Matters of the Heart (Fanfic)...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi friends,

My story has no leap, its just a continuation to the present happenings. Well at the moment I am not foccusing on the mysterious burka lady. But may be if I arise with a good twist I might include her. But at the moment NO.

So let me start:

:::< PART 1 >:::

Prem and Mukti are currently in their respective offices. Mukti has a meeting with Prem and is getting ready to leave for his office.

Mukti (to her assistant) : I am leaving now Miss. Gupta.

Assistant : Mam but there still an hour left for the meeting.

Mukti : Yes Miss.Gupta, but I don't want to be late by any chance.

Assistant : Do I have to make any facilities for ur transpotation Mam?

Mukti : No thank you I will manage that myself...

Mukti leaves her office with the necessary files required. She walks further down the lane to catch a taxi. As she waits two taxi's move by without stopping inspite of her waving and shoutings of STOP. The sky started getting dark. It seemed like it was going to rain. Mukti kept looking at her watch feeling reckless. Eventually the next driver stops.

Driver : Mam u don't need to get in.

Mukti : What? Why did u stop then?

Driver : To let u know Mam, not to waste ur time waiting for taxis. There is a taxi strike Mam from the last half an hour. There will be no taxis running for two days. We are all on our way home.

Mukti : But...But...this is an emergency. Please...please drop me.

Driver : Sorry Mam, I am helpless.

The driver drives off without showing any compassion to poor Mukti. The rain start dropping lightly by then and Mukti begin to walk fast in search of a place to stand. The rain starts getting heavier and heavier and Mukti begins to run covering her hair with the files. Lucky enough she reaches a nearby bus stop and stands beneath it. Mukti is completely drenched with water which was dripping from her dress (She's wearing a blue forck and tourquise green top). She hears voices of laughter from behind only to find out a gang of 4 ruthless guys standing on the same stop.

Guy1 : Hai ladki are u waiting for the bus?

Mukti ignores the comment.

Guy3 : Aray yaar this is 'Mukti Deshmukh' na?

Guy1 : Ya ya, that sharad case wali. Oh she's damn hot right.

Mukti is now really tensed and is trembling.

Guy2 and Guy4 slowly proceede towards her. Both of them stand either side of her behind. Both of them touch on her shoulders.

Mukti (immediately takes a turn, shouts) : What do u think u r doing huh? Don't u feel shame behaving like this to a girl?

Guy1: Array baba chill ok chill. See we are also from wealthy families girl.

Guy2(with an evil grin): We will not be like Sharad right friends?..

Guy4: Ya we know that u put him in jail cause he wasn't ready to accept u, marry u and give u all his properties and wealth.

Guy3: We promise baby, we will give u enough of money that u haven't seen in ur life.

Mukti is completely in rage now. Heads over to Guy3 and gives him a good loud smashing. All the other guys are surprised.

Guy3: I am not going to leave u girl. You will have to pay for this.

Guy3 gets hold of Mukti and tries to bring her to him. Mukti gives him a good push and starts to run in the heavy rain ,throwing away all her files. She loses all her hope as she turns her head, to look, (she's still running....) only to find 4 hungry guys running behind to catch hold of her.

#### END OF PART 1 ####

Do let me know ur opinions frnds...

If u feel its good I will continue....

Cheers :) ,

Sneha

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey let me be the first one to congratulate you on a job done well!! 😆 😊
plz do continue!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwww coool do continue pleaseee!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks for the responce friends...

:::<PART 2 >:::


Mukti's continues running with great speed, thinking – 'only if I could make it till my office' with tears all steaming down her eyes.

Meanwhile back in Prem's office….
Prem : This girl is wasting my time and testing my patience. She is supposed to have come 15 minutes back. I have to go for a party after an hour and a half.
Assistant : Do u want be to call at her office to enquire about her delay, sir?
Prem (rolling the paper weight on his table): No, I am going to her office instead. I know what to do. She will never repeat her mistake again.
Assistant : Its raining heavy sir. May be that's what restricted Miss.Mukti's arrival.
Prem : I donot like excuses Miss.Tara, you know that very well…don't u?
Assistant : Yes…sir.
Prem : Good, very good. Now go get me the required files will u?
Assistant : On the way sir.

Prem grabs his files and rushes towards his yellow sports car, whose top has been now pulled up with a black leather cover up. He tunes into a high volume of Boore Boore (frm Bluffmaster) and drives with high speed with full intentions to insult Mukti. Suddenly he sees from far from the opposite side, a girl being raced by a few guys. The down pour was so heavy that he couldn't make out it was Mukti.

At the same time Mukti is still running and turning back to see if the guys where behind her. She looses her grip and falls down. The guys where about to hold her, when Mukti gathers all her spirits and get up. She notices a car coming forward and cries out loud for help. Prem stops the car with astonishmet. He stops it , open the door and get out. Mukti is releaved its Prem and runs towards him and moves behind his back catching his jacket tight with her hands.

Mukti (whispers with shivers, slowly into his ears) : They…they…are going to hurt me…Prem...

Prem looks at the four guys with hatred and revenge that was never seen in him ever ever before. He asks her to sit in the car and moves towards the guys.

Mukti(still crying) : Prem...no..no..we will go Prem... they are dangerous..lets go.

Prem walks forward without paying attention to Mukti's pleads.

####END OF PART 2####
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fabulous..very gud 👏 👏 👏
Plz continue fast 😊 😃 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi its very good please count soon 👏 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow u r gud 👏
please please cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow u r good writer
great job
please cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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this is good yaar do continue it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow nuce fanfic
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