humhe tum $e pyaar kitna..(prem mukti) - Page 3

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part#4

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last:-choti maa yeh meray our prem ke bachi hai

now:-
prena:-wht..??
mukti:-haan choti maa yeh prem ke nishani hai
prena:-per
mukti:-plz mujhe iss bare baat nhi karne
prena:-acha tu yeh bata kaise hai tu
mukti;-main bilkul theik hoon app log kaise ho
prena:-hum log bhi theik hai
mukti:-main yahan ayi our mujhe yeh pata chala k prem n ab kuch cheen liya prem kabhi itna gir sakta main ne socha nhi tha
prena:-haan beta jo howa so howa
mukti:-nhi choti maa n prem se app ka badla loon ge q k jo iss ne app k sath kiya main yeh bardast nhi kar sakti
prena:-beta kuch nhi mila yeh kar k
mukti:-choti maa plzzz app ko meri kasam
prena:-theik hai beta
mukti:-ek our baat app log meray sath meray ghar main raho gay
prena:-nhi beta
mukti:-choti agar sneha app ko kehte to app mana karte
prena:-nhi per
mukti:-per wer kuch nhi app meray sath raho gay n datz iz final plz sir
mr bajaj:-theik hai beta

den mr bajaj,prena,sneha,thusharr,doris start living wid mukti ...!!

next morning:-
mukti were making breakfast for all
khushi wakes up n comes down
khushi:-gud morning kissy mumma
mukti:-huggy beta gud morning

cont soon

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PART#5
EnjOy...!!

MUKTI:-APP KO PATA HAIajj karan papa arahay hain
khushi:-wow abhi arahay hain
mukti:-haan
khushi:-ko mumma fhir ajj hum lunch karan papa k sath bahir karain gay
mukti:-ok beta
after a while dorr bells ring
khushi yells karan papa agaye mumma
n open the door
khushi:-karan papa app agaye
its was not karan
the man:-em not karan em ud
khushi:-appp ko kis se milna hai
mukti shouts khushi kanu hai
khushi:-woh koi ud hai
mukti waz shocked
mukti comes near da door
mukti:-prem tum yahan q aye ho
khushi:-mumma app in ko prem q kaha inhon ne to apna naam ud batya tha
prem was shocked cuz khushi saying mukti mumma
prem:-to basanti tumhari bachi bhi hai
khushi:-hello unclle app meri mumma ko basanti q keh rahay ho
mukti:-khushi to ur room
khushi:-per mumma
mukti:-go to ur room ryte now
khushi:-ok
mukti:-prem tum yahan q aye ho
prem:-yahan se guzar raha to socha k tum se milta cholon basanti
mukti:-tum ne bilkul galt soch now get out
prem:-chil basanti
mukti:-tum jarahay ho yah nhii
prem:-nah
mukti:-kya chactay ho tum
prem:-mukti yeh bachi tumhari hai kya
mukti dun noe wht to say
prem:-itna guhbra q rahi ho main ne sirf tum se yeh pocha k bachi tumhari our us karan ki hai yah kisi our ke
mukti:-tum konu hotay ho meri personal lyfe main interfair karnay walay
prem:-kanu hota hoon main yaad dilon
mukti:-iss ki ki zaroot nhi hai ab juo yahan se
our mujhe se our meribachi se dorr raho
after a door bells rings
mukti open da door itz karan
mukti:-karan app
karan:-haan main q koi prob
mukti:-nihii woh choro
karan was shoced when he saw prem
karan:-mukti yeh kanu hai
mukti:-yeh mr prem hai
karan:-oh em sorry mujhe nhi pata tha mr sharma
prem:-no itz ok
karan:-to app yahan kaise
prem:-woh main in se yeh poochnay aya tha k inhon ne deal q cancelled kardi woh bhi bina meeting k
karan stares at mukti
karan:-kya yeh sach hai
mukti;-karan woh
karan:-main ne sirf tum se yeh poocha kya yeh sach hai
mukti:-haan
karan:-q
mukti:-woh main nhi bata sakti
(n about to leave when lhold her hand)
prem saw dis n get jelous n angry
mukti:-hath choro mera
karan:-pehlay bato yeh deal q cancelled kar de
mukti:-yeh main app ko bata nah zaroori nhi samajti
karan slaps on mukti face
prem get angry
mukti:-prem tum se juo ryte now
prem leaves n mukti goes to her room crying
karan cames in mukti room
karan:-mukti em sorry
mukti:-itz ok
karan:-per app us cmpany k sath deal q cancelled karde
mukti:-main yeh deal ok karti hoon our kal se he office jana shru kar doon ge
karan:-per abhi to app ne
mukti:-jo nechay howa main us bare main baat nhi karna chacti
karan:-acha mukti humri laree meh main khushi se nhi mila woh kahan hai
mukti:-woh apne kamre main hai
karan goes to khushi room
karan:-hi khushi
khushi:-karan papa app agay she hugs him
karan:-haan
khushi:-itni late
karan:-haan woh kaam tha
khushi:-ufff ho har waqt kaam
karan:-sorrry beta per ab main app k sath rokon ga
khushi:-acha app mumma se milay
karan:-haan
khushi:-app chocolates laye
karan;-oh woh to main bhool gaye
khushi:-oh ho app har cheez bhool jatey hain
karan:-app ke chocolates our main bhool juo
khushi:-thanxz karan papa i luv u
karan:-i luv u to beta acha main office se ho k ata hoon
khushi:-again jaldi aye ga
karan:-ok beta

