FF- Tere Naam Last Part pg. 15 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

108

Views

29k

Users

22

Likes

14

Frequent Posters

Niroo thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 17 years ago
#31
omg omg omg omg omg omg.
that is not cool at all.
u need to update..soon
as.. u stopped.. at a very.. wrong.. place
sadsunzarsum thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#32
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh whats he gonna say to her
*Guli* thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 17 years ago
#33
oh man!!

she's going to his room

oh she knows that room very well!!! 😉 😳
aangelis thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 17 years ago
#34
lol i noe u guys really wanna noe wat happens next so im gonna post another part especially since yesterdays was xtrememly short. keep the replies coming :)

PART 5-

Recap: Vidya gets hurt and Meera asks Bani to attend to Jai while she's taking care of Vidya.

Jai: "MEERA! Tumhae sunta nahi hai kya? Kitni baar mai tujhe bala chuka hu? Jaldi aao!"
Bani was shaking by now. She slowly entered Jai's room. Jai didn't see Bani and mistook her to be Meera.
Jai: "Finally! Jaldi karo mei already late ho chuka hu. Meri tie doh mujhe."
Bani reluctantly goes to Jai's closet and takes out a tie.
Bani: "Yeh lijye."
Jai turns around slightly and grabs the tie. He returns back to his previous position but he soon realizes who gave him the tie. He turns around.
Jai: "TUM! What the hell are you doing here? Shouldn't you be attending to your own husband, Daksh?"
Bani quietly replies under her breath: "Aap hee tho merae pati hoe."
Jai: "Kya kaha tumna?"
Bani: "Ji kuch nahi."
Jai: "Tumhe sharam nahi aati? Kisi aur ke kamre mein aane ki. Ye kamre tumhara nahi raha!"
Bani: "Ji.. Mein toh.. Voh.."
Jai: "Voh, voh kya? Tum yaha kyo aye?"
Bani: "Ji, voh Ganga aur Vidya ke play date hai."
Jai: "Tekh hai abh nikal jao."
Jai turns around to face his mirror while Bani leaves. She takes a long glance back at the room that once had belonged to her. A tear slowly slipped down her cheek. While Bani leaves, Jai is thinking about his memories with Bani. He misses her a lot but just isn't ready to admit it. He's too filled up with revenge.


i really wanna post another one cuz honestly i luveddd part 6. but i dont want to overdo it. 😭
Niroo thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 17 years ago
#35
no u r not going to over do it.
please do post..
that one.
as.. really.. want to know..
what is going to happen..
next.
continue soon please
moonlitnight thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#36
hey post it if u r ready
very nice part
JW needs some dose
*Guli* thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 17 years ago
#37
haila!!!!!!

aww jai what a meanie!! 😡

plz cont soon

oy..

over do it??

that was short

i am complaining! 😭
soodr thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Please post the next part!! I wanna know what happens...plus that was only a mini part!!!

Ria xx
amiee thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#39
what u r not overdoing it we want to read more parts update soon.......
mayurmaaneet thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#40
u hunny theres no such thing as over doing it.. but yeah u did under do it.. heheheh.. great part.. although tooo short.. but cant wait for next part..

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".