FF-The Flowers of Spring, Ch 10 pg21..end - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Di,first of all I am sorry for not able to comment on the last few updates,just been really with college and work.

the story has progressed really well,Jai's attachment to Jeeya is beautifully written.loved how Adi showed Jai the light I hope he looks more into the matter.very well written,will be eagerly waitin for the weekend special. šŸ‘


preet 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hai Di were is the week end special yaar
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Posted: 17 years ago
Chapter 7 Weekend Spl

Bus aap yuhi…..Bani / Bani, her mother was calling….abhi me rakhti hu baad me phone karungi she had kept down the phone…that was the last time they spoke on the subject….that night the accident happened…

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The house suddenly seemed to be very quiet, Jai sat with his head in his hands why did Bani keep quiet all these years, did her husband find out and hence abandoned her, was her pregnancy detected earlier or in Shimla, she wants her daughter back no doubt as she could have made use of his name, filed a paternity suit, why has Bani not taken that path? Does that mean Aditya is wrong? What is Jeeya exact age? Jai ran his fingers through his hair…should he clarify these from Bani when she calls? What is preventing her from calling? Has she realized that he might come to know?

Jai sat down recollecting his conversations with Bani in the office, suddenly he recollected Bani saying all important papers regarding Jeeya was in her bag….Jai got up and ran upto Jeeya's room, opened her cupboard, went through her things, there was no paper, did Bani lie to him, then he saw her bag, took it out and opened it, nothing inside…he was about to close it when his eyes fell on the zip partition, he opened it, there was a file, it held a paper, Jeeya Dixit's birth certificate issued from the Shimla Municipal Office…

Name : Jeeya Dixit
Mother's Name: Bani Dixit
Father's Name: Jai Walia
Date of Birth mentioned matched his calculation with a week +/-….which is not unusual….

Jai closed his eyes, the image of Jeeya playing, smiling, running about played before his eyes, my daughter, my daughter, he muttered..

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Jai watched Jeeya hearing stories from Masi, as Bani had told him, she was a physically active child but if you can have her attention, she will sit still to hear you…

Jai approached her, Jeeya will you like to go for ride with me? He asked by extending his hand,

Jeeya looked up, her eyes glittered, she clutched his hand with both her hands…chaliye uncle, she said…

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Jai took her to the Gymkhana Club, met some known faces, as they exchanged pleasantries', Jeeya held on to his hand, some of his friends patted her, pinched her cheeks, who is this child, so cute…

She is, isn't she Jai smiled…

Jai took Jeeya to the tennis courts, some children were learning tennis, Jai asked Jeeya whether she wants to learn, Jeeya looked excited, Jai spoke to the coach regarding timings etc.

They sat next to the pool while Jeeya had her hot chocolate, Jai sipped his whiskey watched Jeeya over the rim of his glass trying to see similarity between them. When 10 days back Jeeya had come, he and his family members were happy to have a child amongst them, that too a small girl in a family full of male members, his sister Jigyasa who takes everything with a pinch of salt took Jeeya for shopping, got her new clothes, toys, a new haircut, Aditya ensured he got his parting kiss from Jeeya before he left for office much to the dislike of his sons…even the boys have started making Jeeya their playing partner…

Hello Jai Walia, after a long time…

Jai looked up to the man hovering over him, frowned, the face was known but just could not place him…

I knew you would not recognize me Jai, after all you have grown too big for us, how will you…

Sahil….

The man beamed, yes Jai its me…

What have you done to yourself Sahil, you have blown up too much for any man to recognize

Keya kare Jai, many of us were not born with a golden spoon like you..

Jai smiled, only he knows how he saved his business but no use of explaining that….

Have a seat Sahil, lets catch up….

Sahil sat down informed his that all these years he had been posted in the USA working in the software industry, over 3 months back he has been once again posted to Mumbai to set up a branch of his office…mauka miltehi wapis chala aya Jai, after all home is home, nothing can replace it…

As they pickup stories about each other's life, Jeeya who was playing with some kids alongside of the pool, came and stood next to Jai, whispered something in his ear, Jai looked towards the pool to find a young couple necking in the water at the other edge of the pool

Dekha keya kar rahe hai yeh log jaisa picture me karte hai, Jeeya whispered fiercely in his ears…

Jai's eyes twinkled, he picked up the ice decanter, gave it to Jeeya and instructed her….

As Jeeya ran to complete her job, he held his breath to see the outcome…

Your daughter Jai, Sahil asked…

Yes, Jai clapped as Jeeya emptied the decanter over the couple, Jai signaled her, she came running back, Jai took her in his arms and hugged her…

Obviously the couple was mad, what are you teaching your daughter Sir, the boy shouted….

What am I teaching? What have your parents taught you son, don't you see children are playing around, if you want to get cozy there are rooms available for hire….Jeeya clapped and laughed as the she saw the couple leaving the water, so did other children….

Jai you have not changed a bit I must say….you are teaching your daughter the same tricks you did…

I am not his daughter a firm voice answered back…

The words hit Jai hard, he put down Jeeya, instructed her to finish her drink before she went to play with the children again…

She is Bani's daughter Sahil…Jai answered him…

Bani's daughter, our Bani, Bani Dixit of Mt Abu…

The very same, Jai replied….

Where is she, Sahil looked around excitedly….

