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Posted: 19 years ago
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haha that was pretty funny
thats really gud 👏 👏 👏
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part#4

recap=every is having breakfast

prem- good morning..every1..

prerna- itna late so raha tha mukti kab ki utt gayi

prem- wo um mother inia..i couldnt sleep properly..ye basanti my god itna snor kerti hai?

mukti makes an embarassed face and starts to pen her mouth..

scene#1

mukti gets really frustrated

mukti= mein?..u mean i snore..imposiible

prem- oh cmon basanti maanlo ke tum snore kerti hu..mother india puchiye maat..iske kharatay ne mujhe puri raat sonay nahi diya..prem givs a slight smile..and winks at sneha..

sneha- ha ha prem thik keh raha hai mukti ki toh pahle ki aadat hai snore kerne ki..they all ough..

mukti gets out of her seat..

prerna- beta kaha jarahi hai..

mukti without saying anything..jus looks at prem as if shes gonna eat him

mukti- kya keh rahay thay mein kharatay marti hu?..sona to tumhare saath mushkil hai..
parayshan ker ke rakh diya hai..

prem- maine?..maine..i am a tru gentlemen..mein ye sab nahi kerta..

mukti- oh really bohot sarif bante ho tumhare wajay se puri raat nahi so payi..aur kehte ho ki kharatay marti hu array ager sonay diya hota tab na..prem is shocked..and tells mukti to seat

mukti just realyzez what she said..she gets red..

mukti- uh wo.um imean bohot sar dard horaha tha kal raat se aur prem ne dawai bhi nahi di issi liye..every1 loughs loud leaving mukti emabraased as ever.she leaves

prerna- prem teri shararatay kabhi nahi baand hongi..right?..now go cmon ussay ja kay manao

scene#2

prem enters the room he sees mukti lying down on the bed

prem- mukti?

mukti- kya hai?

prem- mein to mazak

mukti- tumahre wajay sa i was so embarassed

prem- to assa kaha kyun..he loughs i cant believe u said that

mukti gets more sad- thik hai i know is my fault

prem kisses her forehead and says..its ok..ab chalo mother india bula rahi hai

or ha..tumhara sar ka dard kaisa hai

mukti- sar phata jarah hai

prem- should we call the doctor?

mukti- no no thik hojaiga..prem brings her a medicine and water..and givs it to her

mukti- thnx..

prem- u welcome..my beautiful wife they both hug and leave the room

scene#3

prem and mukti and sitting down talking to the netire family every1 is really happy.

suddenly samarth enters

prem- hey bro waddup

saamrth- nothing much u?

prem- rocking

sneha- hi samarth

samarth- hi

prerna ok guyz hav a sit..maine aur mr,bajaj ne ek plan banaya hai..aaj raat we have a party for the ouple so lets go get ready..for the party

samarth starts 2 leave
sneha hold his hand

sneha- tum aaogay na?..

samarth- ofcourse..

sneha to herself- ye mujhe kya ho raha hai jab bhi mein samarth ko dekh ti hu to mera dil itne or se kyun dharakta hai?..she smiles and runs 2 her room

its time for the party now..mukti is getting dressed

prem- oh mukti itna waqt?..u have been getting ready for the past 2 hours damn it

mukti- look i am a bride aur dulhan ko time lagega..mukti is struggling..with her backpart of the sari..prem coms forward..

prem starts 2 tie it for her when

mukti- ouch..

prem- kya hua?..r u ok?..

mukti remembers what happened..
flashback

prem bangs into her room..in her wedding day with samarth..she was tieing..her back part..
whn he banged in and draged her down..and how mistakingly he hurt her in her back..

tears start to flow..

mukti- um kuch nahi.

prem sees a really bad wound..he is shcoked

prem turns her around..

how the hell?..

mukti- kaha na kuch nahi..prem is confused why she is not telling him how it happened..

he wipes his tears..and starts to leave..prem- get ready im waiting for you..

he is goign trough the step whne he remembers whr she got the woud from.

prem runs to the room as fast as he can..

mukti- prem knock the door..

prem opens her backpart..and sees the wound..

mukti is confused..

prem- he kisses her wound..mukti feels a current..

prem- maine tumhe bohot dard diya hai na

mukti- tumhe yaad ageya?

prem- ha..prem is crying

mukti wipes his tears..saying itni choti baat keliye ro rahay ho?

prem- nahi mukti ye choti baat hai..mein tumhe dard mein dekh nahi sakta

mukti just hugs him..

prem- sees the wound..aagin and gets more frusrated..

he elaves in anger..mukti is worried about him..

scene$4

sneha is doing the decorations..
samarth coms to the party...sneha dosnt see him..ans is about to fall from the stool..when
he catches her..

both look into each others eyes..

mukti sees this from upsatirs..she is really happy..

sneha- i am sorry

samrth- samal ke ok..

sneha- ya i am really sorry..

samarth- nahi its ok..may i have a dance with u?

sneha- smiles..sure..

scene$5
mukti coms down looking for prem..

