI KHUSHI KO BHI SATH LE JUO GE ...ACHA WAISE US COMPANY NAAM KYA HAI..??

KARAN:-KP INDUSTRIES..!!!

MUKTI TO HER SELF THANK GOD..!!

MUKTI:-OK KARAN AB JUO GHAR JA KAR SAMAN BHI PACK KARNA HAI KHUSI KO BHI SKOOL SE LANAY JANA HAI..!! BYE

KARAN:-OK BYE..!!

IN SKOOL:-

ONE GAL CAME OUT FROM DA CLASS RUNNING ANG HUG MUKTI(NON OTHER THAN KHUSI HER AND PREM DAUGHTER)GOLDEN N BROWN HAIR GREY EYES AND SO CUTE..!!!(AGE 4 YEARZ)

KHUSI:-HI MY SHWEER CUTE MUMMY

MUKTI:-HI KHUSI BETA KYA KIYA AJJ SKOOL MAIN

KHUSI:-KUCH NHI KAAM KIYA OUR APP KO MISS APP NE MUJHE MISS KIYA

MUKTI:-HAA BETA MUMMA NE APP KO BHTMIZZ KIYA ACHA APP KO PATA HAI HUM KAL MUMBAI JA RAHAY HAIN..!!!

KHUSI:-WOW..!! MUMBAI KARAN PAPA BHI ARAHAY HAI NAH..??

MUKTI:-NHI KHUSHI BETA KARAN PAPA NHI ARAHAY YAHAN UN KO KAAM HAI NAH WOH BAAD MAIN AGAY OK..!!

KHUSHI:-OK MUMMY CHALE..??

MUKTI:-HAAN BETA..!!

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HPE U GUYZ LYKE ITT I WILL CONT SOON W8 FOR MY NEXT PART...!!!

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TOMMROW:-MUKTI IS CUMMING 2 MUMBAI IZ IS ON AIRPORT WILL SHEE MEET PREMM...?? WILL MUKTI HELP PRENA FOR HER HOUSE HER COMPANY AND STAND AGAINST WID PREM..??

LET C ON NEXT PART..!!!

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Bookworm87 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow, thats really gud!continue sn!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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šŸ‘
great stuff yaar plz continue!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey i think no one lyke my fanfic no respons well i try my best to ryte
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Posted: 19 years ago
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no its really really good!! n btw is that karan, from the earlier episodes u know: that karan.
do continue. i liked it!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Is This Real Umm Liek Is This Goin To Happen In aug.3 eps. šŸ˜• 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow carry on soon!!
its lovely šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Originally posted by: 255524

Is This Real Umm Liek Is This Goin To Happen In aug.3 eps. šŸ˜• 😳

no its a fanfic

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey plz continue can't wait more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome job plz continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanxz every1

part#2
enjoy..!!

here we go
now mukti iz packing her bagand khusi came to her room

khushi:-mummy hum wahan se wapas kab ayein gay.??
mukti:-pata nhi beta kab karan papa kahen gay tab
khushi:-our karan papa wahan kab ayein gay.?
mukti:-mujhe nhi pata app khud karanpapa se pooch lo woh abhi ayan gay..!!
after a while a bell ringz khushi run too the door n yellz mummy karan papa agaye..!!!
khushi:-karan papa main abhi app kbare main he baat kar rahe thii
karan:-acha kya baat kar rahe thi humhare beti humhare bare main.?
khushi:-woh main mummy se pooch rahi thi k app mumbai kab ayien gay app humhare sath he chale nah plz
karan:-nhi khushi woh yahan itna kaam hai nah yahan ka kaam kar k main foran se apnii beti k pass ajuo ga..ok..!!
khushi:-ok karan papa
karan:-yeh app k liye
khushi:-(khushi yellz)chocolatez i luv u karan papa
karan:-i luv u 2
mukti:-aray !!karan app agaye
karan:-nhi abhi arahon šŸ˜†
mukti:-(mukti smilez)nhi i mean well choro app ko kuch filez deyni thi nah..!!
karan:-haan yeh lo filez yeh mr..(karan cellz ring)hello
prem:-hi mr mehta
karan:-oh hi mr sharma
mukti iz shocked
karan:-app ne kaise phone kiya koi kaam tha
prem:-haan woh app ke bussiness partner ka kiya naam hai woh darsal main nhi aon ga woh meri employ agayi mujhe yahan tora kaam hai iss liye
karan:-un ka naam hai........mrz mukti mehta
prem:-alryte bye
karan:-bye

in mumbai:-
prem:-yellz debo
debo:-ud tum har waqt chillatay q rehtay hho bolo kya kaam hai..??
prem:-mrz mukti mehta kal shaam ke flight se arahi hai our tum us ko pick karne juo ge ok
debo:-p..pe...per
prem:-per wer kuch nhii tum juo ge our yeh mera akhari faizla hai now leave
debo:-ok

anurag house:-
every one iz sitting all were shocked 😲 when they saw prena n anurag..!!
tuhar and doris hug prena
then prena goes to sneha n hug her
then he ask 4 mr bajaj
anurag tellz dat she in hiz room
prena goes to mr bajaj room n hug her

mr baja:-prena kaise hoo our tumhe too 14yearz ke saza howi thi nah
prena:-woh mera achay behavior ko dekh kar meri saza kamm kar deyti our yahan ayi to pata chala premm ne sab kuch barbad kar diya
bajaj:-haan prena prem ne sub kuch hatyaliya
prena:-main prem ko nhi choron ge

in london:-

mukti keep thinking abt dat whoz iz mr sharma may b he iz prem sharma no he cant b prem sharma oh god plz help me

karan:-hey mukti kya soch ne lag gayi
mukti:-kuch nhi
karan:-acha app yeh files mr sharma ko dey dejiya ga
mukti:-ok karan
karan:-ab main chalta hoon bye
mukti:-ok bye
now mukti n khushi iz on airport w8ting for hiz flight
annocement:-all pessengers of mumbai plz go n sit in da plane cuz plane iz going to be in 5 minz
mukti n khusi sitz in tha plane
khushi:-mummy kitna maza ayga nah then khushi sees mukti crying she ask muktii dat
khushi:-mummy app q ro rahi ho
mukti:-ji beta
khushi:-man ne poocha mummy app q ro rahi hoo
mukti:-woh beta kuch nhhi durr lag raha hai k app ko koi mujh se cheen k le gaya to
khushi:-mummy ab bhi nah asa kuch nhi hoga main sirf ap k sath he rahoo ge our kissi k sath nhii
mukti:-acha beta ab app so juo hum subha baat karte hain ok gud nite
khushi:-ok gud nite mummy
mukti still thinking abt prem n crying..!!

itz morning:-
mukti n khushi is on airport w8ting 4 mr sharma employ..!!

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datz itt..!!
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WILL MUKTI HELP PRENA FOR HER HOUSE HER COMPANY AND STAND AGAINST WID PREM..??
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letz c wat will happpened next..!!
w8 4 my 3 part...!!!


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