'premukti'(FanFic) My heart to Urs...

Mere FanFic ka hain ek saval...

Kya Mukti ko ek aur Mauka degi Zindagi...Ya use bhi karni hogi paar ek Aur Kasauti....Kya hain uski Zindagi ki Paheli....

Mele ga Apko Javaab Iss Kahani ke Ant Ke Baad...

Mera Show Start hota hain....Leap ke saath....4 years Leap....Mukti lives in America she has lost her yadash because of a terrible accident in India which landed her in America with a Nice family of Brother Sparsh (Kavya) from Kavyangali and a Sister...her Best Friend Sheetal also known as Kummud from kkusum and her husband Rahul (Garv) also from Kkusum. Mukti thinks Sheetal is her sister and Sparsh her brother...she doesnt remember anything about Bajaj Family or her Fathers death in india. Sheetal and Sparsh never told her anything because they dont know who Mukti's family is.

Bajaj family in India dont know where Mukti is gone...but are waiting for her to come back...Prem has completely changed from a bad guy to the Adarsh beta Prerna wants him to be...Losing Mukti has made him realise that she was very precious.... The twist here is that Prem has a Daughter Priya who is said to be Mukti's before the accident....Prem loves Priya alot...she is only thing that reminds Prem of Mukti....( Sneha is changed from origial Sneha to Anjali from Kavyangali) I will explain more as time goes on....If you have questions ask...

---------------------------------------------First Episode-----------------------------------------------------

Mukti: Sparsh...Sheetal kaha hain?

Sparsh: Kyon Kya Hua?

Mukti: Office jana hain...uske pati parmeshwar Intezaar kar rahe Honge...

Sparsh: Smiles...I think Rahul ko Sheetal ke Late Ane se Adad Padgai Hain.

Mukti: Smiles...I think so too..

Sheetal: Kya khichadi pak rahi hain tum dono mein.

Mukti and Sparsh: Kuch Nai!!

Sheetal's phone ring....Haaa Rahul bas hum parking lot mein hi hain...parking nahi milrahi hain...😉 winks at Mukti.

Mukti: Kabhi bhi nahi sudhare gi...chalo...Bye Sparsh...I will see you at Dinner.

Sparsh: See Ya. Bye Sheetal

Sheetal: Yea yea...Bye. Aare Tumhe nai Rahul...ekdum ghochu hain.

Sheetal: Mukti, tum yeh aisa face kyu bana kar baithi ho?

Mukti: Bata nai subhe se aisa lag raha hain ki mein kuch important bhul rahi hoon.

Sheetal: Kuch bhi to nahi bhool rahi...Ab Office chale varna Rahul pura office sar pe uta lega.. both laugh.

Mukti ko kya pata tha ki voh apni Beti ka birthday bhul gai.

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Meanwhile India Mein...

We see a family in front of Lord Ganesh Praying... a Small Girl pulls on someone's pant...Papa Papa...We see it turns out to be Prem...Shaved and nicely cut hair. Very Cuteeeee.

Prerna: Priya....Shhhhhh.

Priya: Papa Dadi daat rahi hain.

Pooja ends...

Prem: Priya beta... he picks up priya...Pooja ke time pe bate nahi karte.

Priya: In cute voice...Ya papa par voh meri to yeh na birday hain na? Aap na phir kya laye mere liye.

Prem: Feels bad as he forgot her daughter's gift because he was busy in work. Aap ko kya chahiye Beta?

Priya: Mumma...

Prem: Gets Emotional😭...Woh Priya Maine tumse Kitni baar kaha hain...jo nahi milsakta use mat manga karo.

Priya: 😛 uuuu...aap Dadi ke tarah Daat te hain...Meri Birday ke din bhi aap dat te hain...she gets off Prem's lap and walks away.

Prem: Ma ye din bhar din ziddi hoti ja rahi hain...

Prerna: Prem beta uska dil tod diya...Use Ma ki Zaroorat hain...Tum dusri Shaadi kyu nahi Karle t....

Prem: Please Ma...Aap bhi phir apni zid leke baith gayi... Mukti Zinda hain ma..main use Mahsus kar sakta hoon.

He gets up and leaves....

Next Episode: Does Prerna Convince Prem to Re-marry...Will Priya get her Birthday gift? Will Mukti go to India? Will Mukti meet Prem and Priya?

Please leave Comments...on how you like my Fanfic...

wow its really wonderfull plez do continue soon 👏

wow, i really like it, please continue soon! 👏 👏

awesome and i am glad u added garv and kumud in there too. good going 👏

hey cool yaar i love reading their fanfics

CAN YOU PLZ WRITE ENGLISH BECAUSE I CANT READ HINDI SOO CAN U PLZ WRITE ENGLIGH THANK YOU AND SORRY

good going ...pls continue soooooooooon
😳 😳 😳

wait a minute..were dey both married 1st and den had priya? 😕 i think u shud explain more what happned b4 she had an accident 😃 but anywayz nice piece of work 👏

This message if for Sweet_14...I am sorry you are confused...what happens is that...Mukti and Prem had a little one night stand issue...where Mukti got pregnant and her father died...so she left for Pachmeshwar there she had Priya...Prem realized that he loved Mukti and was on his way to Pachmeshwar and Mukti was on her way to Mumbai for a school trip of Priya..where they get into an accident in which..Mukti's car falls into the river and she goes floating to Calcutta...where she meets Sparsh, Sheetal and Garv who were in India for a Business meeting. Priya on the other hand ends up on the road next to Prem and He doesnt get hurt so he see's Mukti's car falling into the river and Priya yelling Mom Mom...Priya was 1 and half then...Prem thinks it's their daughter and takes Priya Home.Sparsh and Sheetal find Mukti and she had nothing on besides a necklace with her name on...so they still call her Mukti. If u still dont understand ask me.

wooooooooooww its awesome i love it,...plzz continue soon. 😛