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and its so cool ejzooooooooooo and sneha and amit lov triagle 👏

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Originally posted by: beauty_foreva91

jazmeen..u seem lyk a big ejo fan 😆 😆 anywazyy nice..continue desi_gr3l..atleast for jazmeen shes desperate 😆

ya i m really crazy bout him

u kno wat 2 min ago i stoped watcin special jodi no.1 show where ejzoo was tyin anita's saree i watced it at least 20 or 30 times again and agaain my sis got fed up and told me 2 stop don kno hjow many times more i m gonno watch 😆😆

raelly crazy bout him

desi grl plzzzzzzzzzzz con😭

i can really imagen ejzooooooo doin romantic scens😉

sry guyz didnt update in a really long time i know 😃 but will do it so0n..not only..for jazmeen 😆 but for all my buddies..hehe..plz hav som more patience ill continue really soon ..and plz every1 call meh by my name..mehnoom.i yhav alot of names.. 😉 😆 😆

update # 3

ok guyz here you go hope you all lyk dis part..

recap=mukti- mein itni kamzor nahi hu samjahy ab jao unn ladkiyon ke paas mein to sirf ek time pass hu na..she troughs a blanket and a pillow on the floor raho tum sari raat nichay mee paas bhi maat aana

prem is now really mad at himself that he ruined his own marrige ngiht..

prem- shit..ab kya?

so prem sleeping on the floor..with a confused and mad face
and so is mukti..

scene-1

both stayed quite for half hour..both wanted to talk to each toher but thr ego came in between..prem waited mukti to talk, and on the toher hand she wanted him to say sorry.
and make up..prem couldnt bear the silence any more and gathered his guts together..and
went up to her

prem- mukti so gayi?

mukti- no im playing soccer..what prem?..raat ko tum puch rahay ho mein so rahi hu ya nahi..

prem- mukti

mukti- kya hai???..she knew he wanted 2 say sorry so she gave a hiden smile

prem- ok mein hara tum jitti i am sorry dekho maine kaan bhi paker liya hai

mukti- nahi assi stupid si joke kerne mein tumhe acha lagta hoga per tum jantay ho logo ko kaisa lagta hoga huh?

prem- oh cmon mukti assay zhagarke koi faida nahi,,

mukti got up

prem- where you going?

mukti- tazi hawo khanay?..

prem follows her..she starts to leave but he grabs her wrist..and brings her to the wall..

mukti- kya ker rahay ho?

prem- shu kuch maat kaho..he was about to kiss her..when she covers his mouth with her hands

mukti- no way..mujhe neend arahi hai i dont have time for this bakwaas

prem- bakwaas?..tum mere sabar ka imtehan lay rahi ho?

mukti- ok lay rahi hu so dekho janay do mujhe

mukti again tries to leave..but he grabs her waist..and bring her close to her..

mukti- prem i am having a headache please..i hope u understand..ne nods..wiht a sad smile..

she starts to leave when her earings her stuck to his coat..

mukti- ouch...my ears

prem- oh my god tum ladkiya bhi na..ye sab khol ti kyun anhi huh?..shaadi ho gayi hai go wear somwthing comftabe

mukti- oh shutup tum kuch nahi jante..budhu,,

prem takes off the earing..slowly..from his coat..

then he takes out the other earing

mukti- ye kyun khol rahay ho?

prme- he giv a naoughty smile

prem- well ye sab dekh ke mujhe garmi lag rahi hai..so chill take them off..one by one
he takes off all her jeweleery

mukti- prem

prem- mukti

mukti= prem

prem- mukti

mukti- stop it..tum kya ker raha ho?

prem- kya her raha ho..taking them off..


mukti- oh ya..mere saath chalaki jao get out..i have to change..but b4 she turns him to the dorr..she jumps ...

mukti- ahhhhhhh

she hugs him really tight

prem- whats rong?..

mukt0- wo wo coo co kkk cockroach..

prem starts loughing loud

prem- cockroach?..mukti tum bhi na

mukti- realyzez shez holding him really tight..she lets go

mukti- um wo der gayi thi now i am okay

prem- mere hotay hua tumhe kuch nahi hua..mukti smiles and hugs him..
prem puills her to the bed..

prem giv s a wicked smile- ab pata chala biwi ko samjha ne keliye ye sab batay a 1 hai
and he winks..

scene#2
in the morning every1 wakes up..hearing a beutiful voice doing pratna

prem in a frustrated voice says- ye kon subha subha..he tries to hug thinking mukti is next to him..he gets up..mukti?..ab yeh oh god..chan se sonay bhi nahi dayte

all com donw to see who it is..kookie sneha doris tumshar and every1 gather and join in

sneha- mukti?

mukti- ha

snhea- itni jaldi? utt gayi

mutki- ha

sneha- ahem ahem kal raat i mean you know

mukti- mukti getz red..sneha tu bhi na

prerna- sneha issay satana band ker...mukti gos and touches thr feet..

bajaj- sada suhagan raho prem?,,

mukti- so raha hai utha ti hun ussay..

scene#3

mukti gos up to wake him up she removes the curtains..

prem- what the hell?

mukti- uttho subha ho gayi hai

prem- yawns..that ws a great night..what say basanti?

mukti {shy}..shutup..now wake up sab nashte pe eait ker rahay hai.
prem ok..baat yaha aao zara tumhare chehre pe kuch hai..cam here

mukti- kay hua?.

prem- he tricks her and pulls her to the bed.,

mukti- prem..uff dekho utho mcon

prem- oh no sweetheart..

mukti- haat choro
prem- nahi..kya ker logi..

mukti- ok..um choti,,

prem- hold her mouth really tight mukti mujhe merwao gi kya..he wakes up..with a scared and embarrassed look mukti loughs

scene#4

every is having breakfast

prem- good morning..every1..

prerna- itna late so raha tha mukti kab ki utt gayi

prem- wo um mother inia..i couldnt sleep properly..ye basanti my god itna snor kerti hai?

mukti makes an embarassed face and starts to pen her mouth..

to be continued...

wow!that was really gud!continue sn!

u know u rite relly gewd..😃 love to read yr fan-fic..do continue soonnnnn!!

dat was reallly nic cooooooooooooooooool plzzzzzzzzzz con soon 👏

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!It wa realllly good!