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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 19
(Mayank is on bike,and ready to leave just then he finds out that he has forgot his bike's keys inside,he goes back)
(Inside yhe cabin Surween is thinking abt him,just then there is a knok on door,she gets up charmly)
"cum in"................"Mayank......."
wat.........happened (getting confused)
Mayank-"Nothing I just forgot my keys,oh here they,plz give them to me"
(Surween is just still confusing)"surween wat r u thinking?Iam talking to u abt my keys!!!,"
Surween--"oh han pls..........here they r"
(Then gives to Maynk just then his hands r touched by Mayank's hands
She is just..............embariced!!!!!!!!!!!,keys r just slipped off her hands)
(Anuragh just enteres the cabin when their hands r touching,and they r lukking toward eachother..........and Anu is just gets mad at Mayank)
Anuragh-"Hu dare u idiot, rascal,han to touch my pheoncy"
------------------------------alas it was a dream------------------------------------------
which Surween was lukking
____________________________________________________________ ____________________________-----___(Mayank is leaving 4 headquaters and is ready to leave then he just c that he has 4got his keys inside....he returns to Saru's cabin)
(Door is knocking)-----"yes cum inside"
(There Mayank stands.Surween is so surprized that wat happened) 😕
Mayank---"Wo....I had forgotten my bike's keys here"
Saru---"here!...........emmmmm.......ya here they r"
(Mayank takes the keys and leave)
(@ head quaters)
(Mayank enters and gives and takes sum i,p. files and does a chaat abt sum inm.matters and after an hour leaves 4 his house)

(@ home sweet home)
(Mayank just takes his entry and is stunned...........)-----------"U,uuuuu.........OMG!!!!!!!!!! "
(There a young girl was standing askinf 4 him,she turns around and ran towards him)
"Haaaaaaaan me..........!!! surprised na!!! I have give u a shock Mr.Major!!!!.Any ways tell me idiot where were u.......??? Iam waiting 4 u since last 4-5 hours..............etc........!!!
(Mayank is smiling)
"Ok.................relax.Anuja"
"Calm down""............."O.K "(and anuja gives him a puch on his cheek)


2 b conti...............
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
wow ur entry begins 😆 anujaa 😉 now u r wat his financee or wat 😳 😆 lets see wat happen next 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Ronitlover_4eva

soory 4 the delay guys !!!!

its ok shaina ji we r happy😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: aadorboseroy

wow ur entry begins 😆 anujaa 😉 now u r wat his financee or wat 😳 😆 lets see wat happen next 😉

ya its me😆😆😆.....hu can else..han!😳😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
PART 20 ===
(In last part it was mentioned that Anu is engaged to surween and Anuja was introduced)
CONTINUS........
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ANUJA is Mayank's cousin.They r best frends and their age diffrence is just of 13 days.Mayank is 13 days elder than her!!!.They r really really close frends and know each and every thing abt one anothers past,present ..........in short they r carbon copies of eachother!..anyways...lets continus the story.
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ITS EVENING AND ITS 6:00 PM...
(Mayank and Anuja r sitting wid other family members in the lounch.the weather is to cold and anuja is continusly reqesting Mayank to go wid her for outing but Mayank is continusly dening)
Mayank--"lol....r u mad.....I know u r! its very cold outside yaar.stop all nonesense!cum lets du sum chaat in the room"
Anuja"Idiot........u r now too in a room.cum na lets go.....aunty tell him na.....he is not listing to me..........!!!(all r laughing) 😃 😃
(Anuja is hitting Mayank by cuttions and pillows,and all r laughing heartly,Mayank is also laughing and atlast he agrees)
----"O.K,,, O.K relax...........lets go!I dono that y am I in army,I think it will b better for u.............bcoz u can easily beat the enemy by these pillows.....
😆 😆 😆 (Anuja stares him and ran after him)

(Mayank's bro and r also willing to go wid them but their parents stops them,as they want to sent thm alone)
AFTER A WHILE........................
(Mayank is ready and is asking his bro for the keys of bike.,his mom interfares........Oh my God! when will my this son grow up?.........Mayank iz confused......)
mom--"u r really innocent son...........u will go wid her on ur bike.......?"
Mayank-"ya wats the prob."
There Anuja is also ready to leave!
(awww..........nothing keep these,car's keys and go and listen dont fight)
"O.K mom.I will not but tell her"
"no, no aunty v will take care. O.K bye........."
(Then Mayank notices his bro and sis r still not ready)
"Arre u ppl.........still here......dont want to go?"
(His sis is going to say sumthing but mom interrupts)
"Mayank.......no they r no cumming, Go na..y r u standing?"
(Says bye and both leaves)................
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BACK TO SURWEEN
aT HOME......
(Surween is reading a novel in her room and just then the door opens.She luks there and is shocked......There Anurag is standing.......and is very angry)
Surween-"Anurag..............!!! 😕
(Anu rushes towards her and give 1 tight slap on her cheek.surween is badly hurt.......and starts to cry)
Anu-"Wats going on btw u and that ........wats his name.........ya.........Mayank?"
Surween is lukking @ him-"r u mad,he is just a frend"
Anu-"Oh frend.......I will c ur that frend.......he is a son of a rich man and is trying to make u his preyer"
(Surween's mom is standind outside and listening to their conversation)
🤢 2 B CONTINUS,.............
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
WOW gr8 story shaina...way to go man...aur kia chanta parda Prerna ko 😆 wo bhi usss 🤢 se .....
Dazzler23 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
😆
Acch tha na........... 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Ronitlover_4eva

😆
Acch tha na........... 😆 😆

Buhat fit tha 😉 😆 😆 😆

next time Do char Thapard aur pardh wa dena 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
Y not? 😆 😆 😆
reall drama mein sab ko thappad marti hai,ab pata chale ga.~! 😆 😆
NasH20 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
😆
Bechare sab serial mein chanta kha kha kar chapati ban gaye hai. 😆
dhobi ki tarah dhoti hai sab ko 😆 😆 ...kissi ko nahi baksha iss ne. 😆 😆 😆

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