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Posted: 19 years ago
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------------------------------------Episode 5------------------------------------------

On their way home to the Bajaj house...Priya told Mukti everything that happened in her life since time Mukti left....

Mukti: She was little surprised at how much Priya connected with her....

Prem: He was still in his own little world...starring at Mukti when she wasn't looking...

They all got home and Prerna opened the door and was stunned to see Mukti!

Mukti entered the Bajaj House and had a feeling that she found something she lost and that she knows this place....Before Mukti would say anything..

Prerna: Mukti!! Mukti!! Beta i am soooooo happy to see you.

Mukti: Felt kind of strange and said umm thank you auntie ji.

Prerna: Surprised said Aunti Ji? Beta I am yo...Prem cut in

Prem: Ma this is Mukti Bose Manager of Bose Enterprises...and eyes Prerna to not say anything.

Mukti: Thats right...its our company that combined with my brother-in-law's company.

Prerna still can't believe her eyes...she keeps starring at her shocked😲!

Prem: Wasn't your brother suppose to be here too?

Mukti: Yes! Sparsh...he has a car dealing tournament and nothing cant stop him from that...he will be here next week.

Priya: Papa i am tired...Nini arahi hain!

Prem: yes sweetie. Go to bed...and you Ms. Bose must be tired too let me show you the guesthouse. (He didnt say Mukti again because he wasn't sure if this is his Mukti...and if she wasnt than he didnt want to fall in love with some stranger)

Mukti: Is headed to the Guest House like she knows where it is. and surprizingly she does.

Prem and Prerna are shocked and Prerna asks Prem...

Prerna: How can she be Mukti Bose...She is our Mukti...The same innocent face..same smile...same shaskar...do you think she is playing with us.

Prem: Confused 😕 says...I dont know Ma....I just dont know. She dresses different she is wearing a buisness suit...Mukti u know how traditional she is...she would never do that....I need to think about this Ma....Goodnight.

Both Prerna and Prem leave thinking....

Kya Yeh Hain Hamari Mukti....Ya Bhagvan Khel Raha Hain Hamare Saath Ek Aur Paheli...

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I am sorry for a short episode...I was kind of busy and i trying to come up with something Huge Next time....

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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
i work so hard to update twice a day and no one even leaves comments....😭.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
omg! dat was gr8!...plz cont 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
👏 your fanfic rocks totally awesome, Can u pliz let Prem realise it is his Mukti soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25

------------------------Episode 5--------------------------------

Prem is in his bedroom thinking about Mukti....Is she really his Mukti or is this some kind of joke god's playing with him for mis treating Mukti....Meanwhile Mukti is in her room...

Mukti feels like she know's this place and that she has been here before...while thinking so she falls asleep...

Next Day...Everyone's at the Dinning table having breakfast and Mukti walks in...Everyone is shocked...(includes Sneha and Bajaj) Prerna asks Mukti to have a seat...and gives Sneha and Mr. Bajaj a don't say anything right now look.

Prerna: Here beta...is it ok if i call you beta? have some Aloo Paratha.

Mukti: Ofcourse Aunty Ji. Ohh this smells so good..back at home we hardly have time to eat breakfast and its usually milk and cereal.

Prerna: Its good Indian food here everyday...and can you call me Choti Ma.(Prerna did that on purpose to see Mukti's expression)

Mukti: Umm..Sure..is there a reason behind it? with a questioning face...

Prerna: Disappointed to see the expression...says yea..my daughter -in-law...i mean ex-would be daughter-in-law called me that...and i miss having someone call me that.

Mukti: Its ok with me Choti Ma and smiles😛.

Prem walks in the Dinning Room...

Prerna: Prem beta you look tired...didnt you have enough sleep last night? then remembers he probably was up thinking about Mukti...and anyways have some breakfast....

Prem: Looks at Mukti who is enjoying every bite of it..wants to say we are getting late to get to the office...but is so fond in Mukti just stares at her...

Prerna: Prem?

Prem: Yea..i will have something...

Prerna: Is shocked to see Prem at the breakfast table for first time since Mukti left...She is happy on the inside that Mukti is back even if she is not the same Mukti he loved.

