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Posted: 19 years ago
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[FONT=Arial]-------------------------------------------------Episode 2----------------------------------------------------------- --[/FONT]
This is in English for Artisay.
Rahul: 2 hours late? Why so late?...i thought you were in the parking lot...trying to find parking sheetal?
Sheetal: Uffo Rahul...to get ready it takes time na and anyways without getting ready how would i look hott for you... [;)].
Rahul: Yes Baby...You are really hott.
Mukti: Hmmmm...dont start with your loviedovie talk...lets talk about what we came here for.
Rahul: Sparsh...woh where is he?
Mukti: He is not comming...he's got some important work he needs to get done regarding his car...you kno when it comes to his car...he never see's anything else.
Rahul: Ya...oh well lets start.
Sheetal: Whats the matter?
Rahul: Our branch in India...the Manager..Mr. Desai just died yesterday and i dont know anyone else i can trust to handle the branch...so i was thinking one of us can go...
Sheetal: We cant go because we have Tisha's wedding comming up soon. (Tisha is Rahul's closest cousin)
Rahul: Yeah you are absolutely right....and
Mukti: And Sparsh wont go because there is a new Car Dealer Tournament comming in town for a week...Maybe I can go..
Sheetal: No!! No way's you are not going.
Mukti: But, why? Her phone rings...Hello..Oh Hey..Excuse me... she leaves the office.
Rahul: Sheetal..what was that? Why cant Mukti go?
Sheetal: Rahul i cant let my sister go to India by herself...dont you remember last time we were in India..we found her...she doesnt even know she is not really my sister..
Rahul: Sheetal Stop it! She is not a kid..and its good she goes back to India..Maybe she will remember who she really is.
Sheetal: But Rahul..
Rahul: Not But! Its decided she is going back!
Mukti: I am sorry...it was..
Rahul: Mukti pack your bags you are going to India.
Mukti: Really? OMG i always wanted to go to India..i dont know i feel like i have been there...strange right?
Sheetal: Yea..Really strange..Gives Rahul a Mad look.
They leave to go home and start Mukti's packing...Her flight is for Day After Tommorow.
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In India....

Prem: Is sad sitting by itself in the living room...
Prerna comes there looks at her son and says : Prem who beta i called some people over for you to get married...they are good friend of ur dad's...so would you stay home...
Prem: Ma i told you i dont want to get married. Why dont you understand. i dont want to get married!
Prerna: Prem..but i want to see you happy! I want Priya to be happy.
Prem: Ma I am happy with Priya and she is happy with me. We dont need anyone else. Please just let me be...and he leaves and goes to Priya's room.

