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HEY ALL DIS IS MEHNOOM..😃..SOM OF YOU HAV PROLLY READ MY OLD FAN-Fic PREM-MUKTI-EJAZ..SO NOW IM STARTING A NEW 1 BASICLY ITS A CONTINUTION OF my 1st fan-fic..i hope u all lyke it im making few changes in this fan-fic..my last fan-fic..was how mukti and prem struggled 2 be with each other..and now in this fan-fic ill show how they struggle to be with each toher for lifetime..so i hope u all read this..and like it..i did alot of hardwork..2 giv u all som entertainment any suggestionz?..plz let me know will be more den delighted 2 take the suggestionz..

for those who havnt read my previous fan-fic..please read that 1 before reading this bkuz if u dont read my last 1 it might be confusing..

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guyz i added new any characters to dis fan-fic. im starting from where i left off..ill show what happenz after der marriage. so enjoy..and leave comments😃

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THE WEDDING WAS SUCCESSFULLY..OVER..EVERY1 IS REALLY HAPPY..prerna and anurag are discussing that after so many years happiness returned to them through prem and mukti..and that they want 2 enjoy every moment of it

sneha- oh god aap dono yaha kya ker rahay ho..sab chalay geye hai aaap log bhi jayi na

prerna- kya baat hai?..hummein bhaga kyun rahi hai?..sneha..prerna catches her ears and pulls them really hard

sneha- awww..ouch..mom..mein choti bachi nahi ho

prerna- to bolo kya hora hai..koi shaytanni to nahi ?

sneha-{smiles}..mom maine aur kookie aur kuch frend ne mill ker ek plan..banaya hai

sneha tellz prerna eveerything..prerna-...starts loughing

sneha- mom chup..nahi to sab ko pata chal jayega

scene-2

every1 is leaving but premz frends arnt leaving

prem- ye harami yaha se nikal te kyun nahi..with a sad face he looks at mukti

mukti- wispers kya hai?

prem- ye jatay kyun nahi?

mukti- kya?..ye tumhare dost hai aur tum inhay bhagana chahte ho

prem- uff...tum basanti ki basanti ti ho..samajh ti nahi aaj kya hai..

mukti-..umm..mere khayal se aaj. ha aaj..doris bhabhi ki pregnancy ko 4 mahinay hua hai

prem- oh god emin iss ladki ka kya karu

mukti- tum jano she starts 2 leave prem pulles her toeward him

prem- mazak maat urao mere..dekho aaj hamari um..ahmari

mukti- kya hai aaj?..waisebhi..mujhe bohot neend arahi hai i am going sweetheart byeeee..😆..yaha tum enjoy karo appne dosto ke saath wow im tired

prem- urrrrrr...mukti yr irritating meh..tum samjh ti kyun nahi dkeho mein yaha se nikal na chahta hu chaadi humari hui hai ya inki batke sirf kahan kha rahay hai..

mukti{loughs}...tumhare dost hai tumahre jaise nahi honga to mere jaise honga..kahi pay bhi vhalay aatay hai mu uthakay..time kya ho raha hia its almot 1..im going

prem- what?..shaadi ki raat tumhe sona hai?..god what the hell is rong with u

mukti- to kya karu?,..dekho ye sab nahi hota mein janti hu tum kya chahte ho dont worry permission daidi

prem- kiss cheez eliye

mukti- tum bahar jakay frend night out kerna chahte hona aur drink ekrna chahte ho..to jao mrs,prem sharma ne ijazat daydi

kya?...with a confused smile..he says..aaj mein ghar rehan chahta hu cmon meri badat kero na

mukti- kyun?..jaha tak mein janti hu mera u.d sirf party kerna janta hai kaun sala raat ko ghar pein bethker soyega..jao jao dont worry..kal akay achi terha so jana ok?..she givs him a kiss on his cheeksz..

prem is frudtarted and troughs away his sherwaniz dupatta..

mukti giv a wicked smile..and leaves

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prem gos 2 his frendz...

