Matters of the Heart (Fanfic)... - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
wow prem and fighting u knoe wat u should be in ekta's place kick ittttttttttttttttttt carryin on rockin 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
really nice fanfic!!!!
continue soon
i'll be waiting eagerly!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
its really amazingggg...continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
Prem's fighting😲 FINALLY!!!!!!!! The story is coming along nicely!!!!

You want to know the best part???????

**whisper - you updated three parts in one day!!!!!**
Thats awesome!

Cont soon
Edited by soaps_01 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
Wow guys...thanx for those word of appreciation...i wasn't expecting any one to like it...

Well....


:::<PART 4>:::

Mukti wakes up with a start and realizes that she's sitting on a chair. Her head is still paining and she holds them with her hands. For a moment she couldn't remember whats happened to her. She soon recalls being unconscious…the rain…some guys…someone saving her. But nothing seemed clear. Ya but now where was she? She looked around the room sitting on the chair. There was a lamp on the one of the corners and it was producing a very dim light only brightening that particular corner. The room looked empty and dark otherwise…there was nothing visible around…except she could feel the chair she was sitting on. She couldn't even make out that she was in a "room". Mukti was still not had her mind set. She still felt wet drenched out, feeling as though still the rain was pouring. Her body was aching badly but she wanted to be home…near Choti Maa…she slowly gets up determined to find a way out.

Soon enough someone pours a bucket of water on top of her. Mukti is astonished and before she could ask out loud again another bucket of water fell over her.

Mukti : Kya…kya, yeh…. barish ab thak katam nahi hua …koi hai…mughe choti maa ke pass le chalo…

Again another bucket of water is poured and Mukti gets really frightened.

Mukti (cries out with all her heart) : Mughe barish se dar lagtha hai…tunhe yaad hai na kya hua pehel…woo ladkein yhei kahi honge…mughe please le chalo…please .

Instead of a reply back again a bucket of water was poured over. Mukti gets tensed and decides to find way back home, when some one comes and blocks her way. She couldn't make out the person as it was really dark and he looked like he was masked.…

Mukti (still crying but trembled) : Please mughe akela …..akela chod degiye…deko….deko main us… us type ki ladki nahin ho…jaise…jaise ap soch rahi hai….kya tum…tum woo…nahin tum woo nahi ho sakti…nahi..

She was expecting the person to say something back but there was a horrifying laughter from him which seemed to continue endlessly. He slowly started advancing towards her. Mukti moves back and takes shelter in one of the corners of the room, still unaware where she was. Now water was poured on her more frequently which she still believed was rain. The person was now very very close (with his laughter still going on) to her and she slowly shrugged down and sat close to the corner bringing her legs close to her and arms around them.

Mukti : Please…please mein apke samne hadh jodthi hoon…hadh jodthi hoon…please…sh..sha.. sharath…main kisi ko kuch nahin kahoongi…kuch nahi…choti ma ko bhi…(pinches her throat with her fingers)…nahi…(her voice starts fainting)…kahungi…bas..bas…….bas….

The laughter still continues with the same depth. Mukti falls unconscious again. The person instantly stops the laughter and makes a call from his cell. A few people open the door and comes to pick Mukti up and take her with them. The person who was laughing and the others who were pouring buckets of water on her move out with them.

In another room of the same building Prerana was crying silently with her head rested over Mr.Bajaj's shouldes.…


#### END OF PART 4 ####

Hope u enjoyed frnds....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
hey that was really goooooooooood yaar! but what is this mystery...really want to know who the guys were! was this just a dream of hers or was it real? i really really like ur fanfic and all the elaborate descriptions....plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon! this is fantastic! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
i guess many of u r not liking my fan fic. I mean the ppl who read my fan fic jst keeps decreasing day by day. If its really boring I am ready to stop frnds...

😭 😔
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
No..dunt think like that..i guess..sum of 'em are really busy..
I really like ur fanfic..& always luk forward 2 read all PM fanfics..
But plz..continue soon..i really wanna find out wats happening..& who r those guys !!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: lubnazm

No..dunt think like that..i guess..sum of 'em are really busy..
I really like ur fanfic..& always luk forward 2 read all PM fanfics..
But plz..continue soon..i really wanna find out wats happening..& who r those guys !!!

yes me 2😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
sme here we like ur fanfic soo plz dont stop
do count soon 😛

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