in office:-
karan goes to office

prem was in his cabin n was so angry
karan comes in prem cabin

karan:-hi mr sharma
prem:-hi mr desai
karan:-so main sirf appp ko yeh kehnay aya tha k yeh deal main ok karta hoon
prem:-per ap ne apni wife se pooch liya
karan:-wife
prem:-haan mukti
karan lough:- 😆 she is not mine wife she iz mine business patner
prem was shocked after listing dis
prem;-wht..??


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part#6
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prem:-wht she is not ur wife
karan:-haan mr prem she iz not mine
prem:-to fhir mukti desai q
karan:-woh us ke beti khushi hai nah us ko main ne apni beti mana haio iss liye mukti deshmuk se mukti desai
prem:-to khushi app ke beti nhi hai
karan:- nhii
prem:-to fhir woh aap ko papa q bulati hai
karan:-q ke us ke father ke death hogayi hai iss liye main ne ussay apna naam diya
prem:-kya khushi ko pata hai k uss k papa ki death hogayi hai
karan:-haan
prem:-yahni k mukti app ke biwi nhi hai woh app ki bussiness patner hai our khushi app ke beti nhi hai
karan:-nah
prem:-to app ke mukti se mulkat kab howi thi
karan:-yeh hi kuch panach saal pehlay
prem:-jab woh app se mili thi us ke bachi thi
karan:-haan
prem thought dat khushi kahen meri beti to nhii
prem waz so happy
prem:-acha to mukti kal se join kar rahi hai nah
karan:-haan
prem:-acha
karan:-mr sharma ab hum dost hai ryte
prem:-haan
karan:-to ab app sirf mujhe karan bulye
prem:-acha our mujhe ud
karan:-ok
prem:-lets go to coffee shop
karan:-y not

next morning...!!
mukti was getting ready 4 office
she iz wearing black n blue cobination saari
and sliver earings n pandel on her neck n in one hand sum churiyan n second bangles wid open hair n she was looking damn preety!!