rahul- array yaar chal hav a drink

prem- no

rahul- no?..prem sharma said no to drinks..aaj drink kerne ka irada nahi hai kya..?😕

prem- mood nahi hai..

avinash- no drink?..r u ud?..or som1 els tum drink ko kaise no ker sakte ho seriously iss mukti ldaki ne tujhe puri terha badal diya hai..tu to ab joru ka gulam ho jayga yaar they all lough and giv each toher high-fvies..making fun of him prem is burning in rage..

prem- could u guyz just leave

sneha- what happened?

prem- sneha ki bachi inn ko yaha bulani ki kya zaroorat thi?ha..ab yumne innhay bulaya ab tumhi innay nikalo..

sneha- kyun?..hey bro aaj ash karo go 2 pub bar werver u want no 1 will stop u

prem- but i dont want to go...

sneha- kyun aaj kuch special hai kya?..jahat tak mein janti hu today is nothing...special..hai doris bhabhi ki pregnancy ko 4 hamilne hua hai..per prem

prem- what?..tum bhi not gonna leave you all...sneha and his frend giv a huge laugh

sneha- ab aap log jao

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sneha comz 2 prem and taps him in the shoulder..

prem- KYA haI?

sneha- what?..why r u getting mad?..anywayzz mein sirf kehna chahti thi ke wo chalay geye ager tumhe kam ray mein jana hai tooooo...um if uw ant

prem- what?..he gets accited..really?..they gon ab tum bhi jao..get out..

nseha- array array..ab meri baat top sunno..

prem- dont disturb meh get it??

sneha..and kookie..knock on the door

prem comz out prem- whjat the hell you wnat?

prem- mukti ander haina?

prem- urrr nahi hai..kyun?

sneha- nahi assay hi puch rahya tha acha prem...ussay bulaoge

prem starts 2 run after them..ab ki baar phir se ayena na so i sure 2 god ill kill you all ne by 1..he closes the door..sneha and all the gurl;z wisper and laugh..

prem looks in the mirror...he oputs various kind of perfume on..😆

prem- puvha to bli bhahi ka 4th mehina chal raha hay basanti ab tum mujhse nahi bach sakti..mein araha hu..

to be continued.......

hey guyz hope you al liked it ill continue today itself..jus giv meh som time and let me knwo if you like it so far...😛 ok love you all take care...

the winner of the voting is ofcourse amit tandon aka manthan..thr will be a love triangle between him,sneha, and ejaz khan his name is samarth in my fan-fic and he is baq...😛

its nice..plz continue...and thx a lot 4 sharin

dat was great plz update soon can't wait 2 read da next update

damn i thought im gonna be the 1st 1 2 read 😆 anywayz that was good..continue s0on........

whoah! its great..please do continue!! 😃

yeh well 1 suggestion.. 😛

dont make it over dramatic make it a lil funny...i wud lik 2 see funny romantic scenes between p-m..den dramatic sad filmi scenes.. 😃 i hope you kno wah i mean..

Originally posted by: mukti4ever

can you continue in english please

i am sory..buh im comftable with hindi more..😭😕..cant really rite that stuff in english..dosnt sound gewd i hope you understand..😃

Originally posted by: sweety_14

yeh well 1 suggestion.. 😛

dont make it over dramatic make it a lil funny...i wud lik 2 see funny romantic scenes between p-m..den dramatic sad filmi scenes.. 😃 i hope you kno wah i mean..

alright thnx for the suggestion ill keep that in mind..😛

very nice 👏

here u go guyz enjoy

part-2

recap=prem looks at the mirror...he puts various kind of perfume on..and checks his breath

prem- pucha to boli bhabhi ka 4th mehina chal raha hay basanti ab tum mujhse nahi bach sakti..mein araha hu.


scene-1
prem closes the door he is really accited..he looks around and jumps in a shock when he see mukti on veil..

prem- basanti tum kabse itna sharma nay lagi..wel..um..yeh..um ye to pehli baar nahi hai ke hum you know what i mean..

den a really weird voice hit premz ears he was really confused for a second he thought he came into a different room
mukti- ye aap kya kehrahay ho ji?
prem- ji?

