FAN FICTION - BY SHAINA - Page 3

Sorry to disappoint u guys as I was busy wid my chemistry practical!!!
any ways enjoy!

Here is part 17
(last time surween was in her bank and Anurag was inoroduced,& Mayank was thrown out of Surween's bank,)
Here is more
Surween rushes towards the main door "oh my God,Mayank" 😕 😕 😕
(Mayank was standing outside the bank and can't understand,that wats going on)
Surween-"Mayank"....
(Mayank turns and luks @ Surween,who is really worried abt him!!!)
Mayank-"Arre....! u and here..em,me.........!!!"(donno wats to say) 😕
Surween-"Wats going on,i can't understand,......cum lets go inside"(Mayank is grtting more surprized that how bravly she is otdering me!)" and don't wory Iam working as manager here"
Mayank-"Oh,I c.......,Cum lets go" 😊

(Surween is going upstairs in hurry and Mayank is besides her,as just she slipped and Mayank catches her)
Surween-"Ah............ouch.............aaaaaaa" 😕 😕 😕
Mayank-"Oh my God u r always prepared to slipp on me na"
And @ that moment Maynk also looses his balance and is stumbbling,Surween holds him more tightly,Mayanks luks @ her wid a little confusion & love,Surween gets nervous and both Surween and Mayank r lukking towards eachother if their eyes r locked to eachother) 😳

(they r unware as wats going on around them ,and continusly lukking @ eachother,and the flashbacks of their 1 meeting r shown,Surween is losted in Mayank's grey eyes,just then their romantic momemnt cums to end just bcoz of an old man) 😳

Old man-"Oh...no wats a horrible time,boys and girls have totally losted their shyness"
(Mayank and Surween r confused)
After the old man leaves both of them luks @ each other again and smiles a lot) 😃

(In the bank)
(Mayank has just take his entry and the watchman stops him)
watch man-"U rascal,u r inside again..........han"(grabbing his collar)
Mayank-"plz uncle leave me,let me tell u that wats the problem"(but watchman is not listing)
(Then the watchman notices that Mayank call him uncle)"U rascal.......fool, me and uncle,u.........I will kill u"(he make his grip more strong over Mayank)
(Mayank starts to laugh ...............)
(Just then Surween turns and order the watchman to leave Mayank)
Surween-"Pyare Mohan!!!.......Leave him,he iz wid me.R u listing?,Iam talking yo u..............,idiots"!!!!
(Then again luks @ Mayank who is still laughing and trying to control his laugh too and asks him to cum inside)
Surween-"Cum ......na,Y r u standing ,hurry up"
(And Mayank follows her)
Poor watch man is standing there and still shocked.......!!!

(Back to Anuj)
(Anuj is in his cabin and thinking abt the parposal given by his parents in the morning,just then his freind enters and notives him)
freind-"Arre wah...........!!!"
(Anuj cums out of his imaginary world)
Anuj-"han..........an...........emmm"
Freind"where were u losted my friend,I seems to b that u r trying to b a Romeo,who is lost in his Juliet's dreams"(Anuj was getting nervous)
Anuj-"Nothing dude..........!!!"
Anuj's freind-"O.K..........O.K relax I was also just kidding,Romeo in future"
(Then the starts to discuss sum professional matter)

(Back 2 Mayank And Surween)
(Mayank and Surween r now in Surween's cabin)
Surween's freind is still can't understand that wats going on...........
as Surween is ignoring her and busy to serve Mayank!)
continus.............

Hey guys ppl,plz dont 4get 2 tell u like tha track or other wise I will change it 😉

WOW Shai! It's cool yaar! Waiting for the next part- write it soon:)

Originally posted by: ronitfan

WOW Shai! It's cool yaar! Waiting for the next part- write it soon:)

thnxxxx I added a little romance as neeti and others were willing to read it!!😉

I will write the next part as soon as possible!!

Hey this is good stuff yaar 👏 plzzzz jaldi continue karoo.