Prem: Priya...Priya Beta...dekho Papa tumhare liye kya laye hain?
Priya: Nah...Mein kaati (angry) hoon.
Prem: Priya papa loves you!
Priya: No! Priya loves Papa more than papa loves Priya!
Prem: Accha then who wants this barbie doll?
Priya: Priya does!! Priya Does!!
Prem: Hugs his daughter and Prerna watches them have fun. And decides to leave them alone.
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In America its almost time for Mukti to leave...
Sheetal: I dont like this...Rahul!!
Rahul: Come On huney she is only going to be there herself for a week...Sparh will join her as soon as his car dealing tournament is done...and she is not going to be by herself...I have arranged for her to stay at this guesthouse with our partner Priya LTD. I met the company's owner in London few weeks back..great guy...Very Traditional. And she is not going forever...she will be back as soon as i find someone to handle things there.
Sheetal: With tears in her eyes [:^(] i dont know why i feel like..she is going to never come back....
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Next Episode: Who is the Owner of Priya LTD? Who is this new person Mukti will meet on the flight? Who is Prem's only friend who understand him through all this sorrow?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
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Mukti, Sheetal, Sparsh and Rahul are at the airport saying their goodbyes to Mukti and Sheetal is really sad and 😭 she is trying to convince Mukti to not go.
Sheetal: How will you take care of yourself in a strange city? I dont think she should go Rahul...say na something...
Rahul: Sheetal...how many times have we discussed this before?? she is not a child...you need to understand tha..
Sheetal: I know she is not a child, but she is my sister...I care about her..
Rahul: I know you do and so do I...Infact it looks like you are acting like a chil..
Sheetal: Shut Up Rahul!! You wouldnt understand!!
Rahul: You Shut Up with this nonsense and unless you make me understand how would I?
Sheetal: You are not a woman you dont know her instincts!!
Rahul: I am glad i am not one...otherwise i would be all "over dramatic" like you..
Mukti was watching all this...
Mukti: Both of you SHUT UP!!!!! Dont fight like kids...Sheetal huney i will be back soon!! and u can join me there as soon as Trisha's wedding is done. And Sparsh is going to be there in a week arent you Sparsh?
Mukti looked at Sparsh with a (can you help me) look?
Sparsh: He was busy talking on the phone....Oh yea! Yea! Watever Mukti says!!
Announcemnt: Flight 4367 From Chicago to Mumbai is Boarding Passenger's in.
Mukti with a tear 😭..its time to go. Hugs everyone and leaves to board herself on the flight.
Sheetal just stands their hugging Rahul...Knowing something doesnt feel right....
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On the Flight Mukti finds that her seat is next to a Indian Girl Name Simran (Nandani from Kyun Ki)....
Simran: Hey..you going to India?
Mukti: Yea..since this flight goes to India...
Simran: Oh!! i am so sorry i am just really nervous.
Mukti: Whats wrong?
Simran: I have flight fear..thats why i never go to India...but i had to go this year for a research project i have to finish for my Sociology class.
Mukti: Oh! thats cool...its my first time too.
Simran: Wow!! by the way i am Simran Mukherjee...you are?
Mukti: Simran...as in Simron you are bengali?
Simran: Yea..why?
Mukti: I am one too..i am Mukti Bose..its funny i dont know Bengali.
Simran: Me either...i was born and raised in Chicago.
Mukti: Mee too..
Simran: Wow! we are so alike...never met anyone so alike.
Mukti: Yea...i dont have any indian freinds who are girls accept my sister Sheetal.
Simran: Ohh...you going to India for something important?
Mukti: Yea...i have to handle my brother-in-law's business for a while till my brother comes and join's me and we decide on making someelse who is responsible the Manager.
Simran: Oh ok! where you staying at?
Mukti: Some Priya Ltd's owner's house..he is going to help me and my brother-in-law knows him well.
Simran: Oh cool...
Mukti: Yep!
Simran and Mukti talk all night long about what are their likes and dislikes and what they should do together in Mumbai...Mukti felt like she is was just like Sheetal...which reminded her to call her when she got safely to Mumbai...
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Meanwhile In India....
Sneha: Prem dont forget you have to go pick up Bose Enterprises new Manager at the Airport and make sure u take good care of her..
Prem: Sneha. Sneha. I know..i know Rahul is sending his sister-in-law and his brother-in-law..
Sneha: I am glad you remember...because you hardly remember anything else this days...
Priya: Papa! Papa! Can i come too?
Prem: I see why not?
Priya: yess...can you buy me some chocolate on our way back?
Prem: Yes, my darling...now lets go put on your shoes...the flight should be here any minute.
Prem turns to Sneha: Make sure the guestroom is ready...i dont want her to feel uncomfortable.
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At the Airport...
Will Prem be shocked to see Mukti? Will Mukti get her Memory back? Will Priya remember her Mom?...Stay Tuned to find out next!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
awwwwwww such a gd fanfic do count soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
wow its really nice
do continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
omg dat was great i jus got caught up readin ur fanfic n its great i can't wait 2 read da next part contine soon plz 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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really great fan-fic please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
Mukti Steps of the Plane and Enters the Airport and on the other side Priya and Prem enter the Airport...Mukti has a good feeling inside her...Simran watches this and ask's her...

Simran: Mukti..are you ok?
Mukti: Yea...it feels like a good feeling inside.