prerna- mukti..prem kaha hai?

mukti- givs a nervous smile..i dont know..she starts looking for him

she asks alot of ppl..

mukti..kaha chala geya?..ye sab teri galti hai mukti..god..kya zarorat thi usske saamne bannd neki..ussne sab dekhliye..peta nahi mera prem kaha hoga..she cries..

mukti asks a guy excuse me?..kahi appne mere pati ko dekha..

person- i think..i did..wo bahar hai...outside

mukti- what in the rain?..oh my god..
by the way mukti is waering a red sari and prem a black suit..hehe

scene#6

she heds outside and finds him sitting in the floor drinking

mukti- prem?..ye kya ker rahay ho?

prem- choro mujhe..

mukti- cmon lets go to the party..ppl..are waiting dor us..prem pulls her toward him

prem- kya hum yaha nahi rehsakta.?..mukti..what?

mukti- yaha?..kya keranga..

suddenly hum tums rainy songs plays..mukti and prem dance together..
both are really wet..

sneha sees this she is shokced..ye dono bahar barish mein?

sneha- sees them romancing. 😳 .
sneha- smiles..better not to disturb..

scene#5
in the party prerna anounces how she is happy about prem and mukti..but she cant seem to
find them..

mukti and rem return realy wet..

every1 is stunned

prerna- tum log kaha geye thay?

both smile kahi nahi mom..

prerna anounces that as a gift..she has booked 2 tickets..fro mukti and prem to go to mauritius..for thr honeymoon

every1 claps
she hands it to..mukti

prerna- kal jarahay ho enjoy yourselves ok?

mutki looks at prem and smiles..but suddenly prem falls down..

please leave comments as a love reading them..guyz. 😃
to be continued..........


hIra_89 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
thnx 4 da update
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww excellent but y did p fall down man wid khushi hahaaaaaaaaaaaaa
thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 updatin early and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon ita amazing 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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GREAT UPDATE SOOn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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wow continue soon ❤️ i ❤️ ur fan fic so pls continue fast as poseble
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👏 tht was wonderful..thx for updatin yaar
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that was really gud!continue sn!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part#5

recap=prerna anounces that as a gift..she has booked 2 tickets..fro mukti and prem to go to mauritius..for thr honeymoon

every1 claps
she hands it to..mukti

prerna- kal jarahay ho enjoy yourselves ok?

mutki looks at prem and smiles..but suddenly prem falls down..


now

mukti=prem?

every1 gets worried..

mukti-um huh uh um sorry its ok he is jus to tired..she takes him to thr bedroom

mukti- kyun pi?..maine kaha tha na

prem-..mukti..

mukti- prem please kuch maat kaho u jus rest..ok?..subba baat kerte hai

prem pulls her toward him

prem- mukti tum mujhe kabhi chor ke to nahi jaogina

mukti is shocked..

mukti- mein tumhe chor ker kyun jaungi.prem she loughs mein tumhare saath hu..ok..

prem- pata nahi kyun der lagraha hai

mukti just smiles..no baba..she takes off his shoes for him and lies him down to the bed..

mukti- goodnight,,

prem- he kept on repeating...dont eva leave me..mukti gets worried..abt him

next morning

prem wakes up feeling a headache..he cant get up properly

mukti coms up and hands him lemon juice

mukti- ye lo hangover khatam ho jaiga

prem- i am sry

mukti- no i am..mere wajai se..

prem jus holds her nouth dosnt let her say anything..they both jus drop the topic.and go down to have breakfast with every1

prerna- aray ageye?..good morning

prerna- to packing kerli?

mukti- ha choti ma packing maine suba kerli hai

mukti- hay sneha tum kyun nahi chalti..

sneha- array baba nahi nahi 2 is a company 3 is a crowd aur mujhe kabab mein haddi nahi bana

mukti- starts 2 wonder..this is the right time..tp find out what she feels abt samarth

mukti- givs a naoughty smile..ohhh..i guess tum nahi jarahi ho..to thik hai mein..ahem ahem

SAMARTH ko mana ker deti hun

sneha- jumps out of her chair

sneha- samarth bhi..nahi nahi maine kab kaha ke may jana nahi chahti book a ticket

every1 is really confused about snehas behavior sneha calms down

mukti- smiles..thik hai..mukti suddenly notices prem starring at her madly

prem to himself- ye lo ab issay in dono ka saath lane ki kya zarrorat hai kya ye hamara honeymoon hai ya unn ka?..he decides to take play aroudn a lil..

prem- ahem ahem wo ma i cant go some important meeting and honey moon no way..its boring

mukti is shocked...

sneha- boring and honeymoon?..loughs..for u?..no way tum jhoot bol rahe hona

prem- nahi i have a alot of work aur mere paas fizul waqt nahi hai waste kerne keliye..so you 3 go ahead and have a blast

every1 is shocked...mukti is hurt and is into tears b4 any1 can say anything she leaves

mukti takes loud steps upstairs..making prem realyze she is mad..

