FF-The Flowers of Spring, Ch 10 pg21..end

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#81

omg i was crying after reading this part specially the song from Tare Zameen Par

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pooks

@pooks

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Posted: 17 years ago

#82

My heart went out for Bani and Jiya. The mother having to leave her child, knowing in her heart that she may never be able to come back and the child waiting for her mother to come back for her, even though it's just a start. As for JW, I wonder when he will find out that Jeeya is his daughter.

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Swathi

@swathi

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#83

Wham was a vase breaking...oh I thought it might be someone interruputing them on the door !

Bani did not tell Jai about Jeeya....? but she did mention soem papers in the bag so maybe there is some info there...

It was wonderful reading till this point tiny...Somehow this story makes me very emotional and kind of connects me better..dunno why...Waiting for the next part patiently (with gr8 difficulty)...

Swathi

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k12345

@k12345

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Posted: 17 years ago

#84

Nice story. Hopefully there is something about Jai being the father in the papers.

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HalleNJ

@HalleNJ

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#85

awesome FF.....loved every of your FFs (and every single update)....where do you guys get the ideas from? I'm so jealous of you 😉 😃 ....

Why Jai is so dumb even in FFs 😆 😆? wonder how he handles business 😆. Poor Jeeya, poor Bani 😭 😭 😭...

please continue.....

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MusicIsDivine!

@MusicIsDivine!

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#86

Such a sad, sad part Tintin! I wish Bani didn't have to part with her daughter and I wish she told Jai the truth - but the circumstances are understandable and Bani is now secure in the feeling that her daughter is taken care of. Is she going for a treatment that will take 3 months? Or, did she leave her for ever?( I hope not!)
Beautiful update as always 👏 👏 👏

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#87

Tin beautiful update.. father daughter bonding. You posted by new favorite song. I love that song- the lyrics bring tears to me eyes. Cant wait for the next update

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Perveen

@Heartbreak

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#88

het tiny just dont kill bani in the end like exta killing us with her weird ideas and story line

A happy ending with jai bani and jeeya would be nice for a change 😊 😊 😊

Instead of tears towards the end killing bani wont like that tin...

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#89

A heart-wrenching part Tiny..I felt for both Bani n Jeeya..Bani has to part with her daughter knowing very well that she might not be able to see her again. Jeeya, poor girl is going to stay with Jai counting days of her mother's return. As for Jai, don't know when he is going to know that he is Jeeya's father.
I loved the song from TZP..I had cried while watching that song and could feel my eyes moist when I read it now.

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#90

hey tin.. grrreat part yaar.. kuch aisa karo that jai realises he still loves bani and that jeeya is his child.. may be an accident where jeeya needs blood and it could ony be from her father and thats how jai finds out bani lied and that jeeya was actually his daughter.. and somehow he finds out bani is about to die.. omg that would be soo interesting.. anywayz great part.. continue soon.. cant wait for the next part..

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