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Originally posted by: NasH20

Arre wah wah wah shaina keep it up 👏 👏 ....i want more 😉 😆 😆

O,Ksweatheart.I wil giv u more..............😉😆😆

Originally posted by: maha khan

wow zabardast gr8 workkep it up 👏

Thnxx Maha its so nice of u yaar that r reading a story!

PART 31

(iN LST PART everybody @ home was worrie abt Mayank ,Anuja weny to the same hospital where Mayank is admitted but she was unawre of the reality)
COTINUS.............................
Surween--"Wat??? Dr...me.......not..........."
(But the doctor passes away................after a moment Surween goes to the I.C.U And luks @ Mayank luvingly....she is lukking @ him & there Anuja and Anuj are fighting bitterly!!!....................)
Anuja--"Anuj its enough Iam leaving............
(Anuj stopes her and not letting her to go)
Anuja--"Wat r u doing..........???" (Anuj lockes the door and pushes her towards it)
Anuj--"Now listen to me carefully!!!................I luv u soo much .......I cant c this that any 3 person cum b/w us 2...........If u wany yo c Mayank happy & save stay away frm that BUSTURD................."
(Anuja gives him 3 TIGHT SLAPS back to back..................Anuj just steps back as he get 440 VOLTS CURRENT...........Rubbing his cheek which is...............RED lik TOMATO!!!!!)
Anuja--"Hu dare u to say anything abt him???....................Its our personal matter and I dont like that the 3 person like "U" interfares b/w 2 of "US"................".(Turns away to go.................then turns toward Anuj)--"I hope that these 3 slapes r enough 4 u................if not................u can ask me for more............!!!"
(She goes away & Anuj is beating a table in anger...........& sits on his chair)

(Anuja is in car and is thinking abt Mayank..............after smetime starts a car and move on)

BACK TO SURWEEN........................
(Surween is relax and feeling much better........................then she listens that someone is calling her.........she turns & finds her freind there...........................)
Surween--"Oh....................Here u r"
Freid--"Sorry for the delay..........Woks was toooooooooooooo much........anyways hus he???"
(Surween again luks @ him..............)--"Ya hes better now............out of danger!!!"
(Her frend luks @ him then shes lukking @ Surween...who is still lukking @ Mayank)
Saru's freind--" Cum let go to the canteen.............u wil get some relaxiation!!!"
(Surween agrees and both leave)

BACK TO ANUJ.....................
(Anuj cums out if his cabin............passes infront of the ICU...................just stopps...............steps back...........& is shocked.!!!)
Anuj--"Mayank................"
(Then he tries to call Anuja to tel abt Mayank..............after a moment he changes his idea...........cuts the phone.....luks @ Mayank.............SMILES WICKEDLY......................enterz the room..............cums towards him..........lukking @ him and is CONTINUSLY SMILING WICKDLY!!!

TO B CONTINUS..............................

OMG!what's Anuj gonna do? Arre yaar, Shai! Make Surveen come back and see his real face..

Great going!!! 👏

Originally posted by: ronitfan

OMG!what's Anuj gonna do? Arre yaar, Shai! Make Surveen come back and see his real face..

Great going!!! 👏

😳 I wil surly du something sweatheart!

keep it up shaina darling its awesome

thnx 4 liking it guys..I was not well since last week.now Iam o.k and wil post next prt in evenig!hope u can wait! 😊

PART 32

(In lst part Mayank was save then......Anuja & Anuj hd a gr88 fight and then Anuj saw Mayank in ICU......)
CONTINUS..........................

(Anuj enterz the ICU & walks towards Mayank..............He is lukking @ him and is really worry.........suddenly rmembers all happened b/w him and Anuja..........He luks @ him angrily and walks soms steps back.........then turnes............and promises to himself tht he wil never allow an one to come b/w him & Anuja..................He luks @ the equipment.........& switchesoff the oxygen cylinder and pipe connector............................And leaves...........................)

OUTSIDE THE ICU...................................

(Surween & her frend r cuming towards the ICU.................Anuj cs them and is shell shocked...........then make himself comfortable.............turnes on the other hand and skipes frm the spot.......................Surween goes to the ICU & is lukking towrds him.............suddenly she wishes to go inside............................enterz the room....................goes towards Mayank........She gets more rilaxiation.............and turnes again after cing him O.K...........suddenly someone hods her hand.......shes shocked & heart beat is much fasterrrrrrrrrrrr then before...............turnes..........................luks @ the hand..........its Mayanks..............she gets nerous and is getting more & more tension..as shes noticing now tht somethig is wrong........Mayank is not O.K.......................she calls her freind.......................shouting,for a ,Doctor.................................as Mayank is shvring badly.................)
Surween--"Doctor..............................sombody plz help..........................."
(Again starts to cry...............................After a little while doctor is there.........And is lkking here & there.....after a littlewhile.)
Doc--"Oh.my GOD....................!!!!!!!!!!!!"
(Opens the connector & pressurrises Mayanks chest & is trying to normal his heart beat....................Surwen is continusly crying & her freind is trying to make her comfortable..............................Doctor asks them to leave frm ICU.................)
Doc--"Plz madam.................go away................"
Surween--"No.............na.................I............... ..no.........t..............g.o........awa.y..............fr m.him.................!!!!"
(Her freind is shocking upon her this serious codition...............................)
Frend--"Surween.....cun lets go............"
Surween--"No.I wil never leave him alone................"
(Her frend brings her out...............as Surween is getting mad 4 him & is cotinusly tring to go to him................Her frend gets nervpous and gives her 1 TIGHT SLAP..................................SURWEEN IS SHEL -SHOCKED)
frend--"wats going on,....................???..........han, I know hes dear to u...............He wil b O.K...........plz control ur self............"
(Surween sits there and says in half-intoxinaton)--"Hes really dear to me...................I luv him......................I really du.............Hes my.................l...i...f......e....I luv him more thn anything....................This all is b coz of me................only bcoz of me......................I wil never let any thing happen to him..............."
(Surween's freind iscotinusly getting shockes.................................leaves her there & sits a side................Then decdes to mak her comforable..........)

(After a longggggggggggggg while doctor comes out.til then Surween is a littlebitO.K......)
Doc--"Madam................."
Surween--"Hes O.K na...............???"
Doc--"Ya....& is calling 4 u..................!!!"
(Surween runs towards him....................there he openes his eyes...................luks @ her............& smile a little and luvingly..............................tries to get up...........................but Surween stops him to du so................sits next to him and hugs him tightly...........................................Mayank holds her gentely frm back............................
(TO B COTINUS.....................)

Hi Shai patiya after long time ha.... i red it all....my god as always ur stiry is wonderful..... u know that i am ur biggest fan... just lovely...........