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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 25

(In last epi. Mayank has decided to join his family-buisness)
CONTINUS.................
(Mayank & his dad r in office, everybody is getting surprise to c Mayank there,After a while they enterz in a cabin)
Mayank's dad--"Mayank........"
Mayank--"Yes Papa.........."
(Mayank's dad iz cumming towards him wid sum imp. files.giving them to Mayank)
Mayank's dad--"Take these sun.............."
(Mayank takes them & luks towards his dad)
Mayank--"papa............I hv to say sumthing to u"
Mayank's dad--"ya sum.........y not??? Tell me!!!"
Mayank--"Papa''............................(Just then his dad's frend take his fffffffffffat entry)
Yashwerden Nanda--"Oeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! u hv'nt told me that my brav son is joining this office""(IN PUNJABI)
(Sits next to Mayank and hits his back proudly)
Mayank's dad--"(laughs)"Arre......... I also unawre abt the "FLASHING NEWS" till the morning"
(Mayank is taking a luk on the files given by his father a while ago)
(Yash and Mayank's dad r lukking @ Mayank proudly and both r very happy)
Mayank's dad--"Mayank.....any problem sun"???!!!
(Mayank luks @ his dad and smiles)--"Till not now papa"
Mayank's dad--"Thats my son................................"

(After a little while Yashwardan leave frm there and Mayank's dad is collecting sum imp.files 4 the board meeting.)
Mayank--"Papa..............I hv read all the files and this one has sum confusions and I think sum "QUTATIONS" r very high.....not in oue favour...................will u plzzzzzz take a luk over there"
(Both son and Father r discussing a same prob. just then the door knoks)
Mayank--"Cum in.............."
Bhayya............................
(Mayank turns and so his dad)
Mayank--"Arre........u ............I think u hv no need to knok the door bro"
(Mayank's dad leaves 4 a meeting and asks his both sons to com there,......Mayank's bro says )--"Papa......plzzzzzzz go v wil b there after a while..................(.Papa leaves...........)
Mayank--"Ya tell me wats the porb...............???
Mayank's bro--"Bhayya............ last night when u vr not @ home a ldy called at home she was asking 4 u"
Mayank--"4 me............??? And u hv want to ask her name....................right???
Mayank's bro--"Ya............(laughs):
Mayank--"O.K dont worry.....I wil check the number frm CLI
(Both leaves)


BACK YO ANUJ
(Anuj is sitting in his cabin and thinking abt Mayank & Anuja's relation)
His frend entrzzz-----"Arre........U r again losted in ur dreamzzzzzzzzzzz"
Anuj--"No..............."
(Thinking abt same thing)
--"I hv to talk to him"

To b continisss.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
Gud going shaina 👏 👏 👏 ...now dont take so long to poat the nxt part. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
Great going Shai!
continue it soon and keep it coming! Luv ya! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
great my sweetheart well after this post i m not here 4 su mdays so dnt able to reply 😭 dnt mind of tht.....i told u da reason ana 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
PART 26

(In last epi.Mayank has joined the BAJAJ-EMPIRE, )
CONTINUS...........

ITS NIGHT AND @ 8:30 P.M

@ ANUJ'S HOUSE
(Anuj is taking his meal wid his parents but is not present there, he is lost in his own world.......which his parents r noticing very well.........................after a while his dad calls him)
Anuj's dad--"Anuj where r u last son!!!""
Anuj--stilllllllllllllllllllll no reply!!!
Anuj's mom--"Anuj...................shakes his hand.................
Anuj--"emmmmmmmmmmmmm.........hannnnnnnn.,.wa--ee..........w at???
Anuj's mom--"where r u,,,,,,,,??? I hope everything iz allright!!!"
Anuj--"yes mom...........every thing is o.k............relaxxxxxxxx!!
Anuj's dad--"It doesnot seems to be!!"
(Anuj is getting more tensed and irritation by this "interveiw)
Anuj--"Dad,mom..................plzzzz stop yhis all non-sense! Iam o.k............."""
Anuj's parents--"Hannnnnnnnnnnnnn.................non-sense!!!!(r really really shocked)
(Anuj throws the plate and leaves)
Anuj's parents--"Wat happened???????????????"""


BACK TO MAYANK AND FAMILY
@ 9:00 P.M
(The door bell rings.............)
(Mayank's sis is just going then a moment Anuja says her to sit as she wil open the door.....and leaves)
Anuja--"Oh hello uncle! hu r u...??? and hus the day passed!!!""
Mayank's Dad--"Oh hi daughtr Iam fine and the day was just superbbbbbbb!!!
(Mayank frm the back)
Mayank--"Anuja madam.................!!!Will u plzzzzz let us go inside the house!!!???""
(All luaghs)
Mayank's mom--"Here u starts again Mayank....???"
Mayank--"Sorry mom"
Anuja--"Don't b.....................Aunty I hv to fulfill the LACK OF THE WHOLE DAY""
Mayank--:Oh my God.........................plzzzzzzzz God save me frm this dianasore"
Anuja--"Wat......wat r u saying.Dainasore.....me.....emmmm.........wait ......!!!"
(Starts to beat him...all r laughing and Maynk is running towards his mom.)--"mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaa"
Mayank's mom--"(Opens her arms and take Mayank in them)--"OOooooooookkkkkkkkk relax u 2!!! ""
(talking to Mayank)--"Hus the day pased my baby!!!??? R u happy???
Mayank--"Mom that day was wonderful and dad and my little bro r always there for my help"
(Mayank's mom smiles & kisses his forehead)--"God bless u Mayank!!!.........go and get fresh til then I wil serve the dinner"
Mayank--"yes mom..........."(Hits Anuja on head)---"Bye dianasore"
Anuja--"uuuuuuuuuuuuulllllllllllllllllll" 😭 😭

(After the dinner all takes a tea and hv a long chat,then all goes o sleep only Mayank and Anuja left there,after a little while Mayank asks her either she wats to sleep or still hv sum energy to chat wid him,,,then both goes to Mayank's bed-room)

ITS 11:30 PM
Anuja--"Mayank it seems that u hv spent the whole day freely in a office,"
Mayank--"Its me......not u!!! ??U brings 1 plate & cup frm here to there and feels dowsy"
(Anuja ya I know).............smiles then luks @ him!!!
Anuja--"Maynk I know u r not happy wid th disicion of leaving army"
(Mayank luks @ her)--"Hu cares of my happiness??? No one!!!........Dad wants me there and he creacts a scene alwys.I know by all this ,mama gets a tension!!! which I dont want to give her!! Just for this I am leaving it!!!"
Anuja--"But u can talk to uncle!!! U wil never b happy by al this yaar!!!
Mayank--"Anuja relax,......the time had just passed away.all u r talking abt is invain!!!
Anuja--"(gets angry........)"O.K du wat u want!!! Hu I am na!!! no one!!1(and leaves)

(Mayank also lays on a bed and after a whilehe remembers that his bro was talking abt some Phone call,He getsup and goes to the phone)
(Mayanks luks at the number.....................tries to remember the link and )---"Oh my GOD"!!1

to b continue................


NasH20 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
I know...I know ...yeh kis ka number ho ga 😉 ...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
YEAH I KNOW KISKA NUMBER HOGA..??????? 😉 😉

ANYWAYS YOU HAVE DONE A GR8 JOB, CARRY ON!!!
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
Tnx guys Iam a little bit buzzy right now! but wil post NP in evening!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
well u rock baabz ur fanfiction is fabulous 😃 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: aadorboseroy

well u rock baabz ur fanfiction is fabulous 😃 😉

thnx sweetie and NP stands 4 next part!

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