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acha waha kya code word hai yeh 😆

its ok i love u n ur fiction 😳

Originally posted by: aadorboseroy

acha waha kya code word hai yeh 😆

hahahahahaha!lolzzzzzz thnxxx but I think its gud! afterall Iam a genious!😆😆😆

Originally posted by: aadorboseroy

its ok i love u n ur fiction 😳

I luv u too!😳

Originally posted by: Ronitlover_4eva

hahahahahaha!lolzzzzzz thnxxx but I think its gud! afterall Iam a genious!😆😆😆

haaa genuius too ho tum😳

Originally posted by: aadorboseroy

haaa genuius too ho tum😳

😳😳😳 thnxx!

Hey Shai patiya...where is da story.......angel....cant wait.....write na...

SORRY 4 THE HUGEE DELAY GUYS.I HAD'NT WRITE THE NP TILL MY LAST VISIT AND IT WAS MORE DELAYED WHEN I HEARD THAT MY UNCLE WHO LIVED IN KARACHI HAS PASSED AWAY! OH IAM SO UPSET HE WAS SOO LOVING THT ITS SO DIFFICULT TO SAY!ANY WAYS LIFE HAS TO PASS ON WITHOUT OUR LOVINGONES!!!!!
I PRAY TO GOD 4 GIVE HIS SOUL A PLACE IN THE HEAVENS ABOV!

HERE IS PART 27

(In last epi. Anuja was trying to convince Mayank to remain in army.But he deneid)
CONTINUS.........................
(Mayank is just shocked after ceeing the number,and then he decides to go to the place tomorrow for sure,and goes to sleep)

IN THE MORNING...............
ITS 7:00 AM
(Everybody is taking a breakfast and all the family members r noticing that there is sumthing wrong b/w Mayank and Anuja as both r not fightjng today as always)
Mayank's mom--"Mayank,Anuja wat happened???."
(Both luks @ her and disagree abt all wats shes saying)--"Nothing aunty! Only a little bit headach"
(Mayank smiles rudly and talks to his father)--"Papa..........!!!"
Mayank's dad--"Ya Mayank .wat happen?"
Mayank--"Papa I want to tell u that I wil b late 4 the office today.as I hv to go first sumwhere else"
(Mayank's dad is just confused.after a while he understands)--"Mayank my boy!I know that where u want to go...........!!!On some ARMY MISSION.....!!! right" (and is a little bit angry)
(Mayank notices that his dad is growing angry )--"Papa. I hv told u earlier that I will leave the ARMY soon,but not as now it will b really really urgent papa.! I can't understand ur this logic............U wants me in buisness and Iam there now, only 4 ur saake,4 my mom;s sake...................................And dad I need sum time to leave it"............................(Mayank gets furious @ his dad's behaviour.........)--"Mama................I am going..................bye!!!"(And leaves)
Mayank's dad--"Hunnnnnnnnnnnn!!! same foolish drama"
(To his wife)--"Bye and tell ur son to b there as soon as possible"
(They leaves and Mayank's mom starts to cry....Anuja handles her)
Anuja--"Aunty....................plz relax"
Mayank's mom--"Anuja u c na daughter that hu horribly the both fights here........its my house and I wants a peace here"
(Anuja is thinking of some other thing)

BACK TO MAYANK.................
(Mayank parks his car in a car-parking..and walks inside..................Hes going straight to a cabin and..............here he is........Mayank knocks the door....)
Inside--"Cum in..........!!!"
(Mayank enterz...............)
Mayank--"Hi.................."
(Person luk @ him...............Mayanj smiles..........................)--"Sorry Na..............Actually I was very very buzy! yotally forgot abt u and ur problem".....................................
(A person gives him a sing to sit.........and so Mayank does)..................................
Mayank--"O.K wats abt u?"
(Face is shown its SURWEEN)

Surween--"Wah wah...very gud!!! "
Mayank--"Oh yaar I say na...........Iam so sorry.."
Surween--"O.K ....O.K its enough but this us 1 & last time Iam forgiving u 4 ur mistak not after this"
(Mauank smiles)--"O.K mam"
(Surween calls her frend to bring the files........................after a little while the files were there)
Mayank--"Hello....hu r u???"
S's frend--"Iam fine.....here u r"
Mayank--"Thanks..............."
(After a while surween's frend leaves & Mayank is taking a luk over those files...Surween is lukking @ the otherone)
Mayank--"Surween....."
Surween--"Hannn..................."
Mayank--"U hv to go wid me to the commisioner's office 4 this matter"
Surween--"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! O.K but right now???"
Mayank--"Ya right now................may b this matter solves today"
Surween--"(After sum thought.calls her frend again.............tekks her everything.to hmndle in her absence and thanx her)
Surween--"shall v leave Mayank"
Mayank--"Ya y not......................"(And both leaves)

OUTSIDE THE BANK.................
Mayank--"Plz stop here! I wil b here in few moments"
Surween--"O.K..........."
(Mayank brings a car and Surween is shocked)
Mayank--"Sit...................."
Surween--"Ya"
(And they leaves..........................In the jouney)
Surween--"so u hv got a PERMOTION"
Mayank--"Wat.........???"
(Surween laughs)
Surween--"I mean.................till today whenever v met..................I saw u on bike.............and today its a car!!!"
(Mayank smiles)
Mayank--"Woh....Iam leaving an ARMY and joining tye buisnrss"
Surween--"Wat....................???"
to b continus..........................

Originally posted by: amali2305

Hey Shai patiya...where is da story.......angel....cant wait.....write na...

Arre I right it guys!