Sneha: Prem...Bose Enterprises should be launched blastfully at the new International Business Saminar...I mean it will give a new and refreshing look to the Company...what do you say?

Prem: Thats for Ms. Bose to decide...

Mukti: It's fine with me...do whatever you guys like...Do it the Indian way...lol.. Her Phone rings...its Sheetal.

Sheetal: Hey My Darling Sister!

Mukti: Hey My Lovely Sister! You sound happy...are you glad i am not there?

Mr. Bajaj and Sneha and even Prerna is surprise to hear Mukti say sister...

Sheetal: Ofcourse not my jaan! It's just we are leaving for Trisha's wedding so i am exited about the whole concept of Marriage...which reminds me to get you a nice guy to marry.

Mukti: Yea Right!! Marriage and Me? You must be joking...or must be sick...you know i never want to get married...the whole marriage idea seems like a bit too much to handle...plus i wanna live with you and Rahul my whole life.

Bajaj Family can't believe it's the same Mukti...she has different values...life style....dress style...hair style...but same innocent, sanskari mukti....

Sheetal: Leave that on me...i think i know someone perfect for you.

Mukti: Watever...where is Sparsh?

Sheetal: He is out but he is living soon since his car dealing tournament is going to be held tomorrow instead of friday.

Mukti: Ohh i am so glad...i miss him you know.

Sheetal: Is everyone ok there?

Mukti: Yea, dont worry its great...its like i know this family since ages...they are nice folks.

Sheetal: Hey i am getting late...rahul will be mad if i dont get ready..you kno how he is...just wanted to say hi and i will call you later...

Mukti: Yea! Have fun at the wedding...and I love you! Give love to everyone else!

Prem gets up and asks Mukti to leave as they are getting late...Mukti excuses herself and follows Prem Out...While they were walking out...Priya Yells...

Priya: Mumma are you leaving me again...

Mukti: Doesnt realise priya was talking to her and keeps walking..

Priya: Runs and Pulls on Mukti's pants...Mumma are you leaving me again...

Mukti: Umm...No Sweetie...i will be right back...but in her mind she keeps wondering why Priya calls her Mumma.

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In the car ride to the office Prem and Mukti discuss all the details about what needs to be taken care of. He gets a call from Samir who complains about Simran the whole time. Prem tells him to chill and informs him to come see him at the office.

Mukti thinks of Simran and gives her a call and Simran does the same thing...so Mukti Invites her to the office too.

Mukti turns on the CD and Kabhi Na Sukon Aya starts playing...Prem looks at Mukti but she infact gets bored of the song and changes the track...

Prem thinks to himself...this cant be my Mukti....while he was thinking someone gets in front of the car...and Mukti Yells....Stop...Prem stops the car before hitting someone and Mukti falls on Prem's shoulder...she looks up and he is starring at her...and she is starring at himm....its like they fall in love all over again....

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I hope you guys like it...i will try to update it tomorrow again...please leave comments....

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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
Luved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Please continue SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 WOW falling in love all over again sounds romantic!!!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
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Wow what a fan-fic can't wait till 2morrow plz update it 2day itself it's a request 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
thanks to all of you who support my FanFic...it really encourages me...i will write another update soon...so stay tuned!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29

--------------------------Episode 6------------------------------

Prem and Mukti are Staring into eachothers eyes...and Prem has a flashback to all the times their eyes met....Mukti on the other hand really starts falling for prem...she finds him verry cute (who wouldnt)!! he just needs to change his dressing style she thinks and he would be one hott guy....

Prem: I am sorry!

Mukti: ohh yea...its ok...dont worry about it.

Prem: Starts the car and they reach their office and on their way to the office they dont say a word to eachother.

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Prem enters the office and finds Samir there....

Prem: Hey there buddy!

Samir: Thank God you are here...Mr. Malhotra has send a fax in to confirm about this delayed quoation and they both are talking while Mukti looks around Prem's cabin....she was about to go look at a picture at his desk (It was of her and Priya together....) but before she could look at it...Simran swings into the office...

