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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
Plz don't do tht
ur fan-fic is just awesome too good plz continue atleast 4 us who who can't live vthout reading such a superb fan-fic
Grt part and thnks for updating 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
yh plz dont stop updating cause ur fanfic is rocking
so plz update as soon as u can
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
yeah plz don't stop u should update twice in a day i want mukti 2 get her memory back so she can be with priya n prem 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
ur fanfic is great!pls continue!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
Really Really Great fan-fic and thats why we wouldn't want you to close it so please dont!! 😭 😭 😭 Great update and please Continue SooN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36

Ok!! Here is for all you people who really are into my FanFic....

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Prem and Mukti get home and give everyone their gifts....they are all really happy and thank both of them for that...Priya loves Mukti's gift better in which Prem frowns...but is really happy on the inside...Prerna Notices how Prem is really happy after such a long time....

Mukti: Well...i am tired i am going to go to bed...plus tomorrow will be a tough morning as i have to set up the whole work thing...

Prem: umm..yea...good night!

Prerna: Yea beta good night....

Mukti: Leaves after saying her goodnights...

All of the Bajaj family is still in the living room...

Mr. Bajaj: Prerna you didnt tell me Mukti is bac..

Prerna: Mr. Bajaj...she is not back...maybe she is...we dont know anything besides the fact that she is from America and she doesnt know us....

Sneha: Mom could she be pretending...

Prerna: Me and Prem thought that...but it looks like she really doesnt...

Prem: I dont think she is my Mukti...but today when we were together...Ma i dont know i felt like i have known her for ages...

Prerna: Thats because you see our Mukti in her Prem...I am so happy that you are moving on...

Prem: No! Ma! i can never replace my Mukti with anyone else....

Mr. Bajaj: Prem beta Prerna was just...Prem gets up and leaves...

The whole family go to their own rooms....

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Next day Mukti and Prem set up her office and the rest of the 2 days Mukti tries to figure out how to handle everything...before she knows it...its been 3 days and its time for Sparsh to land to India....

Mukti: Let's go Sneha...(Sneha and Mukti have become really good friends which also included Simran them three are best of friends now)

Sneha: Comming...Comming...lets go.

Mukti and Sneha leave for the airport....

Sparsh: Hugs Mukti and gives a kiss on the forehead...my lovely sister!!

Mukti: Ohh how i missed having you around...you know i get bored without you around...Ohh i completely forgot..

Sneha is staring at Sparsh because he is realllllllly Hott!!

Mukti: Sneha...this is my brother Sparsh...and Sparsh this is one of really good freind Sneha also the sister of the owner of Priya LTD.

Sparsh: Puts his hand in the front...hey nice to meet you.

Sneha: Shakes hands with him but is still day dreaming...i am glad you came too..

Sparsh: Huh? did u just say you are glad i am here?

Sneha: Comes back to her senses and goes...yea for Mukti...she really missed you says that nervously...

Mukti: Ok then lets go home... (They all leave the airport and get home)

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Mukti: Choti Ma...this is my brother Sparsh...

Prerna: hi beta...welcome to our house...

Sparsh: Thank you so much Auntie....

Prerna: Asks him to freshup as dinner will be served soon...

Mukti takes Sparsh to his room....

Sparsh: Wow...Indian folks are so traditional in India...can you imagine someone being so nice in US?

Mukti: Yea..they are nice people...hows sheetal and rahul?

Sparsh: They are great...hey by the way why do u call that auntie..Choti Ma?

Mukti: I dont know she wanted me to say that...plus i like saying that...hey how was your car dealing tournament....

Sparsh: It was great...i thinking of importing some of those cars here and trying to see how much they value here....

Mukti: Wats on your mind brother?

Sparsh: Oh...you will find out...its just a idea...havent set the whole plan up yet...

Mukti: If you want...Sneha can help you with the whole new idea and stuff...she knows just the right people for right work...

Sparsh: Man she too damn hott!!

Mukti: Smiles😃 hmmm...am i seeing you falling in love...my Sparsh really thinks a girl is hott?? are you feeling ok? you are never interested in girl you are always into cars..

Sparsh: Stop pulling my leg...I am serious

Mukti: Makes a serious face and than hugs are brother....says i am so happy for you....

Prem watches this and wonders who the guy is...(he is forgotten that Sparsh was going to be here today)

Prem feels jealous....he doesnt want too...but he does...and he gets mad because he doesnt want to like this Mukti...who is not his......

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To be continued....At dinner table Prem finds out Sparsh is Mukti's brother...Mukti finds something out...and does Prem find out she is His Mukti?

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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
Ur fan-fic was just awesome and am too happy tht u hav updated it and plz do update it twice a day and plz never even think of not continuing it
u know what i can't live vthout ur fan-fic it's a must 4 me to read it everyday and thnks a ton 4 entertaining us God Bless u
Grt part and plz do continue 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
it was great n plz update soon n i want mukti 2 find out bout her past n how much prem luvs her plz update again 😭 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39

to all my lovely viewers of my FanFic...i have good news and bad news....

Bad news is that i wont be able to update till monday...since i am going out of town.... 😭

Good News is....i will be adding (ANGAD AND KRIPA) to my FanFic and there is a fantastic secret that you will love....plus since i am going to be gone....

I have a contest for you guys....who wants to do the Banner of My FANFICTION? i will give you the characters and you can all try...the best one will be honored and will have his/her banner put up...and the other one's i will post thier banner on my update everytime...so there is nothing to lose.
Here are the the Jodi's starting
(Karan and Nandni)from Kyunki
(Kkavya and anjali) from Kkavyanjali
Picture of Prem!!! looking to right side...
A little 3 year old cute girl....(doesnt matter any girl)
Mukti!!! Looking to the left side...at Prem and Priya (3 yr old girl)
Garv and Kumud (Kkusum)
Angad and Kripa (Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hain)
So lets go....

I cant wait to see the results dont dissapoint me!!😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
😉 thnx.... i lik de characters alot....... yur fan fic rox...... it damn cooooooooooooooolllllll.......... 😃

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