Jai watched Jeeya returning to join her newly acquired friends…

She is not here Sahil, and briefly explained the situation…

Bani…Sahil sighed, he had seen the girl born in front of his eyes, still remembered peeping into the cot where Bani slept as a baby while his and her mother caught with the local gossips in the afternoon, on returning from school, he used to enter Bani's house first as his mother used to be there helping Bani's mom with her new kid…he used to tease Bani a bit before being pulled away by his mother to their house….

Bani's daughter….I can't believe that after all these years I am getting to hear of Bani…

Tell me Sahil what had happened, your parents were in Mt Abu when Bani might have been forced to marry…

Forced to marry? I never heard so, why should Bani be forced to marry, her father always wanted her to be self sufficient before she settled down, I can't give dowry as I do not have money, chacha toh hamesha yeh hi kehte the, jiske jawab me mera pitaji used to say, he will take up the responsibility of Bani's marriage, after all she was like his daughter….I was supposed to pay for her marriage, my papa had always told me that…

Bani did not get married, or it is him who assumed that Bani got married, actually if he can recollect their conversation, Bani never once said that she had a husband…she had only mentioned things were not going the way she wanted them to go, so another point that it is he who is Jeeya's father….

Jai was excited, I would like to meet Bani's family, your parents stay in Mt Abu can't they arrange for my meeting with Bani's parents, I mean I would like to try and reconcile…

Jai Jai, one minute, my parents no longer stay in Mt Abu…

Oh I thought you belong to Mt Abu as the house was you stayed …

Yes Jai, we sold it, Jai you see my marriage with Roma did not work, Roma was unhappy and lonely and I could not give her time, busy with my new career…one fine day Roma came back, after about 6 months our marriage in the meantime….things changed in Mt Abu too, after about 2, 2 months of my marriage to Roma, my parents noticed there was a tension in the Dixit household, exactly what was wrong my parents did not know which was unusual as we were like extended family, anyway one fine day Bani left leaving a note that she is going off with the man whom she wants to marry…we did not have a clue who that man was and to our surprise not even Roma, her best friend…initially we thought maybe one of my friends who had come for the wedding, but no and you were out of question as that time you were not in the country itself…Bani's parents waited for her to call, they could not even advertise in the papers as it will bring unwanted attention to their family, they had two other children…ek saal baad chachaji sold the Mt Abu house and returned back to Ahmedabad, his original home town, after they left, my marriage was also over, my parents no longer wanted to stay in Mt Abu so we too sold our house and my parents now stay with me and my American wife…

Jai heard Sahil in silence, he wanted to hug Bani badly, the girl had the courage to go through all the difficulties in life just to save their love child, she even ensured that he is not dragged into any sort of allegation as he was sure many people had seen them together chatting during the wedding…

Sahil, I….

Uncle I want to go to the toilet, Jeeya came running

O.K. Sahil, we will take your leave….

Sahil shook Jai's hand, patted Jeeya's head…beta mai tumhara mama hu, apne uncle ke saath mere ghar ana, udhar tumhe nana, nani milega…

As Jai held Jeeya's hand and went towards the toilet, Sahil watched them, he had heard Jai & Bani were seen several times together during his wedding but does that mean….no…no…all said and done Jai is a responsible person and Bani too, during weddings these friendly flirtations happen but after that nothing lekin keya ho giya tha, his parents till now fail to understand that a girl who grew up before them could suddenly leave like that…that too with a man who they never got to see…Sahil stared till Jai & Jeeya faded out of his sight…anyone who sees them together will think they are father and daughter…he thought…

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(Next update will on 12.2 night or 13.2 morning depending on my return 😃 )
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Posted: 17 years ago

wowowowo

jai now know that it is his daughter he is really naughty teaching his daughter the same...

it is rockign.. psl cotnienhu soooon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
It was wonderful update Tin... šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
Jai's emotions were penned very well... šŸ‘ šŸ‘
I am glad ur JW has brains.... and can connect things... šŸ‘
Poor Bani... hope she gets well soon and JB are togather...
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Posted: 17 years ago
haila... i thot bani wud not have given jai's name in jeeya's birth certificate... she had given... gr8. like father, the daughter.

sahil and his american wife... šŸ˜›

atlast jai came to know... J-E-E-Y-A... he wanted her spelling to be J-I-A... how cute... šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

adi is too cute... wow jigs too taking care of jeeya... how sweet.. many of jai's questions is answered... but the question is what is he gonna do now???? šŸ˜•

jeeya is so cute... jai is taking her all around with him... seems he wants to enjoy with his daughter without any disturbance šŸ˜†

btw... where is bani???
Edited by abhilashasharma - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Jayati,
Really wonderful ff, I love it 😳 😳
I wonder what happened to Bani, I hope she's fine and heathly šŸ˜•
Have a g8t time 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
šŸ˜† nice trick
gr8 part as usual šŸ‘
waiting for a the next 1.
weekend kab end hoga *sigh*
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Posted: 17 years ago
Finally Jai got to know about Jeeya's father......hope Sahil would do something......wondering if Jai is able to contact Bani or Bani is going to come back in Jeeya's life again.....waiting for the next part šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Have a safe trip!!! Stay warm!!! šŸ˜›
Edited by khushboo2006 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wonderful part.....loving jai-jeeya interaction....please continue

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