when mukti enters in office she saw debo
debo:-hi mukti to app ne office join karliya
mukti:-main yahan meeting discuss karne aye nah k tum se baat karne
debo:-oh ho madam meeting discuss karne aye hhain
mukti:-ab tu biech se hatey ge
debo:-haan per yaad rakna tu yahan meeting discuss karne aye hai ud peh doray dalnay nhi
mukti:-mujhe koi shock nhi hai teray paati se baat karne ka
debo:-paati
mukti:-haan prem
debo:-woh mera paati nhi hai
mukti was shocked
mukti:-teri to uss se shaadi honay wale thi nah
debo:-shaadi to toote gayi
mukti:-kya yah ne ke prem ne ab tak shaadi nhi ke debo:-nhi
mukti:-wht
mukti leaves n goes to conference room
she enter prem staring at her like a idoit
they look into each other eye the whole world stop for a sec n da backround music(humhe tu se pyaar kitna yeh hum nhi jaante magar ji nhi sakte tumhare bina)n den they back to in his sences
karan:-mukti itni late
mukti:-woh traffic tha
karan:-anywayz u r looking preety
mukti:-thanxz
karan:-ud meeting start kare
prem:-yeah sure
the meeting iz over every one leaves
except of mukti prem n karan
karan:-mukti mujhe jana hai q k ajj main ne khushi ko promise kiya tha k main lunch us k sath kroon ga dun mind ud
prem:-no not at all
den karan leaves
now mukti n prem were alone in da room
they were staring at each other
n then mukti standz up n was leave when prem hold her hand
mukti:-prem hath choro mera
prem:-mukti pehlay yeh bato k khushi kiss ke beti hai
mukti:-woh karan ki beti hai
prem:-galt woh humhari bachi hai ryte
mukti:-wrong mr ud woh sirf karan our meri beti hai
prem:-galt karan us ka baap nhi hai
mukti:-tum kanu hotay ho yeh poochnay walay
prem:-main khushi ka baap hoon
mukti:-nhi woh sirf meri beti hai tumhara us per koi haq nhi
prem:-pura haq hai mera us per khushi mera khon hai yeh sach hai nah k khushi meri beti hai
mukti yells n say
mukti:-haaan
prem was shocked n was so haapy
mukti:-jab main ghar chor kar gayi thi us waqt main pregent thi
prem:-tum ne mujhe batya q nhi
mukti:-q k mujhe pata tha k tum mujhe our merya bachay ko kabhi except nhi karte
prem:-q nhi karta
mukti:-q k tum mujhe se pyaar nhi karte thay
prem:-main tum se pyaar karta hooon i love yew damn itt
mukti was shocked
mukti:-kya
prem:-haaan main tum se bht pyaar karta hoon jab tum mujhe chor kar gayi us k baad mujhe apni galti ka eshaah howa main ne tumhe doonda bhii
mukti:-kya
prem:-jab tum mujhe chor kar gayi to mujhe pata chala k main ne kya khoya
mukti was shocked she dun noe wht to say
prem:-har ek ek pal main tarsa hoon tumhare liye kya tumhe meri ek bar bhi yaad nhi ayi
mukti:-nhi q k main tum se pyaar nhi karte
prem was shocked
prem:-wht
mukti:-haan ab mera hath choro
prem leaves her hand
mukti leaves frm dere


datz itt guyz
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continue soon dat was great n prem now knows dat khushi is his child i hope there will be alot of pm scenes

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part#7
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prem leaves mukti hand
n mukti leaves 4rm dere

prem was crying in the room
mukti was also crying

mukti went home

home..>!!!!

karan:-array mukti hum tumharay bare main baat kar rahe thay
mukti:-acha karan main fresh ho k ati hoon
kaaran:-okh

next day...!!

mukti:-karan main office nhi jarahi ajj mei tabyait theik nhi hai
karan:-acha waise ek baaat bolon tum bht achi lag rahi ho
mukti smiles:-thanxz
karan:-acha me leaving 4 office
mukti:-ok
karan sitting in his car n thinking about mukti n talking to himself...!!!

main mukti k itna karib q ho raha hoon
kahin mujhe pyaar to nhi hogaya us se
woh hai he itni achi woh bht inconnect hai
bht cute i luv mukti..!!!
karan was so happy main ajj usay keh doon ga
per pehlay main ud se baat karta hoon
n the backround song was
(kya mujhe pyaar hai)

lyrics:-
q ajj kal neend kaam
kuab zyada hai
lagta khuda ka koi nek irda hai
pehlay faqeer ajj dil shezada hai
lagta khuda ka koi nek irda hai
kya mujhe pyaar hai
kaise qumaar hai...!!

in office:-

karan:-hey ud mujhe tujhe se zaroori baat karni hai
prem:-haan bolo
karan:-yaar woh yaar
prem:-kya woh woh
karan:-em in luv
prem:-wht kis se
karan:-woh mukti se
prem:-wht
prem was shocked
prem:-mukti se
karan:-haan yaar our ajj he main ussay propose karon ga
prem:-yaar
karan:-kya
prem:-nhi kuch nhi em so happy 4 u
karan cells ring
karan:-wht oh shit
prem:-kya howa
karan:-kuch nhi mujhe ajj deal karne shimla jana hoga bht zaroori hai
prem:-to fhir mukti
karan:-yaar jana to main bhi nhi chacta per kya karoon main do din mein wapas a juon ga
prem:-ok
karan;-yaar nikla na mujhe abhi hai tu ek kaam mukti ko bata dey nah
prem:-acha main bata doon ga

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