she gos up 2 her room..and sees prem talking on the phone..prem sees her and givs a wicked smile

prem- ha ha sweetie..tumhe kaise bhul sakta hu i love you dear..so much haha milte hai really so0n

mukti gets relly mad and pretend she dosnt care...prem hangs up

mukti- kisse baat ker rahay thay?

prem- client say

mukti is shcoked..thinking y is he lying to meh?..

mukti gets really frustrtaed and starts throwing her clothers on the lugage..

prem- wait hold up..are u packing..ar killing the clothes..?..he loughs

mukti- tumhe issay kya?..now leave i want 2 do my packing..she again starts 2 trow them right on the lugage

prem smiles..thinking he is succeeding..

mukti thinks- i will go y shoudlnt i?..prem samajh ta hai ke mein uss ke baghar nahi nahi jasakti so now lwt him watch what i can do.

sneha is doing her packing..when she remembers...the time when she met samarth and how she fell on top of him thinking about it she smiles..

mukti and sneha com out with thr lugagge..

prerna- {by the way she knows about prems plan}

prerna- tum log apna khayal rekhna.aur ye lo..prasad..

mukti is looking around the house..2 see if prem coms atleast ones 2 stop her..then she jsut giv up..and makes a sad face..and starts 2 leave

prerna- dai

mukti- eats dai shakar and leaves..

at the airport
samarth coms

samarth- hi mukti..

sneha gets dissapointed bkuz he didnt even loook at her..all he was looking at was mukti

mukti- hi samarth she hugs him..kaise wo ?

sneha jus coms right in the middle interupting mukti mukti senses jelousy she smiles..

sneha- hi samarth

samarth- oh hello sneha..whats up?

mukti is looking around..feeling really lonely..she thinks she should not go like this and should call prem ones

prem- hello

mukti- hi..kya ker rahe ho?..

prem- im buzy please mukti dont disturb

mukti gets disturb

mukti= prem?..

prem- oh cmon just do yr thing and let meh do mine..he hangs up..

mukti cries and gos 2 the washroom..

sneha and samarth try to stop her..sneha calls prem

prem- ha sneha bolo?

sneha- i think ye acting yahi khatam karo..mukti is relly hurt
prem gets worried..

sneha- so just come..and cheer her up

prem- oh cmon thori aur der..maza ayega

sneha-wo ro rahi hai aur tumhe mazza arah hay?

prem gets relly worried..and sad

prem- shez crying?..y is she cryn wo ro kyun rahi hai..

sneha- bcuz u r ignoring her

prem- feeling gulty zyada ro rahi hai?

sneha gets irritated- shutup prem i dont know just com flight ka time bhi ho raha hai..she hangs up..

mukti comz out of the washroom wiping her tears..and saying alot of things ..

she suddenly sees a flower...right next to her..that says for mukti,,she picks it uup

mukti- flowers for the lady..hope you like it with love..your lover...

mukti ignores it..thinking must have been some guy flirting with her,,she sees a perfume, jewellery.. store in the airport..she gos in

salesman- ma'm..for u

mukti- what is this?

salaesman- that guy told meh to give it to you..

mukti turns around to see who it is..but dosnt see any1
she opens the bag..

a red dorr..perfume..with some chocolates

i know you love chocolates..so chocolates for the lady..and your favourite perfume

mukti gets relly irritated..she calls the guy..

salesman- yes madam

mukti..what the hell is this ye sab kaun bhej raha hai?..god

salesman- ma'm..for u..a baloon? its a heart shaped baloon that says love you my love

mukti- a baloon?..

mukti gets confused..it says..pop it..you will find somwthing iin it..my love,,
take 6 steps back..turn right den take 4 steps in..by the way looking good in blue..jaan

mukti feels for a second it could be prem..but den says he in the meeting..who is doing all this?.mukti gets upset..but den pops the baloon..and a rose falls on the floor..

she tuoches the rose..which is soft..and smells beautiful..den she sees its kind of like a box..that can open iwth difficulty..she opens it

mukti- wow..oh my god

she sees a diamond ring..

mukti- this is so beautiful..she follows..the letter..she dos what it says..
she sees a coffee shop.. i {

dont relly know if india has these things in airport..but jus guessing so if do any mistake plz forgvie meh}.

mukti goes in..she looks around..when suddenly cathes her from the back she freaks

prem- hey basanti

mukti is shocked...TUM?

prem- yes

mukti remooves his hand from her waist prem tries to stop her

prem- basanti?

mukti- to ye plan tha tumhara?

prem smiles..ha kaisa laga

mukti- BOHOT HI GHATIYA..

prem- oh cmon..tumne binna mujhe poochay samarth aur sneha ko invite kiya mauritius..keliye..to maine

mukti- aww...i am sorry..per wo alag rhaenge aur hum alag..they make up..and hug

sneha and samarth..
guys..flight ka time?...they all rush..

to B continu............

please do reply..😃kuz i love reading them..
Edited by desi_gr3l - 19 years ago

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