Originally posted by: Ronitlover_4eva

thnxxxx I added a little romance as neeti and others were willing to read it!!😉

I will write the next part as soon as possible!!

ooooooooooommmmmmm shram nahi aati shainaa 😳😆aise bolte haaa koi 😉

Originally posted by: aadorboseroy

ooooooooooommmmmmm shram nahi aati shainaa 😳😆aise bolte haaa koi 😉

😆😆😆aa ji aap ko kaun si shram ayee thi jo mujh ko aye gi neet ji!😆

Part 18:::

(In last epi. Mayank and Surween were a little bit franked.some incidents had made easy for them to cum more closer)
(Surween is totally busy in serving Mayank and her frend mind it)
Suru's freind -"wats this Saru?.......U can't du this tu me ........"
(Surween then notices her mistake)-"Oh.......I am so sorry sweetie,as I am busy na!!!"...
(Mayank hu is enjoying the whole situation,tryies to introduce himself to Surween's freind hu is a little bit angry)---"Hi Iam................."(Saru's frind stares him and complete his sentence)---"idiot,fool."(Mayank is just confused and so does Surween,both r looking at her,if the have got a current---440 volts !!!!,surween interfares,Annn.......Maynk plz take a seat there,I will handle her!!!,holds her arm and takes her away in a corner)--------"Wats ur prob.,han...y r u misbehaving wid him????"(frend stares her)"Hu is that idiot???"
Surween-"oh my God,he is not an idiot............Mr.Shukla has sent him for our help!!!!(Mr.Shukla is a police commishor of Dehli)...............
(Saru's freind is now feeling a shame on her behavior,and says sorry to saru as wat she did)------------(Goes back to mayank ,hu is lukking here and there in a genuin style)---------------"Oh sorry sir!!! I am really sorry for wat I have done"
(Mayank smiles......)"oh,......no..not at all"
(Then saru asks her freind to leave,and so she does)
(out side the cabin,Anuragh stops Saru's freind, and Asks her abt Mayank,)
Saru's freind-"nothing..he is just a helper of her"(Anu is still angry.)
(Now Mayank & Surween r alone in cabin,and discussing a matter)
Mayank-"ya.....tell me, wat had happened"
Surween tells him the whole story and Mayank shookes his head as no prob."Main hoon na"(Iam here now)!!!!
Surweem"tell me,y were u pretented here wid a blank chek?"
Mayank"Oh It was just an incident ......I will tell u later"
Surween asks the peon for tea and now they r taking tea and doing a chatting)
Mayank---"By the way Iam really sorry for that day!!!.........actually I was driving in a full speed and just then u were there in front of me!!!"
(Surween smiles)--------"Oh no Mayank,fault was mine,actually was tensed due all had happend thats y I was not aware of wat was happing around me!!!,and thnx to god that I was hitted by ur bike,and u have soled my prob. otherwise.........!!!" (both r lukking at eachother lovingly)----------(Just then Mayank's cell rings------)"Hello...........han..........ya Mahesh?...........wat.........ya .......O.K.............ya..ya dont worry Iam leaving for quaters!!!ya ...only in 10-15 mins,bye"
(Then luks at Surween,who is thinking something)----"Surween,........where r u lost??" (Surween just cums out of her imaginary world)---"Han......?"
Mayank---"Wat r u thinking?"..................
Surween nodeds............" nothing"
Mayank--"O.k relax...I am in hurry wil u plz gve me the photocopy of statement?"
Surween-"Ya "(Surween gets up and moves towards the cupboard)"Here it is.........."
(Mayank takes a luk over all the statement and then again asks for bye)
-----"O.K now Iam leaving.............!!!
(Surween noded her head as O.K,when Mayank is near to the door,she just calls him frm the back)
------"Mayank..............."
(Mayank turns )" han...........wat?"
Surween"wo...........I was thinking ,this is my ontact no. if u want to know abt anything here it is"
Mayank"oh thnx.............dont worry I wil never misuses it ever"
(and leaves)
to b continus................

wow keep it up shaina ji 😆 thnx akhir romance aahi gaya 😃 😳 woow surveen n mayank 😃 😛 keep it up.....just think if i ever strt a fanfic its start from romance n ends in roamnce 😆 nice idea naa 😉 i know 😊 sweetheart its good keep it up 😳

next aprt post karoo naa plzzz 😭 i m waiitng 😭