Simran: Mukti OMG i am so glaad....You!!

Samir: ANd you!! Prem what the hell is she doing here....

Simran: Me?? I am here to see my friend...what in the world are you doing here...you bloody stupid guy!!

Samir: You are stupid....

Simran: I am stupid?? you dont even know the directions to your own house and you are calling me stupid.....you freaking spend 3 hour trying to get to Juhu...who in the world does that...

Samir: You dumbo from America....this is not America...Cars are not planes....Mumbai is full of traffic....

Simran: Such a liar...you just wanted to spend time with me... admit it you think i am hott...so you were trying to impress me...

Samir: HAHAHA...joke of the day...me spending time with you???? and you and hott...have you seen urself in the mirror...DUMBO American!! I dont even like girls like you!!

Simran: Shut up....Chalu guy!! you kno...!! Shut up Both of you Prem yell!!

Prem: Samir...stop acting like a child....Simran he is really...

Simran: Yea and his Best Buddy will defend him...what country...

Mukti: Shut up simran...he is right it took us over 2 hours to get to the office from home...India's traffic is a sad topic that you should research on and add to your sociology project.....

Prem: Huh! What project?

Mukti: Simran is here to do a research project on "real" india....

Samir: Laughs😆 i think first she should atleast be "Indian"

Simran: hey you.....chalu....

Mukti: Stop it....You know he starts it....

Prem: Yes..Samir stop it! Tell me what was wrong in the quotation...

Mukti starts talking to simran and they decide on going out to go shopping and "experiance real shopping for simran's project"

Mukti: Prem...if you are busy...can me and simran go out...and i will be back when you are done...

before prem woul reply...Samir: yea...please take this Dumbo American out of here...

Prem: Samir...you started with all this again...eyes him! Well you know we are almost done here...and if you want we will take you shopping...and your office is still getting set up here...so it will take time.

Mukti: That's great....

Simran: I am not going if he is going and looks at Samir...

Samir: Mee too!!

Mukti and Prem look at eachother and smile...😃

Common you two...stop being babies....

Simran Frowns 🤔 and Samir 😉 winks at her to annoy her...lol...(they are sooooooo cute together)

Prem calls Sneha and tells her to set up everything while he and mukti are going out and will be back later....

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During shopping Simran and Samir find stuff they both like in comman and start getting along much better...seeing this Prem and Mukti are happy too...

Prem finds a beautiful dress for Mukti.....and buys it without telling her...

Mukti and Prem shop for everyone at home and back at Mukti's home...they were both having so much fun like they were real couple... when they went to get something for Priya they both started arguing on what would look better...

Mukti: You dont get this whole girl thing...she is a girl i know much better...

Prem: No you dont!! i have been dressing her...doesnt she look adorable..

Mukti: Yea for a boy...she is a girl she should wear this...Pink should be her color..

Prem: No....This is much better....i like Yellow...

Salesman comes there....Madam and Sir i have been working here since 5 years but i have never seen two husband and wife fight over one dress as much as you two have....to make you both happy how about we give you both them for free...it should be our compliment...

Prem: Smiles and doesnt realise that this is not his Mukti...this is someone else...he is so happy to be known as her husband...

Mukti: She wanted to tell the salesman that they were not married...but she too felt good knowing she and prem make great couple...

Simran and Samir get there and decide that it's too late and they should all be leaving home...Samir offers Simran to drop her home and Simran teases him by saying...only if it takes 3 hours...they all laugh....

Samir feels great looking at Prem...he gets happy for him...He remembers the last time Prem was so happy...when he was going to Panchmeshwar to see Mukti.....

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Thats all for today.....Next week:

Sparsh and Sneha meet...Prem and Sparsh get along great....Prem starts falling in love with Mukti...but realises it's wrong...Mukti falls for prem too...Will Prem find out truth from Sparsh? Will Mukti find out how Prem really loved her...only because she looked like his ex-wife...stay tune and Leave Lots of Comments

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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
no one even leaves comments when i update twice a day...you kno what...no more updating this Fanfic...it will be shutting due to no appericiation from other writes or members... 😭

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