On the other side...Prem is looking for Priya...
Prem: Priya..Priya??
Priya runs and Hides behind someone...
Mukti: Looks down and see's a very cute girl...Hey there she says to Priya.
Priya: Looks up...She is amazed...She goes Mumma...And...
Prem gets there...He is looking at Priya but then he finally looks up and is Shocked to see Mukti!! 😲
Prem and Priya are starring at Mukti...
Simran: I didnt know you had a daughter?
Mukti: I dont.
Prem: Hears this and says...Mukti?
Mukti: Looks at him and feels like she knows this person..she goes yea? Oh wait you are Prem Sharma? Rahul showed me your picture...so it would be easy for me to find you. Hi. I am Mukti Bose and puts her hand in front of Prem to shake.
Prem: Takes her hand and repeats quietly Mukti Bose...Mukti Bose...
Mukti: Umm...you can let go of my hand now...
Prem: Still in shock...leaves her hand and looks at Priya who is clinging to Mukti now and says Mumma..Mumma.
Mukti: No Honey! i am not your Mother...
Prem: Priya...Come here sweetie..
Priya goes to Prem and gets on his arm.
Mukti: Ohh such a sweet child..your daughter? i think she is missing her mom.
While Mukti says that...Simran bangs into someone while getting her bags....
Simran: Ufffo...bloody Indian guys in India...cant you see where you are going?
Here we see Sameer turn around and is no other then Karan (kyuni ki)
Sameer: Hey..excuse you...you are in the way...i dont what this chicks from US think of themselves...
Simran: Hey Hello whats your problem!!
Sameer: You are my problem...Bloody American...So Dumb..
Simran: Hey you Shut U..
Mukti: Simran forget it!
Simran: No Mukti you dont know this Indian Guys from India...they are very what is that word mumma was saying...ummm Chalu (bad).
Sameer: He saw Mukti and is stuned. (Sameer is Prem's best friend who is his buisness partner and has always been there for him...he knows how much Prem loves Mukti)
Prem: I am sorry on his behalf...Ms. Simran he is my friend.
Mukti: Ohh..Yea Simran is sorry too...right?
SImran: ya yea watever...i need to go...i am getting late...
Mukti: Hey why dont we drop you?
Simran: No..Dont worry...I have to go to some place called Juhu...its kinda far away...
Prem: yea...we live in Andheri...But Sameer lives in Juhu..he can drop you right as an apology...sameer?
Sameer: yea i guess..lets go..
Simran: No i will manage...
Mukti: I dont want you to be in a strange place by urself...
Simran: Ok! Ok! Oh yea call me about our plans tomorrow yea?
Mukti: For sure!...Her phone rings...She picks it up after waving Simran bye...and Saying her bye to Sameer..They both leave fighting...
Mukti: Hello hey Sparsh!!
Prem: Looks at Mukti with who is Sparsh?
Mukti: Yea yea! I know you dont miss me..you are happy to get rid of me! but, remember i am better then sheetal!
Sheetal is anxious gets on the phone.
Sheetal: Mukti...you didnt call!!
Mukti: Oh yea..i was about to as soon as i got home...You think Sparsh misses me?
Sheetal: yea ofcourse he talks about you all the time..
Mukti: Really!! well after all I am Sparsh's favorite sister then you are!!
Prem: Is glad to hear Sparsh is her brother...but amusued that how does she have a brother??
Mukti: OK Ok...i will call you tomorrow let me go home and rest now...dont worry i am fine..bye love you and give love to Rahul and Sparsh.
Sheetal: Wait wait Rahul wants to talk to Prem.
Mukti: Oh ok. She says to prem i will take Priya and go to the car...she will show me the car..you can bring the lugage and talk to Rahul.
Prem: Nods.
Mukti leaves with Priya...Priya is very happy to see her mom and just keeps staying close to Mukti and Mukti loves to talk to Priya....
Prem gets the luggage and talks to rahul on the phone who says thanks to him. Prem hangs up..and wonders if she is his Mukti or not?
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Next Episode....Prerna, Sneha all are shock to how Mukti Bose is so much like Mukti Desmukh....Will Mukti remember everything...Will Prem Fall in love with this Mukti?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yep i'm lovin it. i cant wait 4 de next 1.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
Thank you to all who support's my FanFic...i love to see how many comments i have everytime i get on this website...hehehe...it disappoints me that there are so many viewer's but so little repliers...but oh well...i will post the next part in hour or so...i just woke up so going to go take a shower and get some breakfast and than i will be back with more of the story!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey ur fan fic is really gr8!continue soon!

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