'premukti'(FanFic) My heart to Urs... - Page 5

hey i have never seen the character you have on your avatar qazi? who is that

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It is really great. Hope you have a nice trip. 👏

Oh please update soon! And I think Simran and Samir make a great couple too!!! Please include stuff about them in your next update, and please do it soon honey!

Shweta.

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and one more thing PlZ Continue Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey guys i am back..had really good time..but i am back with new update

Sparsh and Mukti come to the dinning table while everyone else has already been sitting....

Prem looks at Sparsh and remembers him hugging Mukti...and he gets jealous again....

Mukti: Prem, Mr. Bajaj....this is my lovely...

Prem: Mukti! this is not America...we dont show off our boyfriends over here in front of our parents...or even someone else's parents....Gives a Grumpy look at Mukti and leaves the table....

Mukti: Get's furious at Prem's words...and before he leaves she says...where would you get such an digusting idea like this...

Prem: I don't want to expose your love life in front of everyone...but since you asked...i saw you two hugging earlier...

Mukti: We were hugging and you thought he was my bf?

Prerna: Prem...you dont even kno...

Mukti: No, Choti Ma...Prem we were hugging because Sparsh and Snea would...remembers she is in front of everyone and says...start this new idea Sparsh had and i was being happy...and thats besides the point...why do i have to explain hugging my brother!!!

Prem: Has a shocking expressing and before he would explain...Mukti Left...

Sparsh: Mukti...Mukti...i will go check on her tells prerna...

Sparsh: Mukti behna...tries to make mukti smile with indian accent..

Mukti: Smiles😃...Sparsh i want to tell you something...

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Prerna: Prem...what were you thinking....

Sneha: Prem i cant believe this....

Mr. Bajaj: Prem..before he would say anything else prem cuts him off

Prem: I know! I know....i will go apologize.

Leaves and is about to enter the door, but hears Mukti...

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Continued from....Sparsh i have to say something to you...

Sparsh: What..is everything alright?

Mukti: Yes, Sparsh...You know why i felt so bad back there...why i was hurt?...its because i feel so close to Prem and this last 4 days have been amazing...

Sparsh: Are you saying...that..you...that...Prem guy...love...no...ways....

Mukti: I dont know...Maybe. I wish i Knew...

Prem listens to the conversation...and is really happy at first but than he has flashbacks of his Mukti...he decides to keep distance from her and leaves....

Prem and Sneha are in the living room discusing some of the office details...Sparsh and Mukti get there....

Mukti: I am sorry Prem...i shouldnt have behaved like a child...

Prem: It's ok...and keeps talking to Sneha...

Sparsh: Puts his hand forward...Hi i am Mukti's BRother...

Sneha: Grabs his hand...

Sparsh: Um...i thought we already met....but hey i will take your hand any day you like.😉

Sneha: Blushes...😳

Mukti: hmmm....Sparsh...

Sparsh: Oh...i mean take care of your hand...i mean...you know..

Mukti: We know...dont say anything else....

Prem: Smiles😃 nice to meet you too.

Prerna comes to the living room and see's all of them getting along...

Why dont you kids get to know eachother well...i have some tickets to this concert...

Mukti smiles...yes we will go...Sparsh smiles and Sneha nods too..Prem says he will stay back...Prerna gives him the whole (motherindia) look...and he agrees...LOL...

On the way...Mukti decides to call Simran as they have 2 extra tickets...she agrees...and she says she will bring a friend along....

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Who is the friend Simran will bring along? Will Sneha and Sparsh hit it off or will they hate eachother...Whose concert are they going to? stay tune and leave COMMENTS and you will find out tonight!!

i read ur fan fic yaar. its awesome 👏