mein kabse tumhara JI bangeya mukti?..tumhari tabyat to thik haina..muktii i think you need rest

mukti- kya ji aap bhi?..shaadi ki raat koi aram kerta hai kya..
prem is sweating

pmukti- array aapko to pasina arraha hai..chaliye mein appka pasina appne dipattay se poch deti hun
prem- um ha nahi nahi no thnx..mein thik hu..ek kam karo aaj tum yehi so jao..

mukti- kya aap bhi itni der..mujhe intezar ker waya..now..mukti was gettin really close to prem..

prem- um.wo wo kya kkk..aa

mukti- dekhiye na..mein appki basanti..aap mujhe pyar nahi karenge..

prem thinks to himself- jo mukti jo dinraat mujhe threads diya kerti thi aaj itni mithi kaise ban gayi daal mein kuch kala hai

mukti- aapne kuch kaha kya..?

prem- um no nothing..den prem jus thinks what the heck?..y am i scared of her i might turn out to be joru ka gulam mujhe to mard bana chahiye

prem- pulls her waist..basanti tum kya kehrahi thi?

mukti- mum..baba..num, vo kya keh rahi thi mein

prem- as he kept saying each word the more closer prem was getin now they wer a inch away ..

mukti- papapreeeemmm..wo mujhe jana hai

prem- kaha?..

mukti- um bathroom

prem gets more closer..now he was abt to lock his lips with hers...a scream hits the bajaj house..all the gurlsand adults run to premz room

prem- aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh what the hell?

mukti- mein mein mein aapki

prem- GOD THIS IS SO GROWSE..suddenly prem feels a tap on his shoulder..he sees mukti

prem- kya?..tum yaha sab kuch dekh rahi thi...mukti

sneha- ha..ye sab hamara plan tha..kaisa laga?

prem- with a really frustrated look mein dikhata hu kaisa laga sneha ki bachi...

sneha- oh cmon..dekho na..becharay SAMARTH KI kha halat ho rah hai

prem- ewwwwwwww...ewww.mukti touches him

prem giv a loud scream..nahi nahi wo wo..1st of all samarth yaha kaise mere bedroom mein bedroom emin choro wo india mein kaise..?????

sneha- wo kya hai..na..mein samarth ko wapas layi hu ab wo nahi janay vala america right samarth?

samarth- ha maine dicide kiya hai ke mein naye siray se appni zindagi shuru karunga..

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every1 starts to leave..prerna bajaj smile and leave
now the entire room is empty

mukti- so

prem- so

prem- wait hold on..he starts 2 hit her with a piloow..to tum bhi shamil thi inn sab mein iss liye to maine socha ye basanti kabse itni respectful bani..hamesha to larti jagarti rehti hai..with a naought smile...

mukti- what?..iss ka matlab ki mein mein..laraku hu..aur tum kya ho mr,ud?..

prem- main shukar karo ke taras kha ke maine tumse shaadi kerli nahi to tum jaise zagralu se kaun shaadi kerta..prem was axpecting..a loud..horor sound from mukti but mukti didnt react

mukti- with a sad face..ager mein itni buri hu to shaadi kyun ki?...

prem- kyun ki tum ek konay mein bethi raho aur mein dussray ladkiyon ke saath ash keru

mukti is burning..she is tired of his jokes..
mukti- kya?..to thik hai jao unn ladkiyon ke paas mere paas ke laut maat aana tum wo skirt vali ladki haina ..jao get out..she beats him up

prem gets a hold of her hand

prem- bas bas basanti tumhare nazook haat thek jayenge my dear wife

mukti- mein itni kamzor nahi hu samjahy ab jao unn ladkiyon ke paas mein to sirf ek time pass hu na..she troughs a blanket and a pillow on the floor raho tum sari raat nichay mee paas bhi maat aana

prem is now really mad at himself that he ruined his own marrige ngiht..

prem- shit..ab kya?

so prem sleeping on the floor..with a confused and mad face
and so is mukti.. 😛

guyz i have no time 2 rite more..prolly update 2morow..so take care love you all and hope you all lyked it..t.. 😃


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